2020高考英语新题型—读后续写和概要写作课件70（18张PPT）
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(共18张PPT)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之小句关系把握策略
表达微技能之次要点处理篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题： The smart clothes and its application
结构：
Para 1
Para 3&4
Para 2
Para 5
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
British shoppers buy 2.15 million tons of clothing and shoes annually, yet UK citizens have an estimated ?30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe. But new technology could see the end of that, with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.
“Smart clothes” could help us clear out our wardrobes（衣柜）by sending messages or tweeting（发推文）us if they haven’t been worn for a good while. If these messages are ignored, the garments will get in touch with a clothing charity and ask to be reused, with an organization automatically sending out donation information. They could be programmed for a public sale where they are sold to whoever offers the highest price on eBay.
Academics at Birmingham City University are developing the “connected wardrobe” to encourage more suitable clothes consumption. The concept sees garments tagged, using washable contactless technology.
Mark Brill, senior lecturer at the university, said, “Think of the surprise when an owner suddenly receives bids for items that they didn’t know were in their wardrobe.” “The connected wardrobe is a practical pleasant concept to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption. Finally, I hope it will encourage more appropriate fashion consumption,” he added. “Perhaps we can even move away from the idea of ‘ownership’ of clothing. When we’ve worn them enough, the items will pass themselves on to their next keeper.”
It follows in the footsteps of the “Internet of Things” --a concept that sees ordinary household items connecting to the Internet in order to share information. Now, the “Internet of Clothes” will see that neglected garments will tweet and text the owners, “asking” to be worn depending on the weather and frequency of wear. Clothes will keep track of other information, such as who owned them previously, as well as how much they originally cost, who made them and how much the worker was paid for them.
②
④
③
①
⑤
The working process
phenomenon
Other functions
The purpose
The meaning
写作思路解读
Para. 1: British shoppers buy 2.15 million tons of clothing and shoes annually, yet UK citizens have an estimated ?30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe. But new technology could see the end of that, with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.
概述主题内容：据新科技报道，久未穿着的衣服将能提醒衣物主人他们的存在。（要点1）
写作思路解读
Para. 2: “Smart clothes” could help us clear out our wardrobes（衣柜）by sending messages or tweeting（发推文）us if they haven’t been worn for a good while. If these messages are ignored, the garments will get in touch with a clothing charity and ask to be reused, with an organization automatically sending out donation information. They could be programmed for a public sale where they are sold to whoever offers the highest price on eBay.
具体说明细节：若信息未被主人理睬，则有衣物慈善机构和组织发送更多信息推送，帮助旧衣服在eBay上进行拍卖销售（要点2）
写作思路解读
Para. 3: Academics at Birmingham City University are developing the “connected wardrobe” to encourage more suitable clothes consumption. The concept sees garments tagged, using washable contactless technology.
Para. 4: Mark Brill, senior lecturer at the university, said, “Think of the surprise when an owner suddenly receives bids for items that they didn’t know were in their wardrobe.” “The connected wardrobe is a practical pleasant concept to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption. Finally, I hope it will encourage more appropriate fashion consumption,” he added. “Perhaps we can even move away from the idea of ‘ownership’ of clothing. When we’ve worn them enough, the items will pass themselves on to their next keeper.”
具体说明事物的目的意义：学者研发这项技术旨在鼓励人们恰当的衣物消费理念和物主身份观念。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 5: It follows in the footsteps of the “Internet of Things” --a concept that sees ordinary household items connecting to the Internet in order to share information. Now, the “Internet of Clothes” will see that neglected garments will tweet and text the owners, “asking” to be worn depending on the weather and frequency of wear. Clothes will keep track of other information, such as who owned them previously, as well as how much they originally cost, who made them and how much the worker was paid for them.
进一步说明事物产生的背景和附加功能：这种“网络衣物”紧跟网络分享理念，会自动发送信息要求衣物主人来穿着，而且将会跟踪关于服装成本产地及物主信息。（要点4）
写作思路解读
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
New technology could put an end to a wardrobe with lots of unused garments by sending information to their owners. (Point 1) “Smart clothes” could ask owners to wear them, or many messages are sent to organizations to sell those unused clothes. (Point 2) Academics announced that it is developed to encourage people’s proper fashion consumption. (Point 3) It also follows the concept of sharing information and offers other related information.(Point 4)
3.表达微技能之次要点处理篇
本章节将以此文本为例，聚焦次要点处理技能在概要写作中的运用。
1. 代词指代明确化
原文第一段主题句“But new technology could see the end of that, with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.”中的that为语篇的回声词，起到很好的连接作用。原文中that指代上文: ?30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe。
... see the end of that = ... put an end to that；unused clothing = neglected garments (下文提示及借鉴)；remind the owners of... = inform the owners of...
这样，综合整段信息，添加次要信息，我们可将文章主题句转换成以下初稿中的要点1：New technology could put an end to a wardrobe with lots of unused garments by sending information to their owners.
我们可以将要点1改写为：
① New technology could end a wardrobe with loads/piles of unused garments by sending information to their owners.
② By informing the owners of the existence of their neglected garments, new technology could help clear out wardrobes with unused clothes.
3.表达微技能之次要点处理篇
2. 次要点合并化
原文第二段中智能衣服的新技术运作过程部分，细节琐碎，处理时，我们需要整合信息，把次要点进行合并。
get in touch with a clothing charity + an organization + a public sale = contact some organization = contact related organizations
if they haven’t been worn for a good while = when the owners won’t wear them any more.
根据篇章内容细节整合：初稿中“Smart clothes” could ask owners to wear them, or many messages are sent to organizations to sell those unused clothes. 可以改写成：
① Messages will be automatically sent to some organizations to sell those garments when the owners won’t wear them any longer.
② Messages will be automatically sent to related organizations to have those garments sold when the owners won’t wear them any more.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
3. 具体例子概括化：
根据上文解读，原文中第四段是具体例子，是对第三段的具体阐释。采用概述合并法，选用上义词来替换下义词：语篇中academics为上义词来其下义词为第四段中的具体例子：Mark Brill。
原文中“to encourage more suitable clothes consumption”，“to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption”，“encourage more appropriate fashion consumption”三个部分意义相近，可以进行合并处理。
这样，整合信息，我们可以将这两段信息的初稿“Academics announced that it is developed to encourage people’s proper fashion consumption. ” 转换成以下的句子信息：
① Reasonable/rational/sensible fashion consumption and a new concept on ownership of garments are promoted，according to academics.
② As academics put it, both proper/rational/reasonable clothing consumption and a new concept on ownership of clothes are encouraged through.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
4. 次要点状语化：次要点以独立主格形式、介词短语、非谓语动词形式整合到主要点中，在语法上体现层次性，在意义上增加丰富性。
这样，初稿中的要点4It also follows the concept of sharing information and offers other related information. 可以改写成：
① Following the concept of sharing information, it contains various related information like its cost or previous owners.
② Following the idea of sharing information, it contains information on other related aspects like its cost or previous owners.
③ Linking to the Internet, the “Internet of Clothes” share information on other related aspects like its cost or previous owners.
1、并列连词合并法 (分别利用not only..., but also...; as well as)
例子1：They are important to people’s life. Because of the sports stars, our life becomes more exciting. They contribute to the spiritual well-being of their people.
① ____________________________________________________________________________
(利用not only...,but also...)
② ______________________________________________________________
(利用 as well as)
5.牛刀小试
Sports stars’ performance not only brings people excitement but also adds to their spiritual happiness.
Sports stars’ performance brings people excitement as well as spiritual happiness.
2. 定语补充法：
例子2：Many Native Americans value silence and feel it is a basic part of communicating among people, just as some traditional Chinese and Thai persons do. Therefore, when a person from one of these cultures is speaking and suddenly stops, what may be implied is that the person wants the listener to consider what has been said before continuing. In these cultures, silence is a call for reflection. （利用定语从句）
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Some cultures like Native Americans, Chinese and Thai people consider/regard/view it as essential in communication, which means a call for reflection.
3. 状语辅助法
例3：The good news is that so far some research has suggested language anxiety can make students focused, get good grades and build up high self-confidence. Despite (尽管) these benefits, most research has also shown a negative (负面的) relationship between language anxiety and performance. The negative kind of anxiety harms learners’ performance in many ways. As time goes by, they will doubt themselves, refuse to join in discussions and try to avoid using the language. （利用非谓语动词）
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.牛刀小试
Although benefiting students in some ways, language anxiety also leads to negative effects, harming their performances.
例4：Music provides a kind of perception (感知) that cannot be acquired any other way. Science can explain how the sun rises and sets. The arts explore the emotive (情感的) meaning of the same phenomenon. We need every possible way to discover and respond to our world for one simple but powerful reason: No one way can get it all.?（利用介词短语）
_______________________________________________________________
5.牛刀小试
Music enables us to perceive the emotional meaning in its unique way.
例5：When students and parents are asked to rate subjects according to their importance, the arts are unavoidably at the bottom of the list. Music is nice, people seem to say, but not important. Too often it is viewed as entertainment, but certainly not an education priority(优先). This view is shortsighted. In fact, music education is beneficial and important for all students.?（利用状语从句）______________________________________________________________________________
Music education benefits all students though it is not highly valued.
参考范文欣赏1
By informing the owners of the existence of their neglected garments, new technology could help clear out wardrobes with unused clothes. (要点 1) Messages will be automatically sent to related organizations to have those garments sold if the owners won’t wear them any more. (要点2) Actually, reasonable fashion consumption and a new concept on ownership of garments are promoted. (要点3) Following the concept of sharing information, the “Internet of Clothes” pushes owners to wear them and contains more information on other aspects. (要点4)
参考范文欣赏2
“Smart Clothes”, a new technology, could help clear out wardrobes by telling the owners about the existence of their unused garments. (要点1) More messages will be automatically sent to related organizations to have those garments sold if the original one is ignored. (要点2) Actually, rational fashion consumption is promoted in this way. (要点3) Linking to the Internet, this “Internet of Clothes” share information on other related aspects like its cost or previous owners. (要点4)
概要写作
文本内容与结构解读
写作思路解读
写作思路微技能之小句关系把握策略
表达微技能之次要点处理篇
牛刀小试
参考范文欣赏
体裁：
主题：
结构：
1.文本内容与结构解读
体裁：说明文
主题： The smart clothes and its application
结构：
Para 1
Para 3&4
Para 2
Para 5
1.文本内容与结构解读
阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
British shoppers buy 2.15 million tons of clothing and shoes annually, yet UK citizens have an estimated ?30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe. But new technology could see the end of that, with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.
“Smart clothes” could help us clear out our wardrobes（衣柜）by sending messages or tweeting（发推文）us if they haven’t been worn for a good while. If these messages are ignored, the garments will get in touch with a clothing charity and ask to be reused, with an organization automatically sending out donation information. They could be programmed for a public sale where they are sold to whoever offers the highest price on eBay.
Academics at Birmingham City University are developing the “connected wardrobe” to encourage more suitable clothes consumption. The concept sees garments tagged, using washable contactless technology.
Mark Brill, senior lecturer at the university, said, “Think of the surprise when an owner suddenly receives bids for items that they didn’t know were in their wardrobe.” “The connected wardrobe is a practical pleasant concept to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption. Finally, I hope it will encourage more appropriate fashion consumption,” he added. “Perhaps we can even move away from the idea of ‘ownership’ of clothing. When we’ve worn them enough, the items will pass themselves on to their next keeper.”
It follows in the footsteps of the “Internet of Things” --a concept that sees ordinary household items connecting to the Internet in order to share information. Now, the “Internet of Clothes” will see that neglected garments will tweet and text the owners, “asking” to be worn depending on the weather and frequency of wear. Clothes will keep track of other information, such as who owned them previously, as well as how much they originally cost, who made them and how much the worker was paid for them.
②
④
③
①
⑤
The working process
phenomenon
Other functions
The purpose
The meaning
写作思路解读
Para. 1: British shoppers buy 2.15 million tons of clothing and shoes annually, yet UK citizens have an estimated ?30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe. But new technology could see the end of that, with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.
概述主题内容：据新科技报道，久未穿着的衣服将能提醒衣物主人他们的存在。（要点1）
写作思路解读
Para. 2: “Smart clothes” could help us clear out our wardrobes（衣柜）by sending messages or tweeting（发推文）us if they haven’t been worn for a good while. If these messages are ignored, the garments will get in touch with a clothing charity and ask to be reused, with an organization automatically sending out donation information. They could be programmed for a public sale where they are sold to whoever offers the highest price on eBay.
具体说明细节：若信息未被主人理睬，则有衣物慈善机构和组织发送更多信息推送，帮助旧衣服在eBay上进行拍卖销售（要点2）
写作思路解读
Para. 3: Academics at Birmingham City University are developing the “connected wardrobe” to encourage more suitable clothes consumption. The concept sees garments tagged, using washable contactless technology.
Para. 4: Mark Brill, senior lecturer at the university, said, “Think of the surprise when an owner suddenly receives bids for items that they didn’t know were in their wardrobe.” “The connected wardrobe is a practical pleasant concept to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption. Finally, I hope it will encourage more appropriate fashion consumption,” he added. “Perhaps we can even move away from the idea of ‘ownership’ of clothing. When we’ve worn them enough, the items will pass themselves on to their next keeper.”
具体说明事物的目的意义：学者研发这项技术旨在鼓励人们恰当的衣物消费理念和物主身份观念。（要点3）
写作思路解读
Para. 5: It follows in the footsteps of the “Internet of Things” --a concept that sees ordinary household items connecting to the Internet in order to share information. Now, the “Internet of Clothes” will see that neglected garments will tweet and text the owners, “asking” to be worn depending on the weather and frequency of wear. Clothes will keep track of other information, such as who owned them previously, as well as how much they originally cost, who made them and how much the worker was paid for them.
进一步说明事物产生的背景和附加功能：这种“网络衣物”紧跟网络分享理念，会自动发送信息要求衣物主人来穿着，而且将会跟踪关于服装成本产地及物主信息。（要点4）
写作思路解读
然后，我们可以将这些要点串起来，连成一篇涵盖所有要点的概要写作：
New technology could put an end to a wardrobe with lots of unused garments by sending information to their owners. (Point 1) “Smart clothes” could ask owners to wear them, or many messages are sent to organizations to sell those unused clothes. (Point 2) Academics announced that it is developed to encourage people’s proper fashion consumption. (Point 3) It also follows the concept of sharing information and offers other related information.(Point 4)
3.表达微技能之次要点处理篇
本章节将以此文本为例，聚焦次要点处理技能在概要写作中的运用。
1. 代词指代明确化
原文第一段主题句“But new technology could see the end of that, with the garments（衣服）themselves reminding the owners of their existence.”中的that为语篇的回声词，起到很好的连接作用。原文中that指代上文: ?30 billion worth of unused clothing at the back of the wardrobe。
... see the end of that = ... put an end to that；unused clothing = neglected garments (下文提示及借鉴)；remind the owners of... = inform the owners of...
这样，综合整段信息，添加次要信息，我们可将文章主题句转换成以下初稿中的要点1：New technology could put an end to a wardrobe with lots of unused garments by sending information to their owners.
我们可以将要点1改写为：
① New technology could end a wardrobe with loads/piles of unused garments by sending information to their owners.
② By informing the owners of the existence of their neglected garments, new technology could help clear out wardrobes with unused clothes.
3.表达微技能之次要点处理篇
2. 次要点合并化
原文第二段中智能衣服的新技术运作过程部分，细节琐碎，处理时，我们需要整合信息，把次要点进行合并。
get in touch with a clothing charity + an organization + a public sale = contact some organization = contact related organizations
if they haven’t been worn for a good while = when the owners won’t wear them any more.
根据篇章内容细节整合：初稿中“Smart clothes” could ask owners to wear them, or many messages are sent to organizations to sell those unused clothes. 可以改写成：
① Messages will be automatically sent to some organizations to sell those garments when the owners won’t wear them any longer.
② Messages will be automatically sent to related organizations to have those garments sold when the owners won’t wear them any more.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
3. 具体例子概括化：
根据上文解读，原文中第四段是具体例子，是对第三段的具体阐释。采用概述合并法，选用上义词来替换下义词：语篇中academics为上义词来其下义词为第四段中的具体例子：Mark Brill。
原文中“to encourage more suitable clothes consumption”，“to encourage people to think about their clothing consumption”，“encourage more appropriate fashion consumption”三个部分意义相近，可以进行合并处理。
这样，整合信息，我们可以将这两段信息的初稿“Academics announced that it is developed to encourage people’s proper fashion consumption. ” 转换成以下的句子信息：
① Reasonable/rational/sensible fashion consumption and a new concept on ownership of garments are promoted，according to academics.
② As academics put it, both proper/rational/reasonable clothing consumption and a new concept on ownership of clothes are encouraged through.
3.表达微技能之句子花样表达
4. 次要点状语化：次要点以独立主格形式、介词短语、非谓语动词形式整合到主要点中，在语法上体现层次性，在意义上增加丰富性。
这样，初稿中的要点4It also follows the concept of sharing information and offers other related information. 可以改写成：
① Following the concept of sharing information, it contains various related information like its cost or previous owners.
② Following the idea of sharing information, it contains information on other related aspects like its cost or previous owners.
③ Linking to the Internet, the “Internet of Clothes” share information on other related aspects like its cost or previous owners.
1、并列连词合并法 (分别利用not only..., but also...; as well as)
例子1：They are important to people’s life. Because of the sports stars, our life becomes more exciting. They contribute to the spiritual well-being of their people.
① ____________________________________________________________________________
(利用not only...,but also...)
② ______________________________________________________________
(利用 as well as)
5.牛刀小试
Sports stars’ performance not only brings people excitement but also adds to their spiritual happiness.
Sports stars’ performance brings people excitement as well as spiritual happiness.
2. 定语补充法：
例子2：Many Native Americans value silence and feel it is a basic part of communicating among people, just as some traditional Chinese and Thai persons do. Therefore, when a person from one of these cultures is speaking and suddenly stops, what may be implied is that the person wants the listener to consider what has been said before continuing. In these cultures, silence is a call for reflection. （利用定语从句）
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Some cultures like Native Americans, Chinese and Thai people consider/regard/view it as essential in communication, which means a call for reflection.
3. 状语辅助法
例3：The good news is that so far some research has suggested language anxiety can make students focused, get good grades and build up high self-confidence. Despite (尽管) these benefits, most research has also shown a negative (负面的) relationship between language anxiety and performance. The negative kind of anxiety harms learners’ performance in many ways. As time goes by, they will doubt themselves, refuse to join in discussions and try to avoid using the language. （利用非谓语动词）
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.牛刀小试
Although benefiting students in some ways, language anxiety also leads to negative effects, harming their performances.
例4：Music provides a kind of perception (感知) that cannot be acquired any other way. Science can explain how the sun rises and sets. The arts explore the emotive (情感的) meaning of the same phenomenon. We need every possible way to discover and respond to our world for one simple but powerful reason: No one way can get it all.?（利用介词短语）
_______________________________________________________________
5.牛刀小试
Music enables us to perceive the emotional meaning in its unique way.
例5：When students and parents are asked to rate subjects according to their importance, the arts are unavoidably at the bottom of the list. Music is nice, people seem to say, but not important. Too often it is viewed as entertainment, but certainly not an education priority(优先). This view is shortsighted. In fact, music education is beneficial and important for all students.?（利用状语从句）______________________________________________________________________________
Music education benefits all students though it is not highly valued.
参考范文欣赏1
By informing the owners of the existence of their neglected garments, new technology could help clear out wardrobes with unused clothes. (要点 1) Messages will be automatically sent to related organizations to have those garments sold if the owners won’t wear them any more. (要点2) Actually, reasonable fashion consumption and a new concept on ownership of garments are promoted. (要点3) Following the concept of sharing information, the “Internet of Clothes” pushes owners to wear them and contains more information on other aspects. (要点4)
参考范文欣赏2
“Smart Clothes”, a new technology, could help clear out wardrobes by telling the owners about the existence of their unused garments. (要点1) More messages will be automatically sent to related organizations to have those garments sold if the original one is ignored. (要点2) Actually, rational fashion consumption is promoted in this way. (要点3) Linking to the Internet, this “Internet of Clothes” share information on other related aspects like its cost or previous owners. (要点4)