Module 3 Unit 8 A more enjoyable school life Writing 课件（15张PPT）

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Writing
some change I hope to see in my school
Unit 8 A more enjoyable school life
our campus
1
location and transportation
2
buildings, classrooms and other facilities
3
lessons
4
school activities
5
clubs
Dear Headmaster:
How do you do? I am a student from Grade 7 on the East Campus. After over one year of learning on our campus, I found it comfortable and enjoyable to study here. However, I really hope there will be air-conditioners in our classrooms. They can keep me cool in summer and help me focus my mind in class. Without them, it will be difficult for me to listen to teachers carefully because the heat and the nasty smell of sweat are so annoying. Air- conditioners not only make me comfortable in summer, but also help me stay healthy in winter. They can protect me from cold weather. Otherwise, I will easily catch a cold.
In a word, it is really necessary and helpful to have air-conditioners in our classrooms and I’m sure they will make our school life more comfortable and enjoyable. Thank you for your reading.
Best wishes!
Yours sincerely
Edward
Does the writer express thankfulness or his opinion?
What change does the writer hope to see in our school?
Beginning :
reason1:

detail:
reason 2:
detail:
I hope there will be air-conditioners in our classrooms.
They can keep me cool in summer and help me focus my mind in class.
The heat and the nasty smell of sweat are so annoying.
Air-conditioners help me stay healthy in winter.
protect me from cold weather and catching a cold
Ending:
It’s necessary to have air-conditioners.
They will make our school life more comfortable and enjoyable.
Main body
Beginning : I hope there will be a cosy resting area in our school.
reason1:

detail:

reason 2:
detail:
Ending:
Main body
A cosy resting area will help me refresh myself.
Teachers will have a nice place to have a heart-to- heart talk with their students.
It is impossible to have a good rest in the classroom.
The classroom is always noisy and the chairs are not comfortable enough to have a good rest.
The resting area is warmer and more private than the teachers’ office and it will make students feel safer to tell teachers their real thoughts.
It will benefit both students and teachers to have a cosy resting area in our school.
a small, warm and comfortable place
change
1
location and transportation
2
buildings, classrooms and other facilities
3
lessons
4
school activities
5
clubs
I want to say good-bye to…
1.What do you want to say good-bye to?
2.Why do you want to say good-bye to it?
3.What will you do?
Homework
Revise your outline with the help of the checklist and then write 60-120 words on the topic “ I want to say goodbye to…”
Lime Tree Primary School has introduced a new system which allows teachers to give and correct students’ homework online. This can help parents follow their child’s progress closely. They can check their child’s work and their marks through the Internet. The system will also allow students to see teaching videos and notes online.
A newly-open school in America doesn’t offer students textbooks any longer. Instead, it will provide each student a laptop. The laptops will serve as their e-books, which will store all their school materials. They can also use them to search for information on the Internet and hand in their homework. The school will use less paper and students will say goodbye to their heavy schoolbags.
Students of a new online school attended a virtual ceremony. They put on VR headsets to listen to the headmaster’s speech. After the ceremony, they will learn programming (编程) and game design through online videos. Students watch them when convenient and take tests after each term. Nearly all school activities, from studying to making friends, are held online, and students only need to visit the campus a few times.
offer each student a laptop
allow students to bring their laptop to school at anytime
allow students to hand in their homework by e-mail or on We-chat
offer more computer lessons
beginning: express politeness
what changes
1. based on current problems (necessary)
2. based on how we can put technology into proper use (improvement)
Express thankfulness and make a proper conclusion