中考写作专题课件20张

(共20张PPT)
冀教版中考写作话题
Unit Review A Trip
Learning Aims:
1. Learn how to write a passage about a trip.
2.Know about the formats of notice.
3.Travel safely and protect the environment .
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Where/When/How will you go?
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Who will you go with?
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What will you do?
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What should you pay attention to?
05
What's your feeling or wish?



date,place...
people
transportation
activities
wish
trip
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What can we write about a trip?
书面表达:
你们年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动（have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。
要求；1.参考提示语，可适当发挥； 2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现真实地名和姓名； 4.词数；60—80。开头结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
提示语；walk to Fenghuang Mountain, 10 kilometers away, hard but exciting, the whole day, keep safe, behave, tings to take(food and drinks)...
Hello,everyone!
May I have your attention,please?_________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.
Thank you!
定人称，定事态
1.人称
介绍大家一起出行的安排,用第____人称.
2.时态
本周日的活动,即将发生,用_______ 时态.
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一般将来
Hello,everyone!
May I have your attention,please?________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.
Thank you!
Beginning
Body
1.活动的时间地点距离方式等（on Sunday, walk to Fenghua Mountain,10 kilometres away)
2.活动的注意事项。(the whole day ,things to take,behave,keep safe
Ending
引出话题(hard but exciting)
结束语（wish）
Make an outline(轮廓，大纲)
Let's write the passage.
Let's check.
Read your passage and check it by yourself to make the passage better.
要点齐了吗？
书写整齐规范吗？
有没有语法错误？
单词写对了吗？
上下文连贯吗？
句子结构对了吗？
Let's share the passage with your partners and choose the best one in your group.
Group work
Show Time!
Hello,everyone!
May I have your attention,please?________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all.
Thank you!
Hello,everyone!
May I have your attention,please?Have you ever had a hard but exciting trip?Now I’ve got a piece of good news to tell you.This Sunday,we are going to have a school trip like this.We’ll walk to Fenghuang Mountain.It’s about 10 kilometers away from our school.As we’ll be away for the whole day,please remember the following things.Take enough food and drinks with you and wear comfortable shoes.The most important thing is to keep safe and behave yourselves on the way.
I think we’ll have a nice trip.
That’s all.
Thank you!
范文赏析
How to write a notice?
How to write a passage about a trip?
1.审题
时态，人称，写作内容
Let's sum up.
a.介绍活动发生的时间，地点,人物
b.活动的主要内容或注意事项
c.对活动的希望或感受
2.列提纲 找关键词及短语
3.连句 把关键词，短语用合适的句型连成完整的句子
4.修饰句子，组织文章 适当运用承上启下的过渡句，使文章更完整精炼
5.检查纠错 内容要点，字数，主谓一致，单词拼写，大小写及标点符号
6.誊写 书写规范整洁
Have a good trip!
Safety comes first!
Homework
Rewrite the passage.
Thank you!