(共53张PPT)
U3
Communication Workshop 2
初一年级 英语
What should you pay attention to when you write a survey report?
In what ways do you write a survey report?
What’s the first paragarph mainly about?
What’re the main ideas of the second and the third paragraph?
Survey Report
In our class, most students eat healthy food. However, a lot of students don’t have healthy snacks or drinks.
Most students drink some water every day but a lot of students have more than two drinks with sugar.
Our snacks are not healthy. Most students eat junk food
for snacks, but a lot of students have some fruit every day.
Survey Report
1. Who 2. Overall results
1. Drinks healthy or not?
2. Meals why?
3. Snacks
Body:
Ending:
Suggestions
Introduction:
文章结构
参与调查人员及数量 总体
结果
drinks结果 meals
结果
snacks 结果
建议
文章内容 drinks数据完整性及
分析 meals数据完整性及分析 snacks数据完整
性及分析
语言表达 时态 连接词 拼写、语法等表达错误
Assessment Chart Name
参与调查人员及数量 总体结果
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drinks结果
drinks数据完整性及分析
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Three of us drink a lot of water, but one student has more than two drinks with sugar every day. It is bad for our health.
Our drinks are healthy.
We have healthy drinks.
meals结果
meals数据完整性及分析
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We eat vegetables every day… Two
students eat…
Most of us eat healthy food.
Two students eat a lot of meat and the other two eat some meat.
All of us eat rice at meals.
Most of us eat healthy food. Two students eat a lot of meat and the other two eat some meat. We eat vegetables every day. I think it is good and we should keep doing like that. Two students eat one to two kinds of vegetables and the others eat more than two kinds of vegetables. All of us eat rice at meals.
snacks 结果
建议
snacks数据完整性及分析
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Our snacks are healthy.
We have healthy snacks.
We….
However, two students…
We believe it’s better for us to eat less meat and
junk food.
We make a survey about healthy eating. There are four students in our group. Most of us have healthy eating habits.
Our drinks are heathy. Three of us drink a lot of water, but one student has more than two drinks with sugar every day. It is bad for our health.
Most of us eat healthy food. Two students eat a lot of meat and the other two eat some meat. We eat vegetables every day… Two students eat… All of us eat rice at meals.
Our snacks are not healthy. We all eat some fruit every day. However, two students of us eat a lot of junk food every day.
We believe it is better for us to eat less meat and junk food.
时态
连词 表达错误
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Our group’s survey report
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文章结构
参与调查人员及数量 总体
结果
drinks结果 meals
结果
snacks 结果
建议
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文章内容 drinks数据完整性及分析 meals数据完整性及分析 snacks数据完整性及分析
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语言表达 时态 连接词 拼写、语法等表达错误
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In our group, most students eat healty food. However a lot of students don’t have healthy snacks or drinks.
Meat is important for us, it gives us energy. Most students in our group…All of us eat…
Half of the students eat fruit for snacks, but…
There is an old saying that water is the sauce of life. Two of us drink some water every day…
We should balance our diet, eat more vegetables and get rid of junk…
meals
snacks
drinks
文章结构
参与调查人员及数量 总体
结果
drinks结果 meals
结果
snacks 结果
建议
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文章内容 drinks数据完整性及分析 meals数据完整性及分析 snacks数据完整性及分析
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语言表达 时态 连接词 拼写、语法等表达错误
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There are four students in our group. Most students eat healty food. However, a lot of students don’t have healthy snacks or drinks.
Most students eat healty food. Meat is important for us, it gives us energy. Most students in our group are used to eating some meat, but one student eats lots of meat. It is a bit unhealthy. All of us eat more than two kinds of vegetables which can provide us vitamin. At meals, most of us eat rice.
Our snacks are not heathy. Half of the students eat fruit for snacks, but the others eat junk food which is bad for our health. Most of us eat some fruit every day and only one student eats a lot of fruit.
Our drinks are not healthy either. There is an old saying that water is the sauce of life. Two of us drink some water every day. Only one student drinks a lot of water, even a student don’t
usually drink water, it’s very bad for our health. Most of us drink one to two drinks with sugar which are bad for our eyes and influence our growing up.
doesn’t
We should balance our diet, eat more vegetables and get rid of junk food and drinks with sugar and drink more water.
平衡我们的饮食
摆脱垃圾食品
All of us eat more than two kinds of vegetables which can provide us vitamin.
provide sb with sth
给某人提供某物
provide us with vitamin.
( ) 1. Is the report interesting? If not, how could it be more
interesting, for example, give more information or results?
( ) 2. Does it answer all your questions about the writer’s group?
If not, what else would you like to know?
( ) 3. Did the student use the Key Words and Key Expressions
correctly? If not, circle them.
( ) 4. Is the spelling, grammar correct? If not, circle where the
student had problems.
( ) 5. Is there anything you can learn from the report?
Underline the phrases or sentences you can learn.
( ) 6. Do you have any other suggestions?
We investigated four members’ eating habits in our group. Now let me show you our group’s survey report. According to the survey, we know that in our group, most students eat healthy food. However, some students don’t have healthy snacks and drinks.
Through the survey, most students drink enough water every day but two of us prefer to have drinks with sugar.
Our snacks are not healthy. Some students have junk food for snacks. However fortunately, each student more or less eats some fruit every day.
We have healthy food at meals. One of us has a lot of meat and the others just have some. It’s wonderful that three students eat more than two kinds of vegetables every day, and most of us eat rice as main food at meals.
As to these unhealthy eating habits, here are some suggestions. We can have less drinks with sugar, it makes us fat and it’s not good for our health. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. They can provide nutrition and keep our body healthy and strong.
( ) 1. Is the report interesting? If not, how could it be
more interesting, for example, give more information
or results?
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Our snacks are not healthy. Some students have junk food for snacks. However fortunately, each student more or less eats some fruit every day.
然而,幸运地是,每个同学每天都或多或少的吃些水果。
Each student eats some fruit every day.
We have healthy food at meals. One of us has a lot of meat and the others just have some. It’s wonderful that three students eat more than two kinds of vegetables every day, and most of us eat rice as main food at meals.
三个学生每天吃两种以上蔬菜真是太好了,并且我们大多数人在吃饭时把米饭作为主食。
( ) 2. Does it answer all your questions about the writer’s
group? If not, what else would you like to know?
( ) 3. Did the student use the Key Words and Key Expressions
correctly? If not, circle them.
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( ) 4. Is the spelling, grammar correct? If not, circle
where the student had problems.
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We investigated four members’ eating habits…
However, some students don’t have healthy snacks and drinks.
or
As to these unhealthy eating habits, here are some suggestions. We can have less drinks with sugar, it make us fat and it’s not good for our health. We should…
fewer
they
they’re
We can have fewer drinks with sugar because they make us fat and they are not good for our health.
( ) 5. Is there anything you can learn from the report?
Underline the phrases or sentences you can
learn.
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We investigated four members’ eating habits in our group. Now let me show you our group’s survey report. According to the survey, we know that in our group, most students eat healthy food. However, some students don’t have healthy snacks or drinks.
investigate: 调查
according to: 按照
As to these unhealthy eating habits, here are some suggestions. We can have less drinks with sugar, it makes us fat and it’s not good for our health. We should eat more fruit and vegetables. They can provide nutrition and keep our body healthy and strong.
as to: 关于
nutrition: 营养
It is not good for: 对……没好处
It is bad for: 对……有害
( )6. Do you have any other suggestions?
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We investigated four members’ eating habits in our group…most students eat healthy food. However, some students don’t have healthy snacks or drinks.
Through the survey, most students drink enough water…
Our snacks are not healthy…
We have healthy food at meals…
As to these unhealthy eating habits, here are some suggestions.
We investigated four members’ eating habits in our group…most students eat healthy food. However, some students don’t have healthy snacks or drinks.
We have healthy food at meals…
Through the survey, most students drink enough water…
Our snacks are not healthy…
As to these unhealthy eating habits, here are some suggestions.
( ) 1. Is the report interesting? If not, how could it be more
interesting, for example, give more information or results?
( ) 2. Does it answer all your questions about the writer’s group?
If not, what else would you like to know?
( ) 3. Did the student use the Key Words and Key Expressions
correctly? If not, circle them.
( ) 4. Is the spelling, grammar correct? If not, circle where the
student had problems.
Work in groups of four, talk about your survey report in turns.
Four students in our group took the survey. Most of us eat healthy snacks. However, lots of students don’ t have healthy drinks or meals.
For snacks, most of us have lots of various fruits and eat less junk food.
But only one of us drinks water a lot. In contrast, most of us have one to two drinks with sugar every day.
In addition, our meals are not balanced. Many of us eat too much meat and only a few students have more than two kinds of vegetables for meals. What’s more, one student doesn’t eat rice at meals.
All in all, lots of students in our group should drink more water than we used to, and we need to eat less meat and more vegetables, have a balanced eating diet.
Homework
1. Polish your survey report.
2. Find out the results of your class.
Thank you !