(共22张PPT)
写作题目：
How
I
have
changed!
Learning
aim
Write
about
changes
of
yourself
.
Watch
and
tell
difference.
She
is
Sun
Yanzi.
She
used
to
wear
glasses.
Watch
and
tell
difference.
He
is
a
boy.
He
is
Han
Geng.
He
used
to
have
short
hair.
He
used
to
be
like
a
girl.
appearance
（外貌）
personality(性格)
hobby
habit
…
learning
lifestyle
short
hair
long
hair
…
strong
slim/
thin
...used
to…
now
...used
to…
now
Discuss
in
groups
and
write
down
as
many
phrases
/words
as
possible
about
the
following
aspects:
changes
appearance
personality
hobbies
habit
learning
lifestyle
How
I
have
changed!
I
have
changed
a
lot
in
the
last
few
years.
My
life
is
different
!
When
I
was
young
,
I
used
to
be
shy
,
but
now
I’m
outgoing
and
I
enjoy
talking
with
others.
In
the
past,
I
used
to
be
interested
in
Chinese,
however,
now
I
like
English
.
I
think
English
is
useful
and
important
.And
I
am
an
English
teacher
now
.
I
often
went
fishing
with
my
friends
,
now
I
’m
used
to
going
shopping
in
free
time
.What’s
more,
I
used
to
ride
the
bike
to
school,
now
I
walk
there
instead.
What
great
changes
I
have
.
beginning
ending
How
many
changes?
How
I
have
changed!
I
have
changed
a
lot
in
the
last
few
years.
My
life
is
different
!
When
I
was
young
,
I
used
to
be
shy
,
but
now
I’m
outgoing
and
I
enjoy
talking
with
others.
In
the
past,
I
used
to
be
interested
in
Chinese,
however,
now
I
like
English
.
I
think
English
is
useful
and
important
.And
I
am
an
English
teacher
now
.
I
often
went
fishing
with
my
friends
,
now
I
’m
used
to
going
shopping
in
free
time
.What’s
more,
I
used
to
ride
the
bike
to
school,
now
I
walk
there
instead.
What
great
changes
I
have
.
So
many
changes…
you
can
do
it
this
way:
How
I’ve
Changed!
My
life
has
changed
a
lot
in
the
past
few
years.
I
used
to
_________________________________.
Now
I’m
__________________________________.
The
biggest
change
in
my
life
was______________________________________.
This
is
the
most
import
change
because__________________________________.
过去与现在的生活情况
I
used
to....,
but
now.....
In
the
past,
I
often...
Now....
In
the
past,
I
used
to
be...
but
now
I
am...
总结观点
My
life
has
changed
a
lot
in
the
past
few
years.
自我感受
It
seems
that.......I
really
miss
the
old
days.
现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了，你感觉自己和以前有变化吗？请根据自己的体会，多角度，多方面谈谈自己的变化。请以
“How
I
have
changed!”为题写一篇文章
。
要求：
1.
至少谈3个方面的变化;
2.
语句通顺、连贯;
3.
词数约80左右。
自评标准：大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
自我欣赏与修正
我欣赏，我快乐
欣赏角度：
1.
写作基本要求:人称,
时态,
2.
要点齐全,
3.
结构:
开头，正文，结尾,
4.
好词好句。
注意：（作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／，语法错误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
）
集体赏析，共同进步
Summary
How
to
write
an
article
about
changes
.
Be
the
person
you
want
to
be!
Homework
Rewrite
your
article
and
hand
it
in
.
二次修改作文
Thank
you!Worksheet
for:
Unit
4
I
used
to
be
afraid
of
the
dark.
Personal
background
(个人情况)
School
Class
Name
Date
一、本节课的学习目标
1．能力目标
⑴
学会描述人和事物的今昔变化。
⑵
能较准确地在写作中运用used
to
…
结构进行写作。
2．情感目标
了解过去和现在的自己，为成为理想中的自己而努力！
二、语料箱
▲词块：
in
the
past
few
years,
used
to,
be
afraid
of,
play
with,
read
cartoon/
novel,
play
football/
basketball,
dance/
sing
pop
music，play
the
piano/drum/violin，eat
apple/
bread，watch
Animal
World/comedy，be
interested
in，straight/
curly
hair，outgoing，serious,
of
medium
height
▲句型：
My
life
has
changed
a
lot....；I
used
to....,
but
now....；I
often...Now...；It
seems
that...；When
I
was
young；Before
I
go
to
middle
school
▲名言、谚语、警句:
1.
Never
give
up
your
dreams.
Miracles
happen
everyday.
别放弃梦想，奇迹每天都在上演。
2.
All
our
dreams
can
come
true,
if
we
have
the
courage
to
pursue
them.—Walt
Disney
如果我们有勇气去追求，我们所有的梦想都可以成为现实。—华特?迪士尼
三、写作任务
（一）Group-work:
If
we
want
to
talk
about
changes
in
the
following
aspects
,
what
phrases
or
words
can
we
use
?
Get
ready
to“PK”.
Appearance:
_____________________________________________________
Personality:
______________________________________________________
Hobbies:
_______________________________________________________
Habit:
__________________________________________________________
Learning:
_______________________________________________________
Lifestyle:
_______________________________________________________
（二）单元话题写作
现在你已经是一位九年级的学生了，你感觉自己和以前有变化吗？请根据自己的体会，多角度，多方面谈谈自己的变化。请以
“How
I
have
changed!”为题写一篇文章
。
要求：
1.
至少谈3个方面的变化;
2.
语句通顺、连贯;
3.
词数约80左右。
思路点拨：主要人称：_
____________
主要时态：______________
Beginning:
Main
body:
Ending:
写一稿（first
draft）：
写二稿（second
draft）：
（三）评价
1.
大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
2.
同伴互赏：我欣赏，我快乐！
项目
标准
自我评价
同伴评价
教师评价
结构（3分）
段落合理
（2
分）
衔接自然
(1分)
内容（8分）
3点变化（6分）
拓展合理
(2分)
语言（3分）
词汇丰富
(1分)
句法正确
，语言优美(
2分)
卷面（1分）
书写工整（
1分）
3.
作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／，语法错误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
（四）总结反思：当我们写这篇作文的时候，有用了什么策略呢?
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