(共21张PPT)
写作题目：
Chinese
paper
cutting
Learning
aim
Introduce
Chinese
paper
cutting
What
are
some
special
things
that
your
hometown
or
city
is
famous
for?
These
can
be
food,
artwork
or
any
other
products.(请介绍家乡的特色产品，如某种食物、艺术品或玩具等)，假设你要推销一件特产，你将如何将产品介绍给其他人，介绍的内容会包哪些信息？
Group
work
presentation
1、雷州特产：菠萝罐头（Canned
pineapple）产地：雷州英利镇
特点：水果类产品，香甜美味，可口佳肴，远近闻名畅销东南亚。
Group
work
presentation
2、湛江特产：茗皇茶（Minghuang
tea）产地：廉江
特点：人工采摘闻名的优质茶叶，喝后回味无穷。
Group
work
presentation
3、湛江特产：廉江红橙（Red
orange）产地：廉江
特点：水果类，香甜可口，深受大众喜爱。
Group
work
presentation
How
to
introduce
a
product
?
你能想到的其他信息
Where/how
is
it
made?
The
name
What
is
it
made
of/from
?
(wood/paper…)
history
/
usages…
Why
is
it
so
good?
What
do
you
think
of
it?
Chinese
paper
cutting
How
to
make
it?
How
to
introduce
Chinese
paper
cutting
?
Turn
to
your
book
P38
Where/how
is
it
made?
The
name
What
is
it
made
of/from
?
(wood/paper…)
History
/
usages
Why
is
it
so
good?
What
do
you
think
of
it?
Now
discuss
with
your
partner
and
write
down
the
answers
in
your
worksheet:
1、What
is
the
product?_____
2、What
is
it
made
of/from?________
3、How
is
it
made?______________
4、What
is
its
history
and
usages?
___________________________________
5、Why
is
it
special____________
单元主题写作五
假设你是王明，你的外国网友Tony在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese
paper
cutting），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2．内容可以适当扩充，字数80词左右。
Chinese
Paper
Cutting
long
history
over
1，500
years
very
popular
in
different
parts
of
China,
be
fond
of,
do
well
in…
different
shapes
birds,
animals,
flowers…
where
to
put
on
usually
put
them
on
doors
or
windows
What
do
you
think
of
Chinese
paper
cuttings?
Why？
本习作要求写一封电子邮件，书信格式要正确。因为是回复的邮件，首先要谈一谈对方邮件的内容。
因为是介绍中国剪纸艺术，所以主要时态是一般现在时或一般现在时的被动语态。
可以从剪纸的历史、流行状况、图案和用途等方面来介绍。
习作指导
思路点拨
have
a
long
history
of
over
1500
years
can
be
seen
in
different
parts
of
China
Lots
of
people
are
fond
of
them
cut
paper
into
different
shapes,
like
animals,
flowers
and
so
on
usually
put
them
on
doors
or
windows
l
like
Chinese
paper
cuttings
very
much.
not
only
beautiful
but
also
very
useful
称呼及回应对方邮件内容
Dear
Tony,
You
wanted
to
know
…I’m
glad
to
…
祝语及落款
I
hope…
Best
wishes,
Wang
Ming
单元主题写作五
假设你是王明，你的外国网友Tony在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese
paper
cutting），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2．内容可以适当扩充，字数80词左右。
Chinese
Paper
Cutting
long
history
over
1，500
years
very
popular
in
different
parts
of
China,
be
fond
of,
do
well
in…
different
shapes
birds,
animals,
flowers…
where
to
put
on
usually
put
them
on
doors
or
windows
What
do
you
think
of
Chinese
paper
cuttings?
Why？
开声朗读自己的文章，并
从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
自我欣赏与修正
同伴互赏
欣赏角度：
写作基本要求:人称,
时态；
2.
要点齐全；
3.
结构:
开头，正文，结尾；
4.
好词好句。
①欣赏与修正
请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句
,
并运用改错符号找出不足，进行适当修改。
②评分
以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。
③点评
由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构
分析-细
节点评)
集体赏析，共同进步
Dear
Tony,
You
wanted
to
know
about
Chinese
paper
cutting.
I’m
glad
to
tell
you
something
about
it.
Chinese
paper
cutting
has
a
long
history
of
over
1500
years.
It
can
be
seen
in
different
parts
of
China.
Many
people,
no
matter
young
or
old,
are
fond
of
it.
People
in
northern
part
of
China
especially
do
well
in
making
paper
cuttings.
People
cut
paper
into
different
pictures,
like
birds,
animals,
flowers
and
so
on.
I
think
Chinese
paper
cuttings
are
usually
put
on
doors
or
windows
when
people
celebrate
something
happy,
especially
for
the
Spring
Festival.
More
and
more
people
are
interested
in
it.
I
hope
you’ll
come
to
China
to
see
more
Chinese
cuttings
one
day.
Best
wishes,
Wang
Ming
例文
习作资料
单词
History,
different,
shape,
beautiful,
useful,
celebrate,
interested,
hope
短语
no
matter,
be
fond
of
,do
well
in,
not
only…but
also…,
and
so
on,
be
interested
in
句子
I’m
glad
to
tell
you
something
about…
Chinese
paper
cutting
has
a
long
history…
More
and
more
people
are…
I
hope
you’ll
come
to
China
to
see…Worksheet
for:
Unit
5
What
are
the
shirts
made
of?
话题：Language
and
culture
(语言与文化)
School
Class
Name
Date
一、本节课的学习目标
1．能力目标
（1）能够介绍产品的材料、用途、产地等信息并且能够表达自己对此产品的情感态度。
（2）能使用“一般现在时的被动语态以及短语be
made
of,
be
used
for
…”等语言知识对产品进行描述。
2．情感目标
加深学生对中国传统艺术的了解和欣赏。
二、语料箱
▲词块：
a
long
history
of,
in
different
shape,
beautiful,
useful,
to
celebrate,
no
matter,
be
fond
of
,do
well
in,
not
only…but
also…,
and
so
on,
be
interested
in,
is
made
of/in,
be
used
for
▲句型：
I’m
glad
to
tell
you
something
about…；Chinese
paper
cutting
has
a
long
history…；More
and
more
people
are…；I
hope
you’ll
come
to
China
to
see…;
in
different
parts
of
China;
▲一些中国传统词汇的翻译:
1.刺绣：Embroidery
2.
书法：Calligraphy
3.
对联：(Spring
Festival)
Couplets
4.
儒家文化：Confucian
Culture
5.
针灸：Acupuncture
6.
相声：Cross-talk/Comic
Dialogue
7.
唐三彩：Tri-color
Pottery
of
the
Tang
Dynasty
8.
文房四宝（笔墨纸砚）："The
Four
Treasure
of
the
Study"
/
"Brush,
Ink
stick,
Paper,
and
Ink
stone"
三、写作任务
（一）Pair-work:
discuss
with
your
partner.
First,
please
answer
some
questions
about
Chinese
paper
cutting.
Then,
write
down
some
sentences
in
your
outline.
1．What
is
the
product?____________________________________________
2．What
is
it
made
of/from?________________________________________
3．How
is
it
made?_______________________________________________
4．What
is
its
history
and
usages?
___________________________________
5．Why
is
it
special_______________________________________________
（二）单元话题写作
假设你是王明，你的外国网友Tony在网上看到几幅中国剪纸（Chinese
paper
cutting），他对此很感兴趣，给你发邮件询问有关中国剪纸的信息，请根据下表提示给他回复邮件。
Chinese
Paper
Cutting
long
history
over
1，500
years
very
popular
in
different
parts
of
China,
be
fond
of,
do
well
in…
different
shapes
birds,
animals,
flowers…
where
to
put
on
usually
put
them
on
doors
or
windows
What
do
you
think
of
Chinese
paper
cuttings?
Why？
要求：1.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
2.内容可以适当扩充，字数80词左右。
人称：_
_______
时态：______________
体裁：______________
写一稿（first
draft）：
写二稿（second
draft）：
（三）评价
1.
大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
2.
同伴互赏：我欣赏，我快乐！
项目
标准
自我评价
同伴评价
教师评价
结构（3分）
段落合理
（2
分）
衔接自然
(1分)
内容（8分）
内容全面
（6分）
拓展合理
(2分)
语言（3分）
词汇丰富
(1分)
句法正确
，语言优美(
2分)
卷面（1分）
书写工整（
1分）
3.
作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／，语法错误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
I
hope…
Best
wishes,
Wang
Ming
祝语及落款
Dear
Tony,
You
wanted
to
know
…I’m
glad
to
…
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