(共19张PPT)
写作题目：
Should
Students
Take
a
Mobile
Phone
to
School?
Should
Students
Bring
a
Mobile
Phone
to
School？
Writing
Topic
？
Learning
aim
Write
about
some
ideas
on
bringing
mobile
phone
to
school
Share
your
own
opinion
and
reason
Interview
Should
Students
Bring
a
Mobile
Phone
to
School？
who?
3
different
people
3
different
opinions
Listen
and
fill
in
the
chart
听取信息
Should
Students
Bring
a
Mobile
Phone
to
School？
who
idea
reason
teacher
disagrees
★The
students
often
1.
with
phones
during
the
class.
★They
spend
too
much
time
2.
on
the
phone
rather
than
do
homework.
3.
agrees
★It
is
esay
for
the
parents
to4
.
with
children.
★Students
can
use
phones
to5.
at
once
when
they
get
hurt
by
accident.
student
depends
★
It
is
good
to
help
our
study
or
talk
with
parents.
★Using
them
to
6.
or
to
play
too
much
games
is
too
bad.
Listen
and
fill
in
the
chart
听取信息
send
message
playing
games
get
in
touch
ask
for
help
cheat
in
exam
mother
Should
Students
Bring
a
Mobile
Phone
to
School？
who
idea
reason
teacher
disagrees
★The
students
often
1.
with
phones
during
the
class.
★They
spend
too
much
time
2.
on
the
phone
rather
than
do
homework.
3.
agrees
★It
is
esay
for
the
parents
to4
.
with
children.
★Students
can
use
phones
to5.
at
once
when
they
get
hurt
by
accident.
student
depends
★
It
is
good
to
help
our
study
or
talk
with
parents.
★Using
them
to
6.
or
to
play
too
much
games
is
too
bad.
1.结果状语从句
______________________________
2.条件状语从句
______________________________
3.宾语从句
________________________________
4.时间状语从句_____________________________
5.it作形式主语____________________________
6.动名词作主语___________________________
找出你最喜欢的句子
Appreciate
beautiful
sentences
表示条理顺序的过渡词
firstly...,
secondly…,
first
of
all…,
besides…
Interview
your
group
mates.
Report
their
ideas
and
say
out
your
own
ideas.
Beginning
:用一句话去过渡到图表内容。
Body:图表内容
(1.老师看法
2.母亲看法)
Ending:说明个人看法,并号召大家…
2.确定文章体裁→人称和时态→中心主题句
→过渡词→结尾句
1.拟提纲
3.
注意标点符号、大小写；保持书写工整清楚。
如今，越来越多的中学生拥有手机,
就学生是否可带手机来学校，你校在社会上做了调查，请你根据以下图表内容，用英语写一份调查报告。
writing
要求：
1.语言准确得当，语句连贯，符合逻辑，内容包括表格所有内容,可适当发挥想象。
2.
词数在80个左右。作文的标题，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
who
idea
reasons
老师
不同意
上课发信息，玩游戏，考试作弊，。
父母
同意
家长易于与孩子联系，意外受伤时方便求助
我认为
自拟
自我检测，精
益
求
精
修正角度：
人称、时态、字数、标点符号、
字母大小写、要点句子完整、词法语法
我欣赏，我快乐
①请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对不足进行适当修改。
②评分
以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。
③点评
由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构
分析-细
节点评)
欣赏角度：
写作基本要求:人称,
时态；
2.
要点齐全；
3.
结构:
开头，正文，结尾；
4.
好词好句。
集体赏析，共同进步
Everything
has
his
advantages
and
disadvantages.
Use
it
in
the
right
way.
Everything
has
his
advantages
and
disadvantages.
Use
the
mobile
phone
in
the
right
way.
Check
and
rewrite
二次修正
重写作文
Listening＆Reading
material
Is
it
good
for
students
to
bring
phones
to
school?
It
has
been
discussed
all
over
the
country.
Here
are
some
of
their
opinions:
Miss
Cao
(a
teacher
from
No.2
Middle
School)
As
a
teacher,
I
don’t
agree
that
the
students
should
bring
a
mobile
phone
to
school.
Firstly,
They
often
send
messages
with
phones
during
the
class
or
sometimes
when
they
are
having
a
test!
Secondly,
many
students
are
so
interested
in
playing
games
that
they
spend
too
much
time
playing
games
on
the
phone
rather
than
do
their
homework.
Miss
Gao
(A
boy’s
Mother)
As
a
mother,
I
think
it
is
necessary
for
students
to
bring
a
mobile
phone
to
school.
First
of
all,
it’s
easy
for
the
parents
to
get
in
touch
with
them
and
know
what
they
are
doing.
Besides,
they
can
use
phones
to
ask
for
help
at
once
when
they
get
hurt
by
accident.
They
don’t
need
to
wait
for
help
until
the
teacher
comes.
Xiaoze
(A
fifteen-year-old
junior
student)
Both
of
the
teachers
and
parents
are
right.
I
understand
their
worry
about
us.
If
we
use
mobile
phones
to
help
our
study
or
to
make
it
easy
to
talk
with
our
parents,
I
think
it
is
good
to
take
one
to
school.
However,
using
them
to
cheat
in
exams
or
to
play
too
many
games
is
too
bad.
So
good
or
bad,
depend
on
ourselves.Worksheet
for:
Unit
6
Teenagers
should
be
allowed
to
choose
their
own
clothes.
话题：School
life
（学校生活）
School
Class
Name
Date
一、本节课的学习目标
1．能力目标
⑴
能运用本单元所学的与规则有关的单词、短语和句子表达自己的观点和转述他人的观点。
⑵
表达自己的观点时，能提出有力的论据。同时也能虚心听取不同于自己的意见和建议。
2．情感目标
让学生明白接受父母、老师的合理化建议对他们成长的重要性。
二、语料箱
▲词块：
send
messages
with
phones,
during
the
class,
be
interested
in,
spend
too
much
time
on
doing
sth,
rather
than,
first
of
all,
get
in
touch
with,
besides,
not…until…,
cheat
in
exams,
depend
on
▲句型：
I
don’t
agree
that…;
it
is
necessary
for
sb
to
do
sth;
it’s
easy
for
sb
to
do
sth;
I
think
it
is
good
to
do…
▲关于rules
的谚语:
1.
A
nation
has
its
rule
and
a
family
also
has
one!
国有国法，家有家规！
2.
Nothing
can
be
accomplished
without
norms
or
standards.
没有规矩不成方圆。
3.
Everyone
is
expected
to
stick
to
the
rules.
每个人都要遵守规则。
4.
Keep
to
the
rules,
and
nothing
can
go
wrong.
按规矩办事情就不会出差子。
5.
Rules
are
meant
to
be
followed,
not
broken.
规则制订出来是让人遵守，而不是让人破坏。
三、写作任务
（一）Listen
and
speak:
听取信息，积累写作材料。
Should
Students
Bring
a
Mobile
Phone
to
School？
who
idea
reason
teacher
disagrees
★
The
students
often
1.
by
phones
during
the
class.★They
spend
too
much
time
2.
on
the
phone
rather
than
do
their
homework
3.
agrees
★It
is
easy
for
the
parents
to
4.
with
children.★students
can
use
phones
to
5.
at
once
when
they
get
hurt
by
accident.
student
depends
★It
is
good
to
help
our
study
or
talk
with
parents.★Using
them
to
6.
or
to
play
too
much
games
is
too
bad.
（二）Read
and
learn
to
use.
品读范文，鉴赏好词好句。
1.结果状语从句
________________________
2.条件状语从句
___________________________
3.宾语从句
_________________________
4.时间状语从句________________________
5.it作形式主语__________________________
6.动名词作主语_____________________
7.表示条理顺序的过渡词：
（三）单元话题写作
如今，越来越多的中学生拥有手机,
就学生是否可带手机来学校，你校在社会上做了调查，请你根据以下图表内容，用英语写一份调查报告。
who
idea
reasons
老师
不同意
上课发信息，玩游戏，考试作弊，。
父母
同意
家长易于与孩子联系，意外受伤时方便求助
我认为
自拟
要求：
1.语言准确得当，语句连贯，符合逻辑，内容包括表格所有内容,可适当发挥想象。
2.
词数在80个左右。作文的标题，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Should
Students
Take
a
Mobile
Phone
to
School?
As
we
all
know
mobile
phones
are
becoming
more
and
more
popular
among
the
middle
school
students.
We
do
a
survey
about
whether
students
should
bring
mobile
phones
to
school.
写一稿（first
draft）：
写二稿（second
draft）：
（四）评价
1.
大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
2.
同伴互赏：我欣赏，我快乐！
项目
标准
自我评价
同伴评价
教师评价
结构（3分）
段落合理
（2
分）
衔接自然
(1分)
内容（8分）
要点齐全
（6分）
拓展合理
(2分)
语言（3分）
词汇丰富
(1分)
句法正确
，语言优美(
2分)
卷面（1分）
书写工整（
1分）
Listening＆Reading
material
Is
it
good
for
students
to
bring
phones
to
school?
It
has
been
discussed
all
over
the
country.
Here
are
some
of
their
opinions:
Miss
Cao
(a
teacher
from
No.2
Middle
School)
As
a
teacher,
I
don’t
agree
that
the
students
should
bring
a
mobile
phone
to
school.
Firstly,
They
often
send
messages
with
phones
during
the
class
or
sometimes
when
they
are
having
a
test!
Secondly,
many
students
are
so
interested
in
playing
games
that
they
spend
too
much
time
playing
games
on
the
phone
rather
than
do
their
homework.
Miss
Gao
(A
boy’s
Mother)
As
a
mother,
I
think
it
is
necessary
for
students
to
bring
a
mobile
phone
to
school.
First
of
all,
it’s
easy
for
the
parents
to
get
in
touch
with
them
and
know
what
they
are
doing.
Besides,
they
can
use
phones
to
ask
for
help
at
once
when
they
get
hurt
by
accident.
They
don’t
need
to
wait
for
help
until
the
teacher
comes.
Xiaoze
(A
fifteen-year-old
junior
student)
Both
of
the
teachers
and
parents
are
right.
I
understand
their
worry
about
us.
If
we
use
mobile
phones
to
help
our
study
or
to
make
it
easy
to
talk
with
our
parents,
I
think
it
is
good
to
take
one
to
school.
However,
using
them
to
cheat
in
exams
or
to
play
too
many
games
is
too
bad.
So
good
or
bad,
depend
on
ourselves.
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