(共19张PPT)
写作题目:
My
favorite
movie/CD
Write
about
your
favorite
movie
or
music
different
kinds
of
smooth
music
at
the
same
time
spare
time
electronic
music
add
5
points
action
movie
dance
to
根据箭头指向的汉语说出英语短语。每个短语加2分。
Brainstorming
How
many
kinds
of
do
you
know?
movies
comedy
documentary
drama
cartoon
thriller
action
movie
science
fiction
tragedy悲剧
movies
Brainstorming
How
many
kinds
of
do
you
know?
music
pop
music
rock
music
country
music
light
music
jazz
music
dance
music
classical
music
electronic
music
music
What
kinds
of
movies/music
do
you
like
to
watch/listen
to?
Do
A
Survey
Share
your
different
answers.
When
I’m…
I
like/prefer
the
movies/music
that/which…
Examples
(movie/music
names)
happy
sad
tired
bored
I
like
movie
that
has
famous
stars.
I
like
music
that
has
good
lyrics.
I
don’t
like
movie
that
has
a
sad
ending.
I
like
movie
that
has
fashion
cars.
I
like
movie
that
we
can
know
about
the
history.
I
like
music
that
is
made
by
Jay
chao.
Sum
学以致用！让我们看看
课文里优美的句子！
◆
I
prefer
movies
that
can
cheer
me
up.
◆
Comedies
usually
have
funny
dialogs
and
have
a
happy
ending.
◆
The
characters
may
not
be
perfect,
but
they
try
their
best
to
solve
their
problems.
◆
Documentaries
like
March
of
the
Penguins
which
provide
plenty
of
information
about
a
certain
subject
can
be
interesting.
◆
I
prefer
movies
that
are
scary.
◆
The
piece
which
was
played
on
the
erhu
especially
moved
me.
◆
The
music
was
strangely
beautiful,
but
under
the
beauty
I
sensed
a
strong
sadness
and
pain.
◆
It
was
one
of
the
most
moving
pieces
of
music
that
I
have
ever
heard.
◆
The
erhu
sounded
so
sad
that
I
almost
cried
along
with
it
as
I
listened.
你喜爱看电影（听音乐）吗？谈谈你喜欢的电影（音乐）类型，喜欢的电影明星（歌手），并着重推荐一部你喜爱演员的主演的电影（该歌手的专辑），要求不少于80词。
Writing
1
Tips!
1
You
can
write
in
this
way~
1.
What’s
your
favorite
movie/music?
(reason)
2.
Who
is
your
favorite
movie
star/singer?
(reason)
3.
Recommendation
of
a
movie
/CD
What
kind
of
movie
/music
is
it?
What’s
the
name
of
your
favorite
movie/CD?
Why
do
you
like
this
movie/CD?
What
does
it
remind
you
of?
When
I
am
stressed
out,
I
always
watch
movies
to
relax
myself.
I
like
movie
that
is
romantic.
So,
my
favorite
music
is
Roman
holiday.
I
don’t
like
movie
that
don’t
have
beautiful
lyrics.
I
can’t
stand
a
movie
about
detective
story.
I
prefer
actress
who
can
do
KongFu.
I
like
actor
who
is
handsome
enough.
My
favorite
actress
is
Audrey
Hepburn.
I
like
I
like
her
starring
Roman
holiday
best.
This
movie
is
great
because
it
is
so
romantic.
You
can
enjoy
it
with
your
friends
on
weekends.
Audrey
is
charming,
I
think.
The
movie
reminds
me
of
the
feeling
of
love.
Outline
1.确定体材：
2.确定时态:(Tense)
The
present
tense
议论文
3.布局谋篇:
Main
body
Ending
Introduction
Watching
movies
is
a
good
way
for
me
to
relax.
I’m
crazy
about
it.
(10
minutes)
开声朗读自己的文章，并
从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
自我欣赏与修正
同伴互赏
欣赏角度：
写作基本要求:人称,
时态；
2.
要点齐全；
3.
结构:
开头，正文，结尾；
4.
好词好句。
①欣赏与修正
请交换习作欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点词、句
,
并运用改错符号找出不足，进行适当修改。
②评分
以满分15分为标准，给同伴的习作打分。
③点评
由亮点欣赏到不足的修正（篇章结构
分析-细
节点评)
集体赏析，共同进步
Rewrite
your
article
and
hand
in
tomorrow.Worksheet
for:
Unit
9
I
like
music
that
I
can
dance
to.
话题：Interests
and
hobbies
(兴趣与爱好)
School
Class
Name
Date
一、本节课的学习目标
1．能力目标
（1）能够运用英文说明音乐和电影带来的情感体验。
（2）能运用which,
who,
that引导的定语从句完整地表达自己对音乐和电影的喜好并说明原因。
2．情感目标
学习去欣赏美好的音乐和电影。
二、语料箱
▲词块：
great
lyrics,
thought
of,
one
of
the
most
exciting
movies,
cheer
me
up,
have
funny
dialogs,
have
a
happy
ending,
try
their
best
to,
solve
their
problems,
provide
plenty
of
information
about
▲句型：
I
like
music
that…;
I
prefer
music
that…;
I
like
musicians
who…;
I
prefer…to…;
I
prefer…rather
than…;
the
music
reminds
me
of…;
I
can’t
stand
music
that…;
they
don’t
interest
me
as
much…;
It
was
directed
by;
It
was
made
in
...;
It
is
about...;
…plays
the
lead
role
in
the
movie;
He./She
acts
as...
;
When
I
watch
it,
I
feel...;
I
sense...as
I
watch
it;
I
think
you
should
watch
it
too
because...;I
advise
you
to
watch
it
if
you
have
a
chance
because...
▲名言、谚语、警句:
1.
Music
is
the
eye
of
the
ear.
音乐是耳朵的眼睛。
2.
Nothing
is
worth
living
for
without
music.
–Nietzsche
没有音乐，生命是没有价值的。——
尼采
3.
Music
is
the
universal
language
of
mankind.
音乐是全人类的共同语言。
4.
Music
is
the
medicine
of
the
breaking
heart.音乐是治疗心灵创伤的良药。
5.
Music
washes
away
from
the
soul
the
dust
of
everyday
life.
音乐可以洗去日常生活中蒙在灵魂上的尘垢。
6.
Music
has
charms
to
soothe
a
savage
breast,
to
soften
rocks
or
bend
a
knotted
oak.
音乐有着抚慰粗野的胸怀、软化顽石或使千年老树弯腰的魅力。
三、写作任务
（一）Brainstorming:
How
many
kinds
of
movies
do
you
know?
________________________________________________________________
How
many
kinds
of
music
do
you
know?
________________________________________________________________
（二）Do
a
survey:
What
kinds
of
movies/music
does
your
partner
like
to
watch/listen
to?
Do
a
survey
and
write
down
the
information
you
get.
When
I’m…
I
like/prefer
the
movies/music
that/which…
Examples
(movie/music
names)
happy
?
?
sad
?
?
tired
?
?
bored
?
?
（三）Write
down
the
beautiful
sentences:
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
（四）单元话题写作
你喜爱看电影（听音乐）吗？谈谈你喜欢的电影（音乐）类型，喜欢的电影明星（歌手），并着重推荐一部你喜爱演员的主演的电影（该歌手的专辑）。要求不少于80词。
思路点拨：主要人称：_
___
体裁：_______
主要时态：_________
Beginning:
Ending:
写一稿（first
draft）：
写二稿（second
draft）：
（五）评价
1.
大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
2.
同伴互赏：我欣赏，我快乐！
项目
标准
自我评价
同伴评价
教师评价
结构（3分）
段落合理
（2
分）
衔接自然
(1分)
内容（8分）
要点全面
（6分）
拓展合理
(2分)
语言（3分）
词汇丰富
(1分)
句法正确
，语言优美(
2分)
卷面（1分）
书写工整（
1分）
3.
作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／，语法错误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
（六）总结反思：今天我们写的这篇文章是表达自己的感受，属于议论文。请同学们找出你文章里的定语从句，把它们记下来。
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