(共28张PPT)
写作题目：The
happiest
life
You
make
me
cry
make
me
smile
make
me
feel
the
love
is
true
you
always
stand
by
my
side
I
don't
want
to
say
goodbye
You
make
me
cry
make
me
smile
make
me
feel
the
joy
of
lover
kissing
you
thank
you
for
all
the
love
you
always
gave
to
me
oh
I
love
you
What
makes
you
cry?
What
makes
you
relax?
What
makes
you
nervous?
What
makes
you
happy?
To
talk
about
how
things
affect
you.
To
learn
to
write
an
article
about
“The
Happiest
Life”
Words
about
feeling
Positive
words
Negative
words
happy,
relaxed,
easy,
comfortable,
excited,
interested
nervous,
worried,
angry,
uneasy,
mad,scared,
thrilled,bored
Describe
one
of
your
experiences
that
impressed
you
most.
eg.
Missing
the
important
soccer
game
makes
me
________.
A.
信息归纳：请阅读下面有关幸福的文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。
Information
Card
A
positive
mood
and
a
pleasant
state
of
mind
One
in
twenty
persons
The
ideal
situation
People
with
college
education
Love
The
meaning
of
happiness
1.
The
number
of
very
unhappy
Americans
2.
The
factor
that
may
have
nothing
to
do
with
true
feelings
3.
The
people
who
have
more
chances
to
control
their
lives
4.
The
thing
that
has
a
high
connection
with
happiness
5.
B.
书面表达：你在学校过的快乐吗？生活中的你幸福吗？你心目中的快乐生活是什么样子的？请你以“The
Happiest
Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文来描述一下你认为的最快乐的生活。内容包括：
1.
你现在的快乐和烦恼是什么？
2.
你追求的最快乐、最幸福的生活是什么样子的？
3.
你会为此做出怎样的努力？
连
写
想
列
查
Step
1---think（想一想）
审题
人称：_______________________
时态：_______________________
体裁：_______________________
第一人称
一般现在时态
议论文
Step
2---List（列一列）
1.
和…相处融洽
________________
2.
希望做某事
________________
3.
努力学习
________________
4.
使梦想实现
________________
5.
相互学习
________________
get
on
well
with
hope
to
do
study
hard
make
the
dream
come
true
learn
from
each
other
以“The
happiest
Life”为题
1.
我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼
2.
我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活
3.
我要付出的努力
beginning
Body
Ending
Step
3---Add（连一连）
Step
4
---Write（写一写）
以“The
happiest
Life”为题
1.
我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼
2.
我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活
3.
我要付出的努力
beginning
Body
Ending
用词方面:
代词主格,宾格；
名词单复数；
动词搭配；副词位置
句子方面:
篇章方面:
细节方面:
句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；
连词使用
内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理
单词拼写；标点符号；大小写
Step
5---Check（查一查）
Appreciating
&
Evaluating
欣赏与评价
①请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔划出对方的亮点,并对
不足的地方进行适当修改。
②你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？
③根据worksheet上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。
Summary
How
to
write
an
article
about
happiness.
2.
Learn
some
of
the
writing
skills.
连
写
想
列
查
Happiness
comes
from
your
heart,
not
from
your
surroundings.
幸福来自于你的内心世界，而不是你周围的事物。
Rewrite
the
article.
优秀作文分享：
The
Happiest
Life
Everyone
wants
to
be
happy
everyday.
But
life
is
not
fair,
there
are
always
lots
of
challenges
and
trouble
in
our
life
and
we
cant’
always
get
what
we
want,
we
can
just
dream
about
the
life
we
want.
The
life
I
want
is
happy,
rich
and
free.
I
like
money
and
freedom,
but
I
think
happiness
is
the
most
important
thing.
Now
I
am
not
rich
and
I
always
feel
tired
because
I
have
too
much
homework
to
do
every
day
and
my
sleeping
time
is
not
enough.
If
you
think
I
am
mad
at
my
life,
you
will
be
wrong.
I
will
try
my
best
to
change
my
life
and
make
it
better.
I
believe
that
I
am
able
to
make
my
dream
come
true
because
I
won’t
be
a
loser.
The
Happiest
Life
As
a
student,
life
is
simple
but
boring
to
me.
Every
day,
I’m
busy
getting
ready
for
my
final
exam.
I
have
endless
work
to
do
and
I
don’t
have
time
for
my
hobby.
I’m
really
tired
of
such
busy
days.
I
always
dream
about
studying
in
a
nice
school
which
has
colorful
activities
for
us
students
to
relax.
In
such
a
nice
school,
I
can
not
only
learn
knowledge
from
teachers,
but
also
enjoy
all
kinds
of
interesting
activates
like
taking
part
in
summer
camps
or
having
barbecue
with
friends.
I
also
dream
about
living
in
a
big
house
with
a
beautiful
garden
and
a
swimming
pool
with
my
family
in
the
future.
We
can
often
travel
around
the
world.
In
order
to
live
the
happiest
life
I
want,
I
will
work
hard
and
read
more
books
about
great
men’s
success.
The
Happiest
Life
As
we
know
,both
happiness
and
sadness
are
part
of
our
life.
As
for
me,
studying
,playing
and
sharing
something
with
my
friends
is
happiness.
But
I’m
worried
about
my
study
because
I’m
lazy.
I
hope
I
can
get
along
well
with
my
friends
and
parents.
We
can
share
not
only
happiness
but
also
sadness.
That’s
my
happiest
life.
And
I
hope
I
will
pass
the
final
exam
in
order
to
study
in
a
good
high
school.
So
I
must
work
harder
than
before.
Now,
what
I
need
to
do
is
to
be
kind
,active
and
helpful
in
my
daily
life.
The
Happiest
Life
I
am
a
middle
school
student.
I
am
very
happy
because
my
parents,
teachers
and
friends
all
love
me
and
they
always
give
me
a
hand
.
However,
life
is
not
always
lucky.
As
a
matter
of
fact,
in
order
to
enter
a
good
high
school,
I
have
to
spend
a
lot
of
time
in
doing
my
homework
.
I
hope
I
needn’t
spend
so
much
time
on
my
homework
and
I
can
listen
to
music,
watch
TV
and
play
with
my
friends
on
weekends.
That's
my
happiest
life.
Of
course,
I
know
if
I
wish
my
dream
to
come
true,
I
must
study
hard
so
that
I
can
do
more
interesting
things.
Happiness
consists
in
contentment.????知足常乐.?
Happy
is
the
man
who
is
living
by
his
hobby.
以爱好为生的人是幸福的。
3.Happiness
is
form
courage
.(
H.
Jackson
,
British
writer
)
幸福是勇气的一种形式。
(英国作家
杰克逊.
H.)
4.
Happiness
lies
not
in
the
mere
possession
of
money
;
it
lies
in
the
joy
of
achievement
,
in
the
thrill
of
creative
effort
.(Franklin
Roosevelt
,American
president
)
幸福不在于拥有金钱，而在于获得成就时的喜悦以及产生创造力的激情。(美国总统
罗斯福.
F.)
5.
The
supreme
happiness
of
life
is
the
conviction
that
we
are
loved
.(Victor
Hugo
,
French
novelist
)
生活中最大的幸福是坚信有人爱我们。(
法国小说家
雨果.
V
.)
6.
A
happy
heart
makes
a
blooming
visage.心中快乐，容光焕发。Worksheet
for:
Unit
11
Sad
movies
make
me
cry.
话题：Feelings
and
moods
(情感与情绪)
School
Class
Name
Date
一、本节课的学习目标
1．能力目标
(1)
能够运用英语描述事情对自己情感的影响。
(2)
能够运用一些表达感情的词，正确表达自己的感情，说明原因写出完整的文章。
2．情感目标
培养学生管理自己的情绪的能力。
二、语料箱
▲词块：
challenges
and
trouble,
in
our
life,
dream
about,
feel
tired,
sleeping
time,
be
mad
at,
try
my
best
to,
make
it
better,
be
able
to,
come
true,
simple,
boring,
be
busy
doing,
get
ready
for,
my
final
exam,
have
endless
work
to
do,
be
tired
of,
dream
about
doing,
colorful
activities,
not
only…but
also…,
learn
from,
in
the
future,
In
order
to,
travel
around
the
world
▲句型：
I
believe
that;
because…;
I
don’t
have
time
for;
As
we
know…;
As
for
me…;
doing…
is
happiness;
I
hope
I
will…;
what
I
need
to
do
is
to…;
As
a
matter
of
fact…;
I
have
to
spend
a
lot
of
time
in
doing…;
so
that…;
I
will…if…
▲名言、谚语、警句：
1.
Happiness
consists
in
contentment.????知足常乐。?
2.
Happy
is
the
man
who
is
living
by
his
hobby.
以爱好为生的人是幸福的。
3.
Happiness
is
form
courage.
(H.
Jackson,
British
writer)
幸福是勇气的一种形式。
(英国作家
杰克逊.
H.)
4.
Happiness
lies
not
in
the
mere
possession
of
money;
it
lies
in
the
joy
of
achievement,
in
the
thrill
of
creative
effort.
(Franklin
Roosevelt
,American
president
)
幸福不在于拥有金钱，而在于获得成就时的喜悦以及产生创造力的激情。(美国总统
罗斯福.
F.)
5.
The
supreme
happiness
of
life
is
the
conviction
that
we
are
loved.
(Victor
Hugo
,
French
novelist
)
生活中最大的幸福是坚信有人爱我们。(
法国小说家
雨果.
V
.)
6.
A
happy
heart
makes
a
blooming
visage.
心中快乐，容光焕发。
三、写作任务
（一）
Brainstorming:
words
about
feelings.
Positive
words
________________________________________
Negative
words
________________________________________
（二）Pair-work:
making
sentences.
Describe
one
of
your
experiences
that
impressed
you
most.
________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________
（三）Reading
for
information.
请阅读下面有关幸福的文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。
Happiness
can
be
described
as
a
positive
mood
and
a
pleasant
state
of
mind.
According
to
a
recent
survey,
60%
to
70%
of
Americans
consider
themselves
to
be
quite
happy
and
one
in
twenty
persons
feels
very
unhappy.
Psychologists(心理学家)
have
been
studying
the
factors(因素)
that
influence
happiness.
It
is
not
predictable(可预言的),
nor
is
a
person
in
an
ideal
situation(理想状态)
necessarily
happy.
The
ideal
situation
may
have
nothing
to
do
with
his
true
feelings.
A
good
education
and
income
are
usually
considered
necessary
for
happiness.
People
with
college
education
are
somewhat
happier
than
those
who
did
not
graduate
from
high
school,
and
it
is
believed
that
this
is
mainly
because
they
have
more
chances
to
control
their
lives.
Poor
health
is
related
to
happiness.
Learning
to
cope
with
a
health
problem
can
increase
happiness.
And
love
has
a
high
connection
with
happiness
than
any
other
factor.
The
best
formula
(公式)
for
happiness
is
to
be
able
to
develop
the
ability
to
tolerate(忍受)
disappointment,
to
have
a
personal
commitment(个人追求),
and
to
develop
self-confidence.
Information
Card
The
meaning
of
happiness
1.
The
number
of
very
unhappy
Americans
2.
The
factor
that
may
have
nothing
to
do
with
true
feelings
3.
The
people
who
have
more
chances
to
control
their
lives
4.
The
thing
that
has
a
high
connection
with
happiness
5.
（四）列一列
1.
和…相处融洽
________________
2.
希望做某事
________________
3.
努力学习
________________
4.
使梦想实现
________________
5.
相互学习
________________
（五）单元话题写作
你在学校过的快乐吗？生活中的你幸福吗？你心目中的快乐生活是什么样子的？请你以“The
Happiest
Life”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文来描述一下你认为的最快乐的生活。内容包括：
1.
你现在的生活中，有什么快乐的事或烦恼的事么？
2.
你想象中的最快乐、最幸福的生活是什么样子的？
3.
你会为此做出怎样的努力？
思路点拨：
主要人称：_
___体裁：__________
主要时态：______________
Beginning:
Main
body:
Ending:
写一稿（first
draft）：
写二稿（second
draft）：
（六）评价
1.
大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
2.
同伴互赏：我欣赏，我快乐！
项目
标准
自我评价
同伴评价
教师评价
结构（3分）
段落合理
（2
分）
衔接自然
(1分)
内容（8分）
要点齐全
（6分）
拓展合理
(2分)
语言（3分）
词汇丰富
(1分)
句法正确
，语言优美(
2分)
卷面（1分）
书写工整（
1分）
3.
作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／，语法错误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
（七）总结反思：同学们，写作5步骤是什么呢？
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