Worksheet
for:
Unit
13
We’re
trying
to
save
the
earth
话题：The
world
and
the
environment
(世界与环境)
School
Class
Name
Date
一、本节课的学习目标
1．能力目标
（1）能根据写作要求，收集、准备素材，完成一篇关于环境保护的作文。
（2）掌握议论文中几种支持论点的写作方法。
（3）能使用常见的连接词表示顺序和逻辑关系。
2．情感目标
增强保护环境的意识，从身边小事做起。
二、语料箱
▲词块：
close
down
the
factories，stopped
from
throwing
litter
into
the
sea，take
the
bus,
ride
a
bike,
instead
of
driving
cars，plastic
bowls,
wooden
chopsticks,
keep
public
places
clean,
put
sth
into
the
dustbin,
recycle
books
and
paper,
save
electricity
and
water,
play
a
part/role
in,
Turn
off
the
light,
protect
the
environment,
take
action
to,
try
our
best
to,
▲句型：
…is
also
very
necessary;
It
is
everyone’s
duty/responsibility
to;
It’s
important/necessary
for
us
to
…；We
must/should/are
supposed
to…；We
shouldn’t…；We
had
better
(not)
do
…；I
suggest/advise
that…；We
can
try
our
best
to…；The
government
should…；If
we…；I
believe
that;
▲提出倡议或号召的句子：:
1.
Don’t
let
our
tears
become
the
last
drop
of
water.
2.
Let’s
play
a
part
in
loving
and
saving
our
earth!
3.
Do
it
now!
/
Start
to
join
us
now!
4.
Don’t
put
it
off!
Become
a
volunteer
today!
5.
Don’t
hesitate(犹豫).
It
will
be
great
fun!
6.
As
students,
we
should
start
from
ourselves.
7.
It
is
everyone’s
duty
to
protect
the
earth.
三、写作任务
（一）Free
talk:
What
problem
are
animals
facing?
_________________________________________________________________
Why
are
they
facing
this
problem?
_________________________________________________________________
How
to
solve
the
problem/save
animals?
_________________________________________________________________
（二）Group
discussion：
What
are
the
problems?
_________________________________________________________________
Why
do
we
have
these
problems?
_________________________________________________________________
How
to
solve
the
problem?
_________________________________________________________________
（三）单元话题写作
作文1
我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，垃圾污染越来越严重，应该如何保护我们的环境？根据提示写一篇80字左右的短文。
1.
现状：陈述垃圾污染问题（waste
pollution）
2.
原因：乱扔垃圾
3.
措施：分门别类放置垃圾；少用塑料袋，减少白色污染；循环利用纸等。
提示词：trash，pile
up堆积,
put
...
in
the
right
places,
reduce减少,
plastic
bag塑料袋,
recycle
作文2
以“Protecting
Water”为题写一篇80字左右的短文。
1.
现状：水越来越少，水污染严重
2.
原因：有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头；工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，鱼死了。
3.
措施：保护水。
提示词：care
about,
tap,
pour
waste
water
into
思路点拨：体裁：_________
主要人称：_
___
主要时态：___________
Beginning:
Ending:
写一稿（first
draft）：
（四）评价
1.
大声朗读自己的文章，从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
2.
同伴互赏：我欣赏，我快乐！
项目
标准
自我评价
同伴评价
教师评价
结构（3分）
段落合理
（2
分）
衔接自然
(1分)
内容（8分）
要点齐全
（6分）
拓展合理
(2分)
语言（3分）
词汇丰富
(1分)
句法正确
，语言优美(
2分)
卷面（1分）
书写工整（
1分）
3.
作文通用修改字符：优美句子～；漏词∧；错处：○；去掉／，语法错误
G
,人称错误
P，时态错误
T
（五）总结反思：当我们写议论文的时候，有哪些支持论点的写作方法呢?
PAGE
1(共39张PPT)
写作题目：
Save
our
earth
Are
they
cute?
They
are
dying!
They
are
endangered
animals!
What
problem
are
these
animals
facing?
There
used
to
be
a
lot
of
animals,
but
now
some
animals
are
endangered.
Why
are
they
facing
this
problem?
Some
of
their
living
places
have
been
polluted
or
destroyed.
People
catch
and
kill
these
animals.
How
to
solve
the
problem/save
animals?
The
government
has
passed
laws
to
protect
them.
Tell
people
around
us
to
protect
animals.
be
polluted
/
be
destroyed
be
killed
the
government
passed
laws
tell
people
around
us
What
other
problems
do
we
have?
things
that
are
in
nature
and
can
be
used
by
people
Help
me!
What
are
the
problems?
Why
do
we
have
these
problems?
How
to
solve
the
problem?
合作探究
Discuss
in
groups
,
try
to
answer
the
3
questions.
2.
This
is
because
we
throw
trash
everywhere.
For
example:
1.
This
is
waste
pollution.
take
your
own
bags
put
trash
in
the
right
places
recycle
use
less
paper
napkins
合作探究
Now
choose
one
pollution.
Discuss
in
groups
,
try
to
answer
the
3
questions.
Water
Pollution
Air
Pollution
global
warming
全球变暖
当我们回答了这3个问题，已基本完成文章的主体！
What
are
the
problems?
Why
do
we
have
these
problems?
How
to
solve
the
problem?
basic
structure
基本结构
beginning
body
中心要点
ending
1.打比方
The
earth
_____
_____(像)
our
mother.
We
must
stop
people
hurting
her.
writing
methods(一些支持论点的写作方法)
2.列数字
We
can
use
less
paper.
Because
a
big
tree
can
only
be
made
into
______
______
(大约4000)
pieces
of
A4
paper.
3.举例子
We
can
do
many
things
to
reduce
pollution,
____
___
using
fewer
plastic
bags.
4.引用________(就如俗语所说),
“
Helping
the
earth
is
helping
ourselves.”
The
earth
_____
_____
our
mother.
We
must
stop
people
hurting
her.
打
比
方
is
like
writing
methods(一些支持论点的写作方法)
We
can
use
less
paper.
Because
a
tree
can
only
be
made
into
______
______
(大约4000)
pieces
of
A4
paper.
列
数
字
about
4000
writing
methods(一些支持论点的写作方法)
We
can
do
many
things
to
reduce
pollution,
_____
____
using
fewer
plastic
bags.
举
例
子
such
as
writing
methods(一些支持论点的写作方法)
_____________________
(就如俗语所说),
“
Helping
the
earth
is
helping
ourselves.”
引
用
As
the
saying
goes
writing
methods(一些支持论点的写作方法)
信息点与连接词的关系
信息点是珠子，连接词是线，用线把珠子串连起来就是一条熠熠生辉、优雅华贵的项链。单独看某一方就成为一条破绳子，一堆烂珠子。
写作技巧：善用连接词
加上开头、结尾和连接词使你的文章更加完整吧！
_______________________________________
There
used
to
be
a
lot
of
animals,
________
some
animals
are
endangered.
Some
of
their
living
places
have
been
polluted
or
destroyed.
Animals
______
don't
have
enough
food
to
eat.
________________,
People
catch
and
kill
animals
for
food
or
fur.
Animals
are
people's
friends,
____
I
think
it's
neccessary
for
us
to
save
animals.
The
government
has
passed
laws
to
protect
them.
We
should
obey
the
law
____________
tell
people
around
us
to
take
good
care
of
animals.
______________________________________________________________________________
Nowadays,
animals
are
facing
a
serious
problem--
Only
in
this
way
can
we
save
them
and
live
with
animals
happily./Don't
put
it
off.
Let's
...
but
now
so
as
well
as
/
and
not
only
obey
the
law
but
also
tell
people
around
even
What's
more/Besides
开头常用词语：
as
far
as
we
know
据我们所知
as
everybody
knows
众所周知
at
present
目前
nowadays
现今
to
tell
the
truth
老实说
好的结尾
首尾呼应。
We
must
do
something
to
protect
water
in
order
to
make
the
world
more
beautiful.
Only
in
this
way
can
we...
2.
提出倡议或号召。
Save
animals!
Save
Ourselves!
Save
our
planet!
/
Don't
put
it
off.Let's
...
3.
名句结尾。
I
believe
we
can
do
better
in
protecting
our
world.
Where
there
is
a
will
there
is
a
way.
作文1
我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，垃圾污染越来越严重，应该如何保护我们的环境？根据提示写一篇80字左右的短文。
1.
现状：陈述垃圾污染问题（waste
pollution）
2.
原因：乱扔垃圾
3.
措施：分门别类放置垃圾；少用塑料袋，减少白色污染；循环利用书和纸等。
提示词：trash，pile
up堆积,
put
...
in
the
right
places,
reduce减少,
plastic
bag塑料袋,
recycle
作文2
以“Protecting
Water”为题写一篇80字左右的短文。
1.
现状：水越来越少，水污染严重
2.
原因：有人不关心节约用水，洗完手不关水龙头；工厂往河里排放污水，河流、湖泊的水被污染了，鱼死了。
3.
措施：保护水。
提示词：care
about,
tap,
pour
waste
water
into
Narration
记叙文
B.
Exposition
说明文
C.
Argumentation
议论文
What’s
the
style
of
this
writing?
审人称：
审时态：
第一人称为主：we
以一般现在时为主
开声朗读自己的文章，并
从结构、人称、时态、字数、拼写、大小写、标点符号等方面进行自我修正。
自我欣赏与修正
集体赏析，共同进步
