(共36张PPT)
Unit1
Writing:What
will
my
life
be
like
in
20
years?
版本:北师大版
年级:八年级下册第一单元
How
time
flies!
Ms.
wang
Jim
Jim,
please
write
a
composition
about
your
life
in
20
years.
OK.
Let
me
think
of
it.
Focus
on
the
structure
Try
to
remember
more
information
关注结构
多记信息
Jim's
life
in
20
years
Para
1
Para
2
Para
3
Para
4
Jim’s
life
in
twenty
years
Talk
about
our/my
life
in
twenty
years
P1
introduction
How
old
will
Jim
be?
He
will
be_____
years
old.
What
kind
of
person
will
Jim
be?
He
will
be
a
__________
and
_______person.
In
twenty
years
34
successful
happy
P2
Work
or
job
What
will
Jim
be?
What
will
Jim
do?
He
will
be
a___________
.
,
In
twenty
years
businessman
What
will
he
do
in
his
job?
He
will
_________his
own
website
________
his
job
very
much
because
he
loves
_________
the
net.
_________to
the
office
very
often.
_____
from
home
according
to
his
own
timetable
not
need
to
_________
early
____________work
until
late
at
night.
In
twenty
years
set
up
enjoy
surfing
not
go
work
wake
up
be
able
to
P3
Family
Where
will
he
live?
What
will
he
do
with
his
family?
He
will
leave
________.
live
in
his
own
______.
live
near
his
____________.
visit
his
parents
often.
have
a
______
trip
together
every
year.
home
flat
parents
family
In
twenty
years
P4
spare
time
What
will
Jim
do
in
his
spare
time?
He
will
read
________.
_______
around.
play
_________
with
his
friends
go
swimming
at
the
swimming
pool
_______
his
home.
books
travel
football
near
In
twenty
years
P5
conclusion
Will
Jim
enjoy
his
life?
Why
or
why
not?
Yes.
He
will.
He
will
enjoy
his
life
a
lot
Because
he
will
______
his
time
how
he
wants
to
His
life
will
be
so
__________
and
_____________
In
twenty
years
spend
exciting
comfortable
Make
your
own
mind-map
Work
in
groups.
Brain
storm
as
many
words
as
possible
about
work,
family
and
hobbies.
In
twenty
years,
I
will
be
thirty-four
years
old.
I
think
I
will
be
a
successful
and
happy
person.
introduction
Tips:
1.
Be
brief
in
the
beginning.
2.
Use
some
adjective
to
make
your
writing
lively.
conclusion
I
will
enjoy
my
life
a
lot
because
I
will
spend
my
time
how
I
want
to.
Life
will
be
so
exciting
and
comfortable.
Tips:
1.
Come
back
to
the
topic.
2.
Use
some
clauses
to
make
your
writing
better.
Use
the
link
words
and
sentence
phrases
I
will
be
a
businessman
then
and
will
set
up
my
own
website.
I
will
enjoy
my
job
very
much
because
I
love
surfing
the
net…
I
will
leave
home
and
live
in
my
own
flat.
However,
I
will
live
near
my
parents
and
I
will
visit
them
often.
Every
year,
we
will
have
a
family
trip
together.
ⅡMake
feelings
stronger
Construction
I
will
be
a...
writer
famous
writer
who
is
popular
among
the
readers
in
20
years
I
have
confidence
that
Time
to
show
your
own
composition
pay
attention
to
the
structure
use
the
useful
phrases
and
sentences
write
about
80
words.
·
13-15
marks
·
9-12
marks
·
4-8
marks
·
0-3
marks
assessment
of
composition
√
Group
Work
9-12
marks
第二档:符合题目要求,整篇表达清楚,语法错误较少。9-12分。
Pay
attention
to
the
spelling,
remember
more
basic
words.
第一档:符合题目要求,内容完整,层次结构清晰,表达能用句型词组,基本无语言错误。13-15分。
13-15
marks
Group
Work
0-3
marks
第四档:不符合题目要求,整篇表达不清楚,或只照抄、拼凑几个提示词语。0-3分。
Pay
attention
to
the
spelling,
remember
more
basic
words.
第三档:部分内容符合题目要求,内容不够完整,层次结构不够清晰,表达不够清楚,语言有较多错误。4-8分。
4-8
marks
Avoid
Qing-English
and
basic
grammar
errors.
·
13-15
marks
·
9-12
marks
·
4-8
marks
·
0-3
marks
assessment
of
composition
√
singer
teacher
Fly
high
with
your
dreams
banker
musician
painter
doctor
engineer
I
BELIEVE
I
CAN
FLY
If
I
can
see
it,
then
I
can
do
it
If
I
can
see
it
,
then
I
can
be
it
I
believe
I
can
fly,
I
believe
I
can
touch
the
sky.
Anyang
Shanghai
2019
2039
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Beijing
2019
2039