(共22张PPT)
My
Hometown
Where
were
you
born?
Do
you
love
your
hometown?
Why
or
why
not?
Welcome
to
my
hometown
the
Flood
Memorial
Park
Jiaxin
Shopping
Center
Welcome
to
my
hometown
the
Ferris
Wheel
Mount
Matou
Welcome
to
my
hometown
so
many
tall
buildings
the
people
are
very
helpful
Welcome
to
my
hometown
Qingyuan
Chicken
Goose
(roast
goose)
Welcome
to
my
hometown
Carambola
Sweet
Orange
话题写作:我的家乡
写作提示:描述家乡的地理位置,周边环境,民情风俗,旅游景点,休闲胜地以及特产美食等等。80词左右。
Topic
Writing
:My
Hometown
Step
1.
Brainstorm:
Topic
Words
and
Phrases
Step
2.
Topic
Sentences
Writing
Step
3.
Topic
Writing
Analysis(mind
map)
My
Hometown
Environment
(in
the
past&now)
People
Delicious
food
Tourist
attractions
Step
4.
Topic
Writing
Practice
审题
2.人称
3.时态
1.找关键词
写
作
攻
略
4.结尾:好的结尾点题,
为文章增分,添亮点
一般现在时
第一人称
My
Hometown
the
first
paragraph:
the
second
paragraph:
the
third
paragraph:
Environment&People
Tourist
attractions
Delicious
food
成
说明文
篇章结构
写作进行中……
一般现在时
第一人称
My
Hometown
the
first
paragraph:
the
second
paragraph:
the
third
paragraph:
Environment&People
Tourist
attractions
Delicious
food
成
说明文
篇章结构
Compositon
Show
Use
the
evaluation
table
to
give
a
score
to
your
classmate's
composition!
Evaluation
Punctuation
标点
(1分)
Spelling
拼写
(2分)
Words
&Sentences
词句
(2分)
Grammar
语法
(3分)
Content
内容
(5分)
Handwriting
书写
(2分)
Total
总分
(15分)
自评互评进行中……
Homework
Write
a
composition
about:
“My
Hometown”.