Unit 10 I’d like some noodles. Section B Writing（共20张PPT）

(共20张PPT)
Unit 10
Section B
Writing
1，birthday cakes with candles
3，person's age
4，make a wish
6，in one go
8，put a candy in a birthday cake
9. the child with candy is lucky
5，blow out candles
7，come true
2.the number of
10,It's getting popular to have cake
11,long noodles
12,never cut up
14,bring good luck to sb.
13,a symbol of life and good luck
Review
Pre-writing free-talk
Fill in the blanks in the ad with the words in the box.
3a
order bowl kinds strawberry specials
The Ice-cream and Pancake House
Would you like to eat ice-cream or pancakes
At our restaurant, we have some great _______.We have different _____ of fruit ice-cream, like ___________, banana or orange. Would you like a big _____ for four yuan or a small one for just two yuan You can also ______ our delicious pancakes. They’re only five yuan.
kinds
strawberry
bowl
specials
order
An ad
The Ice-cream and Pancake House
Would you like to eat ice-cream or pancakes
At our restaurant, we have some great _______.We have different _____ of fruit
ice-cream, like ___________, banana or orange. Would you like a big _____ for four yuan or a small one for just two yuan
You can also ______ our delicious pancakes. They’re only five yuan.
kinds
strawberry
bowl
specials
order
Title
specials
kinds
kinds
kinds
price
price
size
size
How can we write an ad
Title
Beginning
Body
Ending
Would you like some…
Please come to…
kinds
sizes
price
There are…/We have...
small/medium/large
We have…for…
at a good price
Phone number
Our phone number is…/You can call us at…
address
Our address is… You can…
Welcome to…
假如你想开一家店，比如：面馆、饺子馆、甜品店、饮料店或薄饼店等，请为你的店写一篇广告，先完成以下表格。词数不少于70。
Name: .
Specials : .
Kinds： .
Sizes： .
Price: .
Phone number: .
Address: .
.
Person (人称)
Tense(时态)
The simple present tense
Details(细节)
Write down all information
70 words
The first person;
Style(形式)
An ad
Analyse the topic
Pre-writing
Structure
(结构)
Beginning: Lead to the topic:
Name the restaurant
and attract customers.
Body:
Ending: Show welcome
Introduce the information about the restaurant such as kinds, sizes , price, phone number and
address
Analyse the topic
Pre-writing
While-writing
Pay attention to handwriting.
Use some conjunction words such as and, because etc. to make your composition more fluent.
3. Write down all information.
4. Use the simple present tense correctly.
08:00
07:00
15
45
30
0
06:00
05:00
04:00
03:00
02:00
01:00
00:00
Write an ad in 10 minutes
While-writing
Correction codes:
※ Spelling mistakes
※ Wrong expressions
○
？
※ punctuation mistakes
Post-writing
Sharing Time
Work in groups, correct the mistakes
Think about how to improve your writing in the second draft.
Finish the second draft.
House of Delicious Dumplings
Would you like some dumplings Please come to House of Delicious Dumplings.
There are three new specials in our restaurant. We have beef dumplings with carrots, mutton dumplings with tomatoes and chicken and cabbage dumplings. Would you like a small bowl of dumplings They are only 8 yuan.We have a medium bowl for ten yuan and a large bowl for 12 yuan. Our phone number is 028-3971586. Our address is on Center Street, next to the library. You can find it easily.
Welcome to House of Delicious Dumplings
Sample
Happy Dessert
Welcome to Happy Dessert! There are three new specials in our restaurant.
We have three great new specials ,apple and banana ice- cream, orange and pear ice-cream and watermelon and strawberry ice-cream. Would you like a small cup of ice-cream for only ten yuan We have a large cup of ice-cream for only 15 yuan. We also have juice, coke and green tea. Our phone number is 028-3971586. Our address is on Center Street, next to the library. You can find it easily.
Welcome to Happy Dessert!
Sample
Sharing Time
Work in groups, appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation（标点）
6.language(语言)
Show Time
Post-writing