中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
2020年中考英语抗疫类题目专练
07
书面表达（原卷版）
话题：
书面表达一
你和你的父母是如何科学预防新型冠状病毒的
书面表达二
告知Jack目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势,
并告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护
书面表达三
对因疫情被隔离在家的Herry提出保持身体健康、远离病毒的建议。
书面表达四
疫情与人类吃野生动物有关，因此如何保护野生野生动物成为热点
书面表达一
今年1月底2月初爆发的由新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎疫情牵动人心。假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark得知此事后，对你很关心，他在微信上给你留言，想了解一下你和你的父母是如何科学预防该病毒的。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。
要求：1.
内容要紧扣图片；2.
语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.
词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：face
mask
口罩；treadmill
跑步机
Hi,
Mark.
I'd
like
to
tell
you
what
my
parents
and
I
did
to
stop
the
virus
spreading.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
your
care
about
me
and
my
family.
Please
don't
worry
about
us.
We'll
take
good
care
of
ourselves.
We
believe
everything
will
go
well.
书面表达二
假如你是李华,给你在英国朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,
告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势,
并告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护。要点如下:
1
我们的城市对于控制疫情已经取得较大的成功。
2注意防护，如减少外出，带口罩外出，勤洗手等。
3表达战胜疫情的信心。
注意:
1、可适当增加细节,
使行文连贯;
2、80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：novel
coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）口罩：mask.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
书面表达三
假如你是李华，你在武汉的朋友
Henry
最近因为武汉的新型冠状病毒肺炎而隔离在家，他表示长时间待在家对身体健康不利。请你写一封邮件安慰他，并针对怎样保持身体健康、远离病毒提出建议。
要求：
（1）80
词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
提示词：新型冠状病毒肺炎
thenovel
coronavirus;
病毒
virus.
Dear
Henry,
I
learned
that
you
are
feeling
sorry
and
upset
because
of
the
novel
coronavirus
in
Wuhan_________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
书面表达四
2019年的冬天，一种新型冠状病毒（the
pneumonia
epidemic）在武汉华南海鲜市场滋生，悄然从野生动物传染给人类。新型冠状病毒疫情在武汉早期确诊的病例，与武汉华南海鲜市场关系很密切。调查显示，此前在海鲜市场中有非法售卖野生动物现象。人类生存离不开野生动物，但现实生活中野生动物被捕食或作他用比比皆是。请根据以下内容写篇Protecting
Wild
Animals的英语作文。
素材要点:
描述问题
野生动物数量下降，越来越多的野生动物濒危，甚至永久消失
分析问题
1.猎杀野生动物皮毛用以制作衣服，生态平衡遭破坏2.食用野生动物还容易引发传染病（epedemic），如SARS病毒、新冠状病毒等）
建议
1.建立自然保护区2.拒绝野味3…
1.写作应包括表格及文字等各项内容。
2.为使写作流畅，在不影响主题表达完整准确的前提下，允许必要的增减与发挥。
3.词数100左右。
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书面表达（解析版）
话题：
书面表达一
你和你的父母是如何科学预防新型冠状病毒的
书面表达二
告知Jack目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势,
并告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护
书面表达三
对因疫情被隔离在家的Herry提出保持身体健康、远离病毒的建议。
书面表达四
疫情与人类吃野生动物有关，因此如何保护野生野生动物成为热点
书面表达一
今年1月底2月初爆发的由新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎疫情牵动人心。假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark得知此事后，对你很关心，他在微信上给你留言，想了解一下你和你的父母是如何科学预防该病毒的。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。
要求：1.
内容要紧扣图片；2.
语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.
词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：face
mask
口罩；treadmill
跑步机
Hi,
Mark.
I'd
like
to
tell
you
what
my
parents
and
I
did
to
stop
the
virus
spreading.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
your
care
about
me
and
my
family.
Please
don't
worry
about
us.
We'll
take
good
care
of
ourselves.
We
believe
everything
will
go
well.
【答案】
Hi,
Mark.
I'd
like
to
tell
you
what
my
parents
and
I
did
to
stop
the
virus
spreading.
First
of
all,
the
doors
and
windows
should
be
opened
regularly
for
ventilation.
Wear
a
face
mask
when
we
go
out.
Reduce
access
to
densely
populated
areas.
Don’t
go
to
places
with
high
outbreaks.
Washing
our
hands
is
a
good
way
to
keep
away
from
disease.
When
we
use
the
mask,
distinguish
the
front
and
back
of
the
mask.
Cover
our
mouth
and
chin.
We
should
exercise
often
in
order
to
build
up
our
health,
such
as
running
on
a
treadmill.
Also
enough
sleep
is
important
to
enhance
resistance.
Thanks
for
your
care
about
me
and
my
family.
Please
don't
worry
about
us.
We'll
take
good
care
of
ourselves.
We
believe
everything
will
go
well.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。注意语句通顺，要点齐全。注意时态的使用，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第一人称。多用祈使句。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：First
of
all；Wear
a
face
mask；the
front
and
back
of；such
as；care
about；worry
about；take
good
care
of等。
句型：时间状语从句Wear
a
face
mask
when
we
go
out.
祈使句Don’t
go
to
places
with
high
outbreaks.
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清图片的内容要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如First
of
all；Wear
a
face
mask；
care
about；worry
about；take
good
care
of等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
书面表达二
假如你是李华,给你在英国朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,
告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势,
并告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护。要点如下:
1
我们的城市对于控制疫情已经取得较大的成功。
2注意防护，如减少外出，带口罩外出，勤洗手等。
3表达战胜疫情的信心。
注意:
1、可适当增加细节,
使行文连贯;
2、80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：novel
coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）口罩：mask.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear
Jack,
How
is
everything
going?
Novel
coronavirus
has
spread
throughout
the
world
.Our
city
has
achieved
great
success
in
controlling
it.
I
have
some
advice
for
you
on
how
to
prevent
it.
The
most
important
thing
is
to
stay
at
home,
try
not
to
get
together
with
your
family
and
friends.
Second,
wash
your
hands
often
with
soap
and
water.
It
is
a
useful
way
to
keep
you
away
from
the
virus.
Third,
when
you
have
to
go
out,
you
must
wear
a
mask
to
cover
your
mouth
and
nose,
and
learn
how
to
put
it
on,
take
it
off
and
throw
it
away
correctly
.Remember,
if
you
have
a
fever
or
a
cough,
you
had
better
go
to
a
hospital
,
and
let
a
doctor
give
you
further
examination.
All
of
these
are
helpful
to
keep
you
safe.
We
believe
winter
will
finally
pass,
and
spring
is
sure
to
come.
We
will
go
back
to
school
as
soon
as
possible.
Hope
everything
goes
well
with
you.
Yours,
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以李华的身份，用第一人称给在英国朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势，并告诉他一些防御措施，书写时要注意用全题干所给提示要点，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文层次分明，第一层讲述新型冠状病毒已经传遍全球，第二层讲述防范措施，第三层展望战胜疫情的信心；短文陈述的中心突出，层次之间有机联系。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文运用的短语spread
throughout
the
world；achieve
great
success
in；
have
some
advice
for
you
on
；keep
you
away
from；文中用不定式的不同句式The
most
important
thing
is
to
stay
at
home；It
is
a
useful
way
to
keep
you
away
from
the
virus；try
not
to
get
together
with
your
family
and
friends；All
of
these
are
helpful
to
keep
you
safe；多种复合句条件状语从句if
you
have
a
fever
or
a
cough,
you
had
better
go
to
a
hospital
；宾语从句We
believe
winter
will
finally
pass,
and
spring
is
sure
to
come.
【点睛】
本篇是材料作文，书写前要认真阅读题干，了解题干的要求，确定中心话题，依据题干要求，分好短文的层次，确定层次的内容，使短文看起来逻辑清晰；建议使用表顺序的副词或短语表达有关防御措施，使短文更有条理。
书面表达三
假如你是李华，你在武汉的朋友
Henry
最近因为武汉的新型冠状病毒肺炎而隔离在家，他表示长时间待在家对身体健康不利。请你写一封邮件安慰他，并针对怎样保持身体健康、远离病毒提出建议。
要求：
（1）80
词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
提示词：新型冠状病毒肺炎
thenovel
coronavirus;
病毒
virus.
Dear
Henry,
I
learned
that
you
are
feeling
sorry
and
upset
because
of
the
novel
coronavirus
in
Wuhan_________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear
Henry,
I
learned
that
you
are
feeling
sorry
and
upset
because
of
the
novel
coronavirus
in
Wuhan.
There
is
no
need
to
worry.
Many
people
including
doctors,
nurses
and
scientists
act
bravely
and
spare
no
effort
to
fight
against
it.
We
are
sure
to
win
in
the
end.
At
this
particular
time,
you
should
keep
good
healthy
habits
and
keep
your
body
clean.
In
addition,
do
more
exercise
to
make
our
body
strong.
Besides,
you’d
better
go
out
as
little
as
possible.
If
you
must
go
out,
you
should
wear
protective
masks
to
avoid
getting
infected.
I
hope
you
can
stay
optimistic
and
cheer
up
again.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Henry写一封安慰信。审题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先对Henry现在的情况作介绍，并给他安慰；其次对于如何保持身体健康、远离病毒提出自己的建议；最后表达自己的愿望，写一个合适的结尾。短文应用一般现在时态叙述。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文采用了三段式结构，各部分内容安排合理，结构清晰，内容完整。文章中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构以简单句结构为主，穿插使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。一些过渡性词汇和短语的使用，增加了文章的连贯性。
3.高分亮点：
短语：spare
no
effort；fight
against；in
addition；as…as
possible；get
infected。
句型：Many
people
including
doctors,
nurses
and
scientists
act
bravely
and
spare
no
effort
to
fight
against
it.；Besides,
you’d
better
go
out
as
little
as
possible.；If
you
must
go
out,
you
should
wear
protective
masks
to
avoid
getting
infected.，
书面表达四
2019年的冬天，一种新型冠状病毒（the
pneumonia
epidemic）在武汉华南海鲜市场滋生，悄然从野生动物传染给人类。新型冠状病毒疫情在武汉早期确诊的病例，与武汉华南海鲜市场关系很密切。调查显示，此前在海鲜市场中有非法售卖野生动物现象。人类生存离不开野生动物，但现实生活中野生动物被捕食或作他用比比皆是。请根据以下内容写篇Protecting
Wild
Animals的英语作文。
素材要点:
描述问题
野生动物数量下降，越来越多的野生动物濒危，甚至永久消失
分析问题
1.猎杀野生动物皮毛用以制作衣服，生态平衡遭破坏2.食用野生动物还容易引发传染病
（epedemic），如SARS病毒、新冠状病毒等）
建议
1.建立自然保护区2.拒绝野味3…
1.写作应包括表格及文字等各项内容。
2.为使写作流畅，在不影响主题表达完整准确的前提下，允许必要的增减与发挥。
3.词数100左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Since
the
pneumonia
epidemic
broke
out
in
Wuhan
in
December,
the
number
of
people
infected
and
patients
who
have
died
keep
climbing.
It
is
reported
that
the
epidemic
has
something
to
do
with
the
killing
and
selling
of
wild
animals
at
South
China
Seafood
Market.
With
the
decrease
of
wild
animals,
many
animals
are
endangered.
Worse
still,
some
of
them
may
disappear
forever.
There
is
no
doubt
that
hunting
and
killing
wild
animals
has
a
bad
influence.
Wild
animals
are
killed
for
their
fur,
which
causes
the
imbalance
of
nature.
For
another,
due
to
the
contact
between
humans
and
wild
animals,
epidemics
like
SARS
and
pneumonia
may
infect
humans
easily.
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
something
must
be
done
to
stop
this
illegal
action.
First,
Nature
Reserves
are
supposed
to
be
built
so
as
to
offer
more
living
space
to
wildlife.
Second,
be
aware
that
never
have
wild
animals
for
food,
as
they
are
part
of
environment.
Third,
it
is
high
time
that
we
raised
people’s
awareness
to
protect
wildlife.
In
this
way,
we
can
build
a
harmonious
society
and
ensure
a
sustainable
development.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲作文，按照表格要点提示完成保护野生动物的作文。文章应包含问题的描述、分析以及最后的建议，三方面缺一不可，但是可以适当补充其他内容。写作时注意具体的时态，一般过去时以及一般过去时都会使用到，表格要点要全部写全，注意表达的准确性和构思的条理性。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，段落清晰，层次明了；词组短语使用灵活，句型使用丰富多样；首段描述了问题的发生时间以及影响；主体段落具体分析了问题；最后一段提出了建议发出了号召要保护野生动物。
3.高分亮点：
短语：break
out；the
number
of；keep
climbing；with
the
decrease
of；due
to；as
far
as
I
am
concerned；be
supposed
to；so
as
to；it
is
high
time
that+一般过去时。
句型：Since
the
pneumonia
epidemic
broke
out
in
Wuhan
in
December,
the
number
of
people
infected
and
patients
who
have
died
keep
climbing.
since引导的原因状语从句，who引导的定语从句；It
is
reported
that
the
epidemic
has
something
to
do
with
the
killing
and
selling
of
wild
animals
at
South
China
Seafood
Market.
主语从句；There
is
no
doubt
that
hunting
and
killing
wild
animals
has
a
bad
influence.
同位语从句；Wild
animals
are
killed
for
their
fur,
which
causes
the
imbalance
of
nature.
which引导的非限制性定语从句；Be
aware
that
never
have
wild
animals
for
food,
as
they
are
part
of
environment.
as引导的原因状语从句状语。
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2020年中考英语抗疫类题目专练
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书面表达（解析版）
话题：
书面表达一
你和你的父母是如何科学预防新型冠状病毒的
书面表达二
告知Jack目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势,
并告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护
书面表达三
对因疫情被隔离在家的Herry提出保持身体健康、远离病毒的建议。
书面表达四
疫情与人类吃野生动物有关，因此如何保护野生野生动物成为热点
书面表达一
今年1月底2月初爆发的由新型冠状病毒感染的肺炎疫情牵动人心。假如你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Mark得知此事后，对你很关心，他在微信上给你留言，想了解一下你和你的父母是如何科学预防该病毒的。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。
要求：1.
内容要紧扣图片；2.
语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
3.
词数不少于100，短文的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
参考词汇：face
mask
口罩；treadmill
跑步机
Hi,
Mark.
I'd
like
to
tell
you
what
my
parents
and
I
did
to
stop
the
virus
spreading.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thanks
for
your
care
about
me
and
my
family.
Please
don't
worry
about
us.
We'll
take
good
care
of
ourselves.
We
believe
everything
will
go
well.
【答案】
Hi,
Mark.
I'd
like
to
tell
you
what
my
parents
and
I
did
to
stop
the
virus
spreading.
First
of
all,
the
doors
and
windows
should
be
opened
regularly
for
ventilation.
Wear
a
face
mask
when
we
go
out.
Reduce
access
to
densely
populated
areas.
Don’t
go
to
places
with
high
outbreaks.
Washing
our
hands
is
a
good
way
to
keep
away
from
disease.
When
we
use
the
mask,
distinguish
the
front
and
back
of
the
mask.
Cover
our
mouth
and
chin.
We
should
exercise
often
in
order
to
build
up
our
health,
such
as
running
on
a
treadmill.
Also
enough
sleep
is
important
to
enhance
resistance.
Thanks
for
your
care
about
me
and
my
family.
Please
don't
worry
about
us.
We'll
take
good
care
of
ourselves.
We
believe
everything
will
go
well.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇看图作文。请你根据下面的图片内容，用英语写一篇短文回复他的留言。注意语句通顺，要点齐全。注意时态的使用，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动形象。
2.例文点评：本文时态为一般现在时为主，人称主要为第一人称。多用祈使句。文章紧扣题目要点，内容完整，表述准确，语言的表述符合语法的结构，造句符合英语的表达习惯。
3.高分亮点：
短语：First
of
all；Wear
a
face
mask；the
front
and
back
of；such
as；care
about；worry
about；take
good
care
of等。
句型：时间状语从句Wear
a
face
mask
when
we
go
out.
祈使句Don’t
go
to
places
with
high
outbreaks.
【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清图片的内容要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如First
of
all；Wear
a
face
mask；
care
about；worry
about；take
good
care
of等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
书面表达二
假如你是李华,给你在英国朋友Jack写一封电子邮件,
告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势,
并告诉他一些防御措施，请他注意防护。要点如下:
1
我们的城市对于控制疫情已经取得较大的成功。
2注意防护，如减少外出，带口罩外出，勤洗手等。
3表达战胜疫情的信心。
注意:
1、可适当增加细节,
使行文连贯;
2、80-100词，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：novel
coronavirus（新型冠状病毒）口罩：mask.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear
Jack,
How
is
everything
going?
Novel
coronavirus
has
spread
throughout
the
world
.Our
city
has
achieved
great
success
in
controlling
it.
I
have
some
advice
for
you
on
how
to
prevent
it.
The
most
important
thing
is
to
stay
at
home,
try
not
to
get
together
with
your
family
and
friends.
Second,
wash
your
hands
often
with
soap
and
water.
It
is
a
useful
way
to
keep
you
away
from
the
virus.
Third,
when
you
have
to
go
out,
you
must
wear
a
mask
to
cover
your
mouth
and
nose,
and
learn
how
to
put
it
on,
take
it
off
and
throw
it
away
correctly
.Remember,
if
you
have
a
fever
or
a
cough,
you
had
better
go
to
a
hospital
,
and
let
a
doctor
give
you
further
examination.
All
of
these
are
helpful
to
keep
you
safe.
We
believe
winter
will
finally
pass,
and
spring
is
sure
to
come.
We
will
go
back
to
school
as
soon
as
possible.
Hope
everything
goes
well
with
you.
Yours,
【详解】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以李华的身份，用第一人称给在英国朋友Jack写一封电子邮件，告知其目前新型冠状病毒肺炎的形势，并告诉他一些防御措施，书写时要注意用全题干所给提示要点，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文层次分明，第一层讲述新型冠状病毒已经传遍全球，第二层讲述防范措施，第三层展望战胜疫情的信心；短文陈述的中心突出，层次之间有机联系。
3.高分亮点：本篇例文运用的短语spread
throughout
the
world；achieve
great
success
in；
have
some
advice
for
you
on
；keep
you
away
from；文中用不定式的不同句式The
most
important
thing
is
to
stay
at
home；It
is
a
useful
way
to
keep
you
away
from
the
virus；try
not
to
get
together
with
your
family
and
friends；All
of
these
are
helpful
to
keep
you
safe；多种复合句条件状语从句if
you
have
a
fever
or
a
cough,
you
had
better
go
to
a
hospital
；宾语从句We
believe
winter
will
finally
pass,
and
spring
is
sure
to
come.
【点睛】
本篇是材料作文，书写前要认真阅读题干，了解题干的要求，确定中心话题，依据题干要求，分好短文的层次，确定层次的内容，使短文看起来逻辑清晰；建议使用表顺序的副词或短语表达有关防御措施，使短文更有条理。
书面表达三
假如你是李华，你在武汉的朋友
Henry
最近因为武汉的新型冠状病毒肺炎而隔离在家，他表示长时间待在家对身体健康不利。请你写一封邮件安慰他，并针对怎样保持身体健康、远离病毒提出建议。
要求：
（1）80
词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
（2）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）信中不得出现真实人名和校名。
提示词：新型冠状病毒肺炎
thenovel
coronavirus;
病毒
virus.
Dear
Henry,
I
learned
that
you
are
feeling
sorry
and
upset
because
of
the
novel
coronavirus
in
Wuhan_________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Dear
Henry,
I
learned
that
you
are
feeling
sorry
and
upset
because
of
the
novel
coronavirus
in
Wuhan.
There
is
no
need
to
worry.
Many
people
including
doctors,
nurses
and
scientists
act
bravely
and
spare
no
effort
to
fight
against
it.
We
are
sure
to
win
in
the
end.
At
this
particular
time,
you
should
keep
good
healthy
habits
and
keep
your
body
clean.
In
addition,
do
more
exercise
to
make
our
body
strong.
Besides,
you’d
better
go
out
as
little
as
possible.
If
you
must
go
out,
you
should
wear
protective
masks
to
avoid
getting
infected.
I
hope
you
can
stay
optimistic
and
cheer
up
again.
Yours,
Li
Hua
【详解】
1.题干解读：这篇作文要求我们以李华的身份给Henry写一封安慰信。审题可知，短文应包括以下内容：首先对Henry现在的情况作介绍，并给他安慰；其次对于如何保持身体健康、远离病毒提出自己的建议；最后表达自己的愿望，写一个合适的结尾。短文应用一般现在时态叙述。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，短文采用了三段式结构，各部分内容安排合理，结构清晰，内容完整。文章中使用了正确的时态和人称，语法规范，用词准确。句式结构以简单句结构为主，穿插使用了宾语从句、状语从句等复合句。一些过渡性词汇和短语的使用，增加了文章的连贯性。
3.高分亮点：
短语：spare
no
effort；fight
against；in
addition；as…as
possible；get
infected。
句型：Many
people
including
doctors,
nurses
and
scientists
act
bravely
and
spare
no
effort
to
fight
against
it.；Besides,
you’d
better
go
out
as
little
as
possible.；If
you
must
go
out,
you
should
wear
protective
masks
to
avoid
getting
infected.，
书面表达四
2019年的冬天，一种新型冠状病毒（the
pneumonia
epidemic）在武汉华南海鲜市场滋生，悄然从野生动物传染给人类。新型冠状病毒疫情在武汉早期确诊的病例，与武汉华南海鲜市场关系很密切。调查显示，此前在海鲜市场中有非法售卖野生动物现象。人类生存离不开野生动物，但现实生活中野生动物被捕食或作他用比比皆是。请根据以下内容写篇Protecting
Wild
Animals的英语作文。
素材要点:
描述问题
野生动物数量下降，越来越多的野生动物濒危，甚至永久消失
分析问题
1.猎杀野生动物皮毛用以制作衣服，生态平衡遭破坏2.食用野生动物还容易引发传染病
（epedemic），如SARS病毒、新冠状病毒等）
建议
1.建立自然保护区2.拒绝野味3…
1.写作应包括表格及文字等各项内容。
2.为使写作流畅，在不影响主题表达完整准确的前提下，允许必要的增减与发挥。
3.词数100左右。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Since
the
pneumonia
epidemic
broke
out
in
Wuhan
in
December,
the
number
of
people
infected
and
patients
who
have
died
keep
climbing.
It
is
reported
that
the
epidemic
has
something
to
do
with
the
killing
and
selling
of
wild
animals
at
South
China
Seafood
Market.
With
the
decrease
of
wild
animals,
many
animals
are
endangered.
Worse
still,
some
of
them
may
disappear
forever.
There
is
no
doubt
that
hunting
and
killing
wild
animals
has
a
bad
influence.
Wild
animals
are
killed
for
their
fur,
which
causes
the
imbalance
of
nature.
For
another,
due
to
the
contact
between
humans
and
wild
animals,
epidemics
like
SARS
and
pneumonia
may
infect
humans
easily.
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
something
must
be
done
to
stop
this
illegal
action.
First,
Nature
Reserves
are
supposed
to
be
built
so
as
to
offer
more
living
space
to
wildlife.
Second,
be
aware
that
never
have
wild
animals
for
food,
as
they
are
part
of
environment.
Third,
it
is
high
time
that
we
raised
people’s
awareness
to
protect
wildlife.
In
this
way,
we
can
build
a
harmonious
society
and
ensure
a
sustainable
development.
【详解】
1.题干解读：本文是一篇提纲作文，按照表格要点提示完成保护野生动物的作文。文章应包含问题的描述、分析以及最后的建议，三方面缺一不可，但是可以适当补充其他内容。写作时注意具体的时态，一般过去时以及一般过去时都会使用到，表格要点要全部写全，注意表达的准确性和构思的条理性。
2.例文点评：例文采用三段式，段落清晰，层次明了；词组短语使用灵活，句型使用丰富多样；首段描述了问题的发生时间以及影响；主体段落具体分析了问题；最后一段提出了建议发出了号召要保护野生动物。
3.高分亮点：
短语：break
out；the
number
of；keep
climbing；with
the
decrease
of；due
to；as
far
as
I
am
concerned；be
supposed
to；so
as
to；it
is
high
time
that+一般过去时。
句型：Since
the
pneumonia
epidemic
broke
out
in
Wuhan
in
December,
the
number
of
people
infected
and
patients
who
have
died
keep
climbing.
since引导的原因状语从句，who引导的定语从句；It
is
reported
that
the
epidemic
has
something
to
do
with
the
killing
and
selling
of
wild
animals
at
South
China
Seafood
Market.
主语从句；There
is
no
doubt
that
hunting
and
killing
wild
animals
has
a
bad
influence.
同位语从句；Wild
animals
are
killed
for
their
fur,
which
causes
the
imbalance
of
nature.
which引导的非限制性定语从句；Be
aware
that
never
have
wild
animals
for
food,
as
they
are
part
of
environment.
as引导的原因状语从句状语。
?
?
谢谢
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