Unit 9 Writing Save the Planet课件24张

(共24张PPT)
Shared
Bikes
共享单车
What
are
the
advantages
of
shared
bikes?
Brainstorming
Discuss
in
groups.
advantages
advantages
Brainstorming
Mind
Map
The
advantages
of
shared
bikes
Catch
the
helicopter
advantages
easy
and
cheap
to
use
easy
and
cheap
to
use
easy
and
cheap
to
use
convient
to
go
anywhere
convient
to
go
anywhere
It’s
convenient
for
us
to
go
anywhere
we
want
by
shared
bike.1
4Bike-sharing
helps
reduce
pollution
so
it
can
protect
the
environment.
not
only
but
also
1
because
it’s
dangerous
(not
safe)
the
bike
company
the
users
ADVICE
________
those
who
___________________
________the
rules
follow
the
bike
company
the
users
ADVICE
punish
break
the
bikes
What
advice
can
we
give
to
the
bike
company
and
users?
take
care
_________
of
them
on
purpose
What
can
we
call
on
people
to
do
?
appeal
呼吁
Let’s
be
civilized（文明的）users.
_________,
they
are
easy
and
cheap
to
use
.
__________,
it’s
convenient
for
us
to
go
anywhere.
_______________________,
they’re
good
for
health
and
the
environment
.
Put
the
sentences
into
a
paragraph
.
First
Second
What’s
more/
Besides
Topic
sentence
（主题句）
the
shared
bikes
problems
advice
advantages
appeal
Body正文
Beginning开头
Ending结尾
书面表达（本题15分）根据要求完成短文写作。
从今年二月份起，共享单车正式进入潮州，请你就此写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。
内容包括：
1.共享单车的优点（2点）；
2.目前共享单车在潮州使用时存在的问题（2点）；
3.针对问题发表你的看法（2点）。
4.呼吁市民文明用车。
Subject主题
Main
points
要点
Before
writing
Search（审题）
Body正文
_______________________________
_________________________________
_______________________________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
_______________________________
_______________________________
________________________
____________________________
_________________________________
结构
2
内容
语言
3
书写
2
总分
15
开头
1
优点
2
问题
2
建议
2
结尾
1
小组成员之间互评作文
Appreciating&Evaluating
欣赏与评价
After
writing
Show
time
They
bring
us
some
advantages.
First
,
they
are
easy
and
cheap
to
use.
Second
,
it’s
convenient
for
people
to
go
anywhere
.
What’s
more
,
it’s
good
for
health
and
the
environment.However,
there
are
also
some
problems.
For
example
,
some
people
park
the
bikes
wherever
they
want.
Some
even
break
them
on
purpose.
So
something
must
be
done
to
solve
the
problems.
In
my
opinion,the
bike
company
should
punish
those
who
break
the
bikes
on
purpose.
As
bike
users,
we
should
follow
the
rules
.
Shared
bikes
entered
Chaozhou
in
February
this
year.
All
in
all,
let’s
take
care
of
shared
bikes
and
be
civilized
users.
Linking
words
beginning
body
ending
Sample
Summary
Writing
tips
（1）确定主题。
（2）注意人称，时态，单复数等。
（3）善于运用连接词，句式多变。
（4）写好开头与结尾，善于运用同
义词。