(共32张PPT)
Period
4
Writing
话题微写作
写作素材
提示:黑体部分用本单元词汇或句型表达。
1.作为一名记者,李强不但有很好的新闻嗅觉,而且具有令人钦佩的专业技能。
As
a
journalist,not
only
does
Li
Qiang
have
a
good
nose
for
news,but
he
also
has
admirable
professional
skills.
2.每一次采访前,他都会全神贯注做准备。在采访过程中他能够根据受访者的回答来获取他需要的信息并同时想出下一个问题。
Before
every
interview,he
will
concentrate
on
preparing
for
it.
While
an
interview
goes
on,he
can
acquire
the
information
he
needs
depending
on
what
the
interviewee
answers
and
meanwhile
comes
up
with
the
next
question.
3.采访一结束,李强必须准确迅速地写出报道,呈交给各位编辑审核、加工、润色,最终由总编阅读批准。
The
moment
the
interview
is
over,Li
Qiang
must
write
out
his
story
accurately
and
quickly,and
then
submit
it
to
the
editors
to
have
it
checked,processed
and
polished.
Last
of
all,the
chief
editor
reads
it
and
approves
it.
4.再经过后期的技术处理,一篇新闻稿就可以付印了。
After
the
last
stage
of
technical
process,a
story
is
ready
to
go
to
press.
【连句成篇】
可选用while,not
only...but
also,meanwhile,last
of
all等将以上句子连成一篇短文。
As
a
journalist,not
only
does
Li
Qiang
have
a
good
nose
for
news,but
he
also
has
admirable
professional
skills.Before
every
interview,he
will
concentrate
on
preparing
for
it.While
an
interview
goes
on,he
can
acquire
the
information
he
needs
depending
on
what
the
interviewee
answers
and
meanwhile
comes
up
with
the
next
question.The
moment
the
interview
is
over,Li
Qiang
must
write
out
his
story
accurately
and
quickly,and
then
submit
it
to
the
editors
to
have
it
checked,processed
and
polished.Last
of
all,the
chief
editor
reads
it
and
approves
it.After
the
last
stage
of
technical
process,a
story
is
ready
to
go
to
press.
【短文改错】只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The
first
person
which
saw
his
article
is
a
senior
editor
from
his
department.
He
checked
the
evidence,
read
the
article
and
passed
it
on
the
copy?editor.
She
began
to
edit
the
piece
and
design
the
main
headline
and
small
heading.
“This
will
look
very
well
on
the
page,”
she
said.
“Where
is
a
good
picture
of
this
man?”
Then
as
the
article
was
going
to
written
in
English
Zhou
Yang
also
took
an
copy
to
the
native
speaker
employed
by
the
newspaper
to
polish
the
style.
Who
was
also
very
happy
with
Zhou
Yang's
story.
“You
are
real
able
to
write
a
good
front
page
article,”
she
said.
Zhou
Yang
smiled
with
happy.
Last
of
in
all,
the
chief
editor
read
it
and
approved
it.
“Well
done,”
he
said
to
Zhou
Yang.
1.which—that
2.is—was
3.on后加to
4.well—good
5.written前加be
6.an—a
7.Who—She
8.real—really
9.happy—happiness
10.去in
写作探究
?技巧点拨
新闻是对最近发生的事实的报道。具体地讲,新闻是一种客观存在的事实。这种事实在时间上是最近发生的;在内容上是新鲜的;在价值上是大家所关心和需要的,并且需要通过新闻工具和其他各种手段进行报道传播。其最大的特点是真实。新闻报道,记录的是发生过的事情,因此凡涉及此报道的具体内容,应用一般过去时表达。
英文新闻报道通常包括以下四个部分:
1.标题:标题是新闻的题目,是编辑对最有新闻价值的内容的浓缩、概括。为了撷取新闻要点、诠释新闻意义、吸引读者阅读,好的标题应该简洁明了。如:
(1)A
Terrible
Earthquake
(2)A
Sandstorm
Hit
the
Northwest
(3)China—The
First
Spacewalk
2.导语:导语是消息的开头的第一段或第一句话,它扼要地揭示出消息的核心内容。如:
(1)September
29,
2011
saw
China's
first
step
towards
building
a
space
station.
(2)On
October
23,
2011
a
terrible
earthquake
struck
the
east
of
Turkey.
3.主体:主体是消息的主要部分,它用充足的事实表现主题,是对导语内容的进一步展开和阐释。主体要根据不同内容运用适当句型对新闻细节进行描述。如:
(1)The
earthquake
destroyed
nearly
everything
in
Wenchuan
county,
Sichuan
Province.
(2)They
had
to
put
up
tents
because
it
was
raining
hard.
(3)The
government
sent
3,000
firefighters
and
policemen
there
to
help
them
move
to
a
safe
place.
4.结束语:一般是最后一句话或者一段话,通常对全文内容作概括性的总结,有时,作者根据报道的事实在结束语中提出令人深思的问题。如:
(1)In
a
word,
it
is
necessary
for
us
to
learn
to
protect
ourselves.
(2)I
feel
sad.If
we
all
do
something
for
them,
things
will
be
sure
to
get
better.
(3)I
believe
we
can
certainly
overcome
the
disaster
with
the
public
and
the
government
working
together.
书面表达
2014年9月13日你校邀请了北京大学的心理学专家徐教授做了一次励志演讲
(motivational
speech)
。假如你是校英语报的记者,请根据表中的信息写一篇新闻报道。
演讲主题:培养学生的积极心态和学会如何面对挫折
时间:2014年9月13日
地点:学校操场
参与人员:师生﹑应邀专家共3
000余人
主要活动:专家讲座﹑专家师生互动﹑签名售书演讲效果:专家演讲高潮
(climax)不断,动情处很多学生落泪
参考词汇:心理学家
psychologist
;有代表性的
typical
注意:1.词数100左右。
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
A
Successful
Motivational
Speech
On
13th,
September,
2014,
a
well?known
psychologist
from
Beijing
University
gave
a
successful
speech
with
the
aim
of
teaching
students
how
to
stay
positive
and
face
the
troubles
in
life
on
the
school
playground.As
many
as
3,000
people
attended
the
speech,
including
the
expert,
teachers
and
students.During
the
speech,
the
expert
made
many
climaxes
with
his
rich
life
experiences,
which
made
some
students
burst
into
tears.
The
expert
also
answered
some
typical
questions
raised
by
students
and
teachers.
At
the
end
of
the
speech,
many
students
bought
the
book
written
and
signed
by
the
expert
himself.After
the
speech,
many
students
realized
that
they
should
give
up
their
bad
habits
and
were
determined
to
devote
more
time
and
efforts
to
their
work.