Exercises for writing
The Life as A Grade 9 Student
How time flies! Now I’m a grade nine student. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.
Now I’m as busy as a bee. There’s a lot of homework, exams and tests. The only feeling I have now is : The life as a Grade Nine student is busy and challenging !
There’s an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I don’t want to fail, so I create a plan for the whole year : Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude（态度） towards maths and physics which I am poor at now. I’ll spend the following six months efficiently. I’ll try my best to benefit from what teachers will teach us in class.
As there’s no elevator to success, I’ll do everything step by step! I believe that I can do.
Try to make it attractive.
Our teacher is Miss Qian. She teaches us maths.
She is short and thin and she has short hair and small eyes.
She likes us . She is a quiet person.
She teaches very well. All the students in our class are good
at maths . If we have questions, we can ask her. She is friendly and
helpful. She always helps us with our study.
So we all like her very much.
Writing(共26张PPT)
A Guide to English Writing
A（15-13分）完全符合题目要求，表达清楚，信息完整，语言通顺，语意连贯，字数达标，基本没有或完全没有错误。 B（12-10分）符合题目要求，表达基本清楚，信息基本完整，语言基本通顺，语意基本连贯，有少量语言错误，但不影响整体理解。
本题满分为15分，依据整体内容、语言和结构确定档次，然后在该档次内评分。
C（9-7分） D（6-4分） E（3-0分）
要求：假设现在是第一学期中期，请你谈谈九年级的生活。不少于90词。
A student’s writing
The Life as A Grade 9 Student
How time flies! Now I’m a grade nine student. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.
Now I’m as busy as a bee. There’s a lot of homework, exams and tests. The only feeling I have now is : The life as a Grade Nine student is busy and challenging !
There’s an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I don’t want to fail, so I create a plan for the whole year : Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude（态度） towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.I’ll spend the following six months efficiently. I’ll try my best to benefit from what teachers will teach us in class.
As there’s no elevator to success, I’ll do
everything step by step! I believe that I can do.
书面表达5步法
书面表达
Study 审题
Organize 组织
Describe 修饰
Check 检查
Copy 誊写
study审题
确定主题 theme
写人
叙事
议论
应用文
organize组织
Brain Storm
写下涉及该题的各种联想和论点
选择语句
运用关联词语排列语句
outline
转折：
时间顺序：
递进：
解释：
Useful words & phrases
but, yet, however, though, although,
otherwise, sadly, luckily, suddenly
first, next, then, afterwards, finally, at last, at the same time, from now on, in the end …
also, not only...but also…, besides …
1. in other words 2. or
3. That is to say...
Useful words & phrases
因果：
例举：
肯定：of course, certainly,
对照：1. instead 2. instead of
总结：
转换话题：
because (of), therefore, so, as a result
such as, like, for example, and so on,
1. That is why... 2.For these reasons, ... 3. In a word, ... 4. As we all know, ... 5. Above all, 6. To tell you the truth, ...
1. In my opinion... 2. In fact...
3. By the way... 4.I am afraid...
structure结构
Introduction
Main body
…
…
Conclusion
outline
describe修饰(1)
Attention to tenses & persons
写人
叙事
议论
Clauses从句：名词性从句（主语、表语、宾语）
定语从句 状语从句
Passive voice 被动语态
It is … that … 强调句
What…! How…! 感叹句
Provebs 谚语 Slangs 俚语 Old sayings
常用句型：
1. It’s … of sb. to … 2. …enough to…
3. It’s … for sb. to … 4. in order to
5. …so/such… that 6. too…to…
7. … so that… 8. not only… but also
…
describe修饰(2)
The Life as A Grade 9 Student
How time flies! Now I’m a grade nine student. Actually I feel the life is quite different from it used to be.
Now I’m as busy as a bee. There’s a lot of homework, exams and quizzes. The only feeling I have now is : The life as a Grade Nine student is busy and challenging !
There’s an old saying: He who fails to plan plans to fail. I don’t want to fail, so I create a plan for the whole year : Since nothing is difficult if I put my heart into it, I will change my attitude（态度） towards maths and physics which I am poor at now.I’ll spend the following six months efficiently. I’ll try my best to benefit from what teachers will teach us in class.
As there’s no elevator to success, I’ll do
everything step by step! I believe that I can do.
check检查
Fluency 句子流畅
Tenses 时态
Spellings 单词拼写
Articles 冠词
Capitalizations 大写
Punctuations 标点符号
Copy 誊写
Article correction
Our teacher is Miss Qian. She teaches us maths.
She is short and thin and she has short
hair and small eyes. She likes
us . She is a quiet person.
She teaches very well. all the
students in our class are good at maths .
If we have questions, we can ask her.
She is friendly and helpful. She always helps us with our study.
So we all like her very much.
(who also)
(a) (teacher with )
(so ) ( that)
(in many ways besides study)
(So she is not only our good teacher
but also our good friend. )
smiling at
(both)
Our teacher is Miss QIan who also teaches us maths.
She is a short and thin teacher with short hair and small eyes. She likes smiling at us . She is a quiet person.
She teaches so well that all the
students in our class are good at maths . If we have questions, we can ask her.
She is both friendly and helpful. She always helps us in many ways besides study.
So she is not only our good teacher but also our good friend.
writing
就以下表格内容给校刊组织的“节约用水，从现在做起”英语征文活动投稿。词数90以上。
必要性 没有水万物无法生存
不良现象 不关水龙头tap，洗澡时间太长，没喝完水就把瓶子扔掉
建议 2-3条
Act now to save water
Water is very important to us…
Act now to save water
Water is very important to us. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die without water. Can you imagine what the world would be like without water
Almost everyone knows the importance of water. But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off taps; some people take showers for a long time.
I want to give some advice on how to save water. First, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath. Second, we should turn off the taps after we use water. Third, when we drink bottled water, make sure the water in the bottle is drunk up before throwing it.
Act now to save water.
Act now to save water
Water is very important to us. People can’t live without water. Plants and animals will die without water. Can you imagine what the world would be like without water
Almost everyone knows the importance of water. But there are still some people wasting water. For example, some students often forget to turn off taps; some people take showers for a long time.
I want to give some advice on how to save water. First, we should take a shower instead of taking a bath. Second, we should turn off the taps after we use water. Third, when we drink bottled water, make sure the water in the bottle is drunk up before throwing it.
Act now to save water.
Some advice
Do more writing.
Collect useful sayings and slangs.
Keep some good articles in mind.
The more, the better.
Many thanks for your support
