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2020届江苏高考英语考前书面表达解题技巧点拨
江苏卷的书面表达就命题所提供材料的形式看有：文字(包括英文)介绍，图表，图画(漫画)，文字(包括英文)+图表/图画(漫画)等形式。归结起来大致就三种题型：文字阅读型，图画(表)型、文字图画(表)融合型。但是不管是以何种形式命题的书面表达，一般来说都有以下几个解题步骤：
第一步
审题：通过读题，包括题目要求、题目中的信息、画面内容及画面信息(画面中的对话、说明等)、所给的要阅读的文章(比如一个故事、段落、书信、博客、帖子、图表)，在草稿纸上列出文章的Frame，即要写几个段落、每个段落的内容要点、时态、人称；
第二步
写作：根据所列每段要点进行遣词造句，把要表达的内容与英语中的一些地道短语、句型联系起来，切忌汉式表达；根据各自的水平用一些有把握的丰富的句型，切忌从句套从句，切忌为了使句子复杂化而刻意堆积复杂句型而导致表达不清晰；期间，注意段落间使用过渡句，同一段落中句子间注意顺畅衔接，不要给阅卷老师极不连贯的感觉；熟练使用不同类写作的套用语；注意表达时上下的逻辑，切忌乱用衔接词；开放性比较强的段落要注意思想性，表达时注意层次性，切忌随意堆放组合。
第三步
复查：①查句式：看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确；
②查谓语部分：所用动词或短语是否正确、时态语态是否正确、主谓是否一致、非谓语形式是否正确；
③查搭配：核查搭配是否符合英语表达习惯；
④查拼写、标点和字数：看拼写是否有误、标点是否正确(尤其注意写作中经常要用到非限制性定语从句来对前面补充说明或说明引起的后果，这时务必加逗号)。
其实三种形式任务型写作都包括两个方面：一是概括题目所给的文字材料或是文字材料+描述图表或图画(漫画)所提供的信息；二是围绕话题展开议论、论证或发表自己的看法等等。限于篇幅，在这里我们着重谈谈“文字材料”如何概括。
概括三原则：①精——抓住文中关键词句，省去详例、细节词语，精炼、简洁地概括；②准——准确把握短文中心，概括内容不偏不倚，概括范围不大不小。注意：概括时一般使用第三人称，时态与原文一致。③变——适当变换原文表达，灵活转述，不可照搬原句。概括常用方法：同义或反义词替换、主被动互换、非谓语动词短语与从句互换、整合信息、释义法。不同文体概括注意点：“故事类”要抓住“who(关键人物)”、“what(主要情节)”，按“起因、经过、结果”的思路进行概括。若故事还有启示，可用一句简短的话进行概括。“议论文或说明文”要抓住主题句，分析文章结构，提炼每段中心，整合相同论点。对于文字材料中所提到的具体事例可“一言以蔽之”。
①A
boy
found
an
eagle’s
egg
and
he
put
it
in
the
nest
of
a
hen.
The
eagle
hatched
and
thought
he
was
a
chicken.
He
grew
up
doing
what
chickens
do-scratching
for
food
and
flying
short
distances.
It
was
a
dull
life.
Gradually
the
eagle
grew
older
and
bitter.
One
day
he
and
his
chicken
friends
saw
a
beautiful
bird
soaring
on
the
currents
of
air,
high
above
the
mountains.
“Oh,
I
wish
I
could
fly
like
that!”
said
the
eagle.
The
chicken
replied,
“Don’t
give
it
another
thought.
That’s
the
mighty(强大的)eagle,
the
king
of
all
birds-you
could
never
be
like
him!”
And
the
eagle
didn’t
give
it
another
thought.
He
went
on
cackling
and
complaining
about
life.
He
died
thinking
he
was
a
prairie
chicken.
My
friends,
you
too
were
born
an
eagle.
The
Creator
intended
you
to
be
an
eagle,
so
don’t
listen
to
the
chickens!
【参考答案】
②Honesty
means
speaking
the
truth
and
being
fair.
Honesty
is
a
good
virtue.
If
you
are
honest
all
the
time,
you’ll
be
trusted
and
respected
by
others.
A
liar
is
always
looked
down
upon
and
regarded
as
a
black
sheep
by
the
people
around.
Once
you
lie,
people
will
never
believe
you
even
if
you
speak
the
truth.
However,
nowadays
it
seems
that
more
and
more
people
believe
in
money
at
the
sacrifice
of
honesty.
To
them,
among
such
things
as
health,
beauty,
money,
intelligence,
honesty,
reputation
and
talent,
honesty
is
the
only
thing
that
can
be
thrown
away.
They
don’t
understand
or
pretend
not
to
understand
that
honesty
is
the
biggest
fortune
for
humans,
and
that
it
is
necessary
to
do
everything
well.
In
short,
honesty
is
gold.
Honest,
your
reputation
will
become
great;
dishonest,
your
name
will
be
spoiled:
Therefore,
we
should
never
make
such
an
excuse
as
"A
little
dishonesty
is
only
a
slight
thing."
We
should
remove
immediately
the
seed
of
dishonesty
once
it’s
sowed
in
our
minds.
【参考答案】
③There
is
no
doubt
that
academic
study
are
important
part
of
the
school
days.
However,
they
are
not
the
only
thing
that
students
should
be
learning.
Schools
should
also
be
teaching
students
certain
life
skills
so
that
they
graduate.
Following
this
reasoning,
I
believe
that
physical
exercise
should
be
a
required
part
of
every
school
day.
Physical
exercise
would
benefit
students
in
many
ways.
First
of
all,
regular
exercise
is
an
important
part
of
a
healthy
lifestyle.
However,
with
their
busy
schedules,
many
students
may
not
have
the
opportunity
to
exercise
at
home
and
they
may
become
weaker.
If
schools
allow
students
to
do
some
physical
activity
every
day,
they
will
be
happier
and
healthier
students.
Second,
doing
some
sports
during
the
school
day
will
give
the
students
a
break
and
allow
them
to
relax
their
minds.
They
will
be
able
to
return
to
their
studies
refreshed
and
with
more
energy
to
learn.
As
fitness
is
such
an
important
ingredient
of
success,
I
believe
that
schools
should
require
students
to
engage
in
some
physical
activity
every
day.
It
will
not
only
be
good
for
their
bodies,
but
also
for
their
minds.
Happier
and
healthier
students
will
do
better
at
their
academic
studies
and
in
life.
【参考答案】
至于围绕话题展开议论、论证或发表自己的看法实际上是“仁者见仁智者见智”的问题，没有一个固定不变的所谓写作模式，但是也有一般的规律可循。在完成了任务型写作中概括或描述以后，需要解决下列三个问题：
①用过渡句，引出自己观点或是指出某一现象、变化、趋势等；
②例证、论证自己的观点或是分析产生这一现象的原因、变化、或趋势；
③结论部分要注意前后呼应：论证或是分析之后，要进一步概括归纳自己的观点，升华主题，并注意首尾呼应。
附
录
(实战中总有其中一个句型可以用得上的)
句型1：搏人眼球的复合句
含三大从句(定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句)的主从复合句。定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句在书面表达中的运用一定会博得阅卷老师的眼球。
①如图所示，2012年至2015年中国电影票房收入持续增长，但由于某种原因，2016年中国电影票房增长放缓。
As
is
indicated
in
the
graph,
the
box-office
income
of
Chinese
films
increased
constantly
from
2012
to
2015,
but
its
growth,
for
one
reason
or
another,
slowed
down
in
2016.
②众所周知，词汇是语言的重要组成部分，就像建筑物中的砖块一样。
As
everybody
knows/As
is
known
to
us
all,
vocabulary
is
an
important
part
of
language,
just
like
bricks
in
a
building.
③为了避免这样的冲突，我们应该善待彼此，这是享受和谐生活所必须的。
To
avoid
such
conflicts,
we
should
be
kind
to
one
another,
which
is
essential
to
enjoying
a
harmonious
life.
④这张照片显示了一个小女孩来迎接她工作的妈妈的感人时刻。
The
picture
shows
us
a
touching
moment
when
a
little
girl
comes
to
greet
her
working
mom.
⑤因此，我们无论什么时候去购物，我们都应该重新考虑这些评级。
Therefore,
we
should
give
a
second
thought
to
these
ratings
whenever
we
go
shopping.
⑥虽然传统的中国服装看起来更漂亮和时尚，但穿着它走来走去有点奇怪怪的。
Although
the
traditional
Chinese
dress
may
look
more
beautiful
and
stylish,
it
is
a
little
bit
strange
to
walk
around
in
it.
⑦其次，如果我们的目的是共享中国文化，那么不便就不是问题。
Secondly,
the
inconvenience
is
not
a
problem
if
our
purpose
is
to
share
Chinese
culture.
⑧首先，应该给予我们更多的机会运用我们所学的知识，以便更好地掌握它。
Firstly,
we
should
be
given
more
opportunities
to
use
what
we’ve
learned
in
order
to
have
a
better
grasp
of
it.
⑨毫无疑问，完全依赖消费的评级是不明智的。
There
is
no
doubt
that
it
is
unwise
to
depend
completely
on
the
ratings
in
consumption.
⑩所有这些都让我想起了我的母亲，她一直在尽她所能让我拥有最好的东西。
All
this
reminds
me
of
my
mother
who
has
been
doing
whatever
she
could
to
let
me
have
the
best.
句型2：魅力四射的强调句
强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成：It
is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其他。在写作中，我们可以通过强调句型将句子提高到一个新的层次，使你的作文魅力四射。
①重要的是遵守规则的人。
It
is
the
people
who
obey
the
rules
that
matter.
②老实说，这并不是因为他们讨厌投票，而是因为他们在情感和公平之间存在分歧，有时会让选民感到恼火。
To
be
honest,
it
is
not
because
they
hate
voting
but
because
they
are
divided
between
emotion
and
fairness
that
sometimes
makes
voters
feel
annoyed.
③正是所谓的不便，才显示出中国几千年文化的丰富、细腻和巨大魅力。
It
is
just
the
so-called
inconvenience
that
displays
the
richness,
delicacy
and
great
fascination
of
Chinese
culture
with
a
history
of
thousands
of
years.
句型3：靓人一眼的倒装句
在写作中倒装句的应用一定会靓人一眼，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
①只有这样，来自世界各地的人们才能轻松、有效地进行交流。
Only
in
this
way
can
people
from
all
over
the
world
communicate
easily
and
effectively.
②知行合一的时候我们才能有所成就。
Only
when
we
match
our
words
with
actions
can
we
make
a
difference
in
whatever
we
hope
to
accomplish.
③总之，包容不仅毒害了汉语，而且导致中国人之间产生了距离感。
In
short,
not
only
has
the
inclusion
poisoned
Chinese,
it
may
also
bring
about
distance
between
the
Chinese
people.
句型4：独树一帜的虚拟句
虚拟语气是写作的“独门暗器”，能为写作增添一道亮丽的风景线。
①没有它们(指交通规则)，人们就不能享受和谐，否则国家就会陷入混乱。
Without
them,
people
could
not
enjoy
harmony
or
the
country
would
be
in
chaos.
②最后，我建议我们应该有更多的英语活动。
Finally,
I
suggest
we(should)have
more
English
activities.
③Many
people
suggest
that
parents
should
listen
more
to
their
children.
许多人建议父母应该多听听孩子的心声。
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
advice
on
how
to
understand
them
better.
如果你能给我提供一些如何更好地理解它们的建议，我将非常感激。
句型5：整齐有致的并列句(结构)
并列句(结构)的使用会使得你的表达对仗工整，给阅卷老师以整体美的感觉。不过需要提醒的是：使用并列句型时需注意：连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。
①它不仅影响我们的日常生活，也可能威胁到人们的生活。
It
not
only
affects
our
everyday
life,
but
may
also
threaten
people’s
lives.
②第二，这类投票并不取决于竞争对手的优势，而是取决于他们拥有多少社交网络资源。
Secondly,
voting
of
this
kind
does
not
depend
on
the
strong
points
of
the
competitors,
but
rather
on
how
many
social-networking
resources
they
have.
③李推荐中国传统服装，而苏更喜欢校服。
Li
recommends
the
traditional
Chinese
dress
while
Su
prefers
the
school
uniform.
句型6：备受关注的被动句
写作中被动句式的使用可以为你的写作增添亮点，一定会备受阅卷老师的关注。
①想象一下，这一切都可以用一只可爱的老鼠来完成。
Just
imagine,
all
this
can
be
done
with
a
cute
mouse.
②第三，在许多情况下，投票者甚至竞争对手都可能被组织者利用，用于商业目的。
Thirdly,
the
voters
or
even
the
competitors
in
many
cases
are
possibly
taken
advantage
of
by
the
organizers
for
commercial
purposes.
③票房收入的增加可归因于许多因素。
The
increase
in
the
box-office
income
can
be
attributed
to
a
number
of
factors.
④另一个不应忽视的事实是，一些评级是对公司或卖方进行谨慎操纵的结果。
Another
fact
should
not
be
neglected
that
some
of
the
ratings
are
the
outcome
of
a
careful
manipulation
of
companies
or
sellers.
句型7：博得青睐的it句型
为了使句子结构平衡，我们常常会使用“it”作形式主语或宾语，而把真正的主语或宾语放在句子后部。这种句型是会博得阅卷老师的青睐。
①你写信给我，让我了解你们美丽的城市，真是太好了。
It’s
very
kind
of
you
to
write
me
and
let
me
know
about
your
beautiful
city.
②据报道，2008年北京奥运会将有约10万人被选为志愿者。
It
is
reported
that
about
100,000
people
will
be
chosen
as
volunteers
for
the
2008
Olympic
Games
in
Beijing.
③就我个人而言，我认为我们高三学生每天锻炼是个好主意。
Personally,
I
think
it
a
good
idea
for
us
senior
3
students
to
have
daily
exercise.
句型8：展示文采的省略句
写作中省略句的使用也许能够向阅卷老师充分展示你的文采。
①简而言之，网络投票在某种程度上是不公平的，即使不是不道德的，也不能被信任。
In
short,
internet
voting,
to
some
extent,
is
unfair,
if
not
immoral,
and
cannot
be
trusted.
②我通常每天记住20个生词，并尽可能地把它们用起来。
I
usually
memorize
twenty
new
words
a
day
and
put
them
to
use
whenever
possible.
③首先，当被要求去做他们不想做的事情时，人们可能会感到不得已而为之。
Firstly,
people
may
feel
forced
when
asked
to
do
things
that
they
don’t
want
to.
句型9：技高一筹的with复合结构
写作中with复合结构的使用可以让阅卷老师认为你的写作比起别人来技高一筹。
随着英语词汇在媒体和日常生活中的普及，一本中文词典已经收录了239个单词。
With
English
words
getting
popular
in
both
media
and
daily
life,
a
Chinese
dictionary
has
included
239
of
them.
句型10：言简意赅的非谓语动词
非谓语动词在高考书面表达中常常用到的语法项目。如果你能利用非谓语动词恰到好处地进行表达，那么你的写作一定会提现言简意赅的特点。
①第二，他们应该坚守岗位坚守岗位，提供良好的服务，满足合理需求，乐于助人，而且要尽职尽责。Secondly,
they
should
stick
to
their
posts,
offering
good
services,
satisfying
any
reasonable
needs
and
being
ready
to
help
those
in
difficulty,
and
never
fail
to
do
their
duty.
②构建和谐社会至关重要。
To
build
a
harmonious
society
is
important.
③运动有助于我们锻炼身体，保持头脑清醒。
Taking
exercise
helps
us
build
up
our
body
and
keep
a
clear
mind.
④如果我有幸被选为一名志愿者，除了上述所说的以外，我将努力工作，创造性地工作，绝不懒惰。If
I
have
the
honour
to
be
chosen
as
a
volunteer,
besides
the
above,
I
will
work
hard
and
creatively,
but
never
be
lazy.
⑤李江和苏华正在讨论下个月接待英国学生时穿什么。
Li
Jiang
and
Su
Hua
are
discussing
what
to
wear
when
receiving
the
British
students
next
month.
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2020届江苏高考英语考前书面表达解题技巧点拨
江苏卷的书面表达就命题所提供材料的形式看有：文字(包括英文)介绍，图表，图画(漫画)，文字(包括英文)+图表/图画(漫画)等形式。归结起来大致就三种题型：文字阅读型，图画(表)型、文字图画(表)融合型。但是不管是以何种形式命题的书面表达，一般来说都有以下几个解题步骤：
第一步
审题：通过读题，包括题目要求、题目中的信息、画面内容及画面信息(画面中的对话、说明等)、所给的要阅读的文章(比如一个故事、段落、书信、博客、帖子、图表)，在草稿纸上列出文章的Frame，即要写几个段落、每个段落的内容要点、时态、人称；
第二步
写作：根据所列每段要点进行遣词造句，把要表达的内容与英语中的一些地道短语、句型联系起来，切忌汉式表达；根据各自的水平用一些有把握的丰富的句型，切忌从句套从句，切忌为了使句子复杂化而刻意堆积复杂句型而导致表达不清晰；期间，注意段落间使用过渡句，同一段落中句子间注意顺畅衔接，不要给阅卷老师极不连贯的感觉；熟练使用不同类写作的套用语；注意表达时上下的逻辑，切忌乱用衔接词；开放性比较强的段落要注意思想性，表达时注意层次性，切忌随意堆放组合。
第三步
复查：①查句式：看句子成分是否完整、语序是否正确；
②查谓语部分：所用动词或短语是否正确、时态语态是否正确、主谓是否一致、非谓语形式是否正确；
③查搭配：核查搭配是否符合英语表达习惯；
④查拼写、标点和字数：看拼写是否有误、标点是否正确(尤其注意写作中经常要用到非限制性定语从句来对前面补充说明或说明引起的后果，这时务必加逗号)。
其实三种形式任务型写作都包括两个方面：一是概括题目所给的文字材料或是文字材料+描述图表或图画(漫画)所提供的信息；二是围绕话题展开议论、论证或发表自己的看法等等。限于篇幅，在这里我们着重谈谈“文字材料”如何概括。
概括三原则：①精——抓住文中关键词句，省去详例、细节词语，精炼、简洁地概括；②准——准确把握短文中心，概括内容不偏不倚，概括范围不大不小。注意：概括时一般使用第三人称，时态与原文一致。③变——适当变换原文表达，灵活转述，不可照搬原句。概括常用方法：同义或反义词替换、主被动互换、非谓语动词短语与从句互换、整合信息、释义法。不同文体概括注意点：“故事类”要抓住“who(关键人物)”、“what(主要情节)”，按“起因、经过、结果”的思路进行概括。若故事还有启示，可用一句简短的话进行概括。“议论文或说明文”要抓住主题句，分析文章结构，提炼每段中心，整合相同论点。对于文字材料中所提到的具体事例可“一言以蔽之”。
①A
boy
found
an
eagle’s
egg
and
he
put
it
in
the
nest
of
a
hen.
The
eagle
hatched
and
thought
he
was
a
chicken.
He
grew
up
doing
what
chickens
do-scratching
for
food
and
flying
short
distances.
It
was
a
dull
life.
Gradually
the
eagle
grew
older
and
bitter.
One
day
he
and
his
chicken
friends
saw
a
beautiful
bird
soaring
on
the
currents
of
air,
high
above
the
mountains.
“Oh,
I
wish
I
could
fly
like
that!”
said
the
eagle.
The
chicken
replied,
“Don’t
give
it
another
thought.
That’s
the
mighty(强大的)eagle,
the
king
of
all
birds-you
could
never
be
like
him!”
And
the
eagle
didn’t
give
it
another
thought.
He
went
on
cackling
and
complaining
about
life.
He
died
thinking
he
was
a
prairie
chicken.
My
friends,
you
too
were
born
an
eagle.
The
Creator
intended
you
to
be
an
eagle,
so
don’t
listen
to
the
chickens!
【参考答案】Hatched
by
a
hen,
an
eagle
lived
like
a
chicken.
He
wanted
to
fly
like
an
eagle
but
discouraged
by
his
fellow.
Eventually
he
died
bitterly
without
knowing
he
himself
was
an
eagle.
②Honesty
means
speaking
the
truth
and
being
fair.
Honesty
is
a
good
virtue.
If
you
are
honest
all
the
time,
you’ll
be
trusted
and
respected
by
others.
A
liar
is
always
looked
down
upon
and
regarded
as
a
black
sheep
by
the
people
around.
Once
you
lie,
people
will
never
believe
you
even
if
you
speak
the
truth.
However,
nowadays
it
seems
that
more
and
more
people
believe
in
money
at
the
sacrifice
of
honesty.
To
them,
among
such
things
as
health,
beauty,
money,
intelligence,
honesty,
reputation
and
talent,
honesty
is
the
only
thing
that
can
be
thrown
away.
They
don’t
understand
or
pretend
not
to
understand
that
honesty
is
the
biggest
fortune
for
humans,
and
that
it
is
necessary
to
do
everything
well.
In
short,
honesty
is
gold.
Honest,
your
reputation
will
become
great;
dishonest,
your
name
will
be
spoiled:
Therefore,
we
should
never
make
such
an
excuse
as
"A
little
dishonesty
is
only
a
slight
thing."
We
should
remove
immediately
the
seed
of
dishonesty
once
it’s
sowed
in
our
minds.
【参考答案】It
is
known
that
honesty
plays
an
important
role
in
our
life,
which
can
contribute
to
our
success
and
earn
us
respect
from
others.
Therefore,
honesty
is
of
vital
importance
and
brings
people
benefits.
③There
is
no
doubt
that
academic
study
are
important
part
of
the
school
days.
However,
they
are
not
the
only
thing
that
students
should
be
learning.
Schools
should
also
be
teaching
students
certain
life
skills
so
that
they
graduate.
Following
this
reasoning,
I
believe
that
physical
exercise
should
be
a
required
part
of
every
school
day.
Physical
exercise
would
benefit
students
in
many
ways.
First
of
all,
regular
exercise
is
an
important
part
of
a
healthy
lifestyle.
However,
with
their
busy
schedules,
many
students
may
not
have
the
opportunity
to
exercise
at
home
and
they
may
become
weaker.
If
schools
allow
students
to
do
some
physical
activity
every
day,
they
will
be
happier
and
healthier
students.
Second,
doing
some
sports
during
the
school
day
will
give
the
students
a
break
and
allow
them
to
relax
their
minds.
They
will
be
able
to
return
to
their
studies
refreshed
and
with
more
energy
to
learn.
As
fitness
is
such
an
important
ingredient
of
success,
I
believe
that
schools
should
require
students
to
engage
in
some
physical
activity
every
day.
It
will
not
only
be
good
for
their
bodies,
but
also
for
their
minds.
Happier
and
healthier
students
will
do
better
at
their
academic
studies
and
in
life.
【参考答案】The
author
argues
that
daily
physical
exercise
is
necessary
for
students,
because
they
would
benefit
a
lot
in
many
ways.
Additionally,
the
writer
that
school
should
encourage
students
to
take
some
exercise
everyday.
至于围绕话题展开议论、论证或发表自己的看法实际上是“仁者见仁智者见智”的问题，没有一个固定不变的所谓写作模式，但是也有一般的规律可循。在完成了任务型写作中概括或描述以后，需要解决下列三个问题：
①用过渡句，引出自己观点或是指出某一现象、变化、趋势等；
②例证、论证自己的观点或是分析产生这一现象的原因、变化、或趋势；
③结论部分要注意前后呼应：论证或是分析之后，要进一步概括归纳自己的观点，升华主题，并注意首尾呼应。
附
录
(实战中总有其中一个句型可以用得上的)
句型1：搏人眼球的复合句
含三大从句(定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句)的主从复合句。定语从句、状语从句和名词性从句在书面表达中的运用一定会博得阅卷老师的眼球。
①如图所示，2012年至2015年中国电影票房收入持续增长，但由于某种原因，2016年中国电影票房增长放缓。
As
is
indicated
in
the
graph,
the
box-office
income
of
Chinese
films
increased
constantly
from
2012
to
2015,
but
its
growth,
for
one
reason
or
another,
slowed
down
in
2016.
②众所周知，词汇是语言的重要组成部分，就像建筑物中的砖块一样。
As
everybody
knows/As
is
known
to
us
all,
vocabulary
is
an
important
part
of
language,
just
like
bricks
in
a
building.
③为了避免这样的冲突，我们应该善待彼此，这是享受和谐生活所必须的。
To
avoid
such
conflicts,
we
should
be
kind
to
one
another,
which
is
essential
to
enjoying
a
harmonious
life.
④这张照片显示了一个小女孩来迎接她工作的妈妈的感人时刻。
The
picture
shows
us
a
touching
moment
when
a
little
girl
comes
to
greet
her
working
mom.
⑤因此，我们无论什么时候去购物，我们都应该重新考虑这些评级。
Therefore,
we
should
give
a
second
thought
to
these
ratings
whenever
we
go
shopping.
⑥虽然传统的中国服装看起来更漂亮和时尚，但穿着它走来走去有点奇怪怪的。
Although
the
traditional
Chinese
dress
may
look
more
beautiful
and
stylish,
it
is
a
little
bit
strange
to
walk
around
in
it.
⑦其次，如果我们的目的是共享中国文化，那么不便就不是问题。
Secondly,
the
inconvenience
is
not
a
problem
if
our
purpose
is
to
share
Chinese
culture.
⑧首先，应该给予我们更多的机会运用我们所学的知识，以便更好地掌握它。
Firstly,
we
should
be
given
more
opportunities
to
use
what
we’ve
learned
in
order
to
have
a
better
grasp
of
it.
⑨毫无疑问，完全依赖消费的评级是不明智的。
There
is
no
doubt
that
it
is
unwise
to
depend
completely
on
the
ratings
in
consumption.
⑩所有这些都让我想起了我的母亲，她一直在尽她所能让我拥有最好的东西。
All
this
reminds
me
of
my
mother
who
has
been
doing
whatever
she
could
to
let
me
have
the
best.
句型2：魅力四射的强调句
强调句型的使用是为了突出强调句子的某一部分，它是一种比较容易掌握的高级表达方式。其构成：It
is/was＋被强调部分＋that/who＋其他。在写作中，我们可以通过强调句型将句子提高到一个新的层次，使你的作文魅力四射。
①重要的是遵守规则的人。
It
is
the
people
who
obey
the
rules
that
matter.
②老实说，这并不是因为他们讨厌投票，而是因为他们在情感和公平之间存在分歧，有时会让选民感到恼火。
To
be
honest,
it
is
not
because
they
hate
voting
but
because
they
are
divided
between
emotion
and
fairness
that
sometimes
makes
voters
feel
annoyed.
③正是所谓的不便，才显示出中国几千年文化的丰富、细腻和巨大魅力。
It
is
just
the
so-called
inconvenience
that
displays
the
richness,
delicacy
and
great
fascination
of
Chinese
culture
with
a
history
of
thousands
of
years.
句型3：靓人一眼的倒装句
在写作中倒装句的应用一定会靓人一眼，让阅卷老师眼前一亮。
①只有这样，来自世界各地的人们才能轻松、有效地进行交流。
Only
in
this
way
can
people
from
all
over
the
world
communicate
easily
and
effectively.
②知行合一的时候我们才能有所成就。
Only
when
we
match
our
words
with
actions
can
we
make
a
difference
in
whatever
we
hope
to
accomplish.
③总之，包容不仅毒害了汉语，而且导致中国人之间产生了距离感。
In
short,
not
only
has
the
inclusion
poisoned
Chinese,
it
may
also
bring
about
distance
between
the
Chinese
people.
句型4：独树一帜的虚拟句
虚拟语气是写作的“独门暗器”，能为写作增添一道亮丽的风景线。
①没有它们(指交通规则)，人们就不能享受和谐，否则国家就会陷入混乱。
Without
them,
people
could
not
enjoy
harmony
or
the
country
would
be
in
chaos.
②最后，我建议我们应该有更多的英语活动。
Finally,
I
suggest
we(should)have
more
English
activities.
③Many
people
suggest
that
parents
should
listen
more
to
their
children.
许多人建议父母应该多听听孩子的心声。
I
would
appreciate
it
if
you
could
give
me
some
advice
on
how
to
understand
them
better.
如果你能给我提供一些如何更好地理解它们的建议，我将非常感激。
句型5：整齐有致的并列句(结构)
并列句(结构)的使用会使得你的表达对仗工整，给阅卷老师以整体美的感觉。不过需要提醒的是：使用并列句型时需注意：连接并列主语时，有些句型采取“就近原则”。
①它不仅影响我们的日常生活，也可能威胁到人们的生活。
It
not
only
affects
our
everyday
life,
but
may
also
threaten
people’s
lives.
②第二，这类投票并不取决于竞争对手的优势，而是取决于他们拥有多少社交网络资源。
Secondly,
voting
of
this
kind
does
not
depend
on
the
strong
points
of
the
competitors,
but
rather
on
how
many
social-networking
resources
they
have.
③李推荐中国传统服装，而苏更喜欢校服。
Li
recommends
the
traditional
Chinese
dress
while
Su
prefers
the
school
uniform.
句型6：备受关注的被动句
写作中被动句式的使用可以为你的写作增添亮点，一定会备受阅卷老师的关注。
①想象一下，这一切都可以用一只可爱的老鼠来完成。
Just
imagine,
all
this
can
be
done
with
a
cute
mouse.
②第三，在许多情况下，投票者甚至竞争对手都可能被组织者利用，用于商业目的。
Thirdly,
the
voters
or
even
the
competitors
in
many
cases
are
possibly
taken
advantage
of
by
the
organizers
for
commercial
purposes.
③票房收入的增加可归因于许多因素。
The
increase
in
the
box-office
income
can
be
attributed
to
a
number
of
factors.
④另一个不应忽视的事实是，一些评级是对公司或卖方进行谨慎操纵的结果。
Another
fact
should
not
be
neglected
that
some
of
the
ratings
are
the
outcome
of
a
careful
manipulation
of
companies
or
sellers.
句型7：博得青睐的it句型
为了使句子结构平衡，我们常常会使用“it”作形式主语或宾语，而把真正的主语或宾语放在句子后部。这种句型是会博得阅卷老师的青睐。
①你写信给我，让我了解你们美丽的城市，真是太好了。
It’s
very
kind
of
you
to
write
me
and
let
me
know
about
your
beautiful
city.
②据报道，2008年北京奥运会将有约10万人被选为志愿者。
It
is
reported
that
about
100,000
people
will
be
chosen
as
volunteers
for
the
2008
Olympic
Games
in
Beijing.
③就我个人而言，我认为我们高三学生每天锻炼是个好主意。
Personally,
I
think
it
a
good
idea
for
us
senior
3
students
to
have
daily
exercise.
句型8：展示文采的省略句
写作中省略句的使用也许能够向阅卷老师充分展示你的文采。
①简而言之，网络投票在某种程度上是不公平的，即使不是不道德的，也不能被信任。
In
short,
internet
voting,
to
some
extent,
is
unfair,
if
not
immoral,
and
cannot
be
trusted.
②我通常每天记住20个生词，并尽可能地把它们用起来。
I
usually
memorize
twenty
new
words
a
day
and
put
them
to
use
whenever
possible.
③首先，当被要求去做他们不想做的事情时，人们可能会感到不得已而为之。
Firstly,
people
may
feel
forced
when
asked
to
do
things
that
they
don’t
want
to.
句型9：技高一筹的with复合结构
写作中with复合结构的使用可以让阅卷老师认为你的写作比起别人来技高一筹。
随着英语词汇在媒体和日常生活中的普及，一本中文词典已经收录了239个单词。
With
English
words
getting
popular
in
both
media
and
daily
life,
a
Chinese
dictionary
has
included
239
of
them.
句型10：言简意赅的非谓语动词
非谓语动词在高考书面表达中常常用到的语法项目。如果你能利用非谓语动词恰到好处地进行表达，那么你的写作一定会提现言简意赅的特点。
①第二，他们应该坚守岗位坚守岗位，提供良好的服务，满足合理需求，乐于助人，而且要尽职尽责。Secondly,
they
should
stick
to
their
posts,
offering
good
services,
satisfying
any
reasonable
needs
and
being
ready
to
help
those
in
difficulty,
and
never
fail
to
do
their
duty.
②构建和谐社会至关重要。
To
build
a
harmonious
society
is
important.
③运动有助于我们锻炼身体，保持头脑清醒。
Taking
exercise
helps
us
build
up
our
body
and
keep
a
clear
mind.
④如果我有幸被选为一名志愿者，除了上述所说的以外，我将努力工作，创造性地工作，绝不懒惰。If
I
have
the
honour
to
be
chosen
as
a
volunteer,
besides
the
above,
I
will
work
hard
and
creatively,
but
never
be
lazy.
⑤李江和苏华正在讨论下个月接待英国学生时穿什么。
Li
Jiang
and
Su
Hua
are
discussing
what
to
wear
when
receiving
the
British
students
next
month.
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