2020年中考英语写作指导课写作课 （共30张PPT）

(共30张PPT)
How
do
we
write
a
composition?
基本句型结构的掌握
简单句的句子结构：
1.
主语+谓语。（这里的谓语为行为动词）
2.
主语+谓语+宾语。
3.
主语+谓语（及物动词）+间接宾语+直接宾语
4.
主语+谓语+宾语+宾语补足语（补充说明宾语的成分就叫做宾语补足语）。
5,主语+系动词（be/keep/stay/remain/taste/look/sound/smell/feel）+表语（形容词，名词，介词短语）这种结构表示一种状态
复合句：其结构是：从句+逗号+主句
=
主句+从句
（1）条件状语从句：
主句+连词（if
,
unless
）+从句
（2）时间状语从句
：主句+连词（when
,
while
,
after
,
before
,
until
,till，as
soon
as
）+从句
（3）原因状语从句：
主句+连词（because
）+从句
（4）宾语从句：主语+谓语动词+that
/
if
/whether
/
疑问词+从句。
….
一审(search)
二列(list)
三加(add)
四连(connect)
五美(beautify)
考场作文五步法
While
writing
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。
英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班
内汇报。
请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查汇报
Survey
Names
Hobbies
Dream
Jobs
Reasons
Yi
Ke
writing
writer
Bring
her
pleasure
and
success
Li
Rui
travelling
guide
Experience
life
and
learn
about
different
cultures
Wu
Fan
looking
after
anima1s
WWF
worker
help
animals
live
in
peace
I(Xiao
Peng)
审题，明确写作主题、体裁、人称、时态、字数、结构、提示要点和补充信息。
写作第一步：
审(search)
假如你叫肖鹏，是英语学习小组组长。
英语课上老师要求展开小组调查，内容包括爱好、理想职业及原因，然后由各组组长在班
内汇报。
请你根据表格内容提示，介绍本组成员及自己的情况，写一篇80词左右的调查报告。
Survey
Names
Hobbies
Dream
Jobs
Reasons
Yi
Ke
writing
writer
Bring
her
pleasure
and
success
Li
Rui
trave11ing
guide
Experience
1ife
and
1earn
about
different
cu1tures
Wu
Fan
1ooking
after
anima1s
WWF
worker
he1p
anima1s
1ive
in
peace
I(Xiao
Peng)
主题
字数
人称
体裁
提示要点
补充信息
一般现在时
时态
用简单的单词、短语和句子列出文章要点提纲。
注意：要根据自己的英语水平，尽量扬长避短，避难就易。遇到想不起的词、句时，就用同（近）义词或同义句代替，不要使用明知是错的单词或没有把握的词句，并且要综合考虑所涉及到的情景、场合，语言要地道，符合英语表达习惯。
列
(list)
写作第二步：
Yi
Ke's
hobby
is
writing.
She
wants
to
be
a
writer.
She
thinks
writing
makes
her
relaxed
and
it
brings
her
pleasure
and
success.
Li
Rui
likes
travelling
best.
He
wants
to
be
a
guide
.
He
can
experience
different
life
and
learn
about
different
cultures.
Wu
Fan
's
hobby
is
looking
after
animals.
He
wants
to
be
a
WWF
worker
to
help
animals
live
in
peace.
My
dream
is
to
work
at
school
.
I
want
to
be
an
English
teacher.
Because
I
like
speaking
English.
I
can
be
good
with
children
and
it
makes
me
happy
and
pleased.
加首尾句，使结构完整。
可以采取总分总三段式结构或总分一段式结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。
加(add)
写作第三步：
Yi
Ke's
hobby
is
writing.
She
wants
to
be
a
writer.Writing
brings
her
pleasure
and
success.
Li
Rui
likes
travelling
best.
He
wants
to
be
a
guide
.
He
can
experience
different
life
and
learn
about
different
cultures.Wu
Fan
's
hobby
is
looking
after
animals.
He
wants
to
be
a
WWF
worker
to
help
animals
live
in
peace.I
want
to
be
an
English
teacher.I
like
speaking
English.
I
can
be
good
with
children
and
it
makes
me
happy
and
pleased.
Boys
and
girls，
Everyone
has
hobbies
and
dreams.Now
let
me
share
ours
with
you.
I
hope
we
enjoy
our
hobbies
and
our
dreams
can
come
true.
a
nice
head
a
nice
tail
a
nice
body
恰当运用关联词，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。
连
(connect)
写作第四步：
英语作文连接词
1.表文章结构顺序：First
of
all;
Firstly/First;
Secondly/Second…
And
then;
Finally;
In
the
end;
At
last…
2.表并列补充关系：What
is
more;
Besides;
not
only…but
also,
In
addition;
3.表转折对比关系：However;
But;
Although;
On
the
one
hand…On
the
other
hand…
;
so…that…
4.表
因
果
关
系：
Because;
As;
So;
As
a
result
，
therefore
5.表换一种方式表达的：In
other
words;
that
is
to
say…
6.表进行举例说明：For
example;
such
as
+n/doing…
7.表时间关系：when,
while,
after,
before,
then,
…
8.表达自己观点：As
far
as
I
know;
In
my
opinion，to
my
understanding,
from
my
point
of
view,…
9.表总结：In
short;
in
general
;As
I
see,
As
for
me,
As
we
all
know,
in
a
word;
All
in
all;
Generally
speaking，
Boys
and
girls，
Everyone
has
hobbies
and
dreams.
Now
let
me
share
ours
with
you.
Yi
Ke's
hobby
is
writing.
She
wants
to
be
a
writer.
She
thinks
writing
makes
her
relaxed
and
it
brings
her
pleasure
and
success.
Li
Rui
likes
travelling
best.
He
wants
to
be
a
guide
.
he
can
experience
different
life
and
learn
about
different
cultures.
Wu
Fan
's
hobby
is
looking
after
animals.
he
wants
to
be
a
WWF
worker
to
help
animals
live
in
peace.
I
want
to
be
an
English
teacher.
I
like
speaking
English.
I
can
be
good
with
children
and
it
makes
me
happy
and
pleased.
I
hope
we
enjoy
our
hobbies
and
our
dreams
can
come
true.
also
In
this
way
Because
美
(beautify)
用好词好句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。
写作第五步：
Boys
and
girls，
Everyone
has
hobbies
and
dreams.Now
let
me
share
ours
with
you.
Yi
Ke's
hobby
is
writing.
So
she
thinks
writing
makes
her
relaxed
and
it
also
brings
her
pleasure
and
success.
Li
Rui
likes
travelling
best.
In
this
way
he
can
experience
different
life
and
learn
about
different
cultures.Wu
Fan
's
hobby
is
looking
after
animals.
I
want
to
be
an
English
teacher.
Because
I
like
speaking
English.
I
can
be
good
with
children
and
it
makes
me
happy
and
pleased.
I
hope
we
enjoy
our
hobbies
and
our
dreams
can
come
true.
She
wants
to
be
a
writer
.
She
wants
to
be
a
successful
writer
in
the
future,
just
like
Mo
Yan.
He
wants
to
be
a
guide
.
He
is
looking
forward
to
travelling
abroad
so
he
wants
to
be
a
guide
in
foreign
countries.
He
wants
to
be
a
WWF
worker
to
help
animals
live
in
peace.
When
she
grows
up,
she
wants
to
be
a
WWF
worker
to
save
the
animals
in
danger
and
help
animals
live
in
peace.
Time
is
money.
一寸光阴一寸金
Time
waits
for
no
man.岁月不待人
Knowledge
is
power.知识就是力量
Where
there
is
a
will,
there
is
a
way.有志者，事竟成
Practice
makes
perfect.
熟能生巧
It’s
never
too
old
to
learn.
活到老，学到老
…
…
Skill
One
适当运用名言或俗语
Skill
Two
Make
your
sentences
correct
(标题、大小写、标点、单词拼写、语法错误、人称代词、第三人称单数等等）
Good
good
study,
day
day
up.
We
should
do
sports
a
week
once.
Watch
TV
too
much
is
bad
for
your
eyes.
There
is
going
to
have
a
meeting
today.
I
hope
I
can
come
true
my
dream.
once
a
week
Watching
be
achieve
简单句的扩展
She
is
a
tall
girl.
She
has
long
hair.
She
is
a
tall
girl
and
she
has
long
hair.
(添加并列连词and)
She
is
a
tall
girl
who
has
long
hair.
(
运用关系代词who引导定语从句)
Skill
Three
Express
in
different
ways.
Express
in
different
ways
When
he
spoke
more,
he
got
more
excited.
The
more
he
spoke,
the
more
excited
he
got.
We
should
learn
English
grammar.
It’s
important
for
us
to
learn
English
grammar.
同义表达的替换
他们在海滩上听音乐。
A
They
listened
to
the
music
on
the
beach.
B
They
enjoyed
the
music
on
the
beach
她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。
A
She
is
very
young.
She
can’t
carry
the
heavy
box.
B
She
is
too
young
to
carry
the
heavy
box.
C
She
is
so
young
that
she
can’t
carry
the
…
D
She
is
not
old
enough
to
carry
the…
Summary:
search
list
add
connect
beautify
一诊写作那些事儿
After
writing:
中考书面表达评分标准
第一档（很好）（17--20分）
包含所有信息要点，能围绕信息适当发挥，内容丰富。使用较丰富的语言结构和词汇，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯，表达清楚，没有或几乎没有语言错误，完全达到写作目标，格式正确。书写工整，规范，美观。
第二档（好）（13--16分）
完成试题规定的任务，涵盖了基本内容要点，使用了要求的语言结构和词汇能满足任务；语言有少量错误，行文基本连贯，表达基本清楚，达到预期写作目标。
第三档（一般）（9--12分）
基本完成试题规定的任务，写出了一些内容；语言有一些错误，行文不够连贯，
格式正确，书写状况。
第四档（较差）（5--8分）
未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出个别要点；语言错误较多，未能清楚传达信息，格式不正确，书写较差。
第五档（差）（0---4分）
未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与内容有关的一些单词；语言错误较多，语句无条理，未能清楚传达信息。未写直接0分。
一诊写作中出现的问题及现象：
1.语法错误:
you
eyes，
must
to
do
You
should
keep
to
do
eye
exercises.
And
don’t
watch
phone
stay
up
late.
2.固定搭配：
keep
your
eyes
health
,
do
eye’s
exercises
3.单词拼写错误:
.
some
advises,
eat
some
friuts
4.标点错误：
5.有部分学生篇幅写的太长，甚至写满了整页
6.卷面不整洁，书写不规范
7.传说中的恶搞作文出现，抄阅读段落；拼音作文等
Rome
is
not
built
in
a
day.
Tips:
1.强化单词、短语的背记，尽量回避在作文中的拼写失误而丢分；
2.加强词性的用法讲解，尤其是名词（可数语不可数）、代词（人称代词、物主主代词）这一块；动词的时态、语态以及固定搭配等……
3.加强五种简单句的基本句型在作文中的指导；
4.着重强调卷面整洁和规范书写的习惯，尽量减少学生在写作能力之外的失分；
5.建议考试作文不必写的过长，从而回避“言多必失”造成的失分；
6.建议老师们在最后一个月里强化作文分类训练，（不仅仅是一个大分值的题目，是对学生综合运用英语语言能力的培养，更是教师对学生终身教育负责的体现）
Part
Two:
中考复习策略之我“法”
一、抓住复习之重----词汇复习
将单词的读音，词性，词义结合起来记忆
2.重点复习高频考点词汇（贯穿在教材复习中）
3.根据
构词法
记忆单词，省时省力
4、?展开联想，认真对比，归纳总结
5、督促过关很重要
二、抓住复习之本----过教材（这也是解老师一直以来要求
、
的过教材的复习方法）
三、抓住复习之魂-----方法指导
Thanks
!