(共18张PPT)
To
learn
to
write
a
persuasive
writing
and
a
descriptive
writing.
说服性信函
说服性信函指以信件的形式表达自己的观点或立场,并期待对方认同或接受。在写作过程中,要以合理的语气和口吻为基调,用有说服力的素材来支撑自己的观点,以说明阐述为主,以理动人,以理服人。
【写作指导】
我们可以通过以下三个部分来进行写作:
第一部分:引入。写信人首先需要简要说明写信的主要目的。如果需要的话,也可以大致作个自我介绍。
第二部分:阐述。这是说服性信函的主体和核心部分。写信人需要在这个部分有条理地列出自己的理由。
理由要力求客观、真实、有说服力,要重点突出、层次分明。同时,要注意适当提高语言的力度,发挥语言的功力,以更好地展现自己的立场。阐述部分决定了说服性信函的成败,需要写信人精心策划、布局,以达到最佳效果。
第三部分:总结。可以用生动的语言重申自己的核心观点,或以情动人、引起共鸣,或升华延伸、画龙点睛。这部分应该注意语言的简练和冲击力,切忌冗杂拖拉的表达。
写作时应注意以下几点:
1.
要注意英文书信的格式,兼顾文化差异,同时要注意避免语法错误;
2.
第一和第三部分注重简练,而第二部分作为信函的主体,要注重条理和说服力;
3.
要注意提高自己语言表达的层级,尝试使用较高级别的词汇、句型或结构。
写说服性信函常用的表达
引出话题:
I
am
writing
to
try
to
persuade
you
...
I
would
like
to
suggest
that
...
阐述理由:
Here
are
the
reasons.
I
hope
you
...
for
several
reasons.
The
reason
for
...
is
that
...
The
reasons
for
...
are
as
follows.
First,
...
Second,
...
Last
but
not
the
least,
...
On
the
one
hand,
...;
on
the
other
hand
...
For
one
thing,
...
for
another,
...
I
know
/
understand
...,
but
...
No
one
can
ignore
the
fact
that
...
If
you
do
this,
...
What’s
more,
...
/
Furthermore,
...
总结全文:
All
things
considered,
...?
To
sum
up,
...?
In
brief,
...?
On
the
whole,
...
From
what
has
been
discussed
above?
/
Taking
all
these
factors
into
consideration,
we
may
safely
arrive
at
/
come
to
/
reach
the
conclusion
that
...
Please
take
my
advice
into
consideration
and
make
a
final
decision.
【实战演练】
假设你是某国际学校的学生李华,请你
代表同学们给美籍校长布朗先生写一封
信,劝说他修建校内游泳池。要点如
下:
1.?游泳运动的必要性;
2.?场地问题:操场旁边的空地;
3.?经费问题:学生们愿设法募款。
注意:1.?词数100左右;?
2.?可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.?信件的开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
Dear
Mr.
Brown,
I
am
writing
to
you
on
behalf
of
the
students
in
our
school.
_____________
__________________________________
Yours
sincerely,
?????????
Li
Hua
One
possible
version:
Dear
Mr.
Brown,
I
am
writing
to
you
on
behalf
of
the
students
in
our
school.?We
would
like
the
school
to
build
a
swimming
pool
at
the
empty
place
beside
the
playground.
A
survey
of
the
students
showed
that
ninety-five
percent
of
them
support
the
idea.
To
begin
with,
swimming
is
a
good
form
of
exercise
that
will
make
us
strong,
fit
and
healthy.
Secondly,
when
some
students
are
swimming
in
the
pool,
it
leaves
more
space
in
the
playground
areas
for
others.
Finally,
we
would
try
our
best
to
collect
money
to
help
pay
for
the
construction.
We
feel
that
building
a
swimming
pool
would
benefit
most
students.
We
hope
the
school
can
help
us.
Thank
you
for
considering
our
request.
??????????????????????????????????????????????
Yours
sincerely,
?????????????????????????????????????????????????????
??????Li
Hua?
说服性信函是我们日常生活中经常用到的一种文体,通过学习这篇写作指导,你掌握它的写作方法了吗?现在试着用英语写一篇吧。
Write
a
short
letter
asking
Copernicus
to
publish
his
ideas
so
everyone
can
read
them.