1. Do you like sports?
2. What sports events do you know?
What sports events do you know?
push-ups
sit-ups
What sports events do you know?
high jump
long jump
What sports events do you know?
400-metre race
100-metre race
Players
high jumper
runner
long jumper
swimmer
weightlifter
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Task:
Liulihe Middle School Sports Day was held on May. 18. Please write reports about School Sports Day with more than 50 words.
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主题
More than 50 words
字数要求
a report
体裁
School sports Day
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How many parts are you going to write?
General introduction:
date, place, name
Results:
teams,
performances
Other information:
best players
Other information:
special moments
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Title: School sports Day
Part I
Part II
Topic Sentence 1:
Details 1:
Topic Sentence 2:
Details 2:
Topic Sentence 3:
Details 3:
Part III
Best players
Special moments
Let’s try to write Part I — Introduction
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What can you learn from the text?
… was a success.
… was successful.
… was a big day.
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1
2
3
first / win the gold medal
second / win the silver medal
third / win the bronze medal
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Let’s try to focus on Part II — Results
Title: School sports Day
Part I
Part II
Topic Sentence 1:
Details 1:
Topic Sentence 2:
Details 2:
Topic Sentence 3:
Details 3:
Part III
Best players
Special moments
Let’s try to write the topic sentences of Part II.
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What can you learn from the text?
… had the best team this year.
…did better than last year and was second.
…did worse than last year and was third.
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Title: _____________
Part I
Part II
Topic Sentence 1:
Details 1:
Topic Sentence 2:
Details 2:
Topic Sentence 3:
Details 3:
Part III
Best players
Special moments
Let’s try to focus on the details of Part II.
Title: _____________
Part I
Part II
Topic Sentence 1:
Details 1:
Topic Sentence 2:
Details 2:
Topic Sentence 3:
Details 3:
Part III
Best players
Special moments
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Read the details of Part II and complete the table.
2nd
1st
3rd
1st
1st
2nd
3rd
2nd
1st
2nd
3rd
2nd
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What can you learn from the text?
…were the strongest…
…jumped the highest…
…had the fastest runner.
…did worse than the other two classes.
…had the best jumper…
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Event
Class 1
Class 2
Class 3
long jump?
?2nd
?3rd
1st?
high jump?
3rd
1st
2nd
100m?
1st??
3rd?
2nd
Say and write more details of Part 2
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Who was the first?
Who was the second?
Who was the third?
How to get good points???
Title: _____________
Part I
Part II
Topic Sentence 1:
Details 1:
Topic Sentence 2:
Details 2:
Topic Sentence 3:
Details 3:
Part III
Best players
Special moments
Let’s try to write the details of Part II.
Title: _____________
Part I
Part II
Topic Sentence 1:
Details 1:
Topic Sentence 2:
Details 2:
Topic Sentence 3:
Details 3:
Part III
Best players
Special moments
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We will write Part III .
Title: _____________
Part I
Part II
Topic Sentence 1:
Details 1:
Topic Sentence 2:
Details 2:
Topic Sentence 3:
Details 3:
Part III
Best players
Special moments
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Task:
Liulihe Middle School Sports Day was held on May. 18. Please write reports about the competition results of each grade. Please hand in a report with more than 50 words.
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Event
Class 1
Class 2
Class 3
long jump?
?2nd
?3rd
1st?
high jump?
3rd
1st
2nd
100m?
?2nd
3rd?
1st??
Can you make the following sentences better?
划出课文中连词
体验连接词的意义和用法
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评价作文:
1.写出正确句子。
(主谓语齐全,有且只有一个谓语动词)
2.恰当使用连词
3.书写美观(大,圆)
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Let’s write it now !
Homework
Polish the report;
Design the report with
words and photos.
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