新冠肺炎专题----中考英语写作（六）课件(共17张PPT)

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中考
“新冠肺炎类”作文讲解
书面表达
高分写作五要素
1.
结构：三段式（Hamburger
writing）
第一段：背景介绍（提出观点）：简单明了，开门见山
第二段：故事发展
：叙述事件，论证观点
第三段：总结观点：不照抄，有升华，有希望，提建议
2.要点：全面，围绕中心
3.逻辑：运用逻辑过渡词（递进，转折的，总结等）
4.语法:
词法（用词准确；名词单复数；形副修饰关系；）
句法（时态一致；主谓一致；语态；三单；被动）
5.亮点：高级词汇，词组，句型；个人情感升华
高分写作：三段四步法
1.
三段：三段式写作
2.
四步：（1）
审题（主题，体裁，时态，人称，内容）
（2）打草稿（规避错误，锤炼语言）
（3）正文写作（凝练文章，调整词句）
（4）检查：
a.查内容：内容完整，不遗漏
b.查语法：名词单复数；冠词、介词缺失；
时态；语态；三单等；
c.变句式
新冠肺炎类书面表达讲解与分析
An
Unexpected
Spring
Festival
2020年1月24日是中国的传统节日一春节，但受新型冠状病毒肺炎的影响，今年全国上下都笼罩在疫情的阴影下，过着一个非比寻常的春节，请以“An
Unexpected
Spring
Festival”为题，记录你度过的这个特殊春节。
提示:新型冠状病毒肺炎novel
coronavirus
pneumonia
爆发outbreak
口罩mask
居家医学观察medical
observation
at
home
要求:
1.
语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
新冠肺炎类表达解析：审题
An
Unexpected
Spring
Festival
2020年1月24日是中国的传统节日一春节，但受新型冠状病毒肺炎的影响，今年全国上下都笼罩在疫情的阴影下，过着一个
非比寻常的春节，请以“An
Unexpected
Spring
Festival”为题，记录你度过的这个特殊春节。
提示:新型冠状病毒肺炎novel
coronavirus
pneumonia
居家医学观察medical
observation
at
home
爆发outbreak
口罩mask
要求:
1.
语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个:
2.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计:
3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。
主题
体裁
时态
人称
内容
一个非比寻常的春节（出乎意料的）
记叙文（叙事）
一般过去时
第一人称为主
疫情的影响；这个春节“我”的不寻常经历
新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：审题
审题误区：
1.
时态错误：你度过的春节
2.
人称错误：你度过的春节
3.
体裁错误：提建议
4.
内容错误：(1)
春节
(2)
集中描述疫情而没有提到春节和
自己的经历
(3)
大量提建议，教别人如何保护自
己（变成倡议书）
一般过去时
“我”不是“我们”
记叙文
寒假（上网课？）
新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿
整理思路（列提纲/要点；设计自己的故事内容）
1.
以前的春节什么样？(简单描述，对比)
一个特别
的春节
2.
今年为什么特殊？(疫情爆发；居家)
3.“我”做了什么？(居家；看新闻；学医护知识；看书；学做菜等，详细叙述)
4.“我”得到了什么？(团结；直面困难；克服困难；理解他人等）
新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿
词汇及基本表达准备：
5.
在春节期间：during
the
Spring
Festival
6.
疾病：disease（具体的疾病）
√
illness（病人主观感受;心理疾病
）
7.
防止病毒传播：avoid
virus
spreading
prevent/stop
the
virus
from
spreading
8.
医护人员：medical
staff
medical
workers
9.
白衣天使：angel
in
white
10.
强调句：It
is/was
+
adj.
+
(for
sb.)
+
to
do
sth.
11.
定语从句：……n/代词
+that/which/who等
12.
状语从句：when;
if;
while;等
新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿
第一段：背景介绍（春节：特殊/出乎意料/非比寻常）
例1：The
Spring
Festival
is
one
of
the
most
important
festivals
in
China,
and
it
is
always
the
time
for
family
staying
together.
However,
with
the
outbreak
of
novel
coronavirus
pneumonia,
this
year
was
quite
different
from
the
years
before.
例2：This
year
is
the
year
of
the
rat.
But
the
Spring
Festival
was
really
different
from
the
previous
years.
Because
of
the
outbreak
of
novel
coronavirus
pneumonia,
everyone
had
to
hide
at
home
and
became
a
“mouse”.
the
past
新冠肺炎类书面表达解析：打草稿
第二段：叙述事件（内容积极，有意义；正确价值观）
定故事（我在家做的事情），填内容：
1）前后对比（转折过渡词）
以前春节……然后今年……（拜年；压岁钱；外出游玩）
2）内容简洁明了，不记流水账
描写事件，说明原因，补充论据（为情感升华做铺垫）
a.做社区志愿者；（尽力帮助他人）
b.学习新技能（记叙学习该技能的过程；分担家务）
c.记录每天怎么过的（从早到晚，夹叙夹议；新思考）
3）适当列举，或集中叙述一件事
以小见大，带出自己的感悟和思考
打草稿：第二段（讲述具体事件）
例1：
During
the
Spring
Festival,
I
stayed
at
home
all
day
for
it’s
the
best
way
to
prevent
the
spreading
of
the
virus.
On
the
New
Year’s
eve,
when
I
was
staying
with
my
family
and
enjoying
the
dinner,
the
medical
staff
gave
up
reuniting
with
their
loved
ones
and
stuck
to
their
post
fighting
against
the
virus.
I
was
deeply
moved
and
wanted
to
offer
some
help.
But
I
have
neither
the
ability
to
cure
the
disease
nor
save
people.
Just
when
I
was
sad,
my
father
found
a
way
for
online
donation,
so
I
decided
to
donate
all
my
lucky
money
through
the
internet.
Although
it
was
not
much
money,
I
tried
my
best
and
I
felt
happy
and
proud.
medical
workers
were
there
was
nothing
much
I
can
do
stop
advised
me
to
give
my
lucky
money
to
people
in
need
打草稿：第二段（讲述具体事件）
例2：
All
my
family
stayed
at
home
during
this
special
festival.
At
the
beginning,
I
did
not
think
it
was
necessary
for
us
to
stay
at
home.
But
after
watching
the
news,
I
have
learnt
that
so
many
people
died
because
of
this
serious
disease.
At
that
moment,
I
suddenly
realized
that
we
were
going
to
experience
a
hard
time.
Those
days
were
like
a
big
black
cloud
hanging
over
my
home,
I
felt
so
sad
that
I
did
not
want
to
talk.
However,
on
January
26th,
I
got
good
news
from
my
father
that
a
scientific
group
from
Shanghai
had
already
developed
a
new
medicine
which
could
prevent
the
novel
coronavirus
from
spreading.
I
felt
so
excited
and
the
black
cloud
suddenly
went
away.
first
would
have
stop
scientists/doctors
found
打草稿：第三段（总结，情感升华）
例1：
The
disease
is
terrible,
but
the
power
of
all
Chinese
is
even
greater.
I
believe
that
we
can
defeat
this
virus.
I
am
looking
forward
to
taking
off
my
mask
and
breathe
the
fresh
air
in
the
coming
spring.
例2：
In
this
“hiding”
Spring
Festival,
I
had
more
time
to
read
books,
do
homework,
I
also
learned
how
to
prevent
virus
and
protect
myself.
I
believe
we
can
overcome
this,
when
the
spring
flowers
are
blooming
and
the
sun
is
shining,
let
us
go
to
Wuhan
to
enjoy
the
cherry
blossom.
话题相关词汇及句子补充
1.
病毒：virus
2.
发热门诊：fever
clinic
3.
防护服：protective
clothing
4.
疫苗：vaccine
5.
自我隔离：quarantine
oneself
6.
误报，不实的信息：misinformation
7.
保持冷静：stay
calm
8.
延长春节假期：extend
the
Spring
Festival
holiday
9.
生命重于泰山：Saving
lives
is
of
paramount
importance.
10.呼吸困难：have
difficulty
in
breathing
话题相关词汇及句子补充
11.
勤洗手：wash
hands
frequently
and
thoroughly(彻底地）
12.
人传人：person-to-person/human-to-human
transmission
13.
一线医护人员：front-line
medical
workers/staff
14.
延长春节假期：extend
the
Spring
Festival
holiday
15.
病毒无情，人有情：
The
virus
is
cruel,
the
world
is
full
of
love
16.
疫情无国界，人间有真情：
Virus
knows
no
borders,
but
the
worst
of
times
reveals
the
best
in
people.
17.
避免到人群密集的地方：Avoid
going
to
crowded
places
话题相关词汇及句子补充
18.同舟共济，苦尽甘来：
Let's
help
each
other
and
expect
happiness
to
come.
19.
万众一心，共克艰难：
Let's
overcome
difficulties
with
one
heart
and
one
mind.
20.
打喷嚏或者咳嗽时用纸巾捂住口鼻：
Cover
your
mouth
and
nose
with
a
tissue
when
you
cough
or
sneeze.
21.
保持室内空气流通：
Make
sure
that
shared
spaces
have
good
air
flow.
Thank
you!