中考题型专训----英语书面表达(共68张PPT)

(共68张PPT)
中考特训营·英语
特战速训营
中考题型突破
速训六　书面表达
人物介绍类文章主要围绕人物展开,因此写作时,要根据话题内容,确定人称,然后再谋篇布局。
认真审题,明确要求
在提笔写作之前,花几分钟时间弄清题目的提示内容和要求,以免文不对题,倘若审题不准,就可能出现“下笔千言,离题万里”的情况;另外还需针对材料内容,确定文章的主体。
(2013·安徽)今天是父亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下:
1.表达你与父亲间的情感;
2.为父亲制作一张卡片;
3.帮助父亲做点事;
4.陪父亲散步等。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear
John,
It's
Father's
Day
today.
It's
a
special
day,
isn't
it??
What's
your
plan
for
Father's
Day?
I'm
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
Yours,
Li
Hua
剖析?　文章要求写我与父亲过父亲节的事情,首先我们确定这是一篇记叙文,文章给了四点提示,这样我们就必须围绕这四点展开,而不是任意发挥,同时人称要用I,由于很多事情都没有做,因此在写作时,主要用一般将来时来叙述我为父亲做的事情。
剖析
参考答案?
Dear
John,
It's
Father's
Day
today.
It's
a
special
day,
isn't
it?I
think
we
should
do
something
to
show
our
love
for
our
fathers
on
this
special
day.
My
father
and
I
are
good
friends.
Whenever
I
meet
with
difficulties,
he
is
always
there,
ready
to
help
me.Today
I
will
make
a
beautiful
card
for
him,
with
my
thanks
and
best
wishes
on
it.
Then
I
will
help
him
wash
the
car
this
afternoon
and
cook
his
favorite
food
in
the
evening.
参考答案
Besides,
I'll
take
a
walk
with
him
after
dinner
and
then
play
chess
with
him,
for
he
likes
it
very
much.
I'm
sure
he'll
be
very
happy.
What's
your
plan
for
Father's
Day?
I'm
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
Yours,
Li
Hua
参考答案
分析要点,编制提纲
考生通过对写作内容进行分析,弄清文章的主题后,开始着手组织材料,首先可以选取一些典型的、易于表达的材料作为自己的写作重点,再列出提纲。
每个人的一生中都会有令自己难忘的人。回想一下自己的成长过程,对你影响最深的老师是谁?请你根据以下要点提示,以“The
Nicest
Teacher
in
My
Heart
”为题,写一篇英语短文。
Subject
Chinese/
math/
English...
Appearance
(外貌)
Tall/short/of
medium
height/heavy/thin/...
Ordinary-looking(相貌平常的)/
beautiful/
handsome...
Personality
(性格)
Friendly/
kind/
popular/
love
to
smile...
Reason
Do
a
good
job/
be
strict
with/
be
like
a
mother/
father/
encourage
me
to...
其他
…
　注意:
1.文中请勿使用真实人名、校名和地名;
2.内容可参考表格中的要点并适当发挥;
3.词数80左右;
4.文章的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。
　
The
Nicest
Teacher
in
My
Heart
　Junior
high
school
days
will
be
over.
I
have
some
special
memories.
One
of
them
is
about
a
teacher.?
剖析?　考生在组织写作思路时,要从外貌、性格和喜欢的原因进行写作;其次谈论老师应该采用第三人称,谈论自己的感受应该使用第一人称;最后谈论老师的情况以及自己喜欢的原因可采用一般现在时;谈论老师对自己的帮助需采用一般过去时。根据提示写出下列提纲:
1.He/She
is
of
medium
height.
2.He/She
helps
us
with
English
not
only
in
class
but
also
after
class.
3.So
he/she
offered
me
some
advice
and
encouraged
me
to
improve
it.
4.I
must
say
many
thanks
to...
剖析
参考答案?　
The
Nicest
Teacher
in
My
Heart
Junior
high
school
days
will
be
over.
I
have
some
special
memories.
One
of
them
is
about
a
teacher.
In
my
heart,
Mr.Wang,
my
English
teacher,
is
the
nicest
teacher.
He
is
of
medium
height.
We
think
he
is
very
handsome.
He
impresses
me
with
a
friendly,
kind
and
hard-working
image.
He
is
strict
with
us
in
English.
He
helps
us
with
English
not
only
in
class
but
also
after
class.
About
two
years
ago,
Mr.
Wang
noticed
参考答案
noticed
that
I
was
worried
about
my
poor
pronunciation.
So
he
offered
me
some
advice
and
encouraged
me
to
improve
it.
He
also
gave
me
chances
to
speak
as
much
as
possible
in
class.
With
his
help,
my
pronunciation
has
greatly
improved.
I
must
say
many
thanks
to
Mr.
Wang.
I
wish
him
a
healthy
and
happy
life
in
the
future.
参考答案
考题17　传统文化篇
考题
追踪
年份
题材
体裁
核心考点
考查频率
核心素养
2017
戏曲进校园
应用文
给出材料提示
★★★★☆
文化品格
考势分析
传统文化是安徽中考书面表达的话题之一。考查角度有传统节日、中国传统礼仪习俗和传统文化保护及传承等。作文的形式为给材料提示,分值为25分
对传统文化的考查主要是为了激发考生对中国文化的了解及传承,因此考生只有全面掌握一些传统文化知识才能在写作时得心应手。
列举法
在写作时,可以根据文章的内容及要求,列举出文章的写作要点,然后根据写作要点组织材料,这样的列举既有提纲作用,又能使文章脉络清晰。
　(2017·安徽)假如你是李华,你们学校将举行“弘扬中华传统文化——戏曲进校园”展演活动,你打算邀请你的美国朋友Mike参加。请你根据以下提示用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
1.时间:7月1日下午2点;
2.地点:学校操场;
3.内容:文化展览、节目表演等。
提示词:戏曲opera
n.　表演
performance
n.
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear
Mike,
I
know
you
are
interested
in
Chinese
traditional
culture.?
Yours,
Li
Hua
剖析?　列举写作要点
1.分享好消息good
news
to
share
with
you
2.展演的时间、地点与人物:at
2:00
p.
m.
on
July
1;on
the
playground
in
our
school;all
the
teachers
and
students
3.展演的内容:a
culture
show
and
many
wonderful
opera
performances
will
be
put
on;learn
more
about
Chinese
traditional
culture
4.祝愿:have
a
great
time
剖析
5.列出关键短语和句型
be
interested
in
对……感兴趣;a
piece
of一条;put
on上演;look
forward
to
期盼;It
will
be
held...它被举行……;It's
a
chance
for
sb.
to
do...对某人来说是去做……
剖析
参考答案?
Dear
Mike,
I
know
you
are
interested
in
Chinese
traditional
culture.Now,
I
have
a
piece
of
good
news
to
share
with
you.
There
is
an
activity
about
Chinese
traditional
operas
at
2:00
p.
m.
on
July
1.
It
will
be
held
on
the
playground
in
our
school
and
all
the
teachers
and
students
will
attend.
On
that
day,
a
culture
show
and
many
wonderful
opera
performances
will
be
put
on.
It's
a
chance
for
you
to
learn
more
about
Chinese
参考答案
traditional
culture.
Come
and
join
us!
I
think
we'll
have
a
great
time.
I'm
looking
forward
to
your
early
reply.
Yours,
Li
Hua
参考答案
语言表达准确
在写与传统文化有关的作文时,一定要注意遣词造句的准确性。一些传统节日或工艺品等的专有名词要熟悉。如:traditional
handicraft
传统手工艺,set
off
firecrackers
放鞭炮,
paper
cut剪纸,等等。另外,要想使文章有整体性、连贯性,就要学会正确使用连接词,使句子表达准确。
假如你是李华,现就读于一所国际学校。你校正在举行“我与传统文化有个约会”的主题活动,请选择你喜欢的一个传说故事或一种传统工艺品,用英语写一篇短文,分享中国传统文化。词数80左右。
内容要点:
1.你的选择及喜欢的原因;
2.相关的传说或历史;
3.感想或启示。
剖析?　话题是“选择你喜欢的一个传说故事或一种传统工艺品”,与中国文化相关,能激发考生的兴趣,深入挖掘中华优秀传统文化。本文属于说明文,需要考生给出自己的选择以及喜欢的原因。根据要表达的内容确定要使用的时态。写作时应注意上下文意思连贯,要有较好的过渡衔接。如:on
the
one
hand...on
the
other
hand,not
only...
but
also...,
in
a
word,等等。另外注意表达自己的感想或启示时彰显个性。
剖析
参考答案?　
Fancy
lantern
is
my
favorite
form
of
Chinese
traditional
art,
for
it's
colorful
and
beautiful.
Fancy
lantern
is
made
of
bamboo
or
metal
covered
by
cloth
or
paper
with
pictures
of
different
characters
from
Chinese
fairy
tales.
At
the
Lantern
Festival,
by
tradition,
lanterns
of
different
shapes
hang
from
the
gates
as
symbols
of
good
luck.
Also,
riddles
are
often
written
on
them
at
lantern
fairs
for
people
to
guess.
Those
who
get
the
answers
to
the
riddles
are
supposed
to
have
good
fortune.
参考答案
Fancy
lantern
has
been
around
for
about
3,000
years
and
it's
still
popular
among
people,
which
reminds
us
that
with
the
development
of
society,
culture
keeps
changing,
but
something
will
remain
unchanged.
参考答案
考题18　观点建议篇
考题
追踪
年份
题材
体裁
属性
考查频率
核心素养
2010
环境保护
应用文
给出材料提示
★★★☆☆
学习能力
考势分析
近10年来,安徽中考在书面表达中涉及观点建议的考查共出现一次,话题内容贴近生活实际,主要叙述了在家乡建工厂的利与弊,引出了保护环境的倡议,分值为25分
观点建议应该是当今中考的热点,内容涉及学生生活、校园生活等各个方面,任何事物都有两面性,学生可以通过具体的情况谈谈自己的观点,发表自己的看法。
依据要点扩展法
考生在写作时,可以根据书面表达中所给的要点,写出合理的句子,这里可以使用你认为比较合适的句子,表述完要点后,可以适当发挥,把上下句用适当的连词连接,使句子过渡自然。
　
(2010·安徽)假定你叫张华,最近从报纸上得知美国某公司将在你的家乡建一座工厂。请你给该公司写封电子邮件。要点如下:
●表示欢迎:有利于家乡发展等;
●感到担忧:造成环境污染等;
●希望了解有关环保措施及更多信息。
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥以使行文连贯;
3.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
I
am
a
middle
school
student.
Recently,?
Yours
faithfully,
Zhang
Hua
剖析?　这是一篇应用文,要求写出在家乡建工厂的利与弊。文章给出了三点提示,我们可以围绕这三点写出建厂的利与弊及作者的期望。因为工厂没有建造,因此时态以一般将来时为主,连接上下句可以使用there
be,most
of...等句型。
剖析
参考答案?
Dear
Sir
or
Madam,
I
am
a
middle
school
student.
Recently,
I
have
learned
from
the
newspaper
that
you
are
going
to
build
a
factory
in
my
hometown.
There
is
no
doubt
that
it
is
good
for
the
development
of
my
hometown
and
it
will
provide
us
with
more
jobs.
Most
of
us
stand
by
the
program.
However,
some
of
us
are
worried
that
the
factory
will
make
much
noise
and
pollute
the
environment
of
the
area.
I
would
like
to
know
whether
you
have
any
plans
for
the
environment
protection.
参考答案
Would
you
please
offer
us
more
information
about
it?
I'm
looking
forward
to
hearing
from
you.
Yours
faithfully,
Zhang
Hua
参考答案
根据观点成文法
考生在写观点建议类文章时,有些观点非常明确,要求写出不同人的观点态度,那么我们就可以把这些人的观点分别列举出来,然后根据要求来组织语言,把所要表述的观点有条不紊地表达出来。力求做到观点鲜明,语句通顺、完整。
　目前,许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班,对此人们有不同的看法。请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文。
赞成者观点
1.能够学得更好,上更好的高中;
2.避免花太多时间看电视、玩游戏
反对者观点
1.学生需要时间休息;
2.太多压力不利于发展
你的观点
1.……
2.……
注意:
1.文章必须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.词数80左右(文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
3.文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。
Nowadays,
many
middle
school
students
are
taking
all
kinds
of
after-school
classes
at
weekends
or
on
holidays.
There
are
two
different
opinions
about
it.
Some
people
think
that?
剖析?　根据要求写出各自的观点。
赞成者观点:
1.Taking
after-school
classes
can
help
students
learn
better
and
get
into
a
good
high
school.
2.Students
can
avoid
spending
too
much
time
watching
TV
or
playing
computer
games.
反对者观点:
1.Students
need
time
to
rest
and
relax.
2.After-school
classes
can
cause
a
lot
of
stress
for
students
and
it
is
not
good
for
their
development.
剖析
作者观点:
1.If
necessary,
we
can
take
after-school
classes,
but
it
can't
take
up
too
much
time.
2.We
should
first
rest
well
at
weekends
and
on
holidays.
然后对这些观点进行有条理性的整理,使得文章思路清晰、语意顺畅。
剖析
参考答案?
Nowadays,
many
middle
school
students
are
taking
all
kinds
of
after-school
classes
at
weekends
or
on
holidays.
There
are
two
different
opinions
about
it.
Some
people
think
that
taking
after-school
classes
can
help
students
learn
better
and
get
into
a
good
high
school.
What's
more,
students
can
avoid
spending
too
much
time
watching
TV
or
playing
computer
games.
参考答案
However,
others
think
students
need
time
to
rest
and
relax.
After-school
classes
can
cause
a
lot
of
stress
for
students
and
it
is
not
good
for
their
development.
In
my
opinion,
if
necessary,
we
can
take
after-school
classes,
but
it
can't
take
up
too
much
time.
We
should
first
rest
well
at
weekends
and
on
holidays.
参考答案
考题19　事物介绍篇
考题
追踪
年份
题材
体裁
属性
考查频率
核心素养
2011
假期生活介绍
应用文
给出材料提示
★★★★☆
语言能力
2015
网络语言介绍
应用文
给出材料提示
★★★★☆
语言能力
考势
分析
安徽中考中的书面表达在事物介绍话题方面是丰富多样的,涉及学生生活、校园生活、当今热点等各个方面,是中考的常考话题,因此考生应该多注意这个方面的内容,分值为25分
事物介绍类的写作我们应该从有形和无形两个方面着手,首先要看写作提示,这样我们能够迅速下手,确立所要写的内容是对有形事物的描述还是对无形事物的介绍。
确定主题句
在介绍事物时,首先我们应该确立所要写作的主题句,然后根据主题句及所给的提示展开叙述,叙述中要注意上下文衔接及加上适当的过渡句,这样就能使文章结构自然、紧凑。
　(2015·安徽)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思,请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。
·点赞(Dianzan):赞同、喜爱
·任性(Renxing):随心所欲
·秒杀(Miaosha):快速达到目的
·土豪(Tuhao):很富有
·……
注意:
1.词数80~100;
2.请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;
3.文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;
4.邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear
Peter,
As
the
Internet
is
developing
fast,
more
and
more
new
words
and
phrases
have
been
created
in
Chinese.
Here
are
some
examples.
?
　
All
the
best!
Yours,
Li
Hua
剖析?　这是一篇要求对网络语言介绍的应用文,属于无形的介绍。因此我们首先确立几个主题句:One
of
the
most
popular
words
is
Dianzan,
which
is
often
used
when
you
quite
agree
with
someone.
When
you
say
somebody
is
Renxing,
you
mean
that
they
will
do
whatever
they
like.The
phrase
Miaosha
first
came
from
online
shopping,
which
means
you
can
complete
your
shopping
orders
before
others.在确定主题句后,可以在中间加上another
example,
if从句等,这样便可自然成文。
剖析
参考答案?
Dear
Peter,
As
the
Internet
is
developing
fast,
more
and
more
new
words
and
phrases
have
been
created
in
Chinese.
Here
are
some
examples.
One
of
the
most
popular
words
is
Dianzan,
which
is
often
used
when
you
quite
agree
with
someone.
Another
example
is
Renxing.
When
you
say
somebody
is
Renxing,
you
mean
that
he
will
do
whatever
he
like.
The
phrase
Miaosha
first
came
from
online
shopping,
which
means
you
can
complete
your
shopping
orders
before
others.
But
now
it's
widely
used
when
you
参考答案
achieve
your
purpose
in
a
very
short
time.
If
you
describe
somebody
as
a
Tuhao,
you
mean
that
he
is
very
rich.
You
can
find
lots
of
such
new
Chinese
words.
Keep
learning,
and
you'll
know
more
about
our
language
and
culture.
All
the
best!
Yours,
Li
Hua
参考答案
事物的特征介绍法
这类文章主要是针对有形的事物进行描述,我们要抓住事物的特征,然后从颜色、大小、用途等方面详细描述即可。
某英文报以“书包伴我学习,伴我成长”为主题,举办中学生征文活动。请你以“My
Schoolbag”为题写一篇100词左右的短文。内容包括书包的外形特征、用途和由书包引发的思考。
要求:
1.语言通顺,表达准确,要点齐全,行文连贯;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
参考词汇:look
like,
be
used
for/to,
problems,
expect,
free
time
My
Schoolbag
???
剖析?　题目要求写一篇以“My
Schoolbag”为题的短文,属于说明文。在介绍书包的外形特征、用途等情况时,应该采用第三人称,时态方面应采用一般现在时。当谈论自己由书包所引发的思考时,应该使用第一人称,时态方面要运用一般现在时。
剖析
参考答案?
My
Schoolbag
I
have
a
lovely
schoolbag.
It's
big
and
green.
It
looks
like
a
big
pancake.
I
go
to
school
with
it
on
my
back
every
day.
It's
my
closest
friend.
In
my
schoolbag,
there
are
textbooks,
workbooks,
notebooks
and
a
red
pencil-box
with
pens,
pencils,
rulers
and
erasers
in
it.
I
put
my
drinking
bottle
in
its
side
pockets.
参考答案
As
you
know,
there
are
so
many
books
in
my
schoolbag.
So
it's
very
heavy.
Every
day
I
have
to
finish
lots
of
homework
from
most
of
the
subjects.
I
have
no
enough
time
to
sleep.
I
am
really
tired.
I
need
to
relax
myself.
I
expect
to
do
what
I
want.
I
have
to
keep
a
balance
between
study
and
rest.
Each
time
I
see
my
bag,
how
I
wish
it
could
be
much
smaller
and
lighter!
参考答案
A(2019·安徽)
假定你是李华,
你的英国笔友Mike最近因视力减退而感到不安,请你用英文给他写封电子邮件,谈谈你在保护视力方面的一些做法。要点如下:
1.经常做户外运动;
2.很少用电子产品;
3.坚持做眼保健操;
4.……
注意:1.词数80~100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;
4.开头和结尾已给出,
不计入总词数。
Dear
Mike,
I'm
sorry
to
hear
that
your
eyesight
is
getting
weaker.?
Yours,
Li
Hua
参考答案?
Dear
Mike,
I'm
sorry
to
hear
that
your
eyesight
is
getting
weaker.
I'd
like
to
share
with
you
some
ways
of
protecting
eyesight
in
my
daily
life.
At
school,
I
often
go
out
of
the
classroom
to
play
with
my
classmates
or
do
physical
exercise
during
the
breaks.
In
my
free
time,
I
also
try
hard
to
avoid
using
the
mobile
phone
or
computer.
You
know,
the
light
they
give
off
is
harmful
to
our
eyes.
Besides,
doing
eye
exercises
plays
an
important
role
in
relaxing
my
tired
eyes.
参考答案
Lastly,
I
usually
have
my
eyes
examined
every
term
to
make
sure
my
eyes
stay
healthy.
I
hope
you'll
find
my
ways
helpful.
Yours,
Li
Hua
参考答案
B(2019·淮北联考)
李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说,她想了解中国的传统节日——中秋节。假如你是李华,请你给Jessica写一封信,介绍该节目。内容须包含以下所有要点:
1.中秋节的时间;
2.中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式(全家人一起吃饭、赏月、吃月饼等);
3.我最期待的活动。
要求:1.80~100词(
开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整。
Dear
Jessica,
I'm
glad
to
hear
from
you.
Now
let
me
introduce
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
to
you.?
Yours,
Li
Hua
参考答案?
Dear
Jessica,
I'm
glad
to
hear
from
you.
Now
let
me
introduce
the
Mid-Autumn
Festival
to
you.
The
Mid-Autumn
Festival
falls
on
the
15th
day
of
the
8th
lunar
month.
It's
a
big
day
for
us
Chinese
people.
All
the
family
members
get
together
to
celebrate
the
festival.
In
the
evening,
we
usually
have
a
big
dinner.
And
then
we
go
outside
and
enjoy
the
full
moon.
The
moon
that
night
looks
the
brightest.
With
the
beautiful
moon
up
in
the
sky,
we
sit
together
to
eat
mooncakes
and
share
our
stories.
参考答案
For
me,
the
best
part
is
to
enjoy
the
moon
and
eat
mooncakes.Mooncakes
taste
very
delicious.
They
look
like
the
moon,
big
and
round.
Yours,
Li
Hua
参考答案
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