2011中考作文复习课件

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2011全国中考英语作文题复习和预测
叙事加发表自己看法的作文
1、根据中英文提示，写出内容完整、意思连贯、符合逻辑的稿件。（字数不少于60词，英文提示词供选用）
　　有写学生不爱吃学校的午饭，常到校外去吃他们所喜欢吃的食物。但有些食物并不利于他们的身体健康。"英语角"打算针对这个问题展开讨论。请你准备一篇讨论稿，谈谈你的看法和建议。
参考词汇：not like, go out of school, be afraid, be back, more delicious, offer
叙事加发表自己看法的范文：
　　We know that some of our students do not like eating lunch at school because the food isn't delicious. So they often go out of school to buy something which they like to eat. But I'm afraid that it's bad for their health to eat lunch outside the school, because some of the food they buy isn't healthy enough.
　　In my opinion, if our schools want more students to be back and enjoy lunch inside, they should make the food more delicious, and also they should offer our students a larger choice of food as well.

2011中考英语作文预测及范文参考
10大类
1．突发事件（自然灾害、流行疾病等）
2．身心健康
3．环境保护（水、土、大气等资源保护）
4．语言学习
5．兴趣爱好
6．写人记事
7．旅游和介绍地方
8．新生事物评价（互联网，网上购物，手机等）
9．梦想和未来
10．烦恼
【一、突发事件问题（热点）】
突发事件问题是中考书面表达的热点话题，从非典到雪灾，从地震到甲型HINI流感病例（A/HINI flu cases），都频频出现在各地中考试卷中，因此必须重视。但这类文章的写作有一定的难度，掌握基本句式和写作技巧非常必要
As we know,
From the TV I know many A/HINI I flu cases are reported recently I'm so worried about you. Are you alright To stay away from the disease, you'd better stay at home as much as possible and not go to places where there are many people.
As a student, I think we should learn all kinds of knowledge to make our motherland stronger, better and richer.
I'm deeply moved by these people. So I'll use my pocket money to buy some food and school things for the children there. I think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.
I hope they will return to school as soon as possible with our help.
【二、健康问题（热点）】
1. It is very important to keep healthy。
2. How can we keep healthy
7. I didn“t feel like eating anything。
And he told me to take a rest and drink more water。
11. A nurse gave me an injection. It was a little painful。
12. The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day。
13. A few days later, I felt better. From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most important thing in the world。
All of us want to be healthy. First，we should
Staying up late is bad for our health. Second, we must
We should have healthy eating habits. Third, we should
Finally, we should wash hands before meals and brush our teeth twice a day. If we don't feel well, we should go to see the doctor at once.

Here is my advice about how to keep health / fit.
As a middle shool student , first you'd better do more exercise such as playing ball games running swimming and jumping rope(绳子). Then you should pay attention to your diet or meals. Don't eat too much meat and suger but more vegetables and fruit.Third you need enough sleep or rest . Next keep yourself happy. As people often say smiling makes younger. Last you mustn't drink wine or smoke .They are bad for your health.
That is my advice.I hope you are healthy and enjoy your life.Thank you,bye!
【三、关于环境保护问题（热点）】
Although the world develops much faster and better, the resources on the earth get fewer and fewer. In order to protect them,something must be done.
Not only should we（我们不仅应该...）protect drinking-water(饮用水) and stop polluting it, but also make full use of（充分利用） it.
例文:
1、假如你是新华中学的学生，名叫MIKE。去年6月1日我国已经禁止使用塑料袋，你对此有何看法和什么好的建议
参考答案:
　　I'm Mike. I am a student in Huaxing Middle School. Do you know the plastic bags Do you often use the plastic bags I don't like them. I think they use the wasting valuable oil their production. And they can't decompose(分解) in a short time. The plastic bags will make our world worse.
I agree with the rule, which people can't get the free plastic bags in the shops, supermarkets. It encourages people to use their cloth bags and baskets. It's good for our environment.
　　So I hope all the students in our class stop to use the plastic bags, and use our own cloth bags. I hope we can take care of our environment. Let's make our world more and more beautiful.

2 、6月5日( June 5)是世界环境保护日， 我们周围的环境变得越来越糟糕，污染越来越严重......。假如你是学生Jone.，你校要进行"如何保护我们的环境 "专题演讲比赛。
要求：1、举例说明环境存在的问题1-3方面;
2、如何保护好我们的环境，采取怎样的措施，举例1-3方面进行说明，字数80左右。
Dear headmasters,teachers,classmates and friends:
　　I'm very proud that I have chosen to speak to you all today, I'm a bit(=a little) nervous as I've never made a speech before to so many people ,so please forgive me if it shows.
　　As we all know, the environmemt around us is getting worse and worse . In some places we can't see fish swimming in the river or trees on the hills. Some people even have no clean water to drink.
So I think we must do something to protect the environment. .But what can we do How to protect our environmemt For example ,we can go to school on foot or by bike . we can use shopping basskets not plastic bags when we go shopping and we can use both sides of the paper when we write . In a word ,if everyone pays more attention to our environment , there will be less pollution and our lives will be better.
　　"There is only one earth",I hope everyone will protect our environment well. Thanks!
Dear John,
I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about our city. Nantong is trying to set up a national civilized city. We middle school students are also doing some things for it. We are all polite to our teachers. (In class, we listen carefully to them./ When we meet them, we always say hello to them./...) We also respect the old. For example, we help them cross the streets.

We are always ready to help each other. (When one has difficulty with his studies, others will help him at once./...)We often show our love to those in trouble. Last month, the students of my class donated money to the earthquake-hit areas.
Besides, we plant trees to protect the environment and make our city more beautiful.
Nantong is my hometown. I will do my best to turn Nantong into a civilized city.
Zhang Tong
I think each of us can do a little bit to help with this problem.
The first thing we can do is to use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we go shopping. It helps
The second thing we can do is to
. We should also
What's more, it would be better if we
In fact, even
I believe we can make the world a better place to live in
Not only does it affect our lives and health, it also has a great affection in the future.
【四、语言学习 （热点）】
2、（四川资阳）假设你叫李华，你的英国笔友Linda为了来中国参观奥运会而报名参加了汉语培训班学习汉语。她最近写信向你询问学习外语的建议。请根据下列提示和你学习英语的体会给Linda写一封回信。
注意：1．回信需要包括全部要点；2．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数 3．字数60左右。
Dear Linda，
I'm very glad that you'll come to China to watch the Olympic Games. I know it isn't easy to learn a foreign language, but I have some ideas that may help. Firstly, it's very important to listen to the teacher carefully in class and make some notes so that you can go over your lessons later. Secondly, try to catch every chance to practice speaking, both in and out of class. Don't be afraid of making mistakes.
Then try to listen and read more in Chinese. What's more, you'd better plan your time well and study it regularly every day.
Above all, you should be confident in yourself(有自信) and don't give up（放弃）whenever you meet with difficulty（遇到困难）. I'm sure you will succeed through（通过...而成功） your hard work.
Best wishes and looking forward to meeting you in China.
Yours,
Li Hua
2011中考英语作文预测及范文参考
【五、兴趣与爱好（热点）】
兴趣爱好是中考常考话题，难度相对较小
1、介绍你的兴趣爱好
My Hobby
I am a 15-year-old student in junior Grade 3. Though I am occupied with my study（被...占满了时间，...很忙）, I would like to spend time on my hobbies, such as playing the piano, surfing the Internet.
One of my favourite hobby is reading. Reading has been in my life for many years, since I began to learn characters. It can not only kill the time（打发时间）, but also, more importantly, help improve my comprehension ability. When reading, I can learn a lot. Reading Shakespear's works, I know how Hamlet looks like. Reading Socrates, I can see how great ancient Greek philosophers are. Reading Lu Xu, I come back to the old time of China.
Reading really affect my life.
　It goes without saying that(毫无疑问) there are many different kinds of hobbies and they can not only (不仅) broaden (拓宽) our minds (智力) but also (而且) add more fun to our life.
【六、写人记事篇】
这是中考出项频率最高的话题，其特点是难度相对较小，学生都有话可写，但掌握一些基本句子和模仿范文对夺取高分非常必要。
例文：　
1、假如你在2008奥运会期间碰到外国朋友，请你介绍进入NBA美国球队的中国球员易建联的情况。温馨提示：主题鲜明、语句通顺、意思连贯、适当发挥、拼写正确、书写工整。字数80左右。
易建联 生日 1987.10.27 出生地 广东 身高 2.12米
经历 2003年他成为大学生（college）
2000年1月入选中国国家篮球队(National Basketball Team)
2007年7月进入美国NBA，继姚明后的第二个中国球员
爱好 他喜欢听流行音乐、玩电脑。
其他 现在还在努力学习英语。
Yi Jianlian , a famous basketball player, is from Guangdong, China. He was born on October 27th.1987. He is 2.12 meters tall. This handsome boy became a college student in 2003. He was chosen to play for the National Basketball Team in January, 2004. This young man is the second Chinese player in NBA after Yao Ming. In his spare time, he likes listening to pop music and playing computer games. Now he is trying his best to learn English well.
【七、旅游和介绍地方篇（热点）】
中考高频率话题，出题形式灵活。
4、( 山东威海) 请你根据下面提供的信息用英语为刘公岛写一篇题为Welcome to Liu Gong Island 的旅游宣传材料。要点：
刘公岛概况 威海东部，岛长4.08km，宽1.5km, 面积3.15km2, 距陆地船程20 分钟，
花草树木覆盖，历史博物馆、动物园等景点，水、陆环岛游等活动
交通方式 （来威海）汽车、火车、飞机等，交通便利
浏览时间 一天
要求：1. 包括以上要点，但不拘泥于其顺序，适当使用描绘性语言，展示刘公岛魅力。
2. 词数100 词左右（已给出的开头、结尾不计入词数）。
Welcome to Liu Gong Island
The summer vacation is coming. Where would you like to visit Haven't you decided Come to Liu Gong Island!
Liu Gong Island is in the east of Weihai, which has an area of 3.15km2. It is 4.08 km long, 1.5km wide. It will take you 20 minutes to get to the island from the travel port by ship. The history museum on the island is educational. The zoo is interesting to visit. And it is more interesting to travel around the island either on land or by boat. There are all kinds of trees and grass everywhere.It's very easy to travel to Weihai. You can come by bus, by train, or by plane. You can spend a day happily on the island.It is a good place to visit. Visitors from all over the world come to visit it every year.
Wish you a good trip.

【八、新生事物评价（热点）】
这是中考热点，这类文章的特点是写作难度大，因此需要学生掌握方法，和基本句式，以做到考试时心中不乱。
关于中学生使用手机
赞成意见：1.现在是信息社会，手机是最快的信息交流的工具之一。
2.应充分利用好手机。如偶遇突发事故，可立即拨打手机求助。
3.可在每天学习之余利用手机游戏放松一下自己。
4.只要正确使用好手机，紧跟时间并无过错，追求时尚可以理解，但学习是首要任务。
反对意见：1.学校已提供了公共电话，因此手机并不能带来更多的方便，而且花费较多。
2.若课堂接听手机会影响上课。
3.学生玩手机游戏或接发短信，将无法集中精力学习。
注意：1.可适当增加细节和连接词，使文章通顺连贯；开头部分已给出，不计入总词数；2.词数：100左右；
Dear Editor,
Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. In my opinion, we can bring mobile phones to school.
As we know, the 21st century is a modern age and full of information. A mobile phone is one of the quickest tools for us to exchange information. The mobile phone is a fashionable and useful invention, so we ought to（应该） make the best use of it. Suppose（试设想） there's a sudden accident, it is more convenient for us to dial for help immediately. There're also some games in the mobile phone. We can relax ourselves by playing them when we're tired of our studies. In my opinion, it's not wrong to follow the fashion, but the most important thing is how to use the mobile phone in a right way.
Yours truly,
Wang Lin
4.看图作文
同学们，看到下面的四幅图片及相应的报道后，你感到最担忧的是哪两种情形？请简述你担忧的理由并提出建议或希望。
要求：⒈ 从所给素材中任选两种情形进行阐述，不可多选或少选。
　　⒉ 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确；
　　⒊ 词数 80 ～ 100。
参考词汇： 建议 suggest v. suggestion n. 气体 gas n.　 污染 pollution n.
这道看图作文题，主题和图片连接得不是很紧密。从考查的形式上来说，虽是看图，实质上却属于提示性的作文。这个作文应该结合个人的观点，选择的余地还是很大的。做这个题应该注意几个方面：
1、认真读题。注意，题目虽然给了四幅图，但是却只要求写其中的两个就行。
2、题意要求的是阐述个人的观点-最担忧的两种情形。而不是对图片进行描述。
3、结合所给的提示。提示中，对每种污染都进行了阐述，考生可以这些描述进行写作。
4、注意字数，语法，拼写等，避免错误
【九、梦想和未来】
这是一个老话题，中考常考，难度较小。
3．新学期的打算(The plan for the new term)
Another new term comes again,so I should have a study plan to promot myself.
Firstly, I descide to finish my homework more carefully than before. And pay more attention to the knowledge which i didn"t know it clearly.
Secondly,I will do a lot of reading to widen the range of my knowledge, and try to combine thoery to practice.
Finally,I will learn to adjust to be more positive and more helpful.
That"s what I plant to do in a new term.

【十、烦恼篇】
这类作文难度较大，掌握基本句式，背诵范文非常必要。
例文：
（陕西省卷）假如你是Han Mei, 下面是一封你的笔友Alice 给你发来的e-mail,请你根据e-mail 的内容给她写一封回信，与她交流看法，并帮她排忧解难。提示词语：listen to, mother"s love, care about, communicate with, get along with, smile 写作要求：1.语句通顺，书写工整；2.可用所给提示词语，也可以适当发挥；3.词数在60-80左右
Dear Han Mei,
I"m afraid I"ve got a big problem recently. My mother talks too much to me. She always tells me, "Be careful while crossing the street." "Put on more clothes." "Did you do a good job at school " and so on. I"m annoyed(烦恼)。What shall I do
　　 Alice
Dear Alice,
　 As a teenager, I met the same problem as you. But now I can get along better with my mother. Here are some ideas/advices for you.
　 Your mother talks much, because she cares about you. Maybe it's not a good way, but it shows your mother's love. So I think you should listen to her. If your opinions are different from your mother"s, you can communicate with her, and tell her what you are thinking about.
　 If your mother doesn't take your advice, just keep silent and give her a smile.
I hope what I say here can help you a lot.
应用文考查形式，列举提纲要点，体现了高考(微博)命题的稳定性。材料如下：
　　假如你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(learningcenter)的帮助。按照学校规定，你需要提前预约。请按下列要点写一封信：
　　1 本人简介
　　2 求助内容
　　3 约定时间
　　4 你的联系方式(Email: lihua@, Phone: 1234567)
　　注意：词数100左右，可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，结束语已为你写好。
　　Dear Sir/Madam,
　　_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　　Look forward to your reply。
　　Yours,
　　Li Hua
(一)评分原则：
　　1、本题总分为20分，按5个档次给分。
　　2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
　　3、词数少于80和多于120的，从总分中减去2分。
　　4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性及上下文的连贯性。
　　5、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。
　(二)评分标准：
　　第五档(16-20分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的
　　——覆盖所有内容要点。
　　——应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
　　——语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
　　——有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
三、写作步骤与注意事项
　　草拟提纲
　　考生认真审题后，如果时间允许，最好留出1-2分钟在草稿纸上列一个提纲，再往卷面上写。这样作文时心中有数，写得更出色，书写更整齐，增加得分的几率。列提纲时应做到：
　　1 简要写出要使用的词汇句型；
　　2 快速浏览修改：注意按照要求覆盖试题规定的所有内容要点，留心是否有要点遗漏，同时适当发挥，补充相关内容；
　　3 稳定为上：按照平常要求和个人写作习惯来完成，不要追求标新立异，这样往往适得其反。
整洁书写
　　主观试题评分过程中一定存在所谓“感情分”。漂亮的字体，干净整洁的卷面会使人赏心悦目，无疑会给考生的作文增色不少。因此，考生在写作时要注意书写求方、求齐，如有删除勾一笔即可；如感觉可写不多，字母形状向大、向宽发展，但仍需记得求方求齐原则。
　　减少错误
　　错词病句出现太多，会直接影响评分。首先考生应杜绝汉字、拼音、空格等低级错误，回避没有把握的词句。为追求句式变化出现本可以避免的错误，就得不偿失了。在保证准确的前提下，才可以考虑句式的变化，应用多样语法结构。
消灭空白
　　有的考生缺乏自信，放弃不写，留下答题纸白茫茫一片真干净。根据高考评分原则和标准，我们知道，只要能写出一些和试题要求相关的词和句子，就不至于得零分。考生可以从比较简单的相对有把握的词和句子入手，按照要求写一写，一定可以拿到几分。切忌抄前面的试卷，甚至写汉语拼音，企图蒙混过关，这样做一定是零分卷，不如抓紧时间写几个简单句。
　
重点检查
　　重点检查单复数、拼写、搭配、时态、标点符号等方面的错误，这类错误考生容易出现也易于发现改正，从而提高了书面表达准确性。