高一年级必备素材清单 (一)
A letter of Suggestion
文体特点
建议信是向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告的一种问题。写信时要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由,理由要合情合理,语气一定要委婉和缓。
开头:开门见山,说明写信目的
主体:对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由,接着提出具体建议
结尾:提出希望采纳建议,并祝福
【篇首句】说明写信目的
1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful.
2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month.?Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you.
3.Here are some suggestions which I hope will be of some help to you.
4. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients.
5.?You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese, and I will try to make some suggestions here.
6. I’m very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions.
7. I’m delighted to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school.
8. In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friend’s home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
9. In you last letter, you asked me for my advice with regard to/concerning… and I will try my best to make some constructive suggestions.
10. I am writing to express my views concerning…
11. You have asked for my advice about…and I will try to make some suggestions.
12. I’m glad to receive you letter asking me on…..
13. You can’t imagine?how?delighted I am?on hearing the news?that?you?develop a keen interest in?…., I’m?more than willing?to?provide you with some constructive advice for your reference.?
【篇中句】介绍详情、提出具体建议。
1. I'd like to suggest that...
2. In my opinion,...
3. If I were you, I would...
4. You'd better do.../not do...
5.?It's necessary for you to read some books about these places before you come to see them with your own eyes. With more knowledge about these places, you will have a better understanding of Chinese history and culture.
6.?First of all, you should listen to the teacher carefully and take notes in class so that you can go over your lessons as soon as you can?after class.
7.?As is known to all, vocabulary is of great importance. You should spend half an hour in the morning reciting words and reading texts aloud.
8.?What’s more, try to communicate with your classmates in English out of class. Only in this way can you improve your listening and spoken English quickly.?
9. Last but not least, you should develop the habit of keeping a diary, which helps improve your written English and helps you go over/review the words and expressions that you have learnt.?
10. When it comes to… 当说到…, 提及…
11. First,… Second,… Last but not least….
12. To start with…, Next…In addition/Besides, … what’s more,/Furthermore, … Finally,…
13. In a word/In short/In conclusion,…总而言之
14. Why not ….? If you do this, ….
15. Only by doing so will you….
16. As far as I am concerned, you’d better …/ You are supposed to…/It might be a good idea for you to….
【篇尾句】 提出希望采纳建议,并祝福。
1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way.
2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:?The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”.
3?I hope that my suggestions are helpful to you anyway.?I would be more than happy to see improvement.
4.?I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.?Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work!
5. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help to you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.
6. I hope you can take good consideration of my advice.?I would be ready to discuss about this matter with you to further details.
7. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. I’m eager to see you soon in Beijing. Wish you in advance a pleasant trip to Beijing.
8. Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help to you. I have the confidence that you will have a
9. All in all, just as the saying goes: when in Rome, do as the Romans do. I’m convinced that if you follow my advice, you will have a good time .
10. I think it would be more beneficial if you could…
11. I hope you will find these proposals/suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
12. I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard.
13. I will be ready for further discussing this matter in details.
备考范文
Passage1
假如你是李华,你的美国朋友 Jack最近经常失眠和头晕, 严重影响学习,西医治疗效果不理想。请你根据所给提示给他写一封电子邮件向他推荐中医治疗。邮件内容包括:
1. 对他的状况表示同情;
2. 介绍中医的优势(如副作用小、注重食疗等);
3. 提供帮助和期待他早日康复。
Dear Jack,
I’m really feeling bad that you have been troubled by insomnia and dizziness which seriously affects your study. Worse still, the western medicine is not an effective treatment to them.. I think it is a wise choice for you to try Chinese medicine.
Compared to western medicine, Chinese medicine has its own advantages. It won’t have or have fewer side effects. Although it takes some time to work, people can recover completely. In addition, Chinese medicine pays special attention to the food treatment. People can adjust their diet to get healthy. Do you think it necessary to have a try?
As long as you cooperate with your doctor, you’ll be fine sooner than expected.. Hope you will recover soon. If there is anything you need me to do for you, please don’t hesitate to tell me.
Li Hua
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假如你是李华,你的美国笔友David来信说,当他了解到人工智能(AI)Master战胜了60 位顶尖职业围棋(Go)高手后,迷上了下围棋,希望你给他一些关于提高棋艺的建议。
内容要点如下:
1.最好到中国参加培训班;
2.熟能生巧,尽量多在网上对弈;
3.多观看www. weiqitv.com上的国际大赛直播。
Dear David,
?? I’m delighted to receive your letter, in which you have told me you have become a Go addict after knowing AI Master had defeated 60 world-top professional players and ask for my advice on how to learn Go well. Here are some tips for you.
?? First, it is a good idea for you to register for a training class in China, where Go was born. In addition, as the proverb says, practice makes perfect. So you are expected to play the game online as much as possible. Finally, I recommend that you watch more live broadcasts of international matches at www. weiqitv. com, which is sure to help you acquire advanced Go-playing skills.
?? I hope you will find these ideas beneficial.
Li Hua
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假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom来信询问中国的餐桌礼仪,请就此写一封100词左右的信向他介绍。
Dear David,
How is everything going these days? In your last letter, you asked me about being a guest to a Chinese friends home. Now, I am writing to inform you of some relevant details.
To begin with, according to our tradition, you are supposed to arrive early so that you can help the family prepare the dinner, which is not only meaningful but also interesting. Besides, it is of great importance to prepare a suitable gift for the hosts, which shows your appreciation to their invitation. Tea or a Chinese knot will be welcomed. /(Some flowers and fruits are sensible choices). What’s more, when you are enjoying your meal, you need to avoid making noises while chewing food.
Hopefully, these suggestions would be of great help to you. I have the confidence that you will have a great time. I am looking forward to your good news.
Li Hua
中间段另一种思路:Before a meal,guests and seniors are seated first.Other people should not begin eating until the guests and the seniors start.Unlike Westerners, the Chinese usually put many dishes on the table and everybody shares them together.While eating Chinese hosts usually take good care of their guests and often use serving chopsticks or spoons to add food to guests’ plates.After the meal,guests should express their thanks to hosts and their satisfaction with the delicious meal.In short, when in China do as the Chinese do.)
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假如你是李华,你的朋友晓东刚升入新的班级,在交友方面遇到了困难,希望你给他提供一些建议。
要点包括:给出建议并说明这样做的理由;
Dear Xiadong,
I’m sorry to hear that you have difficulty in making friends. However, the situation is easy to change if you can follow/take my advice. Here are some tips for you.
Firstly, why not take an active part in discussion held in you class and show interest in other people’s ideas? If you do this, you can get to know more different people and show them that you are friendly. Secondly, if you want to make friends, you should be a friend first. You should learn about your classmates’ likes and dislikes. In this way, you can find you have a lot in common with them, which is much easier for you to make friends with the same interests as you. In addition, it would be a good idea to share your happiness and sorrow with your classmates. Just as the saying goes: “a friend in need is a friend indeed”. Only by doing so will you have a better understanding of each other. Last but not least, friendship calls for time and effort. It is necessary for you to put your heart into making friends.
I believe it won’t be long before you make more and more friends if you take my suggestions.
Li Hua
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假定你是李华,你的外国笔友Charlie和家人将于暑假期间来中国旅游。请你给他写一封电子郎件,为他提供一些建议。内容包括:1. 欢迎他和家人来中国旅行
2. 旅行前的准备:了解中国文化,学会用筷子,学一些简单的汉语。
Dear Charlie,
I'm delighted to know you are coming to China with your family during the summer holiday. It's a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture. Now I'm writing to offer you some advice.
It is a good idea for you to make careful preparations before you travel to China. To begin with, you should know of some Chinese culture, which can help you behave properly during your stay. Secondly, you'd better learn how to use chopsticks so that you can taste different varieties of Chinese food. Last but not least, if you can speak some simple Chinese, it will be easy for you to communicate with locals wherever you go.
I hope you will find my advice helpful.
Li Hua
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假设你是高中生李华,有感于校园中存在的随意涂写(to scribble)和乱丢垃圾(to litter)的行为,请用英语给校长写一封信。信中应该包括以下内容:
1. 说明写信的目的;2.对这些行为进行批评;3.提出建议
Dear Mr. Headmaster,
I am Li Hua, a student from Class 1 Senior 2. Considering the fact that in the school there are some uncivilized phenomena which have a rather harmful effect on students, I am writing to inform you of it and give some constructive suggestions in the hope of helping solve the problem.
It is well-known that the school is another home of ours so that everyone ought to do his part to maintain its tidiness. However, some inappropriate behaviors still occasionally appear in sight such as scribbling around and littering at random, which not only show their bad manners but also do harm to the campus where we study.
From my perspective, enough dustbins need to be placed at every corner of the school, facilitating students to drop the waste in a proper way. What’s more, it is of great use to raise students’ awareness of keeping the campus tidy by posts and school broadcasting, and carry out some punishment if necessary.
Serious though the problem is, with our combined efforts, I firmly believe that we can make a difference! I am eagerly looking forward to hearing from you.
Li Hua
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假设你是李华,在美国孔子学院的笔友Jack对汉字毛笔书法非常感兴趣,写信向你咨询学习毛笔书法的建议。请你用英语回信,内容包括:
1. 学习毛笔书法的必备工具; 2. 你认为学好毛笔书法的有效方式;3. 学好毛笔书法的好处。参考词汇:书法 calligraphy 毛笔 writing brush 砚台 ink stone
Dear Jack,
I’m glad to know you’re interested in Chinese Calligraphy. It’s my pleasure to tell you how to learn Chinese calligraphy.
As we all know, the four treasures of the study are writing brush, ink, paper and ink stone, which are essential to learn Chinese calligraphy. As to the way to learn it, I think, for one thing, you may study the basic structure of each Chinese character step by step;for another, choosing a good model book to copy is of great benefit to you.Chinese calligraphy is a fine art of the excellent traditional cultures in China. Not only does it do good to health, but also it can cultivate morality and purify our souls.
Hoping you can come to China to enjoy it personally.
Li Hua
Passage8
来中国旅游的外国游客与日俱增,他们的一些不文明行为引起了广泛关注。 China daily正在举行以“文明旅游”为主题的讨论活动。假定你是李华,请给该报社写一封信参与讨论,呼吁外国游客文明旅游。要点如下:
1. 尊重当地习俗。2. 文明用语、保护环境。3. 其他。
Dear Editor,
I’ve read the discussion in your newspaper about how to be a civilized tourist in China. Indeed, the number of foreign tourists in China is sharply increasing, which causes a big concern. While they are enjoying the beautiful scenery, some of them behave rudely. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.
Personally, I think it's necessary for them to mind their manners. First of all, they'd better respect and follow local customs. As a famous saying goes, "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." Besides, it's impolite of them to talk loudly and rudely in public places, which will certainly leave a bad impression on Chinese people. What's the most important is that the environment should be protected. Therefore, throwing rubbish, spitting and jumping the queue and so on are not allowed. Only in this way can they enjoy their trip and have happy memories as well.
Thanks for reading.
Li Hua
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假设你是李华, 你的的好友Chris打算来中国学习汉语,不知道是广州还是北京,请给出你的建议。
Dear Chris,
Nice to hear from you. I’m more than happy to know that you’re coming to China to learn Mandarin. You will surely learn a lot about China and its culture in the following few years. As to which city to choose, Beijing or Guangzhou, I will try to make some constructive suggestions.
Both Beijing and Guangzhou are good places to study in, but I strongly recommend that you come to Guangzhou. This city has dozens of famous universities for you to apply to, and you can learn not only Mandarin but also the local dialect Cantonese, which will add to the pleasure of your studying.
Besides, Guangzhou is among China’s most livable cities. people there are friendly, warm-hearted and most importantly, open to foreigners. An increasing number of foreigners are coming to the city and live in harmony with the locals. I’m convinced that you’ll have no trouble adapting to the new environment. What’s more. It boasts many tourists attractions, among which highlights are White Cloud Hill Scenic Spot, Yuexiu Park and Guangzhou Zoo. Food will not disappoint you either. “Eating in Guangzhou” has become a popular saying both at home and abroad. Cantonese cuisine is good in color, fragrance, taste and presentation. I believe you will fall in love with it. Last but not least, since I’ve decided to study in Guangzhou, we can meet frequently if you study there, too. Wouldn’t that be amazing!
Hopefully these can help you make your final decision. Looking forward to meeting you here in China.
Passage 10
假定你是李华, 你所爱的Global Mirror 周报在创刊五周年之际征集读者意见,请你根据以下内容,给主编写封信,内容主要包括:
1. 说明你是该报的忠实读者;
2. 说明该报的优点:兼顾国内外新闻,介绍名人的成功故事;
3. 提出建议:刊登指导英语学习的文章
Dear Editor – in Chief,
Congregations on the 5th anniversary of Global Mirror! I’m a regular reader of your newspaper. I?like?it?so?much?that?I?hardly?miss?any?copy.
There?are?many?advantages?of?Global?Mirror.?Firstly,?Global?Mirror?covers?both?national?and?international?news. By simply turning the page, I can know all important things that have happened both home and abroad. Besides, the success stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which help me learn a lot from them and greatly inspire me. In a word, thanks to Global Mirror, we are well-informed and keep up with the changing world.
As a young student, I suggest that Global Mirror provides articles about English learning for us.
Finally, I hope that Global Mirror will become more and more popular.
Li Hua
Passage 11
假定你是中学生李华。在一位名叫TigerMom的学生家长的博客上,你看到如下内容。请你根据博客内容、写作要点和要求,给这位家长回复。
I’m the mother of a fourteen?year?old. I have a rule for my daughter: be among the top 5 students or get punished in one way or another. She has been doing very well in school,but some friends of mine keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her. Am I wrong?
写作要点:
1.表明自己的看法;
2.陈述自己的理由(可举例说明);
3.提出至少两条建议。
Hi,Tiger Mom,
What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China. My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so.
Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all?A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the
pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically.
So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl;let her have more friends and social activities;and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do.
Li Hua
阅读下面这封中学生来信。
Dear Editor,
I am a new student at Hongxing Senior High School. My home is far from Guangzhou, so I must live at school. This is the first time for me to get away from my parents. I feel very sad. When I leave home, I can't help tearing myself away from them. I do not want to be alone at school, and I am a shy girl. I have been crying in bed at night these days. I want to stay at home forever. I miss my parents very much. Could you tell me what to do?
Your early reply is expected.
Best regards,
Amy
请根据以上内容,写一封回信。回信应包括如下要点:
1.鼓励Amy坚定求学信心,志存高远。
2.就Amy目前的状况,提出两到三条建议。
注意:词数120左右(不包含已给出部分)。
【参考范文】
Dear Amy,
Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to have a talk about your present situation with you.
People often miss their parents the first time they leave home. Most people do have to leave home for further education or employment. You cannot live with your parents forever. I think you should realize that present separation will help with your academic development and your improvement of personal ability.
You need to make friends on your school campus, sharing ideas with your classmates who are closest to you now. Maybe you will still miss your parents, but your new friends will bring happiness and joy to your new life. Also I suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school. You will get much pleasure from it.
Wish you happy every day.
Faithfully yours,
Li Hua
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