Module 10 Australia Unit3 Writing 课件23张PPT

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Module
10
Australia
Module
task
-------Writing
course
Introducing
a
place
to
the
others
向他人介绍一个地方
Australia
Play
a
guessing
game
guess
the
name
of
the
country
It
has
more
beaches
than
any
other
country
There
are
many
famous
animals
,such
as
koalas(考拉)
and
kangaroos
There
are
many
famous
places
,such
as
the
Great
Barrier
Reef
The
people
speak
English
How
many
places
are
mentioned(提及)
in
Australia?
Ayers
Rock
Sydney
Opera
House
Great
Barrier
Reef
A:
What
is
the
Sydney
Opera
House
like?
B:
It's
like
_____________________.
a
huge
sailing
boat
We
can
see
a
play
there.
A:
Where
is
it
?
(northeast
coast
of
Australia)
B:
It
lies
off
The
Great
Barrier
Reef
go
surfing/
swimming
the
northeast
coast
of
Australia.
(
guess
the
name
of
the
countryside
)
It
is
a
countryside
with
a
long
history
Huidong
It’s
in
the
east
of
Huizhou
It
is
famous
for
some
places,
such
as
Xunliao,
Nanhu
Park,
…
A:
Where
is
it?
(southwest
of
Huidong)
B:
It’s
Xunliao
巽寮
beach
A:
What
can
you
do
in
…?
B:
We
can
...
lie
in
the
sun
go
boating/surfing
/
fishing
eat
delicious
seafood
in
the
southwest
of
Huidong.
go
swimming
Nine-Dragon
Mountain
九龙峰
A:
Where
is
it
?
(west
of
Pinshan)
B:
It
is
...
in
the
west
of
Pinshan.
A:
What
can
we
do?
B:
We
can
...
climb
mountains
take
photos
A:
Where
is
it
?
(east
of
Renshan)
B:
It
is
...
in
the
east
of
Renshan.
Renshan
Forest
Park
do
sports
go
for
a
walk
have
fun
Group
work:
Work
in
groups,
discuss
and
make
lists
to
describe
Huidong.
Famous
place
activities
take
photos...
go
boating
weather
location
位置
Xunliao
food
activities
location
Forest
Park
go
riding
running
dancing...
east
southwest
go
fishing
sunny
/
hot/
warm/
cold…
delicious
seafood
location
Famous
place
take
photos
go
swimming
weather
food
Xunliao
Let‘s
talk：How
to
describe
Huidong.
Huidong
is
famous
for
_____________________________.
The
people
in
Huidong
are
__________________________.
The
weather
in
__________
is
_______________________.
__________
is
one
of
the
most
famous
places
in
Huidong.
People
can
_______________________________________.
Xunliao
go
swimming
and
take
photos
there
Xunliao
not
too
cold
or
not
too
hot
activities
friendly
and
kind
Xunliao
civilized
city
美丽惠东
Hello,boys
and
girls.
I
am
going
to
visit
Huidong.
Can
you
tell
me
something
about
Huidong?
惠东正在争创全国文明城市，构建和谐惠东。习主席想来参观
惠东，来之前想了解下惠东，请根据内容提示用英语写一封信，
简要介绍惠东，不少于80词。
1.惠东的地理位置（惠州东部）。
2.惠东的气候如何。
3.介绍你认为惠东比较著名的值得游玩的一个地方。(详细介绍
2-3个方面)
Writing
practice
Dear
President
Xi,
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
are
coming
to
visit
Huidong.
Let
me
tell
you
something
about
Huidong.
________________________________________________________________________________
beginning
body
____________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Tom
位置+天气+介绍值得游玩的一个地方
ending
惠东是一个游玩的好地方。
一般现在时
Beginning
Writing
Body
Ending
第一段：I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
are
coming
to
visit
Huidong.
Let
me
tell
you
something
about
Huidong.
(已给出)
第二段：
1.惠东位于惠州的东部。
（1分）
Huidong
is
in
the
…
2.惠东的天气
（1分）
The
weather
in
Huidong
is
…
3.
介绍一个好玩的地方(2~3方面)
(4分)
…
is
one
of
the
famous
place…
The
people
there
…
（性格、语言）
People
can
…
(活动、食物)
People
also
can
…
第三段：惠东是一个游玩的好地方。欢迎来惠东。
(1分）
In
a
word,
Hiudong
is
…
注意事项：tense
(时态)，spelling(拼写)，
punctuation
(标点)，capitalization(
大写字母)
查（check
by
yourself）
Read
your
passage
aloud,
then
check
it
by
yourself.
1.要点齐了吗？
2.句子结构对了吗？
3.句子连贯吗？
4.单词都写对了吗？
5.有没错误的语法？
6.书写整洁吗？
大声朗读文章并检查是否符合以下要求
展示（show
your
passage）
内容分：7分
（1）惠东的地理位置（惠州东部）。（1分）
（2）惠东的气候如何。（1分）
（3）介绍你认为惠东比较著名的值得游玩的一个地方。(详细介绍
2-3个方面)（4分）
语言分：8分
第一档：8分
内容涵盖所有的要点，表达准确，意思连贯,符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误。
第二档：6-7分
内容涵盖绝大多数的要点，表达清楚，意思连贯，符合逻辑，但有少数语言错误。
第三档：4-5分
内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚、连贯，但有一些语言错误。
第四档：1-3分
内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但整体表达不连贯，却语言错误较多。
第五档：0分
空白卷或完全没有相关内容。
评分档次和要求：
小组活动：小组选出一篇作文进行欣赏并打分。（15分标准）
欣赏角度：
1.写作基本要求：人称，时态
2.要点齐全
3.结构：开头，正文，结尾
4.好词好句
注意（作文通用修改符号：优美句子~，漏词∧
，错词O，去掉/）
请把课堂上所写的介绍自己家乡，宣传家乡特色的短文补充完整。不少于80词。
Dear
President
Xi,
I’m
glad
to
hear
that
you
are
coming
to
visit
Huidong
.
Let
me
tell
you
something
about
Huidong.
Huidong
is
in
the
west
of
Huizhou.
Xunliao
is
one
of
the
most
famous
place
in
Huidong.
The
weather
is
not
hot
in
summer
and
not
cold
in
winter.
The
beaches
are
beautiful
and
clean.
So
millions
of
people
go
to
Xunliao
every
year.
You
can
lie
in
the
sun,
go
swimming
and
go
boating
there.
You
can
also
take
some
beautiful
photos
and
eat
delicious
seafood.
In
short,
Huidong
is
a
good
place
to
visit
.People
in
Huidong
are
kind
and
friendly
.
I
am
looking
forward
to
your
coming!
(90
words)
Yours,
Tom