Unit 5 What an adventure!
Writing about a diving experience
【文体解读】
1. 话题特点
故事性记叙文是以叙事为主要方式、以写人物的经历和事物发展变化为主要内容的一种文体。在写作时, 要把握好记叙文的六个要素, 即五个W和一个H, 时间(when), 地点(where), 人物(who), 事件(what), 原因(why)和过程(how)。
结构: 常见的故事性记叙文的结构常分为三段:
第一段: 交代事情发生的时间、地点、人物等要素。
第二段: 进一步叙述发生了什么事以及如何发生的, 在必要时可加入冲突, 以达到故事高潮。
第三段: 结尾要尽量自然, 做到水到渠成, 可适当谈一下自己的感想, 发表自己的看法, 以达到升华文章主题的目的, 但不宜过多。
2. 话题词汇
①hear听到
②consider考虑
③intend打算
④meet遇到
⑤find发现
⑥adventure冒险
⑦experience经历
⑧start out/off出发
⑨without delay/hesitation毫不迟延/犹豫
⑩learn. . . by heart记住
3. 话题句式(试着替换黑体部分, 变成你需要
表达的意思)
①Seeing this/Hearing this, I ran over to him as soon
as possible.
看见/听见这种情况, 我尽快朝他跑了过去。
②I was taking a walk by the lake when I saw a man
fall off the bicycle .
我正在湖边散步, 这时我看见一个人从自行车上摔了
下来。
③Without hesitation/Without a word, I decided to
help him .
二话没说, 我决定去帮助他。
④What surprised/attracted/delighted us most was
that the sky was so clear .
最使我们吃惊的(吸引我们的/使我们高兴的)是那里的
天空这么晴朗。
⑤Tired as we were, we learned what we couldn’t
learn in school .
尽管很累, 但我们学到了在学校学不到的东西。
⑥I’ll never forget the day which/that we spent on the
farm .
我永远都不会忘记在农场度过的这天。
【布局】
如何写好故事性记叙文
【范例点评】
My Experience in the Morning Fog
Fog is a natural phenomenon. It usually appears in the morning, which makes people can’t see clearly.
It is Tuesday today. I got up very early to do
some jogging as usual. When I got out of the building,
I found that I was surrounded by the fog. I didn’t
know whether I was in a dream or not, because
everything was not clear. The street lights seemed far
away, like stars in the sky. I couldn’t see anything or
anybody three meters away. I could only hear some sounds. Suddenly I heard the sound of a car, but when the driver saw me, the car almost knocked me down. It’s too dangerous, but I was safe. Just my hair was wet.
The morning fog was gradually disappearing when the sun rose in the east. All the things were clear again. However, I can never forget this day.
【迁移训练】
某英文杂志栏目向读者征集有关消费者受广告欺骗而购物的文章, 请你参照以下四幅图片, 给该英文杂志栏目写一篇关于你购买照相机的经历。
注意: 1. 词数80左右;
2. 可适当发挥, 以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 冲洗develop; 胶卷film
【遣词】
1. 承诺_______
2. 在……前面_________?
3. 出售_______
4. 情不自禁做某事___________________
5. 两卷__________?
promise
in front of
on sale?
can’t help doing sth. ?
two rolls of
6. 迫不及待去做某事_________________?
7. 照相__________?
8. 吃惊_____________?
9. 出版; (照片)冲洗_________
10. 对……要明智_____________?
can’t wait to do sth.
take photos
be surprised to
come out?
be smart about
【造句】
1. 完成句子
(1)人们离不开广告。
People ______ ___ _____ _____ advertisements.
(2)广告承诺便宜的商品和免费的礼品。
Advertisements _______ ______ _____ and free gifts.
cannot
get
away
from
promise
cheap
goods
(3)我买照相机的经历很糟糕。
I ____ __ ____ ____ __________ __ buying a camera.
(4)我走在街上, 在一家商店前看到一则广告。
I ____ _______ in the street and ____ ___ ____________
in front of a shop. ?
had
a
very
bad
experience
of
was
walking
saw
an
advertisement
(5)这则广告说这种照相机只卖20元。
The advertisement ____ ____ the cameras were on
sale for only 20 yuan each.
says
that
(6)我看到了诱人的价格, 忍不住走进商店买了一部相
机和两卷胶卷。
I saw the _________ ______, and ________ ____
________ the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of
films.
attractive
prices
couldn’t
help
entering
(7)我很兴奋, 迫不及待地邀请我的朋友去附近的公园
拍照。
I was so excited that I ________ ____ __ invite my
friends to take photos in the nearby park.
(8)我们玩得很开心, 在附近的公园里拍了很多照片。
We ____ __ _____ ____ and took lots of photos in the
nearby park.
couldn’t
wait
to
had
a
good
time
(9)我被告知了事实, 我的照片一张也没有洗出来。
I ____ ____ the fact that none of my photos _____ ___.
was
told
came
out
2. 句式升级
(10)用定语从句合并(1)(2)句
People cannot get away from advertisements ______
_______ cheap goods and free gifts.
which
promise
(11)用时间状语从句改写(4)并用现在分词合并(4)(5)
句
______ _ ____ _______ __ the street, I saw an
advertisement in front of a shop saying that the
cameras were on sale for only 20 yuan each.
When
I
was
walking
in
(12)用现在分词形式改写(6)句
______ ___ _________ ______, I couldn’t help entering
the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of films.
Seeing
the
attractive
prices
(13)用定语从句合并(7)(8)句
I was so excited that I couldn’t wait to invite my
friends to take photos in the nearby park, ______ ___
____ __ _____ ____ and took lots of photos.
where
we
had
a
good
time
【成篇】
People cannot get away from advertisements which promise cheap goods and free gifts. I had a very bad experience of buying a camera.
Last Wednesday, when I was walking in the street, I saw an advertisement in front of a shop saying that the cameras were on sale for only 20 yuan
each. Seeing the attractive prices, I couldn’t help entering the shop to buy one camera and two rolls of
films.
I was so excited that I couldn’t wait to invite my friends to take photos in the nearby park, where we had a good time and took lots of photos. After that, I sent the films to a shop to be developed.
Unfortunately, when I went to collect my photos this morning, I was surprised to be told that none of my photos came out. At that time, I regretted getting a bargain for 20 yuan and I thought I should be smart about advertisements in future and not be tricked by them.