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C. 看图说话类作文
看图说话类作文可以分为一幅图和多幅图. 一幅图作文多为议论文; 多幅图作文多为记叙文.
它的写作步骤是:
认真审题, 确立主题与体裁 (说明文、记叙文还是议论文)
确定人称。明确人物、地点、事件、时间
确定短文的时态（应使用过去时还是现在时）
围绕主题，提炼要点；合理想象，补全要点（确定要使用的关键词语）
解图时得到的信息可能比较杂乱，这就要根据主旨列出主要情节。如果是一幅图，一般要有五、六个点；如果是几幅图，每幅也要列出一、两个要点，然后进行思维加工。
变词为句，连句成篇，过渡自然
通篇检查，润色改错
注意事项：
文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么
图中找出意义连续的内容并对其进行加工
围绕主题，合理想象。切记游离于主题展开不着边际的联想
巧用连接词，要注意文章的首尾呼应
优秀图画作文必备特点：
题目要求及图画中的要点无遗漏
结构规范，思路清晰
词汇丰富，句子结构变化有致。
写作实例：
下列四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历。请根据画面及图中的有关提示，用第三人称的口吻写一篇100字左右的短文。
注意：可以适当增加细节，并展开合理的想象，使故事完整连贯
写作指导：
结合文字，认真看图，确立主题与体裁
根据 “四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历”一段文字提示，结合第一幅图中的日历上所表示的时间（3月8日），我们可以确立本篇书面表达的主题是：李华要做些家务来为他的妈妈庆祝“3。8”妇女节。
体裁：记叙文
确定人称与时态（本篇书面表达描述了李华一家某一天的经历，使用过去时）
围绕主题，提炼要点
围绕确立的主题，初步列出每幅图的要点
第一幅图：李华把他的主意告诉父亲
第二幅图：李华扫地、父亲洗衣服
第三幅图：李华和父亲下厨房做菜
第四幅图：餐桌上有花、饮料、鱼、肉等等
合理想象，补出要点
将四幅图结合在一起，对每幅图中的各个细节进行合理想象，将隐藏的要点补出来，使故事连贯。
第一幅图：李华为什么要把他的主意告诉父亲：求得父亲的帮助或配合。On March the eighth, Women’s Day, LiHua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him.
第二幅图：李华和父亲为什么要选择做家务：这些家务平时都是由母亲做的。They decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house and his father did some washing.
第三幅图：可以想象他们做了除图画中表现出的：fish, pork外，还可能做了其他菜。比如：chicken, soup and other delicious dishes. They made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes.
第四幅图：这幅图中没有一个人出现，连母亲的影子也没有。为什么，留给学生进行合理的想象：李华和父亲是不是藏起来了？其目的是什么：可能是等母亲回家时给她一个惊喜。Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. They hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother. They wanted to give her a pleasant surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very surprised and happy.
连句子成篇，过渡自然
对列出的要点进行合理的组合，加上必要的连接词或词语使过渡自然。再加上必要的结束语使文章的首尾呼应。
学生习作点评：
①On Women’s Day, LiHua told his father that he was going to do something to congratulate it for his mother. He asked his father to help him. ②First they decided to do some houseworks.
③LiHua cleaned the house completely but his father did some washing. Then they made a good meal together. ④LiHua laid the table and set a vase full of flower in the middle of the table. ⑤After that they hid themselves behind the door, waited for Mother. ⑥When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she is very surprised and extremely happy. The family had a pleasant festival.
①congratulate改为celebrate. ②housework为不可数名词；houseworks改为housework. ③but改为while，表示转折和对照。④flower为可数名词，在此应为复数，后加s。⑤waited改为waiting作伴随状语。⑥is改为was.
[总评]文章基本能清楚完整地表现了图画主题。但词语使用不规范，前后时态不一致等问题使得该文章泛善可陈。
高分作文：
It was March the eighth that day, Women’s Day. Lihua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. Lihua cleaned the house completely while his father did some washing. Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes. Lihua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. After that they hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother so as to give her a pleasant surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very surprised and extremely happy. The family had a pleasant festival.
看图说话类作文还常常用日记的形式考查，日记应注意以下几点：
1．日记多用过去时，一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所以有时需要借助一些表示先后顺序的词语。如：at first, then, later on, afterwards, soon, finally, at last. 等。
2．日记一般用第一人称。
3．日记的格式：一般是在左上角记上当天的日期（年月日），星期；右上角写上当天的天气情况。
写作实例：
为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
解析：
审题。
列要点
I woke up at nine o’clock this morning
I got dressed. I rushed into the living room. Mother was preparing breakfast there.
I got on my bike
When I got to the school, I found the school the school gate was closed.
3. 补充隐含要点，使文章上下文之间衔接
Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 o’clock.
I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly
Before she could say anything, I got my school-bag
I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late so I rode as fast as I could
It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school.
参考范文：
Sunday, May 20, 2008 Fine
I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination. It was not until 12 o’clock last night that I went to bed. When I woke up this morning, I found it was already 9 o’clock. I got dressed, brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly. Then I rushed into the living-room, where mother was preparing breakfast. Before she could say anything, I got my school-bag, ran out and got on my bike. I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late so I rode as fast as I could. It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school. To my surprise, I found the school gate was closed. It was then that I realized it was Sunday.
看图说话类作文有时只有一幅图，这种作文一般表现为议论文。
写作实例：
请看下面的这幅漫画，联系实际生活，以 “Saving Water”为题写一篇短文，词数100左右。
写作模板：
As can be seen in the picture, 图画内容, The picture tells us 图片的大致意思
The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1. Second, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2
In my opinion/ As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First , we should 具体措施1 . Second, we must 具体措施2. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容
学生习作：
As can be seen/ As is described / As is shown in the picture, the drinking water is running without anyone using it. The picture tells us now many people pay no attention to saving water.
The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, water is the source of life, without which there could be no life on the earth. Second, there is very limited available water resources on our planet, and excessive using of water can make the situation from bad to worse. And this social problem should arise the great concern of all in the world.
In my opinion / As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First, we should make all the people know the importance of water and the fact that water resources are limited. Second, we must pass some laws to punish those who waste water. Only in this way can we solve the problem of water wasting.
点评：
本文采取三段论的方式：叙述图画，分析图画，提出建议。叙述简明扼要，分析切中要点，建议切实可行。本文用了to begin with, second; first, second; in my opinion等衔接语，使得文章非常连贯。此外，文章最后用了例装结构，属较高级的句型，增添了文章的色彩。
学生练习评讲：
第一篇：
假设你是红星中学高三.一班的学生李华, 为校刊英语园地写一篇题为 “Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件. 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程.
注意: 词数不少于90
参考词汇: 游乐园 amusement 垃圾箱 bin
参考文章：
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二篇：
全世界的环境问题在变得越来越严重. 请你根据漫画内容和下面要求给写一封信反映这一情况, 并提出保护环境的建议.
注意: 1. 信的开头与结尾已给出, 不计算在总词数内.
2. 词数: 100左右
3. 参考词汇: 人口膨胀 population expansion 过度开发 overdevelopment
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gases. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has bought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take action to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.
看图说话类作文可以分为一幅图和多幅图. 一幅图作文多为议论文; 多幅图作文多为记叙文.
它的写作步骤是:
认真审题, 确立主题与体裁 (说明文、记叙文还是议论文)
确定人称。明确人物、地点、事件、时间
确定短文的时态（应使用过去时还是现在时）
围绕主题，提炼要点；合理想象，补全要点（确定要使用的关键词语）
解图时得到的信息可能比较杂乱，这就要根据主旨列出主要情节。如果是一幅图，一般要有五、六个点；如果是几幅图，每幅也要列出一、两个要点，然后进行思维加工。
变词为句，连句成篇，过渡自然
通篇检查，润色改错
注意事项：
文字和图画，确立所要表达的主题是什么
图中找出意义连续的内容并对其进行加工
围绕主题，合理想象。切记游离于主题展开不着边际的联想
巧用连接词，要注意文章的首尾呼应
优秀图画作文必备特点：
题目要求及图画中的要点无遗漏
结构规范，思路清晰
词汇丰富，句子结构变化有致。
写作实例：
下列四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历。请根据画面及图中的有关提示，用第三人称的口吻写一篇100字左右的短文。
注意：可以适当增加细节，并展开合理的想象，使故事完整连贯
写作指导：
结合文字，认真看图，确立主题与体裁
根据 “四幅图描述了李华一家某一天的经历”一段文字提示，结合第一幅图中的日历上所表示的时间（3月8日），我们可以确立本篇书面表达的主题是：李华要做些家务来为他的妈妈庆祝“3。8”妇女节。
体裁：记叙文
确定人称与时态（本篇书面表达描述了李华一家某一天的经历，使用过去时）
围绕主题，提炼要点
围绕确立的主题，初步列出每幅图的要点
第一幅图：李华把他的主意告诉父亲
第二幅图：李华扫地、父亲洗衣服
第三幅图：李华和父亲下厨房做菜
第四幅图：餐桌上有花、饮料、鱼、肉等等
合理想象，补出要点
将四幅图结合在一起，对每幅图中的各个细节进行合理想象，将隐藏的要点补出来，使故事连贯。
第一幅图：李华为什么要把他的主意告诉父亲：求得父亲的帮助或配合。On March the eighth, Women’s Day, LiHua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him.
第二幅图：李华和父亲为什么要选择做家务：这些家务平时都是由母亲做的。They decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. LiHua cleaned the house and his father did some washing.
第三幅图：可以想象他们做了除图画中表现出的：fish, pork外，还可能做了其他菜。比如：chicken, soup and other delicious dishes. They made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes.
第四幅图：这幅图中没有一个人出现，连母亲的影子也没有。为什么，留给学生进行合理的想象：李华和父亲是不是藏起来了？其目的是什么：可能是等母亲回家时给她一个惊喜。Li Hua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. They hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother. They wanted to give her a pleasant surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very surprised and happy.
连句子成篇，过渡自然
对列出的要点进行合理的组合，加上必要的连接词或词语使过渡自然。再加上必要的结束语使文章的首尾呼应。
学生习作点评：
①On Women’s Day, LiHua told his father that he was going to do something to congratulate it for his mother. He asked his father to help him. ②First they decided to do some houseworks.
③LiHua cleaned the house completely but his father did some washing. Then they made a good meal together. ④LiHua laid the table and set a vase full of flower in the middle of the table. ⑤After that they hid themselves behind the door, waited for Mother. ⑥When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she is very surprised and extremely happy. The family had a pleasant festival.
①congratulate改为celebrate. ②housework为不可数名词；houseworks改为housework. ③but改为while，表示转折和对照。④flower为可数名词，在此应为复数，后加s。⑤waited改为waiting作伴随状语。⑥is改为was.
[总评]文章基本能清楚完整地表现了图画主题。但词语使用不规范，前后时态不一致等问题使得该文章泛善可陈。
高分作文：
It was March the eighth that day, Women’s Day. Lihua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it. He asked his father to help him. First they decided to do some housework, which was always done by his mother. Lihua cleaned the house completely while his father did some washing. Then they made a good meal, cooking fish, pork, chicken, soup and some other delicious dishes. Lihua laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table. After that they hid themselves behind the door, waiting for Mother so as to give her a pleasant surprise. When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table, she felt very surprised and extremely happy. The family had a pleasant festival.
看图说话类作文还常常用日记的形式考查，日记应注意以下几点：
1．日记多用过去时，一般按事情发生的先后顺序记述，所以有时需要借助一些表示先后顺序的词语。如：at first, then, later on, afterwards, soon, finally, at last. 等。
2．日记一般用第一人称。
3．日记的格式：一般是在左上角记上当天的日期（年月日），星期；右上角写上当天的天气情况。
写作实例：
为迎接高考，你常常复习功课到深夜。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
解析：
审题。
列要点
I woke up at nine o’clock this morning
I got dressed. I rushed into the living room. Mother was preparing breakfast there.
I got on my bike
When I got to the school, I found the school the school gate was closed.
3. 补充隐含要点，使文章上下文之间衔接
Last night I didn’t go to bed until 12 o’clock.
I brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly
Before she could say anything, I got my school-bag
I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late so I rode as fast as I could
It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school.
参考范文：
Sunday, May 20, 2008 Fine
I often stay up late to go over my lessons for college entrance examination. It was not until 12 o’clock last night that I went to bed. When I woke up this morning, I found it was already 9 o’clock. I got dressed, brushed my teeth and washed my face quickly. Then I rushed into the living-room, where mother was preparing breakfast. Before she could say anything, I got my school-bag, ran out and got on my bike. I was afraid that I would be punished by the teacher because of being late so I rode as fast as I could. It seemed only a few minutes before I got to the school. To my surprise, I found the school gate was closed. It was then that I realized it was Sunday.
看图说话类作文有时只有一幅图，这种作文一般表现为议论文。
写作实例：
请看下面的这幅漫画，联系实际生活，以 “Saving Water”为题写一篇短文，词数100左右。
写作模板：
As can be seen in the picture, 图画内容, The picture tells us 图片的大致意思
The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, 揭示涵义/原因/结果1. Second, 揭示涵义/原因/结果2
In my opinion/ As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First , we should 具体措施1 . Second, we must 具体措施2. Only in this way can we solve the problem of 图画内容
学生习作：
As can be seen/ As is described / As is shown in the picture, the drinking water is running without anyone using it. The picture tells us now many people pay no attention to saving water.
The implied meaning of this picture should be taken into consideration seriously. To begin with, water is the source of life, without which there could be no life on the earth. Second, there is very limited available water resources on our planet, and excessive using of water can make the situation from bad to worse. And this social problem should arise the great concern of all in the world.
In my opinion / As for me, we should take strong measures to deal with the problem. First, we should make all the people know the importance of water and the fact that water resources are limited. Second, we must pass some laws to punish those who waste water. Only in this way can we solve the problem of water wasting.
点评：
本文采取三段论的方式：叙述图画，分析图画，提出建议。叙述简明扼要，分析切中要点，建议切实可行。本文用了to begin with, second; first, second; in my opinion等衔接语，使得文章非常连贯。此外，文章最后用了例装结构，属较高级的句型，增添了文章的色彩。
学生练习评讲：
第一篇：
假设你是红星中学高三.一班的学生李华, 为校刊英语园地写一篇题为 “Our Spring Outing” 的英文稿件. 请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序, 叙述上周你们班从准备春游到春游结束的完整过程.
注意: 词数不少于90
参考词汇: 游乐园 amusement 垃圾箱 bin
参考文章：
Last Thursday, we had a class meeting to discuss where to go for our spring outing. We came up with several choices such as going boating, climbing a mountain, and going to an amusement park. Finally, we decided to go mountain climbing.
The next day, we set off early in the morning. While climbing the mountain, we enjoyed the warm sunshine and a beautiful view. However, when reached the top, we were shocked to see litter here and there, such as bottles and banana peels. Then we started to pick up the litter. Afterwards, we put the rubbish into the nearby recycling bin and non-recycling bin respectively.
We were tired but happy.
第二篇：
全世界的环境问题在变得越来越严重. 请你根据漫画内容和下面要求给写一封信反映这一情况, 并提出保护环境的建议.
注意: 1. 信的开头与结尾已给出, 不计算在总词数内.
2. 词数: 100左右
3. 参考词汇: 人口膨胀 population expansion 过度开发 overdevelopment
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
With the development of industry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gases. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has bought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take action to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.