Unit 3 Teenage problems Writing 课件27张

Writing
“Stress among teenagers”
Problems and ways to solve them
parents
homework
low
marks
friends
…
being
weak/fat
A: I have a problem./I am worried about…
A: Can you give me some advice?/
What should I do?
A: Thanks …
B: I’m sorry to hear that. What’s the problem?/Oh dear, can I help?
…
B: Why not…?/My advice is to…/
I think one way to solve the problem is to…
B: My pleasure.
Warming-up: make a dialogue
Lead-in
Teenage problems
Having no close friends
Too noisy at home
Too much homework
Getting low marks
Parents have no time for you
Not having enough sleep
All these problems may cause stress.
Here's a quiz about good or bad ways to deal with the stress problems.
Go through it, it may give you some ideas.
Quiz
Stress is a serious problem among teenagers.
Many students of your age have stress problems.
Finish the quiz and circle the answers or think about better answers.
1. If someone laughs at you, you should ____.
a shout at him/her
b hit him/her
c pay no attention to him/her
2. If you do not have enough time to do your
homework, you should _____.
a choose to do only part of it
b forget about your homework
c plan your time more carefully
3. When it is too noisy at home and you cannot do your work, you should _____.
a tell your family
b get angry
c leave the house
4. If you worry about exams, you should ______.
a give up
b watch TV to relax
c talk to your teacher(s)
5. If you are feeling stressed, you should
_____.
a shout at people
b keep quiet
c share your problem with somebody
6. The problem of stress gets worse when
you _____.
a keep it to yourself
b relax and take a holiday
c ask for friends’ help
Millie
problems
suggestions
too much
homework
plan the time carefully
no time for
hobbies
choose one hobby each day
?The cause of her stress is too much homework.
? One way to solve her problem is to
plan the time carefully.
n.原因
? Millie feels stressed.
? Millie feels stressed.
?Millie feels stressed.
?The cause of her stress is __________________.
?One way to solve her problem is to
________________________.
no time for hobbies
choose one hobby each day
Pre-writing
Simon
problem
suggestion
too much
time on
football
go home
earlier
? Millie feels stressed.
?Simon feels stressed.
?The cause of his stress is ____________________.
?One way to solve his problem is to
________________.
too much time on football
go home earlier
Wang Lin feels stressed .
The cause of his stress is
_____________________ .
One way to solve his problem is to
____________________ .
Gu fan feels stressed.
The cause of his stress is
___________________ .
One way to solve his problem is to
___________________ .
Class activity
Use as many sentences as you can (no more than six sentences).
Please help your classmates to solve their problems.Four students in a group. Prepare a report and then present your report to us orally(口头地).
Thank you for telling me about your problems.
You are unhappy with ….
Many students of our age have this problem.
What/How about …?
You also worry about ….
You always feel sad/angry/stressed about ….
Why don’t you/not …?
I hope you think my advice/suggestions is/are worth taking.
A: I have a problem./I am worried about…
A: Can you give me some advice?/
What should I do?
A: Thanks …
How to deal with it
take more exercise
listen to the teacher carefully
talk about problems with teachers
plan my time carefully
Cause of stress: study
not good at sport
have difficulty working out problems
too much homework, cannot finish it on time
worry a lot about exams
Cause of stress: friends
laugh at me
have no close friends
quarrel with my best friend
pay no attention to these students
forgive them for their mistakes
be friendly to others
How to deal with it
Cause of stress: parents
too noisy at home
have no time for me
care only about marks
talk with my parents
let my parents see my progress
try to understand them
How to deal with it
Task
Help Millie complete her email and offer suggestions to Raymond.
Raymond
be
Be unhappy with his weight
worry about exams
Dear Raymond
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.
You are unhappy with your weight, but you do not know how to change it. Many students of our age have this problem. (1)______________________
_______________________________________.
You also worry about exams. Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam, so you always feel stressed. (2)____________________
_______________________________________?
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Millie
I think you can take more exercise and eat fewer snacks
Why not talk to your parents about it
Share your advice!
Dear Raymond
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.
You are unhappy with your weight, but you do not know how to change it. Many students of our age have this problem. (1)______________________
_______________________________________.
You also worry about exams. Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam, so you always feel stressed. (2)____________________
_______________________________________?
I hope you think my advice is worth taking.
Best wishes,
Millie
Perhaps you should spend more time taking exercise every day
Why not talk to your parents about it
Part2 Main body
Part3 Conclusion
Part1 Introduction
Structure
Learn how to write a reply
3 parts
Main body
Conclusion
What does each part tell?
Part 1 para 1
Part 2 para 2-3
Part 3 para 4
Introduction
(Thanks)
(Problems & suggestions)
(Your hope)
3 parts
(Thanks)
(Problems & suggestions)
(Your hope)
Useful expressions
Thank you for telling me about your problems.
You are unhappy with ….
Many students of our age have this problem.
What/How about …?
You also worry about ….
You always feel sad/angry/stressed about ….
Why don’t you/not …?
I hope you think my advice/suggestions is/are worth taking.
The types of mistakes in writing
a. word usage mistakes
b. punctuation mistakes
c. wrong tense
d. spelling mistakes
e. missing word
第一档：13 — 15 分
上下连贯，意思完整，语言通顺，表达清楚，很少有语法错误和拼写错误。
第二档：9 — 12 分
上下基本连贯，语言基本通顺，表达较清楚，少有语法错误和拼写错误。
第三档：5 — 8 分
上下不连贯，语言不通顺，表达不清楚，有较多语法错误和拼写错误。
第四档：0 — 4 分
上下不连贯，语言不通顺，表达不清楚，有大量语法错误和拼写错误。
The Grading Standard （评分标准）
?
The writing evaluation table (评价表)
评 分 标 准
评价
相关性
1
Are all the paragraphs about teenage problems?
得体性
2
Do you use ‘you’ in your reply?
3
Do you use the Simple Present Tense?
4
Do you organize your ideas well and tell others two points “problems” and “suggestions”?
准确性
5
Are there any errors in tense of the verbs, the usage of the vocabulary and mistakes in spelling, capital letters or punctuations?
创造性
6
Do you try to use good epressions and different sentence structures to write about your reply?
7
Do you try to make your suggestions valuable?
连贯性
8
Do you try to use proper linking words to make your letter more fluent (流畅)?
美观性
9
Is your handwriting beautiful and tidy?
/
Final marks
What do you think of your own first draft?
Love Your Life　　　 热爱生活
Henry David Thoreau 　　　　　享利.大卫.梭罗
However hard your life is, 不论你的生活如坎坷，
Meet it and live it, 你要面对它。
Do not call it hard names. 可别用恶言咒骂它，
It is not so bad as you see. 它不像你看见的那样坏。
It looks saddest when you are happiest.
你将最快乐的时候，看似却最悲伤，
Love your life, hard as it is.
你要热爱生活，尽管它看似困苦。
Hold fast to dreams, 把握梦想,
You will get success. 你一定会成功。
Poem- sharing
Homework
Discuss more teenage problems and the ways to solve them .
Finish the letter about your problems.