(共22张PPT)
Unit 1 Friends
Task
May
big bright eyes
long straight hair
shorter than ...
looks
pretty
Revision
Daniel is going to write about his best friend, too. But he meets many new words. Let’s learn about them.
She has a ______ face.
The man is too _____.
He looks__________.
square
fat
handsome
She always wears a ________on her face.
It’s a _______face.
smile n. & vt. 微笑
smiling adj. 微笑的
smile
smiling
The policeman is very _______with his work.
They are_____________.
All her lessons are_________.
excellent 杰出的,极好的
patient
hard-working
excellent
Sample writing
Best friend
Looks (general)
Face
Eyes
Nose
Hair
personality
Future plans
Kate
round
bright, smiling
small
long
tall, slim
friendly, patient, helpful
a teacher
My best friend (Outline)
Say who your best friend is.
总体介绍
主体部分
Describe her looks and personality.
小结
Write about his/her future plans.
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
para1
para2
para3
para4
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Kate is both my neighbour and my best friend. I first met her five years ago.
Paragraph 1
1. Introduction
Can you introduce your best friends like this
Kate is tall and slim. She has long hair. She has a round face and a small nose. I like her bright smiling eyes. They make her look really pretty and kind.
Paragraph 2
Find the details (细节) about her looks.
2. Looks
Square straight handsome fat good-looking cute …
General appearance
Can you describe your best friends like this
Kate is a friendly girl. She always has a smile on her face and looks happy. She likes to help people. She helps me with my homework and she is very patient. When I feel bored or unhappy, I often go to her. She will talk to me and tell me interesting things.
Paragraph 3
What is she like
3. Personality
a topic sentence
supporting details
+
generous humorous true sweet …
Can you describe your best
friends like this
friendly
helpful
patient
Kate wants to work with children. She would like to be a teacher when she grows up. I think she will make an excellent teacher.
Paragraph 4
4. Future plans
love drawing
an artist
help people with their problems and make people happy
a social worker
Do you know your best friends’ future plans
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What would you like to write about your friend
Future plans
______________
Looks
__________________
Personality
__________________
My
friend
...
Time to practice
Write your own article about your best friend
评价表
结构 总分为4分。分4段,得2分。段首空5个字符,得2分。
内容 总分为12分。介绍朋友姓名时总分为2分。每一个句子得1分,2分得完为止。介绍朋友外貌时总分为3分。有总体介绍得1分,细节描写每一个得0.5分,2分得完为止。介绍特性时,总分为5分。句子结构为a topic sentence+supporting details得2分。每一组以上结构得1分,3分得完为止。
介绍朋友未来计划时,原因给1分,计划给1分。
语言 总分为4分。每用一个连词给0.5分,每用一个长句给1分。4分给完为止。
总分
Time to share
1.Volunteers: share your articles with all the class.
2.Share your articles with your partners and give your partners a suitable mark.
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1. The best part of my article is:
2. The part that still needs work is:
3. The next time I write a descriptive article, I would like to:
Reflecting on your writing (反思)
Writing helps you …
Share with others.
Have fun …
Exercise your brain.
Learn more about yourself.
Writing helps you …
Share with others.
Have fun …
Exercise your brain.
Learn more about yourself.
(1) Revise and improve your writing.
(2) Choose the best articles and put them on the wall.
Homework
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