A Writing Lesson
Her mother
Enjoy an English song.
Who does “you” mean in the song?
Party
Beautiful flowers and colorful balloons(气球)
Interesting games , you will play with others
Red candles(蜡烛) and delicious cakes
Tasty(美味的) foods for everybody
Happy time you sure to have
Different presents, big surprises
Amazing music you will enjoy
Your family and friends get together
This is an Acrostic poem(藏头诗)!
Beautiful flowers and colorful balloons[b?`lu?n]
Interesting games , you will play with others
Red candles and delicious cakes
Tasty foods for everybody
Happy time you are sure to have
Different presents, big surprise
Amazing music you can enjoy
Your family and friends get together
Birthday!
Please use
The Simple Future Tense
Will +do
Questions
Beautiful flowers and colorful balloons
Interesting games , you will get a prize
Red candles and delicious cakes
Tasty foods for everybody
Happy time you expect
Different presents big surprise
Amazing music you can enjoy
Your family and friends get together
Birthday Party
What will you do to prepare for(准备) the party?
What will do to prepare for the party?
buy a lot of things
cook delicious foods
make/buy a birtyday cake
make a birthday card
play games
listen to the music
show thanks
give the best wishes
sing the birthday song
cut the cake
eat the cake
enjoy delicious foods
How will you and your family members celebrate the party?
make a wish
blow out the candles
cut the cake
open the presents
enjoy the cake and delicious food
What will your mother do at the party?
eat long life noodles
What will you say to your mother at the party?
my mother’s birthday.
for her .
buy a lot of things such as
a big cake and delicious foods. make a
birthday card to show my thanks.
play different kinds of
games . sing the birthday song.
make a wish ,blow out the
candles . eat the cake together.
I am sure enjoy the party.
My mother’s birthday party
I will
I will
we will
we will
My mother will
we will
my mother will
will be
will
Tomorrow
hold a birthday party
at home
I
When
__________
Who
__________
How
__________
My mother’s birthday party
What
__________
birthday party
Where
__________
Tomorrow will be my mother’s birthday. I will
hold a birthday party for her at home.
. I will buy a lot of things such as
a big cake and delicious foods. I will make a
birthday card to show my thanks.
we will play different kinds of
games . we will sing the birthday song.
my mother will make a wish ,blow out the
candles . we will eat the cake together.
I am sure my mother will enjoy the party.
My mother’s birthday party
Before the party
At the party
first
Then
Next
Last
Tomorrow my mother’s birthday.
hold a birthday party for her at home.
buy a lot of things such as
a big cake and delicious foods. make a
birthday card to show my thanks.
play different kinds of
games . sing the birthday song.
make a wish ,blow out the
candles . eat the cake together.
I am sure enjoy the party.
My mother’s birthday party
I will
I will
we will
we will
my mother will
we will
my mother will
Before the party
At the party
first
Next
Then
Finally
will be
I will
Writing
Connecting words
Time order
Step words:
first next then finally
The Simple FutureTense
will+do
Peer Checklist 同伴评价表
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After reading my classmate's passage, I know
★Who will hold the party YES / NO
★where he/she will hold the party YES / NO
★when he/she will hold the party YES / NO
★what he/she will do before the party YES / NO
★how he/she will hold the party YES / NO
In my classmate's passage, I can find the following features:
★will+do: YES / NO
★Connecting words (time order): YES / NO
★Sequent words: YES / NO
Total: ________★
At the end of the class,students are expected to be able to write a short passage:
My mother’s birthday party
Mother's love
Mother' s love
is the umbrella when it is raining ,
Under the umbrella
there is my small face that won 't be wet ,
Mother 's love
is the string of the kite ,
At the ends of the earth
it always hovers in my heart ,
Mother ' s love is the rhyme in my childhood ,
It will never be old
in the deep
place of my memory .
Thank you