Unit 2 Keeping Healthy Topic 3 Must we exercise to prevent the flu ? Section B 课件 30张PPT

Writing
How to keep healthy
Writing Topic:
常言道：“Your health is your life. ”。身体是革命的本钱，健康的身体是我们中学生学习的保证，请你以How to keep healthy 为题并结合自己的实际写一篇80字左右的短文。
提示：1、坚持锻炼 2 、健康饮食 3 、充足的睡眠 4 、保持愉快的心情
要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，书写工整。
How to keep healthy
Linking
Listing
Beautifying
Checking
Thinking
composition
Five-step writing method:
How to keep healthy?

写作文体
夹叙夹议文
时态
一般现在时为主
人称
第一人称
Step1 Thinking
How to keep healthy?
Eat healthy food.
Exercise often.
Have lots of sleep.
Be happy.
Help others.
…
Let's think:



How to keep healthy?
1.平衡饮食
2. 参加运动
3.充足睡眠
eat a
balanced diet
take exercise
get enough sleep
？
？
？
Step 2：listing
How many kinds of food do you know? Please make a list quickly.
Brainstorm 头脑风暴
What kind of food do you like?
beef
pork
mutton
chicken
duck
fish
rice
noodle
bread
hamburger
corn
porridge
carrot
cabbage
broccoli
potato
tomato
onion
apple
banana
pear
orange
strawberry
watermelon
Fruits:
Vegetables:
Meat:
Main food:
Eat most
A balaced diet
Eat more
Eat less
meat:
fruits:
apple、banana
pear、stawberry
oranges、grapes
watermelon
potato、 tomato、carrot、onion、cabbage
vegetabes:
pork chicken hotdog hanburger
eat a balanced diet
healthy food
unhealthy food
stay away from junk food.
junk food
bad for our health
healthy food
good for our health
eat more healthy food
how
eat
don’t eat

take exercise
play basketball
play tennis
play soccer
take a walk
swim
keep healthy
make us active and energetic
It’s necessary for us to take exercise.
get enough sleep
need eight hours’ sleep
how
don’t stay up late
go to bed early
and get up early
If we don’t get enough sleep, we will
have a headache
feel tired the next day.
or
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healthy
unhealty
how ofen
exercise
Twice a week
eat fruit
Often
go to bed early
eat vegetables
drink milk
eat junk food
drink coffee
stay up late
Never
Step 3：Linking
1. _________________a balanced diet, for example we can eat more healthy food.
2. Eating junk food ___________our health.
3. _________________ build up (增强) our bodies，help us to keep healthy.
4. Junk food __________ us fat and _________.
5. It’s important ____________________.
__________________stay up late.
We should have
is bad for
Doing exercise can
makes
weak
to get enough sleep
You’d better not
How to keep healthy?
Beginning
连词成段

Body
连段成篇
Ending
深化主题



As the saying goes, Your health is your life. This old saying tells us that health is important.but how to keep healthy?Here I have some advice.
Body
Ending
Firstly,
Secondly,
Finally,
All in all，I hope all of us can both do well in our study and care for our health.
Because health is not only good for our study, but also good for our life.
Linking
Beginning
How to keep healthy?
用副词(adv.)
really,truly,deeply,
quite,very….
用连词(conj.)
and,but,so,because,
when,so that,
not only...but also...
用美句
I think it is adj for sb to dosth
on the one hand,on the
other hand...
Step4 Beautifying
eg1:I love running.--I deeply fall in love running.
eg2： Health is not only good for our study, but also good for our life.
eg3:I think it is really important for us to have good habbits.
Saying: An apple a day keeps the doctor away
Where there is a will, there is a way
Beautifying:
How to keep healthy?
Are there any
mistakes?

Is your handwriting
good?

Are there any
good phrases and
sentences?
Step5 Checking
Check the following:
要点是否全面
逻辑是否合理
人称是否正确
时态是否正确
语序是否正确
主谓是否一致
语言是否符合习惯

Firstly, we should have a balanced diet. Vegetables and fruit are good for our health. Besides, stay away from junk food, it makes us fat and weak. Secondly, it’s necessary to take exercise. Doing exercise can make us active and energetic. Finally, we need at least eight hours’ sleep every night. If we don’t get enough sleep, we will feel tired the next day. So we’d better not stay up late.
All in all，I hope all of us can both do well in our study and care for our health. Because health is not only good for our study, but also good for our life.
One possible version
As the saying goes, Your health is your life. This old saying tells us that health is important.but how to keep healthy? Here I have some advice.
Runner
Writer
Speaker
Checker
Leader
GROUP
Group writing :

1.观点正确，要点齐全（至少三个方面的建议，
每条建议2分） --记6分
2.表达清楚，结构合理,语法正确-----记2分
3.句式多样，最好能有亮点句
（从句、谚语） -----记1分
4.卷面整洁，不少于80字。 -----记1分
Grading standard
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归档
得分
要点
时态
人称
结构
语言
逻辑
书写
好词好句
Comments：
Evaluate your partners’ composition.
Please make notes if necessary!
Step 1:审 Thinking
Step 2:列
listing
Step 3: 连
linking
Step 4: 美
beautifying
体裁
时态
人称
断句
动词
语块
结构
源句内化
造句
并列
顺序
观点
……
Step 5:查 checking（查拼写，要点，标点）
因果
思 维 导 图(mind map)
Summary: Writing steps:
Composition
Thinking
Listing
Linking
Beautifying
Checking
Writing Skills:
Early to bed and early to rise, makes us healthy and wise.
Where there is a will, there is a way!.
Work harder and practice more.
“冰冻三尺非一日之寒，要多练习才行
An apple a day keeps the doctor away
Homework
1.Read at least 2 compositions and pick out 5 good sentences. Write them down in your notebook.
2.Rewrite today’s composition carefully.
Goodbye!
Thank you!