仁爱英语八年级上Unit1 Playing Sports 话题写作指导课件（PPT共21张）

Unit1
第一档（13-15分）：能清楚地表述自己的观点和想法；语言准确、丰富、流畅，富有个性和说服力；基本无语法错误；
第二档（9-12分）：能清楚地表述自己的观点和想法；行文比较自然，但语言表达较平淡，个性化和说服力比较一般，且存在少量语法错误；
第三档（5-8分）：观点表述不够鲜明，比较缺乏说服力；同时各种语言用法错误较多；
第四档（1-4分）：内容比较空洞或不切题，词汇和句式用法错误很多。

中考英语作文评分标准
以“游泳的注意事项”为话题，根据以下提示内容写一篇不少于80词左右的文章
1.游泳对身体有益。但有些地方是危险的，不适合游泳；
2.不要独自游泳，应有家人或朋友陪伴；
3. 游泳前热身，不要立即下水；
4. 游泳时要相互关照，时间不要太久；
5. 如果累了，需要休息一下。
提示词：适合的：suitable 热身：warm up
累的：tired 跳下:jump up
Swimming is good for our health.
But sometimes it’s not suitable for us to swim in some dangerous places.
swimming是动名词当主语，用上be good for短语。
用上句型：It’s adj for sb to do sth.
First, we shouldn’t swim alone and we should go swimming with
our families or friends.
用and连接两句话，分别用should和shouldn’t来阐述该做和不该做的。
Second, before we swim, we had better warm up. Don’t jump into
the river at once.
前半句用had better 代替should,后半句直接用否定祈使句，增强语气。
Third, we must help each other when we swim. And we can’t swim too long.
Last but not least, if you are tired, we must have a rest.
相互关照可译成help each other，时间不要太久，用英语就是
We can’t swim too long。
注意连词应用的连贯性.
If you follow the rules, you will have fun swimming.
最后一段用一句话总结就可以，用上短语have fun doing sth.
周末就要到了，LiBin已经有了自己的安排，请根据下面表格中提示写一篇70词左右短文，介绍一下他的活动安排。
时间
活动
周六上午
写作业
周六下午
和朋友一起打篮球
周日上午
从图书馆借书，然后阅读
周日下午
与爷爷一起钓鱼
The weekend is coming. Li Bin plans to do many things.
On Saturday morning, he is going to do his homewrk.
is coming,现在进行时表将来，这两句话作文第一段。
be going to do sth: 将要做
After lunch, he wants to play basketball with his friends. He likes
playing basketball very much.
He likes playing basketball very much.适当发挥的一句话，使文章更丰富。
On Sunday morning, he will borrow books from the library and read
them.
borrow...from...从...借...。
In the afternoon, he would like to go fishing with his grandfather.
He thinks he can have fun from fishing.
would like to do sth:想要做...。
have fun from doing:从做...得到乐趣；这一句也是自己添加内容。
Li Bin will have a busy and happy weekend.
最后一段用一句话总结就可以 。
以“介绍你学校的运动情况和你对运动的看法”为话题，根据以下提示内容写一篇不少于80词左右的文章
1.上周我的学校举办了校运会，我参加了跳远比赛并获得 了第一名；
2.平时学生早上做早操，下午做眼保健操。放学后，有很多的老师和学生在操场上打篮球或者跑步；
3. 运动有益身体健康，它会使得我们更加强壮；
4. 添加一个你自己的想法。
提示词：眼保健操：eye exercise
Many people in our school are sports lovers.
Last week, our school held a sports meet. I took part in the long
jump and won the first place.
要自己写出一个开头的句子，既作为第一段，也贴近文章的主题。
由于是上周的事情，所以谓语动词都用过去式。
The students do morning exercise and do eye exercise in the afternoon.
do morning exercise做早操，do eye exercise 做眼保健操。
After school, there are many teachers and students playing basketball or running on the playground.
I think sports are good for our health. It can make us strong. If we
keep fit, we can also do well in studying. Do you think so?
用上句型：There be + sb + doing sth +地点。有某人在某地做某事。
最后一段来表达你对运动的看法，用上短语be good for和make + sb + adj; 注意If we keep fit, we can also do well in studying.是添加自己的看法。
谈论“你最喜欢的运动”为话题，根据以下提示内容写一篇不少于80词左右的文章
1.你是刘燕，今年14岁，你喜欢运动，特别是游泳；
2.你每周游三次；
3. 你认为游泳可以使你的心肺更加健康，它也是保持健康的好方法；
4. 将来的打算。
My name is Liu Yan. I am 14 years old. I like sports very much, but I like swimming best.
I often go swimming with my friends and I swim three times a week .
介绍姓名和年龄是七年级的句子，用I like…best来表达你特别喜欢
游泳。
前半是自己添加的内容，既符合文章需要，又增加字数。
“一周三次”译成three times a week。
I think swimming can make my heart and lung healthy. It’s also a
good way to keep fit.
一个短语用法：make + n + adj; 一个句型应用：It’s a good way
to do sth。
I will do more exercise in the future.
这是文章的第二段，全部写将来的打算和希望。因此注意都用一般将来时态。内容全部靠自己的发挥，所写的内容呈递进关系。
I am going to be a player when I grow up.
I hope I will be able to take part in the Olympic Games one day.
以“下周五学校举行运动会”为话题，根据师生参赛内容写一篇不少于80词左右的文章
名字
参赛项目
情况
LiMing
400米接力赛
努力第一个通过终点线，希望打破记录
Ann
跳高和跳远
她的朋友Peter将会为她加油
WangJunfeng
800米跑
他认为校运会将会激动人心
Mr Green
教师接力赛
Michael将会给他拍照
注意：下周的运动会啊，用什么时态呢?
There will be a school sports meet in my school next Friday.
Li Ming will take part in the boys’ 400-meter relay race . He will try his best to win and break the record.
用上There will be: “将有“的意思。一句话就可以作为单独一段。
注意谓语动词用“will+动原”形式 “男子400米接力赛”译成
“ the boys’400-meter relay race”。
Ann will join in the long jump and the high jump. Her friend,
Peter will cheer her on.
继续沿用一般将来时，这句用join in 来代替 take part in,因为它们是
同义词。
Wang Junfeng will be in 800-meter race. He thinks the sports meet will be exciting.
Mr Green plans to take part in the teachers’ relay race. Michael will
take photos for him.
这句用be in 来代替 take part in 。注意这里为什么不用excited的原因。
plan to do sth:打算做某事。take photos:照相。
I hope our school sports meet will be successful.
用一句话总结最为最后一段，希望校运会成功。
谈论“我们学校下周要举行运动会”为话题，根据以下提示内容写一篇不少于80词左右的文章
1.下个周末我们学校要举行运动会；
2.你班上的同学都准备好了；
3. 列举几个同学的优势项目；
4. 班上其他同学会为运动员加油；
5. 你的希望。
参考词汇：hold, be ready for, take part in, be good at,
do well in, cheer sb on,be sure, hope, win the first place.
Our school will hold sports meet next weekend.
Everyone in my class are ready for it. They will take part in the
games.
will hold:将举办。来说明我们学校将有运动会直接作为第一段。
用上be ready for 和take part in 短语,。
Yu Ting is good at jumping, so she will be in the long jump. Michael
does well in running, and he will join in the relay race.
be good at 和do well in后都接动词ing形式，YuTing和Michael将参加
不同 运动，所以用will be和will join in.
The other students will cheer the players on.
cheer on :为...加油。
I am sure the sports will be exciting. I hope my class will win
the first place.
根据参考词汇我们可以写出希望就是相信运动会将会激动人心并且
希望我们班赢。作为最后一段。