仁爱英语八年级上Unit2 Keeping Healthy 话题写作指导课件（PPT共15张）

Unit2
第一档（13-15分）：能清楚地表述自己的观点和想法；语言准确、丰富、流畅，富有个性和说服力；基本无语法错误；
第二档（9-12分）：能清楚地表述自己的观点和想法；行文比较自然，但语言表达较平淡，个性化和说服力比较一般，且存在少量语法错误；
第三档（5-8分）：观点表述不够鲜明，比较缺乏说服力；同时各种语言用法错误较多；
第四档（1-4分）：内容比较空洞或不切题，词汇和句式用法错误很多。

中考英语作文评分标准
Peter是你们们班新来的美国学生，他喜欢吃肉(meat)和垃圾食品(junk food) ，但不喜欢运动，所以经常感冒。在一次的QQ聊天中，他提到了他的烦恼，请你根据他的情况给他一些合理的建议。
提示： 1. 多吃水果和蔬菜；
2. 坚持每天锻炼，一起打篮球和游泳

要求：1. 70词左右，须包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥
2. 灵活应用You should…
I’d like to tell you some advice about how to keep healthy.
You like eating meat and junk food. I think they may cause illnesses.
接下来针对问题马上给出饮食上建议，喝牛奶是适当发挥的部分。
开头直接说明主旨给你的好朋友建议作为第一段，用上tell sb about
sth.
And you seldom do exercise, so you often have a cold.
接着罗列原因来最终得出经常感冒的原因。
You should eat more vegetables and fruit. You had better drink milk
in the morning.
点出你朋友喜欢吃肉和垃圾食品的危害性，为我们的建议做
铺垫。
You should spend time exercising every day. We can play basketball or swim together.
I hope you will be better soon .
给出运动上的建议，用上spend…doing sth结构。
最后一段用一句话表达祝愿, 一般将来时。
假如你是Tom， 听说你的朋友李雷身体不好,经常生病,请你给他提一些 “如何保持健康的建议”.
标题: How to keep healthy
提示： 1. eating habits: vegetables and fruit, junk（垃圾）food
2. living habits: early, wash hands
3. more sports: do exercise, be good for
4. happiness: be important to
请你根据所给提示词，从健康的饮食习惯，良好的生活习惯，多做运动有利健康，保持快乐对健康的重要性四方面，并结合使用“should/shouldn’t，must/mustn’t...”等句型，给你的朋友提80个左右单词的建议。
Dear LiLei,
I’m sorry to hear that you are often ill. Now let me give some
advice.
You should keep healthy eating habits.
need to do sth:需要做某事, 用must语气比较强硬。
两句话作为第一段，注意advice是不可数名词
For example, you had better eat more vegetables and fruit. On the
other hand, you had better not eat junk food.
最好要吃和最好不要吃，分别用上had better和had better not,
中间再用上on the other hand这个连词.
Second, you need to go to bed and get up early. You must wash hands
before meals.
此句作为饮食方面的中心句，用上should。
How to keep healthy
Third, doing exercise is good for your health, too. You can play sports twice a week.
Finally, happiness is important to you. So try to be happy every day.
doing exercise 是动名词当主语，后面扩写一句具体的运动建议。
happiness 是名词当主语，不能用形容词的happy; 后面扩写一句
具体的快乐建议。
I hope you can live a healthy life.
最后一段用一句话表达祝愿.
假如你是李磊， 今年14岁，获得了学校的健康先生(Mr Health)的称号。现在受邀请写一篇文章，介绍自己是如何保持健康的建议。
标题: How to keep healthy
提示： 1. 非常喜欢体育运动，经常在周末和朋友们一起打篮球…
2. 多吃水果和蔬菜…
3. 不吸烟，不喝酒…
4. 多帮助同学…
请在每一点的后面写出至少一句你的建议。开头和结尾已给出。
How to keep healthy
Hi, I am LiLei, I am very happy to be Mr Health this year. Now, let me tell you something about how to keep healthy.
…
I hope all of you can live a healthy life.

First, I like sports very much. I often play basketball with my friends on weekends. I think it’s a good way to build me up.
Second, I usually eat more vegetables and fruit. And I seldom eat fast
food. Because they can make me fat and unhealthy.
要添加依据自己的观点，用上it’s a good way to do sth。
Third, we should stay away from smoking and drinking. They can
cause many illnesses.
stay away from doing sth:远离做…
原因用上make+n+adj结构。
Finally, I always help my classmates with their studies. It can make me happy. Be happy to be healthy.
help sb with sth:帮助某人做某事；Be happy to be healthy:快乐
即健康 。
近年来，传染性疾病不断发生，作为中学生，为了使自己保持健康，远离疾病，
我们在日常生活中应怎样保持健康呢？请你以Protect Ourselves from the Flu
为题，根据提供的信息和要求写一篇80词左右短文。
内容要点:
First, don’t be afraid of the illness. We should get enough sleep and do more exercise.
Second, we had better keep the room clean and the air fresh all the
time .
用上表建议的情态动词should来给出两个建议。
个人卫生要自己发挥，本文是从房屋干净和空气清新方面下手，
用上keep + sb/sth + adj结构。
Third, it’s important for us to keep good eating habits. We must eat
more vegetables and fruit.
用上句型It’s adj for sb to do sth，并给出一个吃健康食物的建议。
Protect Ourselves from the Flu
What should we do to prevent the flu?
用问句引出话题。
If we have a fever or cough, we must see a doctor as soon as possible .
If we keep some good habits, we can protect ourselves from the flu.
尽早就医：see a doctor as soon as possible。
最后一段总结一下就可以。