人教版（2019）Unit 1 Teenage life section IV Reading for Writing同步练习以及答案解析

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人教版新教材Unit1
section
IV
Reading
for
Writing同步练习
建议信
本单元的写作任务是读一封建议信，了解建议信的结构和语言特征，然后再写一封建议信。
【写作分析】
建议信属应用文体，为高考常考写作类型。一般用第一人称向对方提供建议或者忠告。写作目的是提出建议或忠告，不是投诉，因此观点要合情合理并注意礼貌。
【写作思路】
第一部分:开门见山，引出主题，说明写信的目的。常用句式：
①I’
m
more
than
gladtohavereceivedyoure-mail.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomeadviceonhowto...
②I’
m
sorry
to
hear
that
you
are
having
trouble
fitting
in
your
new
school.
Such
problems
are
quite
normal.
Perhaps
the
following
suggestions
are
helpful.
③Here
are
some
tips/a
few
suggestions
to
help
you.
第二部分：介绍详情、提出具体建议。常用句式：
①Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...
②Isuggestthat
youdo/notdo...
③As
far
as
I
am
concerned/In
my
opinion,…
注意：在提出具体建议时，要使用衔接词。如，first
of
all,
what’s
more/in
addition/besides,
last
but
not
least,
finally,等等。
第三部分：礼貌结尾、提出希望。常用句式：
①I
sincerely
hope
my
advice
will
be
some
help
for
you.
②If
there
is
more
I
can
do
to
help,
please
let
me
know.
③I
hope
you
will
find
these
ideas
useful.
【写作技巧】
句子是由词汇组成的，而文章是由句子组成的，遣词造句要按语法和习惯表达，组句成篇也要按照篇章结构。选择能够恰当表示并列、递进、因果、转折、条件等意义的连词，把要点句子连接成文，使句与句，段与段之间意思连贯，衔接自然，从而生动、准确地表达考题内容。同时要根据表达的需要注意变换句式，避免句子结构的单调性。如：使用不同结构、不同长度的句子，尽量使句型多样化；多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句，使行文更加流畅有力；改变句子开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再在句末加上一个状语。增加书面表达的表现力。
【典型例题】
假如你是李华，你的好朋友王梅在交友方面存在着一些困难，请根据下面提示给她写一封建议信。
【写作步骤】
Step
1　List
the
outline
of
the
passage.
Paragraph
1：the
purpose
of
the
letter
Paragraph
2：the
suggestions
that
you
give
Paragraph
3：the
writer’s
hope
Step
2　List
the
words，phrases
and
sentences.
1.Words
and
phrases
①tip/advice/suggestion
n.　建议
②situation
n.
情况
③make
friends
交朋友
④have
trouble/difficulty
in
doing
...
做……有困难
⑤take
one’s
advice
接受某人的建议
⑥share
happiness
and
sorrow
with...
和……同甘共苦
⑦call
for
需要
⑧put
one’s
heart
into
全心全意
2.Sentences
①知道你在交友方面有麻烦，我很难过。(have
trouble
in...)
I
am
sorry
to
know
that
you
are
having
trouble
in
making
friends.
②如果你采纳我的建议，改变这种情况是很容易的。(be＋adj.＋to
do)
The
situation
is
easy
to
change
if
you
take
my
advice.
③要交朋友为什么不先做一个朋友呢？(why
not)
Why
not
be
a
friend
first，if
you
want
to
make
friends?
④正如一句谚语说的，患难之中的朋友才是真正的朋友。(as
a
saying
goes)
Just
as
a
saying
goes,
a
friend
in
need
is
a
friend
indeed.
【参考答案】
Dear
Wang
Mei，
I
am
sorry
to
know
that
you
are
having
trouble
in
making
friends.
However，the
situation
is
easy
to
change
if
you
take
my
advice.
Here
are
some
tips
to
help
you.
To
begin
with，why
not
be
a
friend
if
you
want
to
make
friends？In
addition，wouldn’t
it
be
a
good
idea
if
you
share
happiness
and
sorrow
with
your
friend?
Just
as
a
saying
goes，a
friend
in
need
is
a
friend
indeed.
Last
but
not
least，wouldn’t
it
be
a
good
idea
if
you
put
your
heart
into
making
friends?
It
is
well
known
to
us
all
that
friendship
calls
for
time
and
effort.
I
hope
you
will
find
these
ideas
useful.
All
the
best.
Yours，
Li
Hua
【仿写】
假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Tom发来邮件说现在的学生不太注意自己的健康成长。希望你能给出一些关于该如何健康成长的建议，请你给他回信，写作要点如下：
1.
健康很重要，这是因为拥有了健康就拥有了财富。
2.我们要注意锻炼；也要选择健康的食物,，还有，不要依赖手机和电脑。
3.我们应该采取有效的措施来增进我们的健康。
要求：
1.需包含所有写作要点，词数100左右。
2.可适当增加细节以使行文连贯。
人教版新教材Unit1
section
IV
Reading
for
Writing同步练习
答案
【仿写】
Dear
Jack,
I
am
glad
to
receive
your
letter.
I
attach
great
importance
to
health.
This
is
because
owning
health
is
owning
wealth.
First
of
all,
we
should
pay
attention
to
exercising,
which
benefits
us
much.
What’s
more,
we
should
choose
healthy
food.
There
are
many
kinds
for
us
to
eat,
such
as
vegetables,
fruits
and
milk.
We
can’t
live
happily
without
it.
We
had
better
not
eat
junk
food.
Last
but
not
least,
we
can’t
rely
much
on
cell
phones
and
computers,
which
will
do
harm
to
our
health.
In
a
word,
effective
measures
should
be
taken
to
protect
our
health.
And
I
am
sure
that
we
will
succeed.
Best
wishes!
Yours,
Li
Hua
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