(共18张PPT)
Unit1
Great
scientists
writing
To
learn
to
write
a
persuasive
writing
劝说性的书信写作
1.先提出建议
2.充足的理由劝说对方接受你的建议
兵团第十二师高级中学
结构
第一段:说明目的,讲清楚要建议的事项
第二段:给出理由
第三段:提出希望
What
Why
How
Dear
….,
I’m
writing
to
persuade
you
to
……..
...
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Xiaoming
Here
are
my
reasons.
First
of
all,
I
think
it
would
be
better
if
...
Second,
...
Third,
...
In
addition…..
Most
importantly,…
Moreover
...
What’s
more
...
Furthermore
Last
but
not
least…
I
would
like
to
suggest
that
...
If
I
were
you,
I
would
...
Please
take
my
advice
into
consideration
and
make
a
final
decision.
I
will
be
more
than
happy
to
see
improvements
in
this
regard.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Dear
_____,
I’m
writing
to
persuade
you
to
______.
First
of
all,
I
think
it
would
be
better
if
______.
Secondly,
__________.
Last
but
not
least,
______.
I
do
hope
you
can
take
my
suggestion
into
consideration
and
make
a
final
decision.
Looking
forward
to
your
quick
reply.
Yours,
Li
Hua
假如你是小明,学校领导和教师因为担心同学们浏览不健康的网站,关闭了教室内电脑的网络浏览功能,你们感到很难过。
请你给校长写一封信,劝说校长同意开通教室内的网络。
事由:教室的电脑不能上网,建议学校开通网络。
原因:
1.有利于查找资料;
2.
浏览新闻,了解信息;
3.作为高中生,我们正在形成自己的判断力
注意:
1.
信中要包括以上所有内容;
2.
词数:120左右;
说服你让我们上网
首先,我认为如果我们能上网会更好,因为网上有各种各样的学习资源。
其次,上网能够拓宽我们的视野
我知道你害怕我们可能暴露在不健康的网络里
如果给我们机会的话,我们确信,我们将学会如何远离不健康网络
I’m
writing
to
persuade
you
to
let
us
surf
the
Internet
We
know
you’re
afraid
that
we
may
be
exposed
to
unhealthy
websites
First
of
all,
I
think
it
would
be
better
if
we
can
surf
the
Internet,
because
there
is
a
wide
range
of
learning
resources
on
the
Internet.
Furthermore,
we
can
broaden
our
horizons
by
reading
various
news
online.
If
we
are
given
chances,
we
are
sure
that
we
will
learn
how
to
stay
away
from
unhealthy
websites.
Given
chances,
we
are
sure
that
we
will
learn
how
to
stay
away
from
unhealthy
websites.
Please
take
my
advice
into
consideration
and
make
a
final
decision.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Dear
Headmaster,
I’m
writing
to
persuade
you
to
let
us
surf
the
Internet
in
the
classroom.
We
know
you’re
afraid
that
we
may
be
exposed
to
unhealthy
websites.
Actually
every
coin
has
two
sides.
We
still
think
that
surfing
the
Internet
can
bring
us
much
more
advantages.
说明目的,给出过渡句,引出下文
First
of
all,
I
think
it
would
be
better
if
we
can
surf
the
Internet,
because
there
is
a
wide
range
of
learning
resources
on
the
Internet.
We
should
make
good
use
of
it.
Furthermore,
we
can
broaden
our
horizons
by
reading
various
news
online.
Last
but
not
least,
as
high
school
students,
we
are
building
up
our
sense
of
judgment.
Given
chances,
we
are
sure
that
we
will
learn
how
to
stay
away
from
unhealthy
websites.
I
do
hope
you
can
take
my
suggestion
into
consideration
and
make
a
final
decision.
Looking
forward
to
your
reply.
Yours,
Xiaoming
给出理由
提出希望
Dear
_____,
I’m
writing
to
persuade
you
to
______.
First
of
all,
I
think
it
would
be
better
if
______.
Secondly,
__________.
Last
but
not
least,
______.
I
do
hope
you
can
take
my
suggestion
into
consideration
and
make
a
final
decision.
Looking
forward
to
your
quick
reply.
Yours,
Li
Hua
第一段:说明目的,给出过渡句,引出下文
第二段:给出理由
第三段:提出希望