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江苏译林牛津版9AU1书面表达练习及指导
如何以推荐信的方式写人物介绍类的文章?
话题分析:
本单元的话题是:如何以推荐信的方式写人物介绍类的文章
写作步骤:
要了解英语中信件格式和中文中有何不同。
告诉收件这封推荐信的目的。
主要描写被推荐人的性格、特点、爱好及其生活事迹。
4、事迹要描写好的方面,使收件人信服。
常用表达:
We
are
writing
to
recommend...as
our
new
monitor/....
我们写信推荐XX作为我们的新班长/.........
He/She
has
many
strong
qualities
for
this
position.
他/她有许多突出的品质适合这个职位
He/She
always/often/never..../..../..../
4、......is
very
confident/clever/helpful/hard-working.
5、We
think...is
the
most
suitable/right
person
to
be....
6、We
hope
that
you
agree
with
us.
经典名题----书面表达
假如你叫李明,是九年级(1)班的学生,你的好朋友尼克想竞争学生会主席的职位,请你给王校长写一封推荐信,介绍一下你朋友的基本情况。包括以下内容:
姓名
Nick
出生年月
2003年4月
出生地
江苏南通
特长
电脑、英语
特点
随和,富有创造力,自信,有条不紊
相关经历
有两年学生会主席经历
注意:
1.词数:100字左右;信件的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入单词总数;
2.内容必须包括表中的要点,可活当发挥.但不要逐字翻译
3.条理清楚,语句连贯。
Dear
Mr.
Wang,
I
am
writing
to
you
to
recommend
my
friend
as
the
new
chairperson
of
the
Students’
Union
_______________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I
think
he
has
all
the
qualities
to
be
a
good
chairperson.
I
hope
you
can
agree
with
me.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Ming
优秀例文:
Dear
Mr.
Wang,
I
am
writing
to
you
to
recommend
my
friend
as
the
new
chairperson
of
the
Students'
Union.
His
name
is
Nick.
He
is
in
Class
1,
Grade
9.
I
think
he
will
be
an
excellent
chairperson
because
he
has
many
good
personal
qualities.
He
was
born
in
April,
2003
in
Nantong,
Jiangsu
Province.
He
is
a
hard-working
student.
He
is
good
at
English,
and
he
always
gets
full
marks
in
English
tests.He
also
likes
computer.By
using
computer,
he
can
know
a
lot
about
the
world.
And
he
often
reads
news
and
searches
for
some
information
about
his
study
on
the
Internet.
He
is
so
easy-going
and
he
can
make
friends
easily.
He
is
creative
enough
to
come
up
with
many
new
ideas.
What's
more,
he
is
confident.
He
thinks
he
can
do
anything
if
he
tries
his
best.
He
is
never
afraid
of
making
a
speech
to
a
large
group
of
people.
He
is
also
organized
and
he
thinks
it
can
bring
him
success.
Besides
he
has
been
experienced
in
being
the
chairperson
of
the
Students'
Union
for
two
years.
I
think
he
has
all
the
qualities
to
be
a
good
chairperson,
I
hope
you
can
agree
with
me.
Yours
sincerely,
Li
Ming
课后写作练习
假如你是Kitty,请按照下表内容,给史密斯先生写一封100词左右的推荐信,推荐Millie为新班长。
注意点:1、开头结尾已经给出,事例可适当拓展。
至少90词
不得出现真实的地名和人名。
推荐理由
品质
事例
有自信心
不害怕在公共场合演讲
乐于助人
课后经常做额外的工作,帮助我们的功课……
慷慨大方
把零花钱捐给慈善机构……
有创造力
能想出许多新点子……
自拟一个品质
相关结论
认为她是新班长的最合适人选
Dear
Mr.
Smith,
I’m
writing
to
recommend
Millie
as
our
new
monitor.
I
think
she
has
many
strong
qualities
for
this
position.
I
hope
you
can
agree
with
me.
Yours
sincerely,
Kitty
教师批改意见:
课后思考:
我们写作文的时候,应改怎么检查作文,避免自身的错误呢?
时态要一致,或者转换流畅
主语和谓语动词要一致,人称代词不要使用混淆了
非谓语动词的使用要合适
大小写,标点符号,分段等细节问题
无论字形怎么样,书写一定工整,避免多次涂画。
写作要有条例性。
每次写完作文,再这样重新检查一下,相信每一位同学都会有收获。