Unit 4 Growing up Task： The person who has influenced me most 课件18张
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Unit 4 Growing up
The person who has influenced me most
Task
?
An article of Mr.Wu's student
* Who has influenced the student most?
* What is her father like?
* What does the writer realize now?
Her father has influenced her most.
He is kind and helpful.
She realizes that her father has a heart full of love.
Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
The structure of the article
Part1
Part2
Part3
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A} Topic Sentence
Examples:
(para2)
Examples:
(para3)
He gave our TV to a family
He always cares for the children
He often gives money to someone in need
He has donated ....
simple present tense
My father has always been kind and helpful.
simple past tense
Tip 1: Use topic sentences and examples
present continuous tense
Compare the sentences
You learn more.You find something unusual about him.
You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
My father is in his fifties. He has worked in a local factroy for years. You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
My father has always been kind and helpful . He is ready to help anyone. He gave our TV to a family who could not afford one;he cares for the children who have lost their parents; whenever he has some money left, he gives it to somone in need.
My father has donated blood many times since 1990. The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.
When I was a little girl, I could not understand why my father always seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family. Now I realize that he has a heart full of love.
Compare the sentences
You learn more.You find something unusual about him.
You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
He gives money to people in need.
Whenever he has some money left, he gives it to someone in need.
Tip 2: Use better sentence patterns
Tip 3: Use conjunctions
He cares for the children.
He cares for the children who have lost thier parents.
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基本信息
1 年过四十，教龄十年
2 少言寡语，为人热心
事例
1 工作认真，永不言弃
2 热衷公益，义务培训
3 自拟一点
你的看法
不理解到佩服；
希望......(1到2点）
Task 1
你班上周举行了“影响我最多的人”的主题班会，每位同学各抒己见，请根据表中要点向大家介绍影响你最多的人——你的父亲。
Task 2 可以任选人物
topic
tense
structure
person
main
points
The person who has influenced me most
3 or 4 paragraphs
第一和第三人称(the first and third person)
simple present tense（一般现在时）
1.What does he/she look like?
2.What is he like? what has he/she done?
3.What do you think of him/her?
simple past tense（一般现在时）
...
1.Pre-writing
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}
基本信息
1 年过四十，教龄十年
2 少言寡语，为人热心
事例
1 工作认真，永不言弃
2 热衷公益，义务培训
3 自拟一点
你的看法
不理解到佩服；
希望......(1到2点）
Task 1
你班上周举行了“影响我最多的人”的主题班会，每位同学各抒己见，请根据表中要点向大家介绍影响你最多的人——你的父亲。
Task 2 可以任选人物
★Appearance is important.
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基本信息
1 年过四十，教龄十年
2 少言寡语，为人热心
事例
1 工作认真，永不言弃
2 热衷公益，义务培训
3 自拟一点
你的看法
不理解到佩服；
希望......(1到2点）
Task 1
你班上周举行了“影响我最多的人”的主题班会，每位同学各抒己见，请根据表中要点向大家介绍影响你最多的人——你的父亲。
Task 2 可以任选人物
2.After-writing
Have a check:
grammatical mistakes
spelling mistakes
capitalization(首字母大写）
punctuation（标点）
…
check with your partener
Task 1 Find out good expressions and patterns.
Task 2 Find out what need to be improved（mistakes)
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}分值
内容
语言
第五档(17-20分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务，能写明全部要点
完全完成了试题规定的任务，能写明全部要点
第四档(13-16分)
完成了试题规定的任务，能写明全部或大部分要点
行文基本连贯, 表达基本清楚, 语言有少量错误
第三档(9-12分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖了大部分要点
有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误；应用简单的词句间的连接成分，使全文基本连贯
第二档(5-8分)
未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出一两个要点
语法结构简单、词汇数目有限；影响了对写作的理解；使用词句间的连接成分、内容缺少连贯性
第一档(0-4分)
未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与要求的内容有关的一些单词
语法结构简单、词汇数目有限；错误较多，信息未能清楚传达给读者
作文评分标准
Sample Writing
My father is in his fifties and has worked as a doctor for ten years. He is a person with few words but with a heart full of love.
He works very hard and never gives up. For example, he always tries to find the best way when he meets difficulties. Moreover, he volunteers to teach the students in primary schools during his spare time and organizes some games among schools.What's more, he often does some charity work for the students in poor areas.
I didn’t understand him until I grew up. And now I admire him for what he has done. I hope I can be a man like him one day.
Be influenced by both great people
and ordinary people.
Be better and better to influence
others.
1 Polish your article.
2 Say thank you to people around you and try to be better to influence others.
Homework
The person who has influenced me most
Task
?
An article of Mr.Wu's student
* Who has influenced the student most?
* What is her father like?
* What does the writer realize now?
Her father has influenced her most.
He is kind and helpful.
She realizes that her father has a heart full of love.
Para1
Para2
Para3
Para4
Introduction
Main body
Conclusion
The structure of the article
Part1
Part2
Part3
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A} Topic Sentence
Examples:
(para2)
Examples:
(para3)
He gave our TV to a family
He always cares for the children
He often gives money to someone in need
He has donated ....
simple present tense
My father has always been kind and helpful.
simple past tense
Tip 1: Use topic sentences and examples
present continuous tense
Compare the sentences
You learn more.You find something unusual about him.
You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
My father is in his fifties. He has worked in a local factroy for years. You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
My father has always been kind and helpful . He is ready to help anyone. He gave our TV to a family who could not afford one;he cares for the children who have lost their parents; whenever he has some money left, he gives it to somone in need.
My father has donated blood many times since 1990. The blood he has donated is enough to save over 70 lives. He has also donated blood cells to people with blood cancer. To my surprise, he has decided to donate his body for medical research after his death.
When I was a little girl, I could not understand why my father always seemed to be kinder to others than to his own family. Now I realize that he has a heart full of love.
Compare the sentences
You learn more.You find something unusual about him.
You will not find anything unusual about him until you learn more.
He gives money to people in need.
Whenever he has some money left, he gives it to someone in need.
Tip 2: Use better sentence patterns
Tip 3: Use conjunctions
He cares for the children.
He cares for the children who have lost thier parents.
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}
基本信息
1 年过四十，教龄十年
2 少言寡语，为人热心
事例
1 工作认真，永不言弃
2 热衷公益，义务培训
3 自拟一点
你的看法
不理解到佩服；
希望......(1到2点）
Task 1
你班上周举行了“影响我最多的人”的主题班会，每位同学各抒己见，请根据表中要点向大家介绍影响你最多的人——你的父亲。
Task 2 可以任选人物
topic
tense
structure
person
main
points
The person who has influenced me most
3 or 4 paragraphs
第一和第三人称(the first and third person)
simple present tense（一般现在时）
1.What does he/she look like?
2.What is he like? what has he/she done?
3.What do you think of him/her?
simple past tense（一般现在时）
...
1.Pre-writing
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}
基本信息
1 年过四十，教龄十年
2 少言寡语，为人热心
事例
1 工作认真，永不言弃
2 热衷公益，义务培训
3 自拟一点
你的看法
不理解到佩服；
希望......(1到2点）
Task 1
你班上周举行了“影响我最多的人”的主题班会，每位同学各抒己见，请根据表中要点向大家介绍影响你最多的人——你的父亲。
Task 2 可以任选人物
★Appearance is important.
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}
基本信息
1 年过四十，教龄十年
2 少言寡语，为人热心
事例
1 工作认真，永不言弃
2 热衷公益，义务培训
3 自拟一点
你的看法
不理解到佩服；
希望......(1到2点）
Task 1
你班上周举行了“影响我最多的人”的主题班会，每位同学各抒己见，请根据表中要点向大家介绍影响你最多的人——你的父亲。
Task 2 可以任选人物
2.After-writing
Have a check:
grammatical mistakes
spelling mistakes
capitalization(首字母大写）
punctuation（标点）
…
check with your partener
Task 1 Find out good expressions and patterns.
Task 2 Find out what need to be improved（mistakes)
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A}分值
内容
语言
第五档(17-20分)
完全完成了试题规定的任务，能写明全部要点
完全完成了试题规定的任务，能写明全部要点
第四档(13-16分)
完成了试题规定的任务，能写明全部或大部分要点
行文基本连贯, 表达基本清楚, 语言有少量错误
第三档(9-12分)
基本完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖了大部分要点
有一些语法结构和词汇方面的错误；应用简单的词句间的连接成分，使全文基本连贯
第二档(5-8分)
未能恰当完成试题规定的任务，只能写出一两个要点
语法结构简单、词汇数目有限；影响了对写作的理解；使用词句间的连接成分、内容缺少连贯性
第一档(0-4分)
未能完成试题规定的任务，只能写出与要求的内容有关的一些单词
语法结构简单、词汇数目有限；错误较多，信息未能清楚传达给读者
作文评分标准
Sample Writing
My father is in his fifties and has worked as a doctor for ten years. He is a person with few words but with a heart full of love.
He works very hard and never gives up. For example, he always tries to find the best way when he meets difficulties. Moreover, he volunteers to teach the students in primary schools during his spare time and organizes some games among schools.What's more, he often does some charity work for the students in poor areas.
I didn’t understand him until I grew up. And now I admire him for what he has done. I hope I can be a man like him one day.
Be influenced by both great people
and ordinary people.
Be better and better to influence
others.
1 Polish your article.
2 Say thank you to people around you and try to be better to influence others.
Homework