牛津版（深圳 广州）初中英语八年级上册期中复习试卷（题型专练）：书面表达（含解析）

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牛津版（深圳?广州）初中英语八年级上册期中复习（题型专练）：书面表达
一、书面表达
1.越来越多的新发明给我们的生活带来了很多便利。请以
"The
most
important
invention
to
me"
为题，写一篇短文介绍对你来说最重要的发明。
内容:
1）这项发明的名称；
2）介绍这项发明；
3）你使用这项发明做什么。
要求:
1）词数80字左右；
2）短文条理清晰，语言顺畅；可适当增加内容。
参考词汇:
function;
convenient
2.下面内容是从《百科全书》上摘取的关于巴尔扎克(Balzac）的介绍。请你根据提示，用英语写一篇文敢介绍巴尔扎克。要求：80词左右，可适当发挥。
1.一位著名的作家，创作了很多著名的作品，被誉为现代小说之父:
2.1799年出生于法国:1816年进入法律学校学习；毕业后开始写作;
3.1834年，完成对《高老头》(Old
Goriot）的创作，这也是巴尔扎克最优秀的作品之一:
4.他的创作才能来源于他的生活经历。
3.请以“The
most
useful
invention
to
me”为题根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
提示:1）What
is
the
most
useful
invention
to
you
in
your
daily
life?
2）What
do
you
use
it
for
and
how
often
do
you
use
it?
3）How
do
you
feel
if
you
can't
use
it
in
your
life?
The
most
useful
invention
to
me
???
Inventions
change
the
world
and
our
way
of
life.
They
help
us
live
a
better
life.
???
???
I
think
it
makes
our
life
better
and
better.
4.现在有许多新的购物方式，网上购物是其中的一种。越来越多的人熟悉和喜欢网购，但是网购利有弊。请根据下面提供的信息，以“Online
shopping”为题写—篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。
优点：1）可以在任何时间购物；2）只需要一台电脑和鼠标；3）方便比较同类产品的价格，可以省钱；4）无论何时何地都可以收到所购物品……
缺点：1）网上付款有时不安全；2）看不到实物，也不能试穿衣服……
注意：1）不得在作文中出现真实的学校名称和
姓名；2）语句连贯，表达准确，词数80~100。
Online
shopping
???
There
are
many
new
ways
of
shopping,
and
online
shopping
is
one
of
them.
One
day
no
one
will
go
to
the
shops
any
more,
because
you'll
be
able
to
buy
almost
everything
on
the
Internet.
5.根据提示记录大象的信息，以"The
elephant"为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文。
提示：1）大象是现在陆地上最大的动物;
2）出生时重约90公斤，高达1米;
12岁时，3米多高;
3）通常是灰色，有长长的鼻子，嘴的两侧分别有一颗大大的象牙;
4）性情温和，人们常常让它来运送重物，做许多事。
参考词汇：large;
kilogram;
trunk(象鼻）;
tusk(象牙）;
gentle（温和的）;
on
land;
be
known
As....
use....to..…
The
elephant
???
The
elephant
is
the
largest
animal
on
land
today.
???
???
It
is
also
a
tool
for
people
to
do
many
things.
答案解析部分
一、书面表达
1.
???There
are
many
important
Inventions
in
the
world
such
as
computers,
televisions,
radios,
modern
vehicles
and
so
on.
For
me,
the
most
important
one
is
the
mobile
phone.
We
could
be
found
wherever
we
are
as
long
as
we
take
the
mobile
phone
with
us.
The
mobile
phones
make
it
convenient
for
us
to
get
in
touch
with
each
other.
What's
more,
it
has
more
and
more
functions.
We
can
use
the
mobile
phone
to
do
many
things,
such
as
listening
to
music,
watching
videos
and
taking
photos.
We
can
also
use
the
mobile
phone
to
search
for
information
and
paying
money
for
something
we
buy
online.
How
convenient
it
is!
As
for
me.
I
usually
use
my
mobile
phone
to
contact
my
friends
and
relatives.
Besides,
when
I
read
English
newspapers
or
magazines,
I
often
use
the
mobile
phone
to
look
up
the
new
words
online.
When
I
feel
tired
or
stressed.
I
listen
to
music
on
the
mobile
phone
to
relax
myself.
In
one
word,
it's
the
most
important
invention
to
me.
解析：这是一篇提示性文章，要求以"The
most
important
invention
to
me"为题写一篇英语短文。这篇短文主要介绍对你来说最重要的发明，第一段介绍这项发明的名称，第二段介绍这项发明，第三段介绍你使用这项发明做什么。
【点评】写作时，作文内容全面
，涵盖要求信息，运用好词好句，例如：such
as，the
most
important，make
it
convenient
for
sb，use
...to
do
...，search
for
information，pay
money
for，look
up
the
new
words，feel
stressed等等，注意段落层次，符合英语思维逻辑，同时要使用好时态，以及一些衔接词,如such
as，what's
more，besides，in
one
word，等，文章上下文逻辑关系更为紧密。
?
2.
???Balzac
is
a
famous
writer
full
of
great
intelligence
and
he
has
created
many
famous
works.
People
call
him
"Father
of
modern
novel".
He
was
born
in
1799
in
France.
At
first,
he
entered
the
law
school
to
study
in
1816,
but
when
he
graduated,
he
started
writing.
He
loved
writing
very
much
at
that
time
and
he
also
worked
hard
to
make
it
a
big
success.
In
1834,
he
finished
writing
the
book
Old
Goriot.
It's
one
of
the
most
famous
works
of
Balzac.
His
writing
ability
comes
from
his
life
experience.
He
is
really
a
great
writer.
解析：这是一篇提纲作文。按照所给的提示内容来介绍
巴尔扎克
生平和代表作。根据材料内容可知本文以一般过去时为主，且有部分的一般现在时，人称主要是第三人称单数。注意主谓一致和连词的使用。写作中注意上下文的过渡，要符合逻辑，符合英语表达习惯。
【点评】这篇文章根据所给内容的提示将四个方面逐一进行了陈述，内容符合题意，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。时态运用灵活准确。一些固定短语，如be
full
of
,
be
born,
at
that
time,
work
hard
,
come
from.等以及句型结构，如
People
call
him
"Father
of
modern
novel".?
It's
one
of
the
most
famous
works
of
Balzac.
His
writing
ability
comes
from
his
life
experience.?
等运用较为得体，表达比较准确，使文章更加流畅，自然。
3.
The
most
useful
invention
to
me
???
Inventions
change
the
world
and
our
way
of
life.
They
help
us
live
a
better
life.
Of
all
the
inventions,
I
think
the
mobile
phone
is
the
most
useful
Invention.
???
The
mobile
phone
has
many
functions.
We
can
make
phone
calls
to
our
family
or
friends
anytime
and
anywhere.
We
can
surf
the
Internet,
listen
to
pop
songs
and
watch
films
on
it.
What's
more,
we
can
use
it
to
take
photos.
???
I
almost
use
it
every
day.
It's
really
convenient.
Without
it,
I
feel
uncomfortable.
???
I
think
it
makes
our
life
better
and
better.
解析：这是一篇提示性作文，要求写一下你认为最有用的发明，在写作时，首先要告诉读者在日程生活中你认为最重要的发明是什么。你用这种东西平常都做什么，多长时间使用一次，最后写如果没有了这种东西，你的感受是什么。人称为第一人称，时态为一般现在时。
【点评】文章并没有直接告诉我们他认为最重要的发明是什么，而是叙述了发明的重要性，然后点明了今天要介绍的东西——手机。介绍了平时用手机做什么，都是什么时候使用它的，同时写了没有手机时的感受。结构完整，从语言角度考虑，首先使用了一定数量的短语，比如：help
sb.
do
sth.；of
ass；make
phone
calls；surf
the
Internet；what's
more；better
and
better等等。从句子上看，有简单句，并列句和复合句，
?I
think
the
mobile
phone
is
the
most
useful
Invention.
这是一个宾语从句，
We
can
surf
the
Internet,
listen
to
pop
songs
and
watch
films
on
it.?
这是一个并列句，
?Of
all
the
inventions,
I
think
the
mobile
phone
is
the
most
useful
Invention.
这是一个包含了形容词最高级的句子。总体考虑，这是一篇不错的习作。
4.
Online
shopping
???
There
are
many
new
ways
of
shopping,
and
online
shopping
is
one
of
them.
???
Online
shopping
has
several
advantages.
First,
you
can
shop
at
any
time.
Second,
you
only
need
a
computer
and
a
mouse
to
shop
on
the
Internet
???
Third,
you
can
compare
the
prices
of
the
same
product
and
save
money.
You
can
also
receive
it
anywhere
in
the
world
at
any
time!
But
shopping
on
the
Internet
also
has
some
disadvantages.
Paying
over
the
Internet
isn't
always
safe.
You
can't
see
the
product
or
try
the
clothes
on.
???
I
think
our
life
is
changing
because
of
online
shopping.
???
One
day
no
one
will
go
to
the
shops
any
more,
because
you'll
be
able
to
buy
almost
everything
on
the
Internet.
解析：本题要求以Online
shopping为题写一篇短文，描述网购的优点和缺点，并谈谈自己的看法。根据要求及要点提示，短文可以从“网购的优点”、“网购的缺点”、“自己的看法”三个方面进行写作。短文提示要点较多，要注意表达的条理性。短文用一般现在时态，写作时要注意语句连贯，表达准确。
【点评】这是一篇很好的短文，从新购物方式着笔，引出“网购”。过渡自然。第二段讲述网购的优点及其缺点、最后谈论自己的看法。层次清楚，条理分明。第二段里用first,
second,
third等等罗列各要点，清楚明了；还运用了两个动名词短语作主语，shopping
on
the
Internet
also
has
some
disadvantages.
Paying
over
the
Internet
isn't
always
safe.?语言简捷、精炼。最后一段One
day
no
one
will
go
to
the
shops
any
more,
because
you'll
be
able
to
buy
almost
everything
on
the
Internet.用展望未来的方式表达自己的看法，方式新颖独特。
5.
The
elephant
???
The
elephant
is
the
largest
animal
on
land
today.
It
weighs
about
ninety
kilograms
and
is
about
one
metre
tall
at
birth.
When
it
is
12
years
old,
it
is
over
three
metres
tall.
???
The
elephant
is
usually
grey.
It
has
a
long
trunk
and
a
large
tusk
on
each
side
of
its
mouth.
???
The
elephant
is
known
as
a
kind
of
gentle
animal.
People
often
use
the
elephant
to
carry
heavy
things.
It
is
also
a
tool
for
people
to
do
many
things.
解析：这是一篇提纲类命题作文。主要以第三人称和一般现在时从大象是现在陆地上最大的动物；出生时重约90公斤，高达1米;
12岁时，3米多高；通常是灰色，有长长的鼻子，嘴的两侧分别有一颗大大的象牙；性情温和，人们常常让它来运送重物，做许多事。来介绍大象。写作中应适当使用连词。做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻切关系。
【点评】文章中使用了非常好的短语或句子会给文章增色。on
land陆地上；
at
birth
出生；be?known
as?以......闻名。The
elephant
is
the
largest
animal
on
land
today.?（形容词最高级）People
often
use
the
elephant
to
carry
heavy
things.?（固定搭配）It
is
also
a
tool
for
people
to
do
many
things.（不定式短语作主语）?还运用了but
,
also，
等使上下文衔接的更好。
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