Unit 7 Teenagers should be allowed to choose their own clothes 单元写作训练+答案及解析

Unit
7
Teenagers
should
be
allowed
to
choose
their
own
clothes.
本单元以“规则”为话题，结合此话题就学校和家里的规章制度进行了论述。写作中常涉及这一话题。写作时可以发表自己的观点，在表达观点时，要有理有据，观点不能偏激。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有：
(1)?I?think
teenagers
should
be
allowed
to
…
(2)?I?agree
that…
(3)?I?don’t
agree
with…
有用的表达:
1.choose
one’s
own
clothes
选择某人自己的衣服
make
a
choice
做选择
2.allow
sb
to
do
sth
允许某人做某事
3.shopping
center
购物中心
4.driver’s
license
驾照
5.worry
about=be
worried
about
担心
6.part-time
job
兼职工作
7.get
one’s
ears
pierced
得某人的耳朵被刺穿（打耳洞）
have
one’s
hair
cut=cut
one’s
hair
使得头发被剪（理发）
8.serious
enough
足够严肃，严谨
9.work
at
night
在夜间工作
10.wear
silly
earring
戴傻傻的耳环
11.sb
need
to
do
sth
某人需要做某事
12.spent
time
with
friends
花时间和朋友在一起
13.be
excited
about
sth/doing
sth
对某物、做某事感到兴奋
14.take
photos=take
a
photo
照相
15.use
a
flash
使用闪光灯新
16.protect/keep
/stop
sb
/sth
from
doing
sth
阻止某人/某物做某事
17.stop
to
do
sth
停下来去做某事
stop
doing
sth停止正在做的事情
18.stay
by
my
side
呆在我旁边
19．make
sure
确信
20．
keep
sb
away
from
sth
使得某人远离某物
21.hurt
oneself
伤到某人自己
22.shout
angrily
生气地大叫
23.talk
back
顶嘴
24.think
back
to
回想到
25.regret
doing
sth
后悔做过某事
regret
to
do
sth
后悔去做某事
26.encourage
sb
to
do
sth
鼓励某人做某事
27.give
sb
a
chance
to
do
sth=give
sb
chances
to
do
sth给某人机会做某事
Have
a
chance
to
do
sth=have
chances
to
do
sth有机会做某事
28.make
one’s
own
decision
自己做决定
29.western
countries
西方的国家
30.manage
to
do
sth
设法做某事
31.get
to
class
late
上课迟到
32.take
the
test
参加考试
pass
the
test
通过考试
fail
the
text
考试失败
take
the
test
later
补考
33.be
strict
with
sb
in
sth
对某人在某方面要求严格
34.hobby(名，爱好)—hobbies新课
35.get
in
the
way
of
（doing）妨碍，挡道
36.run(动，跑)runner(名，运动员，跑步者)
37.running
star
运动明星
38.on
one’s
school
team
在某人的校队
39.grow
up
长大
40.achieve
one’s
dream
=make
one’s
dream
come
true
实现某人的梦想
41.have
nothing
against
doing
sth没有理由反对做某事
42.agree/disagree
to
do
sth
同意/不同意做某事
43.be
serious
about
sth/doing
sth对某事/做某事严肃/认真
44.it’s
fair/unfair
to
do
sth
做某事是公平/不公平的
【典型例题】
国有国法，校有校规。在你的学校中一定有很多的规章制度规范同学们的行为。请你写一篇短文，向大家介绍一两条校规或校纪，并谈一下自己的看法。
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【优秀范文】
There
are
many
rules
in
our
school.?
At
our
school
we
have
to
wear
uniforms
every
day.
The
problem
is
that
all
my
classmates
think
the
uniforms
are
ugly.
I?think
young
people
should?look
smart,
so
I’d
like
to
wear
my
own
clothes.
If
we
have
to
wear
uniforms,
we
should?be
allowed
to
design
our
own
uniforms.
That
would
be
a
good
way
to
keep
both
teachers
and
students
happy.
Although
we
have
different
views
on
the
rules,
I?think
everyone
should
obey
the
school
rules.
【常考类型】
1．（2017·浙江初三一模）
为配合学校“诚信教育”活动，学校英语报开展了以“Try
to
be
honest”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的内容提示，写一篇征文稿。
（1）列举你班同学存在的不诚实现象：抄作业，考试作弊，说谎话......;
（2）简述诚实的重要性，并用你的一次具体经历加以说明。
注意：（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和学校名称。
（2）词数100左右。
（3）短文首句仅供参考，不计入总数。
参考词汇：作弊cheat（v.）说谎tell
a
lie
Try
to
be
honest
To
be
honest
is
one
of
the
most
treasured
traditional
values
in
China.____________________
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【范文】
Try
to
be
honest
To
be
honest
is
one
of
the
most
treasured
traditional
values
in
China.
The
children
are
taught
to
be
honest
when
they
are
very
young.
At
schools
the
students
are
also
instructed
to
be
honest.
However,
with
the
development
of
society,
we
often
hear
complaints
about
dishonesty.
Reports
with
the
theme
of
dishonesty
often
appear
in
the
media.
For
example,
some
people
try
to
get
rich
and
live
a
comfortable
life.
But
they
do
not
work
hard
honestly,
instead
they
cheat
others.
They
sell
something
quite
ordinary
at
a
very
high
price.
Some
people’s
delaying
paying
back
the
loan
can
serve
as
another
example.
Some
people,
including
some
college
students,
get
loan
from
the
bank,
and
promise
to
pay
within,
say,
3
years.
However,
they
don’t
do
that.
The
dishonest
people
sometimes
can
get
benefit
from
their
behaviors.
So
some
people
assert
that
dishonesty
can
bring
people
benefit,
while
honesty
only
makes
people
suffer.
Is
that
so?
Definitely
not.
It
is
always
true
that
honesty
is
the
best
policy.
It
pays
to
be
honest.
The
cheater
selling
"the
treasure"
mentioned
above
will
surely
be
disclosed
and
punished
some
day.
On
the
contrary,
if
he
had
been
honest,
neither
the
buyer
nor
he
himself
would
have
suffered.
The
people
who
do
not
return
money
in
time
will
sooner
or
later
become
infamous,
and
will
not
get
the
money
from
others
again.
If
he
had
acted
differently,
he
would
have
earned
respect
and
trust,
meanwhile,
the
bank
would
not
have
suffered
from
loss.
【解析】这是一篇诚信征文，英语作文要注意人称和时态，注意提供的观点、材料，要注意句子的完整性，谓语动词的正确形式，句子之间的衔接和过渡。英语作文，要忠实于材料，不必扩展，注意用好连词，多用非谓语，慎用较难的句型，一定不能写错句。
2．（2019·全国初三单元测试）
俗话说：“国有国法，家有家规。”为了使子女身心健康、顺利成长，使家庭成员之间的关系更融洽、更和谐，每个家庭都会有这样或那样的家庭规矩。比如：必须按时回家，不准玩电脑游戏等。请你结合你家的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My
family
rules”为题，写一篇短文。
提示：1.
家里有哪些家规；
2.
对家规的感受；
3.
对父母的建议。
要求：词数100左右。
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例文:
My
family
rules
My
parents
are
very
strict
with
me，and
they
have
made
some
basic
rules
that
I
must
obey.
Firstly，I
must
get
home
and
finish
my
homework
on
time
after
school.
Secondly，I
cannot
play
computer
games，even
in
my
free
time.
Thirdly，I
have
to
do
some
chores，such
as
making
the
bed
and
tidying
my
bedroom.
If
I
break
one
of
them，I
will
be
punished.
But
thanks
to
these
rules，I
can
live
a
healthy
and
regular
life.
I
think
the
second
rule
is
unfair
to
me.
I
hope
sometimes
I
could
be
allowed
to
play
computer
games
for
a
while.
It
will
make
me
relaxed.
【解析】
1.题干解读：该题目属于记叙文写作，请你结合你家的实际情况，根据下面的提示和要求，以“My
family
rules”为题，写一篇短文。提示：1.
家里有哪些家规；
2.
对家规的感受；
3.
对父母的建议。要求：词数100左右。第二段叙述“守株待兔”这一故事；第三段概括故事寓意并结尾。
2.例文点评：例文采用第一人称来叙述故事内容；时态采用一般现在时为主。这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First,
Secondly,
Thirdly）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。
3.高分亮点：
短语：are
very
strict
with；after
school；play
computer
games；such
as；make
me
relaxed。
句型：
定语从句they
have
made
some
basic
rules
that
I
must
obey.条件状语从句If
I
break
one
of
them，I
will
be
punished.宾语从句I
hope
sometimes
I
could
be
allowed
to
play
computer
games
for
a
while.
【点睛】
这篇文章语言规范，叙事清楚，时态运用正确，叙述清楚条里，语句通顺，意思连贯，特别适用了表示先后顺序的词（First,
Secondly,
Thirdly）使文章更具条理性，思维缜密。（1）学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。（2）列好提纲和要点及需要的重要短语或句型。（3）切忌堆砌词语、句子，注意运用适当的连词使句子流畅、连贯。注意表达的顺序。
（4）注意书写的规范：大小写、标点符号等的正确运用。
（5）注意检查：单词拼写、语法、动词时态、语序、主谓一致等。
3．（2019·山东初三课时练习）
你校的英语俱乐部将开辟专栏讨论“中学生赞同和不赞同的一些家规”。假如你叫王婷，请你根据下面的要点提示用英语写一篇短文向该栏目投稿。
要点提示：
1.列出你赞同的一条家规并陈述观点；
2.列出你不赞同的一条家规并陈述观点。
要求：
2.内容须包括所有的要点，可适当增加细节；
2.词数100左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My
name
is
Wang
Ting.
As
the
saying
goes，“Nothing
can
be
accomplished
without
norms
or
standards.”
So
there
are
many
rules
in
my
family.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
例文:
My
name
is
Wang
Ting.
As
the
saying
goes，“Nothing
can
be
accomplished
without
norms
or
standards.”
So
there
are
many
rules
in
my
family.
I
have
to
clean
my
bedroom
every
day.
I
think
it's
a
good
rule.
On
the
one
hand，I
should
learn
to
look
after
myself
from
a
young
age.
On
the
other
hand，it
is
comfortable
and
relaxing
for
me
to
sleep
in
a
clean
bedroom.
I'm
not
allowed
to
have
my
own
hobbies-singing
and
drawing.
I
don't
agree
with
it.
I
think
my
parents
should
support
my
dreams.
That's
because
dreams
can
make
me
study
hard
and
be
full
of
energy.
I
really
hope
my
parents
can
understand
me
and
give
me
more
freedom.
【解析】
1.
题干解读：本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是对一些家规的看法，重点就是要分别具体阐述自己赞同的家规以及不赞同的家规，并且把自己的观点表达的清楚透彻，为什么赞同，为什么不赞同。
2.
例文点评：文章采用先总后分的结构把意思表达的很明确。先以谚语“无规矩不成方圆”总体概括文章大意，然后分别描写自己赞同的观点及为什么赞同的原因，然后再阐述自己不赞同的观点及为什么不赞同的原因，文章结构清晰，结构层次感较强，语言表述准确清晰。
3.
高分亮点：
短语：have
to；on
the
one
hand；on
the
other
hand；look
after；agree
with；from
a
young
age。
句型：I
think＋宾语从句；it
is
adj.
for
sb.
to
do
sth.。
4．（2019·山东初三单元测试）
Loving
English杂志社计划进行一些针对中学生对在家生活看法的调查。假如你叫林森，请你就邮件中所提出的问题，给该杂志社的编辑回一封电子邮件，发表自己的意见，并说明喜欢或者不喜欢的理由。
Dear
students，
There
must
be
some
rules
in
your
family，right？How
do
you
like
them？
What's
the
best
rule
and
what's
the
worst
rule？
Please
e-mail
us
and
share
your
thoughts
with
our
readers.
Loving
English
要求：1.回答邮件中提出的所有问题，并表达你的看法。
2.词数90左右，电子邮件的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。
Dear
Editor，
There
are
many
rules
in
my
family，some
good
and
some
bad.
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Yours,
Lin
Sen
例文:
Dear
Editor，
There
are
many
rules
in
my
family，some
good
and
some
bad.
My
parents
are
very
strict
with
me.
For
example，I
have
to
get
up
at
six
every
morning
and
I
have
to
be
in
bed
by
ten.
It's
hard
for
me
but
I
think
it's
necessary.
Thanks
to
these
rules，I
am
always
in
good
health.
Also，I
can't
play
computer
games
before
I
finish
my
homework.
I
think
this
is
the
best
rule,
because
I
can
play
computer
games
for
a
while
after
all,
and
it
always
leads
me
to
do
my
homework
first.
But
I
can't
go
out
on
the
night
of
weekdays,
and
on
weekends,
I
have
to
go
home
before
seven.
I
think
that
is
unfair!
Students
should
be
allowed
to
have
their
own
spare
time
with
friends.
We
can
study
together
and
exercise
together.
This
is
the
worst
rule
I
have
ever
met!
Yours,
Lin
Sen
【解析】题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，要求学生以林森的身份给杂志社回一封邮件。邮件内容要包括描述自己家的家规、你是如何看待它们的、其中最好和最差的家规分别是什么、你喜不喜欢这些家规并给出理由。
例文点评：例文用第一人称展开介绍，时态采用一般现在时为主。文章详细列举了一些家规以及“我”对它们的看法，特别点明了我认为最好的和最差的家规是什么，并给出了原因。文章内容符合材料要求，语言很有条理，文章层次分明。
高分亮点：
短语：be
strict
with；thanks
to；for
a
while；after
all。
句型：before引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句；省略关系代词的定语从句。
5．（2019·山东初三单元测试）
假如你将成为一名司机，你觉得哪些事情是应该做的，哪些事情是不应该做的？请根据以下提示写一篇短文，不少于60词。要求：条理清楚，意思连贯，句式规范。
提示：1.
不能无证驾驶，应懂得交通规则；
2.
遵守交通法规，不应该闯红灯；
3.
不应该酒后驾车；
4.
不应该在驾车时接打电话。
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例文：
If
you
want
to
become
a
driver,
you
should
learn
to
drive
carefully
and
understand
some
knowledge
about
driving.
First,
you
shouldn't
drive
without
a
driver's
license.
You
should
study
the
traffic
rules.
Second,
you
must
obey
the
traffic
rules
and
don't
go
when
the
traffic
light
is
red.
Third,
you
mustn't
drive
after
drinking.
It's
very
dangerous.
Fourth,
you
shouldn't
call
when
driving.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文属于说明文写作，先总述司机要求to
drive
carefully
and
understand
some
knowledge
about
driving；接着分四点介绍哪些事情是应该做的，哪些事情是不应该做的。
2.例文点评：这篇习作虽然只有一个自然段，但结构清晰，是“总分式”结构，用第二人称介绍了一些驾驶常识。内容丰富，条理清楚，意思连贯，句式规范，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
短语：want
to
do、learn
to
do、a
driver's
license、the
traffic
rules、after
drinking
句型：Second,
you
must
obey
the
traffic
rules
and
don't
go
when
the
traffic
light
is
red.（复杂并列结构）
If
you
want
to
become
a
driver,
you
should
learn
to
drive
carefully
and
understand
some
knowledge
about
driving.（条件状语从句）
Fourth,
you
shouldn't
call
when
driving.（非谓语动词结构）
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
6．（2019·山东枣庄·初三）
假如你是班长，学校图书管理员要你根据下列提纲向你们班的同学宣布阅览室的一些规定：
1．阅览室开放时间：
星期一至星期五的下午5：00～6：00；星期六上午8：00～11：30。
2．不准在阅览室大声朗读。
3．不准在阅览室吃零食。
4．不准在阅览室使用手机。
5．不准在阅览室吸烟。
6．不准把书和杂志带出阅览室。
要求：1.词数：80～100词；2.开头已给出，不计入总词数。
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【范文】
Attention，please！I'd
like
to
tell
you
something
about
the
rules
of
the
school
reading
room.The
reading
room
is
open
between
5：00p.m.and
6：00
p．m.from
Monday
to
Friday.It
is
also
open
between
8：00
a．m.and
11：30
a．m
on
Saturdays.After
you
enter
the
reading
room，you
should
keep
it
clean
and
quiet.Firstly，you
are
not
allowed
to
read
aloud
or
have
snacks.Secondly，you
are
not
allowed
to
use
your
cell
phones
or
smoke.Finally，you
are
not
allowed
to
take
the
books
or
magazines
out
of
the
reading
room.
I
hope
everyone
can
obey
the
rules.That's
all.Thank
you.
【解析】
这是一篇给材料作文。写作要点给出的比较详细。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时态来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。在句式运用上，可把简单的祈使句式转化为You
are
not
allowed
to
do
这种句式形式。另外，为了使文章更具条理性，可使用firstly,
secondly,
thirdly
,finally等副词把文章串联起来。
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