Unit 10 You're supposed to shake hands 单元写作训练+答案及解析

Unit
10
You
are
supposed
to
shake
hands.
本单元以“风俗习惯”为话题，围绕这一话题主要学习各国的不同礼仪，如见面礼仪、餐桌礼仪等，谈论在不同的场合应该做什么，了解不同国家的习俗。最能体现本单元话题以及语言运用能力的作文为介绍不同国家风俗习惯的短文、书信或邮件等。
常用表达有：
（1）?You
are
supposed/expected
to…
（2）?You
should…
（3）?You
are
not
supposed
to…
有用表达：
1.?be?supposed?to?do
sth被期望/要求做某事；应该??
2.?shake?hands?握手??
?
3.?drop?by?顺便拜访
4.?after?all毕竟;终归?
5.?pick?up?拾起；捡起???
接某人??
6.?make?a?noise?发出噪音?
7.?table?manners?餐桌礼仪?
8.?get?used?to?习惯于???
9.?be?relaxed?about对…随意/放松
10.?get
mad大动肝火;气愤
11.clean…off
把…擦掉
12.take
off脱下(衣服)；(飞机等)起飞
13.make
an
effort作出努力
14.make
sb
feel
at
home使某人感到宾至如归
15.cut
up切开;切碎
16.be
expected
to
do
被期待做…
17.make
friends
with与…交朋友
18.as
soon
as一…就…
19.to
one’s
surprise令某人吃惊的是
20.
be
different
from
与…不同
21.on
time
按时
in
time及时
22.be?supposed?to
do
sth被期望做某事，应该做某事???
23.make
plans
to
do
==
plan
to
do.
打算做某事　
24.go
out
of
one’s
way
to
do
特意，专门做某事　
25.after?all毕竟
【典型例题】
假如你是苏敏，你的美国笔友Tina发来电子邮件，说她下周要来中国，但对中国的风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪了解很少，于是向你寻求帮助，请你给她回一封电子邮件，告诉她有关中国风俗习惯、见面礼仪及餐桌礼仪的情况。
提示：
1.?风俗习惯的不同：中国人第一次见面时握手；
2.?见面时谈论的内容；
3.?餐桌礼仪的不同：我们用筷子就餐；就餐时不能用筷子指着别人；就餐时不可以多说话等。
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【优秀范文】
Dear
Tina,
I’m
very
happy
to
hear
that?you’re
coming
to
china
next
week.
I?hope
to
see
you
soon.
As
we
all
know,
different
countries
have
different
customs.
So
the
manners
in
China
are
very
different
from
those
in
your
country.
Let
me
tell
you
something
about
customs
and
manners
in
our
country.
First,
we
Chinese?are
supposed
to
shake
hands
when
we
meet
for
the
first
time.
Then
we
greet
each
other.
After
that,
you
can
talk
about
something
relaxing.
But
you
are
not
supposed
to
talk
about
someone’s
salary,
age
and
so
on.
Second,
we
use
chopsticks
to
have
meals
while
you
use
your
forks
at
table.
Also,
it’s
bad
manners
to
talk
too
much
when
you’re
having
meals.
I?hope
you’ll
have
a
wonderful
time
in
our
country.
【常考类型】
Writing1（2020·四川乐至·初三期末）
俗话说“入乡随俗”，去另一个国家前，先了解其习俗和历史是很有必要的。请你根据初中阶段所学到的关于英国的习俗和历史，写一篇文章，投稿到某英文版的旅游文化刊物。
（写作要点）
礼仪
第一次见面通常握手
跟年长的人说话要用Mr.和Mrs.
饮食
在茶会(tea
party)上只能喝茶，不喝咖啡或果汁
城市
伦敦(London)，约两千年历史
利物浦(Liverpool)，在18世纪以工业闻名
注意事项
在公共场合不要大声说话
……(请再列举1～2点)
（写作要求）
1.词数90左右；
2.短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中须包括所有写作要点，但不要逐字翻译，可适当加入过渡语句，使短文通顺、连贯；
4.不能照抄原文，文中不能出现考生真实姓名和学校名称。
Before
we
go
to
another
country,
it
is
necessary
for
us
to
learn
something
about
its
customs
and
history.
Take
Britain
as
an
example.
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The
golden
rule
is：Watch
the
other
people.
Do
as
they
do.
【范文】
Before
we
go
to
another
country,
it
is
necessary
for
us
to
learn
something
about
its
customs
and
history.
Take
Britain
as
an
example.
People
usually
shake
hands
when
they
meet
for
the
first
time.
We
should
say
Mr.
and
Mrs.
when
we
talk
with
older
people.
People
can
only
drink
tea
at
a
tea
party,
but
not
coffee
or
juice.
In
addition
to
the
customs,
we
need
to
know
about
the
history.
London
has
a
long
history
of
about
two
thousand
years.
Liverpool
is
famous
for
industry
in
the
18th
century.
When
we
are
in
Britain,
we
can't
talk
loudly
in
public.
And
we
should
stand
in
a
line
when
we
wait
for
buses
or
trains.
The
golden
rule
is：Watch
the
other
people.
Do
as
they
do.
【解析】
试题分析：这是材料作文，介绍英国的习俗和历史。本文给出了一些要点。我们要做的就是用正确的英语把要点表达出来，并适当发挥想象说出自己的观点。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不要遗漏要点，并适当发挥。根据材料内容可知本文主要是用一般现在时来写，要注意主谓一致等问题。写作中要适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
【写作亮点】这篇短文语句通顺，条理清晰，表达准确。特别连词In
addition
to运用，使文章表达更具条里性，过度自然，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
Writing2（2020·全国初三单元测试）
音乐的世界,
将世间万事万物带进了美好的时空。每每听着音乐,
就会忘记所有的烦恼和不快。音乐,
有着无穷魅力!音乐是世界上最美的语言!请你以“Music
Makes
Me
________”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
Music
Makes
Me
___________
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例文：
Music
Makes
Me
Happy
I
like
music
very
much.
It
gives
me
energy
when
I'm
tired
and
it
makes
me
happy
when
I'm
sad.
Music
is
very
important
in
our
life.
If
there
is
no
music,
our
life
won't
be
so
interesting.
Different
people
like
different
kinds
of
music.
I
like
electronic
music
that's
loud.
It
makes
me
excited.
I
also
like
music
that
I
can
dance
to.
The
Cool
Kids
is
my
favorite
band.
I
can't
stand
music
that
is
quiet
and
slow.
It
makes
me
sleepy.
Music
is
the
most
beautiful
language.
Enjoy
the
music
you
like,
and
enjoy
yourself!
【解析】
题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，以“音乐使我……”为题写一篇文章。根据题目可知，本文时态为一般现在时，人称以第一人称和第三人称为主，主要介绍音乐给自己带来的感受以及在生活中的作用。
例文点评：本文分为两部分，第一部分主要介绍“我”喜欢的以及不喜欢的音乐种类，并讲述了音乐带给自己的感受，第二部分总结全文，点明主题。文章逻辑顺畅，紧扣话题，向我们介绍了音乐的魅力。
高分亮点：
短语：kinds
of；electronic
music；dance
to；enjoy
yourself。
句型：If
there
is
no
music,
our
life
won't
be
so
interesting.（if引导的条件状语从句）I
also
like
music
that
I
can
dance
to.（that引导的定语从句）
Writing3（2019·山东初三单元测试）书面表达。
节目《朗读者》备受欢迎。阅读使人明智、使人放松、使人充实，你喜欢阅读吗?
请你以"Reading
is
very
important"为题,写一篇有关阅读的短文。要点:
1.
阅读的益处;
2.
你的阅读习惯（喜欢的书籍、阅读的时间、地点、购书方式等）;
3.
你的阅读体会;
4.
你的阅读计划;
5.
号召大家多阅读。
提示:
1.
短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;
2.
短文中应包含所有要点;
3.
词数100左右，可适当发挥。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Reading
is
very
important
Reading
can
not
only
open
up
our
eyes
but
also
improve
our
knowledge.
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【范文】
Reading
is
very
important
Reading
can
not
only
open
up
our
eyes
but
also
improve
our
knowledge.
I
like
reading
a
lot.
In
my
spare
time,
I
often
read
newspapers
and
magazines,from
which
I
can
get
lots
of
fun
and
learn
about
what's
going
on
around
the
world.
I
also
read
my
favorite
books
such
as
storybooks
and
novels,which
make
me
relax
and
happy.
On
weekends
I
usually
spend
a
whole
afternoon
reading
in
the
library.
And
I
often
read
for
about
half
an
hour
before
going
to
bed.
I
used
to
buy
my
favorite
books
at
the
bookstore,
but
now
I
usually
buy
them
online.
Summer
vacation
is
coming.
I
plan
to
read
more
English
books
to
improve
my
English
ability.
I
often
share
my
favorite
books
with
my
friends
and
classmates.
It's
time
for
us
to
take
up
a
good
reading
habit
because
it's
very
important
and
necessary
for
us.
Let's
do
more
reading
together.
【解析】
1.题干解读：这是一篇提纲作文。内容是以"Reading
is
Very
Important"为题，写一篇有关阅读的短文，时态主要为一般现在时，人称主要为第一人称。
2.例文点评：例文采取三段式，用第一人称来写作。开头就点明阅读的重要性，第二段就具体列举了自己与阅读的故事，从而进一步说明阅读的重要性，最后写了自己关于暑假的阅读计划，号召大家阅读。
3.高分亮点：
短语：around
the
world
全世界；and
so
on
等等；make
sb+adj
让某人怎样；spend+时间+doing
sth
花时间做某事；share
sth
with
sb
和某人分享某某。
句型:
1．I
also
read
my
favorite
books
such
as
story
books，novels
and
so
on，which
make
me
relax
and
happy．such
as
例如，and
so
on等等；which作为关系词的定语从句，which做主语，修饰先行词favorite
books。
2．And
I
often
read
for
about
half
an
hour
before
going
to
bed．before
going
to
bed是省略句，完整表达是before
I
go
to
bed。
3．It's
time
for
us
to
form
a
good
reading
habit
because
it's
very
important
and
necessary
for
us．It's
time
for
sb
to
do
sth
某人做某事的时间到了；because
引导的原因状语从句。
Writing4（2019·山东初三单元测试）
某英文论坛的网友正在谈论自己最喜欢的电视节目。你最喜欢的电视节目是什么？请你根据以下提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你最喜欢的电视节目，参与此话题的讨论。要求：80词左右。
提示：
1.
节目的名字；
2.
节目的性质：体育节目/娱乐节目/访谈节目/选秀节目…；
3.
此节目的内容或特色；4.
你喜欢此节目的原因。
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例文:
My
favorite
TV
program
is
Happy
Camp.
It's
an
entertainment
program.
I
watch
it
every
Saturday
night.
Many
famous
movie
stars
are
often
on
the
show.
They
act
and
play
games
with
the
hosts.
They'
re
also
interviewed
by
the
hosts.
Through
the
program,I
can
learn
many
things
about
the
movie
stars,
such
as
their
personalities,
likes
and
dislikes.
This
program
is
interesting
and
I
can
learn
something
from
it,
so
I
like
it
very
much.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文属于话题作文，已经明确给出需要写作的话题“最喜欢的电视节目”，然后就此展开讨论。写作时可以按照所给的提示，逐一进行描述即可，要注意句子结构，适当的使用主从句提高作文的档次。
2.
例文点评：本文使用三段式描写，第一段直接引出最喜欢的电视节目，第二段具体描述节目的具体特色内容，第三段描写喜欢这个节目的原因，把文章描述的很透彻，条理清晰，句式结构简单明了。
3.
高分亮点：短语：TV
program；Happy
Camp；movie
star；such
as；句型：so连接的并列句；It
is
…系表结构；and连接的并列句。
Writing5（2018·全国初三单元测试）
中西方的饮食习惯大有不同。请写一篇80词左右的短文，介绍一些有关的差异。
要点提示：
1．food
2．things
used
for
eating
3．eating
etiquette(like
whether
people
can
make
some
noise
when
eating)
词语提示：
difference，prefer，steak(牛排)，make
a
loud
noise，rude...
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【范文】
There
are
many
differences
in
eating
habits
between
China
and
Western
countries．
Firstly，Chinese
people
eat
rice，noodles，vegetables
and
meat
while
Western
people
prefer
bread，milk，salad
and
steak．Secondly，Westerners
are
used
to
eating
with
a
knife
and
fork，but
the
Chinese
eat
with
chopsticks．Thirdly,
Westerners
don’t
make
a
loud
noise
during
meals．They
think
it
is
rude．But
it
is
common
for
the
Chinese
to
talk
with
family
and
friends
while
having
dinner．
【解析】
这是一篇话题作文，谈论中西方的饮食习惯的不同。根据要点提示介绍一下中西方的饮食习惯的不同之处。主要从食物、吃饭时使用的餐具、和吃饭过程中的礼节等三个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时，人称较为灵活。注意作文中必须包含词语提示，并适当发挥。写作时，语言要简洁，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。
【亮点一】
本文在写作时，使用了表示顺序的词语，如Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等，使文章层次清楚，一目了然。
【高分句型一】
Westerners
are
used
to
eating
with
a
knife
and
fork，but
the
Chinese
eat
with
chopsticks．西方人习惯用刀叉吃饭，但中国人用筷子吃饭。短语are
used
to
doing
sth.
的应用，使文章具有了可读性。but
the
Chinese
eat
with
chopsticks．表示转折。
【高分句型二】
But
it
is
common
for
the
Chinese
to
talk
with
family
and
friends
while
having
dinner．但是中国人在吃饭的时候和家人和朋友聊天是很普遍的。这句话使用了句型It
is
+形容词+for
sb.
to
do
sth.
说明该生的语言功底深厚。
Writing6（2019·全国初二课时练习）
为了实践社会主义核心价值观，你校学生会决定举办以“文明礼仪伴我行”为主题的英语征文比赛，请你根据以下要点提示及要求，写一篇英语短文参赛。
要点提示：1.
尊敬(respect)父母，帮助他们做家务；2.
对人有礼貌，诚实友好，帮助他人；3.
不在公共场合大声讲话，不乱扔付费；4.
节约粮食，节约用水；
……
要求：1.
短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息（不要逐字翻译），并在此基础上适当发挥；2.
80词左右（短文开头与结尾已给出，
不计入总词数）；3.
文章中不得出现真实的人名，校名和地名。
As
a
middle
school
student,
we
should
have
good
manners.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In
a
word,
good
manners
can
make
a
difference
and
lead
to
a
better
future.
【范文】
As
a
middle
school
student,
we
should
have
good
manners.
First,
we
should
respect
our
parents
and
help
them
do
some
housework.
Second,
we
should
be
polite
and
honest.
Also,
it’s
always
good
to
be
kind
and
friendly.
We
should
try
our
best
to
help
the
people
in
need.
Third,
we’d
better
not
talk
loudly
in
public.
Don’t
throw
rubbish
everywhere.
It’s
our
duty
to
keep
our
city
clean
and
beautiful.
Fourth,
we
are
supposed
to
save
food
and
water.
Lastly,
it’s
important
and
necessary
for
us
to
help
protect
the
environment.
In
a
word,
good
manners
can
make
a
difference
and
lead
to
a
better
future.
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求以“文明礼仪伴我行”为主题写一篇参赛征文，根据提纲提示，本文要从在家、在学校、在公共场所及节约粮食、水等等方面进行写作。要求要包含提纲中提示的所有信息，并作必要的发挥。短文用第一人称，用一般现在时态，可以适当用一些含情态动词：should,
can等等句子帮助表达责任与义务。短文要作到思想健康，主旨鲜明突出。
写作亮点：本文用first,
second,
third,
fourth,
lastly等等列出中学生如何做到“文明礼仪伴我行”，层次清楚，要点分明。文中多次用到情态动词should，明确人们的责任与义务，主旨鲜明，重点突出。文中使用的不定式作主语的结构，had
better,
be
supposed
to等结构都为本文增色不少。
【考点定位】
考查提纲类作文。
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