Unit 12 Life is full of the unexpected单元写作训练+答案及解析

Unit
12
Life
is
full
of
the
unexpected.
本话题主要涉及生活中那些出乎意料的事，主要运用记叙，可适当发挥自己的看法。
有用表达：
1.
take
a
shower洗浴
2.
leave
my
backpack
at
home把背包忘在家里
3.
get
back
to
school返回学校
4.
start
teaching开始教学
5.
go
off响铃
6.
rush
out
the
door冲出房门
7.
give
sb
a
lift捎某人一程
8.
miss
both
events错过两个事件
9.
full
of
unexpected充满着不可预知性
10.
be
about
to
do
sth正要做某事
11.
stare
in
disbelief
at难以置信地盯着.
12.
raise
above
the
burning
building
从正在燃烧的楼上升起
13.
jump
out
of
bed跳下床
14.
collect
the
math
homework收数学作业
15.
complete
the
work
for
my
boss
完成老板的工作
16.
make
the
apple
pie制作苹果馅饼
17.
show
up赶到,出现
18.
add
the
green
beans加绿豆荚
19.
get
dressed紧张
20.
hand
in
homework
上交作业
21.
costume
party化装舞会
22.
take
place发生
23.
play
all
kinds
of
tricks
and
jokes
on
each
other相互开各种玩笑
24.
sell
out卖完，售完
25.
lose
weight减肥
26.
by
the
end
of
that
day到那天结束时
27.
end
up以…结束
28.
get
married结婚
29.
have
a
happy
ending有一个幸福的结局
30.
fear
spread
across
the
whole
country
恐惧席卷整个国家
31.
the
unluckiest
day
of
my
life
一生中最不幸的一天
32.
head
west
向西行驶
33.
n
the
middle
of
the
road在路中间i
34.
turn
around
调头
35.
make
an
unexpected
discovery作一个出乎意料的发现
36.cancel
the
plan取消计划
37.
By
the
time
I
got
outside,
the
bus
had
already
gone.
当我出来时，公汽已经走了。
38.
When
I
got
to
school,
I
realized
I
had
left
my
backpack
at
home.
当我到达学校时，我才意识到我把背包忘在家里了。
39.I
didn’t
even
brush
my
teeth
or
wash
my
face.
我甚至没有刷牙也没有洗脸。
40.My
bad
luck
had
unexpectedly
turned
into
a
good
thing.
我的坏运气出乎意料地变成了好事。
41.I
am
so
glad
that
I
canceled
my
plan
to
go
to
the
market
我是如此高兴以致取消了去商场的计划。
【典型例题】
假如你是Tom,
请记述你昨天不同寻常的一天：
1.
闹钟没响，所以起床晚了；??
2.
想洗澡时，爸爸已经在洗澡了；
3.?没吃早餐去赶公交，可到达公交站时车已经走了，只好跑到学校去；
4.到达学校时，老师已经开始上课，对你的迟到感到很生气；
5.交作业时发现作业放在家里了；?
6.历史课上受到老师的表扬，因为在家做了大量的准备工作。
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【优秀范文】
Yesterday
was
a
really
bad
day
for
me.?
To
start
with,
my
alarm
clock
didn’t
go
off
so
that
I
got
up
late.
By
the
time
I
got
up,
my
father
had
already
gotten
into
the
shower.
Then
I
rushed
to
the
bus
stop
without
breakfast.
By
the
time
I
got
there,
the
bus
had
already
left
and
I
had
to
rushed
to
school.
When
I
got
to
school,
my
teacher
had
already
started
teaching
and
he
was
really
angry
with
me.
Then
it
was
time
to
hand
in
homework,
but
I
had
left
it
at
home.
I
was
really
embarrassed
at
that
time.
One
good
thing
was
that
my
history
teacher
said
something
good
to
me
because
I
had
done
a
lot
to
prepare
for
this
class.
It
was
the
only
good
thing
for
me
yesterday.
Writing1
（2020·浙江衢州·中考真题）
假设你是Daming，以下是你的英国朋友Tony发给你的一封电子邮件，请根据该邮件内容给他回一封邮件。
To：Daming
From：Tony
Subject：Life
with
family
Hi
Daming,
Long
time
no
see.
I’ve
never
spent
so
much
time
staying
at
home
like
this
holiday.
So
I
have
more
chances
to
stay
with
my
family,
I
have
a
deep
feeling
of
their
love.
And
I
want
to
do
something
for
them,
but
I
have
no
idea
about
it.
What
do
you
often
do
to
show
your
love
to
your
family?
And
what’s
the
best
way
to
spend
your
time
together?
Hope
to
get
your
reply
soon!
Yours,
Tony
要求：
1．考生需按电子邮件格式完成整封邮件：
2．邮件中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息；
3．词数：90～110。
To：
From：
Subject：
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【范文】
To：Tony
From：Daming
Subject：Life
with
family
Hi
Tony,
I’m
glad
that
we
both
have
a
wonderful
family
time
these
days.
Deeply
touched
by
their
love,
I
try
to
do
something
to
show
my
love,
too.
As
you
know,
I
was
a
lazy
boy.
But
now
things
change
a
lot.
I
often
help
Mum
with
housework,
such
as
sweeping,
washing
and
so
on.
Can
you
believe
I
can
cook
now?
My
parents
are
proud
to
see
I’m
growing.
As
for
the
common
time
with
the
family
together,
I
think
the
best
way
is
to
do
something
alike.
Last
time
Dad
and
I
enjoyed
a
wonderful
film
together,
and
then
shared
our
feelings.
What
a
brilliant
time!
Hope
this
helps!
Yours,
Daming
【解析】
1.题干解读：本题属于书信作文，写作时要注意书信标准格式。文章主要内容在于解答托尼在来信中提出的两个问题，即“大明通过做什么事来表现对家人的爱”和“与家人在一起时最好做些什么事”。
2.写作指导：本文是大明阐述自己的经历叙述和建议，应用第一人称进行写作，叙述的经历已经发生则应用一般过去时，其他事实陈述则用一般现在时。文章思路要清晰，解答题目中所列问题，并注意单词拼写及时态。
Writing2
（2020·浙江海宁·初三一模）
假如你是李华，你校每年都举行英语演讲比赛，今年的演讲主题是The
English
Novel
I
Like
Best。你是去年的英语演讲冠军，请你在比赛开始前做一个简短发言。发言内容包括：
The
purpose
of
the
competition
Improve
students’
listening
and
speaking
skills
Form
good
habits
of
reading
English
novels
Your
advice
for
the
speakers
Finish
your
speech
within
5
minutes
Speak
clearly
and
loudly
Use
your
body
languages
Your
wish
for
the
competition
…
注意：1.
发言必须包括以上提示内容，并适当发挥；
2.
词数：100左右；
3.
发言稿的开头与结尾已经给出，不计入词数。
Good
afternoon,
everyone,
Welcome
to
this
year’s
English
speech
competition.
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Thank
you!
【范文】
Good
afternoon,
everyone,
Welcome
to
this
year’s
English
speech
competition.
I
feel
greatly
honored
to
be
standing
here
and
introduce
to
you
this
competition.
As
we
know,
being
part
of
this
competition
can
offer
us
a
good
chance
to
improve
our
listening
and
speaking
skills.
It
can
also
help
us
form
good
habits
of
reading
English
novels.
Here
is
some
advice
for
the
speakers
who
are
going
to
compete
in
this
year’s
competition.
First,
make
sure
to
finish
your
speech
within
5
minutes.
Second,
try
to
speak
clearly
and
loudly
and
put
your
idea
across
to
the
audience.
Also,
using
your
body
languages
in
proper
ways
can
always
make
yourself
better
understood.
Lastly,
I
want
to
give
my
best
wishes
to
all
the
speakers
on
stage.
Thank
you!
【解析】
题干解读：该题属于演讲稿写作。写作时要注意文章的格式和表格里的信息要写齐全。
写作指导：例文采用五段式，第一大段表达自己的心情；第二大段陈述比赛的目的；第三大段陈述对演讲者的建议，第四大段表达对演讲者的祝愿；第五大段致谢。结构清晰，段落分明。主要用第三人称，第一人称复数来进行写作；时态采用一般现在时为主。
Writing3
（2020·全国初三单元测试）
假如你是Kate，今天发生了一些不开心的事，请你根据提示以“An
unlucky
day”为题，写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点：1.因为闹钟没有响，早上起床晚了；
2．没赶上校车，不得不步行去上学；
3．到校后，老师让交家庭作业时，才发现作业落在了家里；
4．文章结尾进行总结：糟糕的一天。
An
unlucky
day
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【范文】
An
unlucky
day
I
got
up
late
this
morning
because
my
alarm
clock
didn't
go
off.
When
I
woke
up,
it
was
7：10.
So
I
washed
my
face
quickly
and
ran
to
the
bus
stop
without
breakfast.
By
the
time
I
got
there,the
school
bus
had
already
gone.
I
missed
it.
So
I
had
to
walk
to
school.
Finally,
when
I
got
to
school,
it
was
already
9：10.
I
was
late
for
class.
When
the
teacher
asked
for
my
homework,
I
found
I
had
left
it
at
home.
What
a
bad
day
it
was!
【解析】
1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求以Kate的身份，用第一人称的方式讲述不开心的一天；讲述过去的事情，用一般过去时；书写时要注意用全所给材料，文句通顺，内容完整。
2.例文点评：本例文按时间顺序got
up
late
this
morning…7：10….By
the
time
I
got
there，…when
I
got
to
school…When
the
teacher
asked
for
my
homework讲述今天发生过不愉快的事情，文字表达清楚，内容完整连贯。
3.高分亮点：短语：get
up
late；wash
my
face
quickly
；run
to
the
bus
stop
without
breakfast；be
late
for
class.；ask
for；leave
it
at
home
句型：原因状语从句I
got
up
late
this
morning
because
my
alarm
clock
didn't
go
off.；
时间状语从句By
the
time
I
got
there,
the
school
bus
had
already
gone；
宾语从句When
the
teacher
asked
for
my
homework,
I
found
I
had
left
it
at
home；
感叹句What
a
bad
day
it
was!
【点睛】
本篇是材料作文，书写前要认真他阅读题干，了解题干的要求，叙述发生过的事情用一般过去式时；书写时要围绕题干提示的要点，按时间顺序、有条理地讲述自己不幸的一天。
Writing4
（2020·全国初三课时练习）
假如你是李华,今天你去省城买电脑,却经历了倒霉的一天。请你根据下面表格中所给的提示内容,用英语写一篇日记。
At
8:30
a.
m.
到达汽车站后发现没有带钱包,于是返回家去取
At
9:30
a.
m.
坐上公交车,但由于交通阻塞而受堵(be
stuck
in
a
traffic
jam)一个小时
At
11:30
a.
m.
到达商店后发现自己喜欢的那款电脑已经卖完了,于是花了很长时间挑选另一款电脑
At
6:30
p.
m.
赶到汽车站发现最后一班车已经走了,不得不打车回家
December
30,Sunday,Fine
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【范文】
December
30,SundayFine
Today
I
went
to
buy
a
computer,but
some
bad
things
happened
to
me.
By
the
time
I
arrived
at
the
bus
station
at
8:30
a.
m.
,I
found
I
had
left
my
wallet
at
home,
so
I
went
back
to
get
it.
At
9:00
a.
m.
,I
got
on
the
bus,but
I
was
stuck
in
a
traffic
jam
for
an
hour.
At
11:30
a.
m.
,when
I
got
to
the
shop,
I
was
told
that
the
computer
I
liked
had
been
sold
out.
Then
it
took
me
a
long
time
to
choose
another
kind
of
computer.
Finally,
when
I
hurried
to
the
bus
station
at
6:30
p.
m.,I
found
the
last
bus
had
left.
I
had
to
go
home
by
taxi.
What
a
bad
day!
【解析】
1.
题干解读：文章主要是围绕“去省城买电脑”这件事情而发生的不顺利的一些事情的描述。把表格中的内容按照顺序描写清楚具体即可，要注意时态的应用。
2.
例文点评：文章分四段描写。第一段开篇点题说明要去买电脑，但是发生了一些糟糕的事情；第二段写在去的途中发生的一些事情；第三段描写在买电脑的过程中发生的一些事情；第四段总结这糟糕的一天。整个文章结构完整，语言表达井然有序，用词合适，意思明确易懂。
3.
高分亮点：
短语：happen
to；arrive
at；get
on；traffic
jam；sell
out；hurry
to。
句型：but连接的并列句；by
the
time引导的时间状语从句；when引导的时间状语从句；What引导的感叹句。
Writing5
（2019·山东初三单元测试）
根据下面的中文提示，写一篇语句通顺、意思连贯的短文，可增加内容，词数不少于80。
提示：一天晚上，Amy去看电影。在去电影院的路上，她发现忘记带电影票了，所以不得不回家去取。当她到达电影院时，电影已经开演半个多小时了。电影非常有趣，她很遗憾没有看到电影的开头。
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【范文】
One
day
Amy
wanted
to
see
a
film.
On
her
way
home
she
bought
a
ticket
and
put
it
in
her
schoolbag.
When
she
got
home,
she
put
her
schoolbag
on
the
chair,
and
she
had
a
quick
supper
and
went
to
the
cinema.
On
the
way
she
realized
she
forgot
to
take
the
ticket
with
her,
so
she
had
to
go
back
to
get
it.
When
she
hurried
to
the
cinema,
the
film
had
been
on
for
more
than
half
an
hour.
The
film
was
very
interesting,
but
she
felt
very
sorry
that
she
didn't
see
the
beginning
of
the
film.
【解析】
1.题干解读：本文是一个小故事，属于记叙文写作。先交代故事发生的原因，接着叙述经过，最后是结果。
2.例文点评：这篇习作是“总分总”结构，结构完整。主要用第三人称叙述，时态是一般过去时态为主，过程清楚，重点突出，表达条理，是一篇优秀的习作。
3.高分亮点：
短语：want
to
do,
see
a
film,
on
one’s
way
home,
put
it
in
her
schoolbag,
get
home,
go
back,
have
to
do,
the
beginning
of
句型：On
her
way
home
she
bought
a
ticket
and
put
it
in
her
schoolbag.（并列结构）
On
the
way
she
realized
she
forgot
to
take
the
ticket
with
her（宾语从句）
When
she
got
home,
she
put
her
schoolbag
on
the
chair,（时间状语从句）
【点睛】
书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，如when引导的时间状语从句，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。
Writing6
（2019·全国初三单元测试）
今天是你最不幸运的一天，昨晚因为…所以今天早晨起床……起床后发现没有……当你赶到车站时…当你跑到学校时，听见老师已经……在教室里坐下后又发现……吃午饭时又发现没有带…放学到家时又不能进门，因为……
请根据所给信息以“
My
Most
Unlucky
Day'”为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
My
Most
Unlucky
Day
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【范文】
My
Most
Unlucky
Day
Today
is
my
most
unlucky
day.
I
kept
on
watching
an
interesting
TV
play
last
night
and
didn’t
go
to
bed
until
12
o’clock.
And
my
alarm
clock
didn’t
go
off
in
the
morning.
So
I
got
up
quite
late.
After
I
got
up,
I
found
my
parents
had
gone
to
work,
and
they
didn’t
buy
breakfast
for
me.
When
I
hurried
to
the
bus
stop
without
breakfast,
the
bus
had
already
gone.
So
I
had
to
run
to
school.
When
I
reached
school,
I
heard
our
English
teacher
had
begun
his
class.
After
I
sat
down
on
my
chair,
I
realized
that
I
had
left
my
school
bag
at
home.
At
noon
when
I
got
ready
to
have
lunch,
I
found
that
I
hadn’t
taken
any
money
with
me.
When
I
got
home
in
the
afternoon
after
school,
I
couldn’t
find
my
key
to
the
door,
because
I
had
left
it
in
the
desk.
What
an
unlucky
day!
【解析】
这篇作文要求我们以My
Most
Unlucky
Day为题，介绍自己这不幸运的一天是怎么度过的。题目中给出了一个大概的提纲，但是不完整的，我们需要将这些不完整的部分补充完整，使之成为内容充实的一篇文章，然后用正确的英语表达出来。审题可知，短文记叙的是已经发生过的事情，因此短文应使用一般过去时态，第一人称来叙述，注意谓语动词应变为过去式形式，特别注意一些不规则动词的变化。短文应按照时间顺序来叙述，写作中应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不能按照汉语意思逐词翻译，写汉语式的英语。应从句子的整体结构出发，使用较常见的简单句结构，选择适当的句型、短语和词汇。穿插使用并列句或复合句，提升文章档次。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。
【点睛】
这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求介绍了自己糟糕的这一天是怎样度过的。首先短文内容完整，文章作者根据题目中的提示，补充了具体的内容，使之成为一篇完整的文章，对细节上进行了详尽的描述，使文章更加的充实、丰富。短文结构清晰，叙述有条理，按照时间和事情发生的顺序进行叙述。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章以第一人称、一般过去时态来叙述，符合题目要求，谓语动词变成了过去式，尤其是注意了不规则动词过去式的变化，例如got,
kept,
had,
found,
left,
heard等。语法规范，句式结构以简单句为主，也使用了状语从句、宾语从句等复合句以及非谓语动词等复杂结构，提升了作文水平。短文中较好的句型有I
kept
on
watching
an
interesting
TV
play
last
night
and
didn’t
go
to
bed
until
12
o’clock.、After
I
got
up,
I
found
my
parents
had
gone
to
work,
and
they
didn’t
buy
breakfast
for
me、When
I
reached
school,
I
heard
our
English
teacher
had
begun
his
class、When
I
got
home
in
the
afternoon
after
school,
I
couldn’t
find
my
key
to
the
door,
because
I
had
left
it
in
the
desk.等等。
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