必修一 Unit 4 Earthquakes writing 定语从句在写作中的应用课件（33张ppt）

(共33张PPT)
Grammar
and
writing
Lead-in
Enjoy
the
song-the
one
you
love
I
know
you
need
a
friend
Someone
you
can
talk
to
Who
will
understand
what
you're
going
through
When
it
comes
to
love
There's
no
easy
answer
Only
you
can
say
what
you're
gonna
do
I
heard
you
on
the
phone
You
took
his
number
Said
you
weren't
alone,
but
you'd
call
him
soon
Isn't
he
the
guy
The
guy
who
left
you
crying'
Isn't
he
the
one
who
made
you
blue
When
you
remember
those
nights
in
his
arms
You
know
you've
gotta
make
up
your
mind
Are
you
gonna
stay
with
the
one
who
loves
you
Or
are
you
going
back
to
the
one
you
love
I
know
you
need
a
friend
Someone
you
can
talk
to
Who
will
understand
what
you're
going
through
When
it
comes
to
love
There's
no
easy
answer
Only
you
can
say
what
you're
gonna
do
I
heard
you
on
the
phone
You
took
his
number
Said
you
weren't
alone,
but
you'd
call
him
soon
Isn't
he
the
guy
The
guy
who
left
you
crying'
Isn't
he
the
one
who
made
you
blue
When
you
remember
those
nights
in
his
arms
You
know
you've
gotta
make
up
your
mind
Are
you
gonna
stay
with
the
one
who
loves
you
Or
are
you
going
back
to
the
one
you
love
She
is
the
girl_______lives
next
door.
Attributive
clause
关系词
先行词
定语从句的结构
who
注意事项:
1.从句的位置:
2.翻译方法:
先行词
之后
“….的”
Liang
Rui
is
an
intelligent
girl,
_______
is
the
Study
Secretary
in
our
class,
often
cares
about
other
students.
Yang
Zhiye
is
a
boy
_________________
all
the
teachers
and
classmates
are
fond
of.
Liu
Jinghao
________hobby
is
playing
badminton
is
a
good-tempered
and
enthusiastic
boy.
We
had
lessons
in
a
lab
_________
windows
face
south.
Jiahui
is
interested
in
the
grammar
book
________________Weilong
bought
last
week.
Kefei
has
a
dream
_________
will
never
come
true.
whose
who/whom/that/省略
who
whose
which
which/that/省略
Fill
in
the
blanks
using
which,
that,
who,
whom,
whose
Discovery发现
关系代词用法
关系代词
　
指代
在从句中
的作用
that
which
who
whom
whose
(=…of
which/whom)
人/物
主/宾（不作介宾）
物
主/宾
人
主/宾（不作介宾）
人
宾
人/物
定语
Summary归纳
定语从句在写作中的应用
Part1:
高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：
2013年全国高考新课标
你知道，我的叔叔李明要去你居住的城市参加一个会议。
You
know,
my
uncle
Li
Ming
is
going
to
the
city
where
you
live
to
attend
an
international
meeting.
我让叔叔带去你想要的中国画。
I’ve
asked
my
uncle
to
bring
you
the
Chinese
painting
you
have
asked
for
before.
2.
2013
年广东高考
那些做普通简单工作的人也在推动着社会的发展。
Those
who
do
simple
and
ordinary
jobs
are
also
promoting
the
development
of
the
society.
正如我们都知道的那样，扫大街是最为困难的工作之一。
As
we
all
know,
cleaning
streets
is
one
of
the
hardest
work.
Part
2:
写作中定语从句的主要作用
1.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。
2.
可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，
避免单词的重复和句式单一。
3.增加字数。
找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。
For
example:
温州是一个历史名城。
Wenzhou
a
famous
historic
city.
Wenzhou
is
a
famous
historic
city,
which
has
a
long
history
of
more
than
2000
years
and
lots
of
sights,
such
as
Yandang
Mountain,
Nanxi
River
and
so
on.
有多久的历史？因何出名？
Practice:
即将到来的端午节是中国的传统节日。
李明是一个热心肠的人。
The
upcoming
Dragon
Boat
Festival
is
a
Chinese
traditional
festival.
The
upcoming
Dragon
Boat
Festival
is
a
Chinese
traditional
festival,
which
is
celebrated
to
honor
our
national
hero,
Qu
Yuan.
(节日的目的)
李明是一个热心肠的人。
Li
Ming
is
a
warm-hearted
man
.
Li
Ming
is
a
warm-hearted
man,
who
always
lends
a
hand
to
others.
(具体化)
Part
3:
如何写出定语从句
题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。
Solution:
1>找出这两个简单句中都出现了的同一个事物。
2>将其中一个简单句改成从句，去修饰另外
一个句子中那个相同的事物（注意关系词的选用）
For
example:
我们班是一个大家庭。
这个大家庭包括17个男生和7个女生。
Our
class
is
a
big
family.
The
family
consists
of
17
boys
and
7
girls.
Our
class
is
a
big
family,
which
consists
of
17
boys
and
7
girls.
Fang
Ran
is
a
warm-hearted
boy,
_______________________________________
(他经常在放学后帮着打扫教室)。
who
usually
helps
cleaning
the
classroom
after
school
Fang
Ran
is
a
warm-hearted
boy.
He
usually
helps
cleaning
the
classroom
after
school.
Li
Yixuan
is
a
responsible
girl,
_____________________________________
（她能及时上交作业。）
who
can
collect
homework
in
time.
Li
Yixuan
is
a
responsible
girl.
She
can
collect
homework
in
time.
Practice
操练
Zuo
Ting
is
an
easy-going
girl,_______________
______________________________(她和班里的每个同学相处的都很好)
who
can
get
along
well
with
each
classmate
in
our
class.
Practice
操练
Haodong
is
a
reliable
boy,____________________
________________________________(每个同学都愿意和他交朋友)
whom
each
classmate
is
willing
to
make
friends
with.
Practice
操练
1.Tang
Huiqiao____________________________
____________________
(她的语文班级排第一在月考中）
always
makes
good
use
of
all
the
time
to
learn.
whose
Chinese
ranked
the
first
in
the
month-exam，
Practice
操练
Yuguo
is
reading
a
book
____________________
(书的封面是蓝色).
Yuguo
is
reading
a
book,
the
cover
of__________
is
blue.
whose
cover
is
blue
which
Practice
操练
Gao
He
is
the
boy_______________________
___________________（他在1000米中得了第三）.
The
boy____________________
(我们应该向他学习)is
Gao
He.
The
boy______________
we
should
learn
is
Gao
He.
who
won
the
third
prize
in
1000
meters
from
whom
whom
we
should
learn
from
Practice
操练
1.Qi
Anni
_________________________________
____________________(月考中数学在班级排第一)always
sets
down
a
series
of
difficult
points
in
order
to
review
them
after
class.
whose
Maths
ranked
the
first
in
the
month-exam
Practice
操练
Shang
Haodong
is
wiping
the
window
_________________________
(那扇窗户布满灰尘)
which/that
is
covered
with
dusts
Practice:
1.
我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。
2.
我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。
3.
他居住在泗溪，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。
4.
我们过去常常在一起上英语课，我不会忘记那段日子。
我最好的朋友是李明，他的外号叫河马。
My
best
friend
is
Li
Ming.
His
nickname
is
hippo.
My
best
friend
is
Li
Ming,
whose
nickname
is
hippo.
I
don’t
like
his
nickname.
The
reason
is
that
it
deeply
hurts
him.
The
reason
why
I
don’t
like
his
nickname
is
that
it
deeply
hurts
him.
我不喜欢他的外号，原因是它深深地伤害了他。
他居住在泗溪，在这里人们可以游览很多美丽的景点。
He
lives
in
Sixi.
People
can
visit
lots
of
sights
here.
He
lives
in
Sixi,
where
people
can
visit
lots
of
sights.
(注意此处不再有here)
我们过去常常在一起上英语课，我不会忘记那段日子。
We
used
to
attend
English
class
together.
I
will
never
forget
the
days
.
I
will
never
forget
the
days
when
we
used
to
attend
English
class
together.
Challenge
yourself
!
Our
class
is
a
big
family.
It
is
made
up
of
36
girls
and
9
boys.
All
of
them
are
very
diligent
and
warm-hearted.
Zou
Xiaohui
is
our
monitor.
He
is
always
ready
to
help
others.
He
is
such
a
good
boy
that
we
all
like
him
very
much.
Our
class
is
a
big
family,
which
is
made
up
of
26
girls
and
10
boys,
all
of
whom
are
very
diligent
and
warm-hearted.
Zou
Xiaohui
is
our
monitor,
who
is
always
ready
to
help
others.
He
is
such
a
good
boy
that
we
all
like
him.
定语从句的运用
写作模版
My
friend
is
a
girl
of
16,
___________.（她的名字是…）
She
is
fond
of
________________________
____________________in
her
spare
time.
She
is
an
_________________(易相处的)
girl,
who
________________________（与同学处得很好）.
Besides,
she
is
also
an_________________
（聪明的）girl,
whose
_____________________
________________________
(数学在月考中班级第一).
What’s
more
important,
she
is
a
________________
____(热心的)
girl，
who
________________(总放学后帮着打扫教室).
She
lends
to
me
the
books______________________
(他刚买的书).
In
a
word,
She
is
a
girl
___________________
(我们应该向她学习).
I
am
proud
of
owning
a
friend
who
are
willing
to
help
_______________
(那些有困难的人).
Application
运用
whose
name
is…
can
get
along
well
with
all
the
classmates
easy-going
intelligent
Maths
ranked
the
first
in
the
month
exam
in
our
class
which
he
bought
just
now
whom
we
should
learn
from
those
who
are
in
trouble
Writing
1
利用模版完成下面的作文。
你朋友的姓名，年龄，性别
爱好：
绘画，打篮球
性格开朗，能够同学友好相处。
有责任心，能按时收发作业。
成绩优异，乐于助人。
4.
需要向他/她学习。
Writing
2
LI
MING
是我们班的同学。今年17岁。他个子不高留着短发。他父母都是老师，在油田二中工作。他家离学校不远。他学习很努力所以老师和学生们都很喜欢他。他经常帮助家里很穷的学生。大家都很尊敬他。上大学是他的理想之一。