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如何写好正反观点的议论文
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如何写正反观点对比的议论文
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【你知道吗？】如何写好正反观点对比的议论文对同一件事情，人们常有不同的看法，即正反两种观点。写此类作文应注意：[结构]：写此类作文时，写作顺序一般是相似的。一般采用三段式：首先提出问题，即点明人们在什么问题上持有不同的观点，其次要对比陈述不同的观点和理由，最后就是要根据题目要求恰当地陈述一下自己的观点和理由，最好不要重复前面谈到的理由。写作格式一般是：提出问题→两种不同观点→对两种不同观点的论据（理由）逐项作对比。写作方式一般采用集中比较。[语言]：在写作时，常使用一般现在时。人称为第一人称或第三人称。行文时要注意就事论事，对比要点要清晰完整，一目了然。【记一记】在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：1．介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是……We
had
a
discussion
about
whether
it
is
necessary
to
start
learning
English
from
childhood我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考志愿……We’ve
had
a
survey
on
how
to
choose
their
courses,
majors
and
universities.我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是……We
have
held
a
discussion
about
whether
it
is
good
or
not
for
a
top
student
to
share
a
desk
with
a
slower
student.2．过渡句：Opinions
are
divided
on
this
issue.Opinions
are
mainly
divided
into
two
groups.Different
people,
however,
have
different
opinions
on
this
matter.
Different
people,
however,
think
quite
differently
on
this
matter.
3．介绍正方观点：Sixty
percent
of
the
students
are
for
the
idea.Sixty
percent
of
the
students
think
it
necessary
to…Some
people
think
that
…According
to
them,
all
of
us
should...Some
believe
that…4.
介绍反方观点：However,
…
of
the
students
think…On
the
other
hand,
…of
the
students
think…However,
others
have
different
opinions.But
…of
the
students
think…Others
argue
that
…In
their
opinion,…5.
进一步介绍反方观点What’s
worse…What’s
more,
we
can
…as
well
as
…Besides,
it’s
…,
which
…In
addition,
…Besides,
…
First,…
Second,
…Third,
…6.
本人观点：As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
…….(In
my
opinion,
…….;
It’s
my
opinion
that……)
For
one
reason,……….
For
another
reason………
In
a
word,…….【议论文的框架---对比观点题型】
（??要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法）。1．????有一些人认为。。。2．????另一些人认为。。。3．????我的看法。。。The
topic
of
①-----------------（主题）is
becoming
more
and
more
popular
recently.
There
are
two
sides
of
opinions
about
it.
Some
people
say
A
is
their
favorite.
They
hold
their
view
for
the
reason
of
②-----------------（支持A的理由一）What
is
more,
③-------------(理由二).
Moreover,
④---------------(理由三).
While
others
think
that
B
is
a
better
choice
in
the
following
three
reasons.
Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一).
Secondly
(besides),⑥------------------（理由二）.
Thirdly
(finally),⑦------------------(理由三).
From
my
point
of
view,
I
think
⑧----------------（我的观点）.
The
reason
is
that
⑨--------------------(原因).
As
a
matter
of
fact,
there
are
some
other
reasons
to
explain
my
choice.
For
me,
the
former
is
surely
a
wise
choice
.【练一练】你班英语老师让同学们就该不该发展克隆技术展开讨论，同学们纷纷发表了自己的看法。请你根据下面的表格写一盘120~150
的短文，做一总结，并发表自己的看法。话题Cloning观点及支持率65%
for35%
against
你的观点理由克隆技术能够促进科学的发展；克隆技术对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命目前，克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多问题的出现，如人口猛增等……审题立意项目结论体裁话题时态人称遣词造句：克隆技术对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命。①对……有益_________________________②使用不同的句式翻译此句。a.(and连接并列句)_____________________________________________________b.(which引导定语从句)_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2.
克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；①与……有关_____________________②滥用___________________________③导致_______________________④完成句子Cloning
has
many
problems
_____________________and
______________________Unimaginable
results
to
the
human
beings.如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多社会问题的出现。①导致________________②社会问题_______________③用克隆技术_______________________④根据示例仿写句子。示例：If
it
rains
tomorrow.
The
sports
meeting
will
be
put
off
until
next
week.
仿写：_______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________【写作提醒】：写作时尽量使用较复杂的结构和较高级的词汇来表述，并有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使结构紧凑，逻辑严密。【成果展示】___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【练一练】
你班英语老师让同学们就该不该发展克隆技术展开讨论，同学们纷纷发表了自己的看法。请你根据下面的表格写一盘120~150
的短文，做一总结，并发表自己的看法。
话题
Cloning
观点及支持率
65%
for
35%
against
你的观点
理由
克隆技术能够促进科学的发展；克隆技术对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命
目前，克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多问题的出现，如人口猛增等
……
审题立意
项目
结论
体裁
话题
时态
人称
遣词造句：
1.
克隆技术对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命。
①对……有益_________________________
②使用不同的句式翻译此句。
a.(and连接并列句)_____________________________________________________
b.(which引导定语从句)_________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________
2.
克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；
①与……有关_____________________
②滥用___________________________
③导致_______________________
④完成句子
Cloning
has
many
problems
_____________________and
______________________
Unimaginable
results
to
the
human
beings.
1.
如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多社会问题的出现。
①导致________________
②社会问题_______________
③用克隆技术_______________________
④根据示例仿写句子。
示例：If
it
rains
tomorrow.
The
sports
meeting
will
be
put
off
until
next
week.
仿写：_______________________________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________
【写作提醒】：写作时尽量使用较复杂的结构和较高级的词汇来表述，并有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使结构紧凑，逻辑严密。
【成果展示】
________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________(共21张PPT)
作文写作训练
议论文
＿＿正反观点对比
Dear
editor,
I
am
writing
to
tell
you
about
my
classmates’
opinions
about
a
TV
programme----Super
Girl.
Opinions
vary
from
person
to
person.
80%
of
them
are
for
this
TV
programme.
They
argue
that
this
programme
not
only
provides
the
young
with
a
stage
to
show
their
talents
but
also
gives
a
chance
to
them
to
build
up
their
self-confidence.
What’s
more,
this
programme
is
creative
and
advocates
personality,
which
meets
the
youth’s
need.
On
the
contrary,
20%
of
them
are
against
this
programme.
Reasons
can
be
listed
as
follows.
For
one
thing,
it
misleads
the
youths
to
some
degree,
perhaps
they
will
misunderstand
that
they
can
succeed
without
any
hard
work.
For
another,
being
yourself
doesn’t
mean
being
different
from
other’s
behaviour
or
appearance.
However,
every
coin
has
two
sides,
this
programme
is
not
an
exception,
it
has
it’s
own
advantages
and
disadvantages.
Yours,
Li
Ming
Dear
editor,
I
am
writing
to
tell
you
about
my
classmates’
opinions
about
a
TV
programme----Super
Girl.
Opinions
vary
from
person
to
person.
80%
of
them
are
for
this
TV
programme.
They
argue
that
this
programme
not
only
provides
the
young
with
a
stage
to
show
their
talents
but
also
gives
a
chance
to
them
to
build
up
their
self-confidence.
What’s
more,
this
programme
is
creative
and
advocates
personality,
which
meets
the
youth’s
need.
On
the
contrary,
20%
of
them
are
against
this
programme.
Reasons
can
be
listed
as
follows.
For
one
thing,
it
misleads
the
youths
to
some
degree,
perhaps
they
will
misunderstand
that
they
can
succeed
without
any
hard
work.
For
another,
being
yourself
doesn’t
mean
being
different
from
other’s
behaviour
or
appearance.
However,
every
coin
has
two
sides,
this
programme
is
not
an
exception,
it
has
it’s
own
advantages
and
disadvantages.
Yours,
Li
Ming
【议论文的框架---对比观点题型】
（??要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法）。
1．????有一些人认为。。。
2．????另一些人认为。。。
3．????我的看法。。。
在写作时可用以下句型来组织完成整篇文章：
1．介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：
我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是……
We
had
a
discussion
about
whether
it
is
necessary
to
start
learning
English
from
childhood
我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生如何选择高考志愿……
We’ve
had
a
survey
on
how
to
choose
their
courses,
majors
and
universities.
我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是……
We
have
held
a
discussion
about
whether
it
is
good
or
not
for
a
top
student
to
share
a
desk
with
a
slower
student.
2．过渡句：
Opinions
are
divided
on
this
issue.
Opinions
are
mainly
divided
into
two
groups.
Different
people,
however,
have
different
opinions
on
this
matter.
Different
people,
however,
think
quite
differently
on
this
matter.
3．介绍正方观点：
Sixty
percent
of
the
students
are
for
the
idea.
Sixty
percent
of
the
students
think
it
necessary
to…
Some
people
think
that
…According
to
them,
all
of
us
should...
Some
believe
that…
4.
介绍反方观点：
However,
…
of
the
students
think…
On
the
other
hand,
…of
the
students
think…
However,
others
have
different
opinions.
But
…of
the
students
think…
Others
argue
that
…In
their
opinion,…
5.
进一步介绍反方观点
What’s
worse…
What’s
more,
we
can
…as
well
as
…
Besides,
it’s
…,
which
…
In
addition,
…
Besides,
…
First,…
Second,
…Third,
…
6.
本人观点：
As
far
as
I
am
concerned,
…….
(In
my
opinion,
…….;
It’s
my
opinion
that……)
For
one
reason,……….
For
another
reason………
In
a
word,…….
话题
Cloning
观点及支持率
65%
for
35%
against
你的观点
理由
1.????
克隆技术能够促进科学发展；
2.
克隆技术对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命
1.目前，克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；
2.
如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多问题的出现，如人口猛增等
……
你班英语老师让同学们就该不该发展克隆技术展开讨论，同学们纷纷发表了自己的看法。请你根据下面的表格写一盘120~150
的短文，做一总结，并发表自己的看法。
审题
体裁:
时态:
人称:
要点:
议论文
现在时
第一人称
(1)该不该发展克隆技术的讨论。
(2)
支持:克隆技术能够促进科学的发展；对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命.
(3)反对:目前，克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多问题的出现，如人口猛增等。
(4)我的观点:
……
文章结构
正反观点对比类的文章
提出问题
不同观点对比
说明自己观点
文章结构
我们对该不该发展克隆技术进行讨论.
对克隆问题大致有两种态度.
(2)支持:克隆技术能够促进科学的发展；对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命.
(3)反对:克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多问题的出现…
(4)我的观点:
…
提出问题
不同观点对比
说明自己观点
审题立意
项目
结论
体裁
?
话题
?
时态
?
人称
?
遣词造句：
克隆技术对人类很有益，它可以帮助治愈很多疾病，挽救很多人的生命。
①对……有益_________________________
②使用不同的句式翻译此句。
a.(and连接并列句）
____________________________________________________
?
b.(which引导定语从句)
_________________________________________________
2.
克隆技术还存在很多问题，滥用这项技术会给人类带来难以想象的后果；
①与……有关_____________________
②滥用___________________________
③导致_______________________
④完成句子
Cloning
has
many
problems
_____________________and
______________________unimaginable
results
to
the
human
beings.
3.
如果有科学家利用克隆技术来克隆人的话，将会导致很多社会问题的出现。
①导致________________
②社会问题_______________
③用克隆技术_______________________
④根据示例仿写句子。
示例：If
it
rains
tomorrow.
The
sports
meeting
will
be
put
off
until
next
week.
仿写：
______________________________________________________________________________
【写作提醒】：写作时尽量使用较复杂的结构和较高级的词汇来表述，并有效地使用语句间的连接成分，使结构紧凑，逻辑严密。
【成果展示】
Today
we
had
a
class
discussion
about
whether
cloning
should
be
developed.
Opinions
varied.
About
65%
of
the
students
agree
that
cloning
should
be
encouraged
because
it
is
part
of
the
general
development
and
progress
of
science,
which
has
brought
us
many
benefits.
We
have
good
reasons
to
think
cloning
can
help
cure
many
diseases
and
save
lives.
However,
35%
of
the
students
hold
that
cloning
still
has
too
many
unsolved
problems
associated
with
it,
and
the
misuse
of
it
could
have
unimaginable
results.
Furthermore,
the
cloning
of
humans
could
lead
to
social
problems,
such
as
population
growth.
In
my
opinion,
since
cloning
is
such
a
new
technology,
we
must
be
careful
to
make
appropriate
use
of
it.
It
could
bring
us
a
lot
of
benefits
as
long
as
we
can
avoid
the
possibility
of
causing
harm.
