书面表达专题讲练之赢取高分策略学案
高考要求和命题趋势
根据2007到2011年的考试说明和写作题目,我们可以看出,我们省自主命题以来书面表达题目的开放性很大,主要是文字提示式、漫画式和图表式。并且不再考查各种写作的格式,主要看考生对内容的表达。
篇幅要求延续2011年的120-150词。这就要求考生必须使用丰富的词汇和多变的句式,具有较高的布局谋篇和连贯表达的能力。
写作的题目趋向灵活,学生发挥的空间大。写作的主题会涉及与每个考生密切相关的内容,引导考生思考现实问题,让每个考生均有内容可写,能够展示考生的写作水平和能力。
应试技巧点拨
1. 认真学习词汇、语法、句型等语言基础,做到准确理解和熟练运用
2. 尽可能多的背熟语言地道、表达效果好的句式、语段或范文,达到“熟读唐诗三百首,不会作诗也会吟”的效果。
3. 坚持不懈的练笔,多做一些书面表达练习,并不断的修改提高。
4. 关注现实,扩大知识面,提高思维和认识水平,使自己的观点表达正确、得体、有说服力。
III. 答题步骤
仔细审题,弄清大意。弄清题目的要求和写作的内容和主题。主要是人称、时态、背景、体裁和字数。
编拟提纲,列出要点。把要写的主要内容的要点列出。
紧扣要点扩写句子,选用恰当的关联词联句成篇。
反复修改,认真抄写。修改主要看主谓是否一致、句子成分是否完整、标点和拼写是否有误和搭配是否符合语言表达习惯。
IV. 应试要求和注意事项
书写工整、清晰。高考阅卷过程中虽然只有在影响辨认的情况下才扣分,但是高考批卷时人均400份每天,量大,你的书写是对阅卷人耐心的考验,而且“爱美之心,人皆有之”。要认真工整的书写,不乱涂乱划。字体、篇章要设计合理。
避难就易,避错保分。错多分低,错少分高。因此要尽量避免语法错误和低级错误。不生编硬造,避免汉式英语,可以“曲线救国”。
努力提高文章档次,注意正确运用一些高级词汇、短语和较复杂的结构和高级句式。特别是使用恰当的关联词。总之,要努力写出闪光点和出彩的东西。
V. 增强书面表达效果的技巧
1. 使用较高级的词汇. 词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少,也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。
2. 使用较丰富的句式. 运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少,从而使整篇文章因此而生辉 。
3. 使用恰当的连接词. 使用恰当连接词,对写一篇有“英语味”的文章很重要,能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。
VI. 怎样使用较高级的词汇
1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.
2.We all think he is a great man.
3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.
4.The students there needn’t pay for their books.
5. As a result the plan was a failure.
6. When she heard he had died, she went pale with sorrow.
7. She went to Austria in order to study music.
8. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited.
9.In our school, there are twenty-six classrooms.
10.You can find my house easily.
VII. 如何使用丰富的句式:(常用到的句型结构)利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思,能增加文章的文采。
1 When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.(使用V-ing形式).
2. To his surprise, the little girl knows so many things.(使用名词性从句)
3. Though I’m weak, I’ll make the effort. (使用倒装句)
4. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)
5. I passed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气)
6. She walked out of the lab and many students followed her. (使用过去分词)
7. They sang and laughed as they went back to school.( 使用V-ing形式)
8.I won’t believe what he says. (使用状语从句)
9.If you study hard, you will make rapid progress. (用并列句)
10.He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad. (使用倒装句)
VIII.选用恰当的关联词
常用的关联词:
1. 表示递进;在同一话题上补充内容“另外,还有”:what is more; besides; also; moreover; in addition
2. 表示转折关系“但是, 然而, 相反”:but; however; yet; instead; on the other hand; on the contrary.
3. 表示因果关系 “因为,因此,所以”: since; as; because (of ); so; thus; therefore; as a result;
4. 表示条件关系 “ 如果,只要”: if ;on condition ( that ); as long as
“除非”: unless “否则”: or else
5. 表示时间关系:当… 的时候 : when ; while在…之后: after 在…之前: before 直到: until一…就… : as soon as 后来, 然后: later; afterwards不久: soon 近来: lately; recently自从… :since 从那时起: from then on
6. 表示特定的顺序关系:首先, 最主要的: above all 其次: secondly 然后: then; next最后: finally; in the end
7. 换一种方法表述:换句话说: in other words;that is to say;
8. 进行举例说明:例如,比如: for instance; for example; like; such as
9. 用于陈述事实“实际上: in fact; actually; as a matter of fact 跟你说实话 : to tell you the truth
10. 对一个话题进行总结:总而言之,总的来说: on the whole; in short; all in all; in general; in a word
11. 其它常用到的副词:Therefore ; otherwise ; finally ; furthermore ;Thus ; namely ;
although ; afterwards ; personally;
练习:
Xiao Ming was walking in the street___________ he heard someone cry for help.
2. He advised that I hire a car ____________ I could travel around in the west .
3. It was not long _______ the police came .
4.___________he heard the cry for help, he jumped into the water to save the girl
5. Do you agree with my arrangement ________ , do write to me soon.
6. We can go downtown and do some shopping. __________, we can pay a visit to some places of interest.
7.I shared the cost of the gas with my friends .___________, I saved $80.
8. Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. ___________ , it may make us fat.