At weekends
(Writing time)
Let's think
What do you think of their weekends?
wonderful
happy
busy
What about your weekends?
free
boring
great
sad
interesting
...
?
?
?
?
?
?
Let's guess
What do I do at weekends?
Miss Li
usually
often
sometimes
My weekend
do some housework
read books
go to the park
go shopping
watch films
Let's read
I have a busy but nice weekend.
On Saturday,I sometimes stay at home and watch TV on the Internet.I also read books for an hour. I often do some housework and cook some nice food for my family.On Sunday,I usually go to the park with my daughter.I often go shopping because I want to buy some nice clothes.I sometimes watch funny films with my friends.
I can relax myself and I always feel very happy at weekends.
My weekend
Work in groups
1. Read the passage. Discuss and find out the highlights(亮点) you like.
(小组讨论,说说你喜欢的亮点)
2. You can speak Chinese, but try to speak English.(请尽量用英文表达)
Magic hamburger
bun
bun
lettuce
tomato
meat
My weekend
I have a busy but nice weekend.
On Saturday,I sometimes stay
at home and watch TV on the
Internet.I also read books for an
hour. I often do some housework
and cook some nice food for my
family.On Sunday,I usually go to
the park with my daughter.I often
go shopping because I want to buy some nice clothes.I sometimes watch funny films with my friends.
I can relax myself and I always
feel very happy at weekends.
Topic sentence
主题句
Details
细节
Conclusion
结语
What do I do?
Why do I do?
How do I feel/think?
Hamburger writing
Topic sentence
Detial 1
Detail 2
Detail 3
Conclusion
...
How to finish a hamburger writing?
Step 1:
put key words in the hamburger
在每层汉堡里写下关键词
busy
nice
watch TV
read books
do some housework
cook some nice food
happy
go to the park
go shopping
watch films
Step 1:
put key words in the hamburger
在每层汉堡里写下关键词
How to finish a hamburger writing?
Step 1:
put key words in the hamburger
在每层汉堡里写下关键词
Step 2:
start writing
开始写作
busy
nice
How to finish a hamburger writing?
watch TV
read books
do some housework
cook some nice food
go to the park
go shopping
watch films
happy
I have a __________ weekend.
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My weekend
...'s weekend
... has a ___________ weekend.
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{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A} Writing Criteria
写作标准
Score
分值
Check
自检
1.Information comprehensive.
信息全面。
2.No mistakes.
语法正确。
3.Format standard.
格式规范。
In total 总计
6
信息全面
busy
nice
read books
watch TV
do some housework
cook some nice food
go to the park
go shopping
1. I can introduce ...'s weekend.
2. I can tell more details.
3.I can tell how I feel
at weekends.
watch films
happy
语法正确
nice
I can write correctly.
busy
watch TV
read books
do some housework
cook some nice food
go to the park
go shopping
watch films
happy
Hi,my name is Amy
weekend
ancing
is very exciting
dancing lessons at weekends
o I like weekends very much
D
.
I have a happy
.
I have
.
.
S
.
格式规范
Hi,my name is Amy. I have a happy
weekend
ancing
is very exciting
dancing lessons at weekends
o I like weekends very much
D
.
I have
.
.
S
.
格式规范
I have a __________ weekend.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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My weekend
...'s weekend
... has a ___________ weekend.
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Please choose one topic to write .
请参照范文,选择一个话题写写你的或其他人的周末活动。
Tips:
1.描述他人周末活动请注意第三人称单数的
用法。
2.Don't forget to use frequency adverbs.
不要忘记使用频率副词哦!
Step 1:
put key words in the hamburger
在每层汉堡里写下关键词
Step 2:
start writing
开始写作
Step 3:
check the sentences
检查句子是否正确
busy
nice
watch TV
read books
do some housework
cook some nice food
go to the park
go shopping
watch films
happy
How to finish a hamburger writing?
Work in pairs, check the passage.
前后交换,同桌两人共同评价前后桌的文章。
{5C22544A-7EE6-4342-B048-85BDC9FD1C3A} Writing Criteria
写作标准
Score
分值
Buddy Check
同伴互评
1.Information comprehensive.
信息全面。
2. No mistakes.
语法准确。
3.Format standard.
格式规范。
In total 总计
6
Tips:
1.仿照示范,共同评分。
2.规范使用批改符号。
3.一个错误扣1星,至多扣4星。
Let's check
Let’s enjoy
Do some meaningful things.
Enjoy our weekends.
Homework
1.Read and revise your writing with your friend.
(和你的朋友一起读一读,改一改作文。)
2.Know your friend or your parents and then write about his/her weekend.
(了解你的朋友或父母,写写他的周末。)