2021年中考复习精品课件
英语(人教版)
话题写作(一)
日常活动
教材话题链接
七下 Unit 2 What time do you go to school?
七下 Unit 6 I' m watching TV.
七下 Unit 12 What did you do last weekend?
八上 Unit 2 How often do you exercise?
满分作文五步法
典/例/分/析
假设你是李华,请给你的好朋友Mike写一封电子邮件,向他简要介绍你一天的主要活动。
step1
审—审清题意
文体: ?
人称: ?
时态: ?
功能: ?
电子邮件
第一人称
一般现在时
介绍日常
要点如下:
1.生活方式: 很健康,早上6:00起床,早餐前锻炼半个小时。
2.交通:你家离学校很近,通常步行上学,大概花十分钟到达学校。
3.爱好:喜欢阅读和写作,每天会阅读和写作1小时。因为擅长写作,所以梦想着成为一名作家。
要点:
1. ?
??? ???
2. ?
3. ?
4. ?
适当发挥……
生活方式:健康
——早起,晨练
步行上学
喜欢阅读和写作
梦想成为一名作家
注意:
1.词数90左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实人名、地名等内容。
Dear Mike,
How is it going? ? ?
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Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
step2
搭—列提纲,搭好框架
step3
连—连词成句
1.开篇点题:
Let me tell you .?
I have .?
2.主体内容:
I get up every morning.
I usually in the park.?
My home is not far from our school. I often ?? ?
? ??.?
my daily life
a healthy living style
at six
do exercise for half an hour
walk to school/go to school
on foot
I like .?
I spend one hour .?
I dream .?
3.总结收尾:
Looking forward to your reply.
reading and writing
enjoying them
of becoming a great writer
step4
组—组句成篇
step5
修—修饰美化
Dear Mike,
How is it going? ① Let me tell you
my daily life.
I have a healthy living style. I get up at six morning. Before having breaking , I usually do exercise for half an hour in the park. My home is not for
from our school. ② So I often walk to school. It takes me about ten minutes
to get to school.
①扩句:Let me tell you? ??
?? ?my daily life.
②扩句: So I often walk to school.
? ?? make me relaxed.
something about
Going to school on foot/
Walking to school
③ I like reading and writing. I spend one hour enjoying them. I dream of becoming a great writer. I' m sure my everyday life is happy and interesting.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
③扩句:? ??, I like reading and writing. I spend one hour enjoying them every day. I dream is ? ?? a great writer.
In my free time
to be
【名师点睛】文章的连贯性是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应根据故事情节、事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词,对写好的句子进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。
【名师点睛】首先,避免Chinglish现象,尽量使用熟悉的句型。其次,正确使用固定搭配以及两三个好的句型,如:被动句、非谓语动词、复合句或it作形式主语的句子等。最后,应该围绕动词中心进行恰当地联想和发挥。
Dear Mike,
How is it going? Let me tell you something about my everyday life.
I have a healthy living style. I get up at six every morning. Before having breakfast, I usually do exercise for half an hour in the park. My home is not far from our school. So I often walk to school. Going to school on foot/Walking to school makes me relaxed. It only takes me about ten minutes to get to school.
美文诵读(画出你认为优美的句子)
In my free time, I like reading and writing. I spend one hour enjoying them every day. My dream is to be a great writer someday. I' m sure my everyday life is happy and interesting.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
小/小/加/油/站
好词速记
1.交通类
walk to, go (to)…on foot, take the subway, by subway, ride a bike, by bike, take a plane, by plane/air, drive to, go (to)…by car, thirty minutes' walk, fifteen minutes by bike, cross the river, between…and…
2.活动类
go to school, get up, take a walk, brush teeth, do one' s homework, get dressed, go to bed, take a shower, do morning exercises, go swimming, go camping, go on a picnic, go on holiday, go to visit, have a good rest and relax, go sightseeing, travel around the world…
3.感受类
happy, interested, excited, tired, unbelievable, nervous, enjoyable, surprised, embarrassed…
佳句积累
[开头句]
1.Let me tell you something about my everyday life. I have a healthy living style.
2.I have the same routine from Monday to Friday.
3.Do you want to know about my day? I have a busy everyday life.
4.I' m very happy that you are interested in my daily life.
5.It is known to us that a healthy lifestyle leads to a healthy life, so it' s important for us to keep a healthy lifestyle.
6.Nowadays, we students have much more spare time than ever before, but how to make our spare time more meaningful?
7.It' s very important for us to develop good habits. Good habits are important in our lives. They influence us a lot in many ways.
8.Getting up early is a good habit. It' s good for us in many ways.
9.Good living styles and good health are twins.
[发展句]
1.In my opinion, we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the smartphone or watching TV.
2.I hope I can do something to relax myself.
3.Going for a walk makes me relaxed and healthy.
4.In the evening, I often listen to some nice music or read my favorite books.
5.My school is not far away from my home, so I often go to school on foot.
6.In the past I often went to bed very late at night. So I felt very tired and sleepy the next day.
7.It can help remember important things easily.
8.What' s more, we should eat more fresh fruit and vegetables and less junk food.
9.We should also care for our parents and help them do more housework in our spare time.
[结尾句]
1.I' m looking forward to hearing from you all.
2.I hope you can write and tell me about your day.
3.All in all, a healthy lifestyle can help you feel more relaxed in both study and daily life.
4.Keep a healthy lifestyle, and you' ll get healthier and healthier day by day.
5.Today is tiring and boring. What an unlucky day I had!
6.I' m sure it is an interesting and meaningful day.
7.In a word, the morning is the key of a day. Everyone should get up early every day.
8.Good habits help us get good grades and live happily.
佳/篇/创/作
[2020·齐齐哈尔改编] 2020年是非同寻常的一年,在举国上下抗击疫情的同时,教育部发出了“停课不停学”的号召,鼓励中小学生在线学习。但长时间观看电脑或手机,缺乏户外锻炼的机会,影响视力和身心健康。假如你是 Lin Hui,请从以下三个方面说明在这个特殊时期里你是如何保持健康的。
[要求]
1.字迹工整,表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;2.要点必须包括所有相关信息,并适当发挥;3.词数90词左右。
Exercise
Do eye exercises, do body building exercises(健身操)…
Eating habits
Eat healthy food…
Mood(情绪)
Be happy, smile…
正稿:
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自评(亮点与困难):
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One possible version:
Hello! I' m Lin Hui. We all know that it' s unusual for Chinese in 2020. As a student, I have to study online at home. But at the same time, I take all kinds of measures to keep healthy.
First, I do eye exercises between classes to make my eyes relax. Because of the epidemic(疫情) I can' t go out to play. So I do body building exercises indoors every day. Second, I have healthy eating habits. I eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit rather than junk food. Last, being happy is another way to keep healthy. When I' m lonely or
unhappy, I usually try to make myself relax by listening to music or chatting with my friends. I often also smile. I think smile makes me happy and healthy.
谢谢
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