高考英语——读后续写之心理活动细节描写（教案+学案）

中小学教育资源及组卷应用平台
专题课后续写-心理描写
学习目标：
1.了解读后续写的要求和技巧；
掌握关于心理细节描写的词汇，词组，句型等表达；
翻译下方句子（尝试用多种表达方式）：
她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
听到这个消息，他非常生气
。
她分手了，她伤心不已。
当男孩看到蛇时，他感到非常害怕。
用所学英语词汇描述下方人物的心理状态
知识点一（心理细节描写如何来写）
【知识梳理】
心理细节描写通过以下三种方式表达：
例句：
1)（直接描写心理,
表现“疑惑”）
Sandra
sat
quietly
on
the
rock
for
hours,
thinking
of
what
might
have
happened
if
she
hadn’t
left
the
group.
2)（用语言描写心理,
表现“愤怒”）
“How
dare
you
skip
class
and
play
computer
games
all
day!”
his
father
yelled.
3）（用动作描写心理,）
After
failing
the
exam,
Alex
let
out
a
sigh,
crumbled
the
test
paper
into
a
ball
and
tossed
it
into
the
dustbin.（disappointed）
He
covered
his
mouth
to
hide
his
yawn.
（tired）
Our
mouths
dropped
open
in
surprise.(surprised)
She
folded
her
arms
and
stared
at
him.
(angry)
She
jumped
to
her
feet
at
the
news.
(excited)
She
picked
her
way
carefully
along
the
stream.
(cautious)
He
paced
back
and
forth.
(upset/uneasy)
She
screamed
that
there
was
a
snake.
(frightened）
【课堂练习】
1.Can
we
describe
feelings
more
vividly?
1）She
_
_______________,
not
understanding
a
word.
2）He
______________________________in
shame.
知识点三（关于不同人物心理情绪的细节描写）
【知识梳理】
一．词汇集锦
A.表人物喜乐词汇集锦
1.难以形容地开心：indescribable
wild
joy
2.极为感动：be
overwhelmingly
moved
3.几乎无法掩饰他地兴奋地心情：can
hardly
conceal
his
excitement
4.既兴奋又开心：a
mixture
of
excitement
and
happiness
5.激发某人的激情：kindle
sb.
with/to
passion
6.被强烈地吸引：be
powerfully
attracted
to
7.振作精神：keep
up
one’s
spirits
8.为成功而欣喜：be
excited
with
joy
at
the
success
9.被场面所吸引：be
fascinated
by
the
spectacle
of
10.被她的美貌所吸引：be
fascinated
with
her
beauty
11.因…而高兴：be
joyful
over/about
12.快乐至极：be
overwhelmed
with
13.高兴地跳起来：dance/jump
for
joy
14.欣喜若狂：be
wild
with
delight
15.心满意足，非常幸福：on
the
top
of
the
world
16.流下幸福地泪水：tears
of
happiness
flowing
down
17.乐得大叫：yell
with
delight
18.使某人心情愉快：brighten
sb’s
heart
B:
表人物悲忧消沉的高级词汇
强烈的失落感：a
strong
sense
of
loss
2.
陷入绝望：fall
into
despair
3.让他很伤感：put
him
into
a
sentimental
mood
4.
避免陷入消极的旋涡：avoid
getting
sucked
into
a
whirlpool
of
5.因某人的死亡而痛心：break
one's
heart
over
one's
death
6.使某人悲痛：make
one'
's
heart
bleed
7.悲痛欲绝：cry
one'
s
heart
out
8.
怀着沉重的心情：with
a
heavy
heart;
沮丧的：with
a
sinking
heart;忧郁的：with
sorrowful
heart
9.
惊慌失措：be
seized
with
panic
10.很可能引发一阵挫败感：be
extremely
likely
to
raise
a
storm
of
frustration
11.感到一阵悲伤：a
flash
of
grief
came
upon
sb
12.情绪低落：be
down
in
spirits
13.垂头丧气：lose
one'
s
spirit
C.表人物怨怒的高级词汇
1.引起某人的不快：arouse
one's
displeasure
气得说不出话：be
speechless
with
indignation
气得满脸通红：flame
with
anger
对某人勃然大怒：get
mad/
cross
at
sb
勃然大怒：fly
into
a
rage
愤怒地跺脚：stamp
one's
foot
in
anger
怒气冲冲地跑出房间：
run
out
of
the
room
in
a
burst
of
anger
感到沮丧的：feel
frustrated/
depressed/discouraged
二．句型集锦
【例句精讲】
关于高兴情绪
当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
概括描述When
his
mother
kissed
him
on
the
cheek,
the
baby
was
happy/delighted/full
of
joy.
1)
When
his
mother
kissed
him
on
the
cheek,
it
seemed
as
if
the
baby
were
on
top
of
the
world.
(非常开心)
2)
When
the
mother
kissed
the
baby
on
the
cheek,
his
face
beamed
(堆满笑容)and
his
bright
smile
lit
up
the
room.
(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
3)
When
the
mother
kissed
the
baby
on
the
cheek,
he
danced/jumped
with
joy
and
sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)
4)When
the
mother
kissed
the
baby
on
the
cheek,The
smile
on
her
face
shone
like
a
diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
其他表达：
A
ripple
of
excitement
ran
through
them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
Laughter
lingered
around
the
room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
A
wild
gaiety（快乐）?took
hold
of
her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
Unforgettable
were
her
eyes
that
shone
like
diamonds
and
lips
held
in
a
steady
smile.
令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
I
was
pleased
beyond
description.我高兴得难以形容。
She
wore
a
shining
smile
on
her
face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
She
shed
tears
of
joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
She
was
overflowing
with
happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Her
flushed
face
was
shining
with
excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
I
was
floating
on
air.我漂浮在空中。
Amusement
gleamed
in
his
eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
关于绝望情绪
Tony感到很绝望。
概括描述Tony
felt
hopeless/desperate.
1)
As
the
result
of
an
accident,
Tony
was
suddenly
thrown
into
a
world
of
darkness
and
sank
into
hopelessness.
(被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
2)
Tony
felt
left
out
and
was
getting
desperate
with
loneliness.
(感觉被遗忘、忽视)
关于生气情绪
Sheldon感到非常生气。
概括描述Sheldon
felt
very
angry.
1)
Sheldon
felt
so
angry
that
he
stormed
out
of
the
room,
slamming(砰地关上)
the
door
furiously
behind
him.
(冲出房间；狠狠摔门)
2)
Filled
with
anger/fury(狂怒),
Sheldon
was
unable
to
utter
a
single
word.
(充满愤怒；说不出话)
3)
Boiling
with
rage(愤怒),
Sheldon
shook
his
fist
at
me.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)
其他表达：
①
I
was
seized
by
anger.我充满了愤怒。
②
????He
was
fuming
with
rage.他气得大发雷霆。
③
????His
anger
boiled
over.他的愤怒爆发了。
④
????He
could
hardly/scarcely
contain
his
rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤
????He
was
breathing
fire
and
fury.他充满着怒火。
⑥
????His
voice
trembled
with
anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦
????He
gave
me
a
look
of
burning
anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧
????He
glared
at
me
with
burning
eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨
????He
flared
up
at
the
word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩
????His
face
clouded
with
anger.他气得脸色阴沉。
关于兴奋情绪
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。
概括描述When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
she
felt
thrilled.
1)
When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
her
eyes
twinkled/sparkled
with
excitement.（激动得两眼放光）
2)
When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
her
heart
was
thumping/racing/beating/pounding
wildly
with
excitement.
(激动得心砰砰跳)
3)
When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
a
wide
excitement
took
hold
of
her.
(兴奋不能自已)
4）When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
she
felt
a
surge
of
excitement.
5）When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
she
was
overcome
with
excitement.
5.
关于悲伤情绪
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
概括描述Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
she
felt
extremely
sad.
1）Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
her
heart
ached,
tears
streaming/rolling
down
her
cheeks.
(心痛，眼泪直流)
2）Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
she
felt
seized
by
a
burst
of
sadness
and
couldn’t
help
crying
bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)
其他表达：
A
sadness
came
over
her.
Her
heart
ached,
tears
streaming
down
her
cheeks.
Numb
with
grief,
she
became
speechless.
Feeling
a
surge
of
sadness,
she
couldn’t
help
crying
bitterly.
Sadness
surging
within
her,
she
burst
into
tears.
Her
eyes
were
red
from
crying.
她的双眼哭得通红
Her
eyes
brimmed
with
tears.
她的眼里满含泪水
Tears
coursed/trickled/streamed/ran
down
her
cheeks.
眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.
He
cried
himself
to
sleep.他哭着直到睡着。
I
feel
like
I
am
floating
in
an
ocean
of
sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
Her
hands
were
shaking.
She
was
on
the
verge
of
tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
Hearing
the
news,
so
desperate
was
he
that
he
drowned
sadness
in
wine.听到这消息他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
I
tried
to
fight
back
tears.
我努力忍住眼泪。
A
frown（皱眉）now
stood
on
his
face.他皱起了眉头。
They
sat
there
with
glum
looks
on
their
faces.
??他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
?
?The
news
cast
a
cloud
of
gloom
over
his
face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
He
brimmed
over
with
sorrow
when...他满是悲伤……
They
were
immersed
in
sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
These
days
he
was
in
low
spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。
【随堂练习】
中译英：
一听到那个坏消息，悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话
6.关于羞愧情绪
她感到非常羞愧。
概括描述She
felt
ashamed.
1)
She
felt
so
ashamed
that
she
could
feel
her
face
burning.(脸上滚烫)
【随堂练习】
中译英：
她非常羞愧快哭了（用so倒装形式）；
2）她非常羞愧血液涌上脸颊（用so倒装形式）；
7.关于害怕情绪
当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
概括描述：At
the
sight
of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
felt
very
scared.
At
the
sight
of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
felt
so
scared
that
my
throat
tightened
and
my
knees
felt
weak.
(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)；
At
the
sight
of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
froze
with
terror,
too
scared
to
move
an
inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)；
其他表达：
1）无灵主语
Fear
slowly
creeps
upon
her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
A
flood
of
fear
welled
up
in
him.
/
Fear
flooded
over
him.
他心中涌起一阵恐惧。?/?恐惧淹没了他。
人物表现
He
turned
to
me,
with
his
eyes
full
of
horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
She
was
choked
by
fear.她因恐惧而窒息。
Her
face
turned
pale
and
stood
there
tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
Her
heart
beat
so
violently
that
she
felt
nearly
suffocated（窒息）.
她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
She
shook
all
over,
feeling
like
sitting
on
pins
and
needles.
?她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
【随堂练习】
中译英：
1）当看到那只凶恶的狼时，被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。
8.关于感动情绪
She
was
touched
deeply/immensely
by
their
warm-hearted
help.
Tears
filling
her
eyes,
she
offered
them
her
heartfelt
gratitude.
Tears
of
gratitude
filled
her
eyes
for
their
warm-hearted
help.
【3种常用句式】
关于读后续写的情绪描写，并不是每一个都要外显表达出来。有时候，故事情节的转变，也会带来人物情绪的变化，才能推动故事继续发展。这3个句式有一个共同的使用场景，即故事情节发展和人物情绪结合。
1）What+情绪动词+sb?+was
+that从句
What
主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里说的是故事发展情节。
注意：此句式使用时最大的易错点就是情绪动词用错，通常会用成形容词或者名词。
例：What?surprised?me
was?that
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest.
情绪动词归类：
【高兴类】delight,
please,
excite,
cheer,
amuse,
satisfy；
【生气类】annoy,
upset
【惊讶类】surprise,
astonish,
shock,
amaze；
【害怕类】frighten,
scare,
terrify；
【失望类】depress,
disappoint,
discourage,
bore；
【忧虑类】worry,
concern；
【其他类】puzzle,
confuse,
interest,
relax,
touch,
move,
embarrass,
impress
【随堂练习】
中译英：让我最印象深刻是我和TOM一起克服生活中的困难。
To
one's
+情绪名词，+句子
归纳整理
【正态度】amazement,
amusement,
delight,
joy,
satisfaction，excitement,
admiration；
【负态度】annoyance,
despair,
disappointment,
horror,
shame,
sorrow,
distress；
【中性态度】astonishment,
puzzlement,
regret,
relief,
surprise,
amazement；
To
one’s
+情绪名词
变形
To
one’s
+情绪名词，这个句式有4个变形。
变形1：加强语气
在to前面加上much,
greatly，变成Much
/
Greatly
to
one’s+情绪名词。
如：Much
/
Greatly
to
my
surprise,
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest.
或To
my
great
surprise,
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest.
变形2：to
the
+情绪名词+
of
?sb（名词或者代词），如
To
the
relief
of
her
parents,
she
was
more
confident
than
before.
变形3：情绪名词叠加商用，变成to
one’s
情绪名词1
and
情绪名词2
To
her
surprise
and
joy,
she
was
awarded
first
prize.
To
her
disappointment
and
regret,
he
missed
the
concert.
变形4：to
one’s
+情绪名词位置变换
这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请记住下方2个例句。
I，to
my
surprise,
found
that
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest
I,
to
my
wide-eyed
delight,
found
myself
in
the
midst
of
various
Christmas
goods.
【句式提炼】sb,
to
one’s
+情绪名词，found
+其他
3）主句,
which
+情绪动词+sb
例句：Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest,which
surprised
me.
【随堂练习】
中译英：
让我非常欣慰的是他平安回家了。
我感到很惭愧的是从来没有向我的妈妈表达谢意
【经典文章片段赏析】
练习
1.她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。
She
tried
to
_______________________.
2.她来到的时候,
我感到一阵激动。
I
felt
______________
when
she
arrived.?
3.福里斯特盯着他的汽车,
气得浑身发抖。
_Foster
stared
at
his
car,
。
4.查尔斯悲痛欲绝。?
Charles
was
___.
5.泪珠顺着她的脸颊滚落。
Tears
__.
6.她抬头凝望着他,
脸上洋溢着幸福。
she
gazed
up
at
him,
————
7.想到要见一位真正的电影明星,
他们就满心激动。
They
were
——————
at
the
thought
of
meeting
a
real
movie
star.
8.亚当在上班路上愉快地吹着口哨。
Adam
__________
on
his
way
to
work.?
【课后巩固】
关于心理描写续写的作业
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Mary
waited
anxiously
for
her
turn
in
the
empty
dressing
room.
Never
had
she
been
so
nervous
before.
This
competition
was
of
vital
importance
to
her
comeback
.“If
I
can
win
today,”
she
said
to
herself,
“I
can
dance
on
the
national
stage
next
month.”
Three
months
ago,
her
left
arm
was
seriously
injured
in
a
car
accident.After
the
medical
treatment
,
she
began
to
recover
slowly.
She
practiced
over
and
over
again
in
order
to
regain
her
dancing
skills.
“Hi,
Mary,”
in
rushed
her
friend
Jessica.“How
is
your
arm?
Is
it
going
to
influence
your
performance?”
“I
guess
it
can
be
tolerated
for
I
am
to
win
the
match
.
”
said
Mary
with
a
determined
look.
“Admirable!
But
I
hear
that
a
girl
called
Linda
is
really
gifted
and
strong.She
can
be
your
real
well-matched
competitor.Come
on!”
After
Jessica
left,Mary
decided
to
practice
her
most
difficult
spin
.
“If
I
don’t
try
harder,
I
won’t
grasp
this
chance.”
She
thought.
But
her
arm
began
to
hurt,
making
her
worried.
“Mary,
what
makes
you
think
you
have
a
chance
tonight?”
she
said
to
herself.
After
the
pain
was
gone,
she
continued
to
warm
up.
A
slim
girl
hurried
in
and
put
down
an
equipment
bag
on
the
chair.Then,
she
took
out
her
dance
dress
quickly
and
put
it
on
skillfully.
Seeing
Mary,
she
smiled
politely
and
said
“Hi,
I’m
Linda.
I
am
the
next
one!”
Mary
nodded
in
reply
but
felt
uncomfortable.
“This
is
just
my
competitor.
Because
of
her,
I
may
lose
tonight.”
Her
mind
was
wandering
when
Linda
let
out
a
scream,
“Oh,
God,
I
can’t
find
my
music
tape!”
Linda
searched
her
bag
but
in
vain
.
“It
may
be
missing
on
the
way.”With
these
words,
she
then
rushed
out.
注意：
1.所续写短文的字数应为120字左右；
2.应使用5个以上的短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Suddenly,
Mary
caught
sight
of
a
black
box
under
the
chair
where
Linda
put
her
bag.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Hearing
her
name
called,
Mary
walked
on
the
stage
with
her
heart
beating
faster
and
faster.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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专题课后续写-心理描写
学习目标：
1.了解读后续写的要求和技巧；
掌握关于心理细节描写的词汇，词组，句型等表达；
翻译下方句子（尝试用多种表达方式）：
她知道考试结果时，她兴奋极了。
When
she
knew
the
result
of
the
test,
she
felt
extremely____excited/joyful___________.
her
eyes
twinkled
with
_____excitement/joy__________.
听到这个消息，他非常生气
。
Hearing
the
news,
he
got
very
__angry________.
he
was
filled
with
__anger________________.
她分手了，她伤心不已。
She
broke
up
with
her
husband,
and
she
felt
extremely
__________.
and
she
was
overcome
with
________________.
描述内心“悲伤”的常用词有：heart
ach;sorrowful
当男孩看到蛇时，他感到非常害怕。
Seeing
the
snake,
the
boy
felt
very
________________________.
the
boy
was
full
of
__________________.
描述内心“害怕，恐惧”的常用词有afraid;
horror;
horrible
;
scare;
fear
用所学英语词汇描述下方人物的心理状态
happy/glad/joyful/delighted/excited/cheerful/overjoyed/pleased/thrilled/;
angry/annoyed/cross/irritated/mad/outraged/ill-tempered;
surprised/amazed/astonished/shocked/startled/bewildered;
sad/disappointed/depressed/frustrated/upset/sorrowful/ashamed;
知识点一（心理细节描写如何来写）
【知识梳理】
心理细节描写通过以下三种方式表达：
例句：
1)（直接描写心理,
表现“疑惑”）
Sandra
sat
quietly
on
the
rock
for
hours,
thinking
of
what
might
have
happened
if
she
hadn’t
left
the
group.
2)（用语言描写心理,
表现“愤怒”）
“How
dare
you
skip
class
and
play
computer
games
all
day!”
his
father
yelled.
3）（用动作描写心理,）
After
failing
the
exam,
Alex
let
out
a
sigh,
crumbled
the
test
paper
into
a
ball
and
tossed
it
into
the
dustbin.（disappointed）
He
covered
his
mouth
to
hide
his
yawn.
（tired）
Our
mouths
dropped
open
in
surprise.(surprised)
She
folded
her
arms
and
stared
at
him.
(angry)
She
jumped
to
her
feet
at
the
news.
(excited)
She
picked
her
way
carefully
along
the
stream.
(cautious)
He
paced
back
and
forth.
(upset/uneasy)
She
screamed
that
there
was
a
snake.
(frightened）
【课堂练习】
1.Can
we
describe
feelings
more
vividly?
1）She
_scratch
her
head
_______________,
not
understanding
a
word.
2）He
_____hang/drop/lower
one’s
head_________________________in
shame.
知识点三（关于不同人物心理情绪的细节描写）
【知识梳理】
一．词汇集锦
A.表人物喜乐词汇集锦
1.难以形容地开心：indescribable
wild
joy
2.极为感动：be
overwhelmingly
moved
3.几乎无法掩饰他地兴奋地心情：can
hardly
conceal
his
excitement
4.既兴奋又开心：a
mixture
of
excitement
and
happiness
5.激发某人的激情：kindle
sb.
with/to
passion
6.被强烈地吸引：be
powerfully
attracted
to
7.振作精神：keep
up
one’s
spirits
8.为成功而欣喜：be
excited
with
joy
at
the
success
9.被场面所吸引：be
fascinated
by
the
spectacle
of
10.被她的美貌所吸引：be
fascinated
with
her
beauty
11.因…而高兴：be
joyful
over/about
12.快乐至极：be
overwhelmed
with
13.高兴地跳起来：dance/jump
for
joy
14.欣喜若狂：be
wild
with
delight
15.心满意足，非常幸福：on
the
top
of
the
world
16.流下幸福地泪水：tears
of
happiness
flowing
down
17.乐得大叫：yell
with
delight
18.使某人心情愉快：brighten
sb’s
heart
B:
表人物悲忧消沉的高级词汇
强烈的失落感：a
strong
sense
of
loss
2.
陷入绝望：fall
into
despair
3.让他很伤感：put
him
into
a
sentimental
mood
4.
避免陷入消极的旋涡：avoid
getting
sucked
into
a
whirlpool
of
5.因某人的死亡而痛心：break
one's
heart
over
one's
death
6.使某人悲痛：make
one'
's
heart
bleed
7.悲痛欲绝：cry
one'
s
heart
out
8.
怀着沉重的心情：with
a
heavy
heart;
沮丧的：with
a
sinking
heart;忧郁的：with
sorrowful
heart
9.
惊慌失措：be
seized
with
panic
10.很可能引发一阵挫败感：be
extremely
likely
to
raise
a
storm
of
frustration
11.感到一阵悲伤：a
flash
of
grief
came
upon
sb
12.情绪低落：be
down
in
spirits
13.垂头丧气：lose
one'
s
spirit
C.表人物怨怒的高级词汇
1.引起某人的不快：arouse
one's
displeasure
气得说不出话：be
speechless
with
indignation
气得满脸通红：flame
with
anger
对某人勃然大怒：get
mad/
cross
at
sb
勃然大怒：fly
into
a
rage
愤怒地跺脚：stamp
one's
foot
in
anger
怒气冲冲地跑出房间：
run
out
of
the
room
in
a
burst
of
anger
感到沮丧的：feel
frustrated/
depressed/discouraged
二．句型集锦
【例句精讲】
关于高兴情绪
当妈妈亲吻他时，小baby开心极了。
概括描述When
his
mother
kissed
him
on
the
cheek,
the
baby
was
happy/delighted/full
of
joy.
1)
When
his
mother
kissed
him
on
the
cheek,
it
seemed
as
if
the
baby
were
on
top
of
the
world.
(非常开心)
2)
When
the
mother
kissed
the
baby
on
the
cheek,
his
face
beamed
(堆满笑容)and
his
bright
smile
lit
up
the
room.
(眉开眼笑；笑容照亮房间)
3)
When
the
mother
kissed
the
baby
on
the
cheek,
he
danced/jumped
with
joy
and
sweetness.(欢欣雀跃)
4)When
the
mother
kissed
the
baby
on
the
cheek,The
smile
on
her
face
shone
like
a
diamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
其他表达：
A
ripple
of
excitement
ran
through
them.一阵激动声穿过他们。
Laughter
lingered
around
the
room.笑声在房间里萦绕。
A
wild
gaiety（快乐）?took
hold
of
her.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
Unforgettable
were
her
eyes
that
shone
like
diamonds
and
lips
held
in
a
steady
smile.
令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
I
was
pleased
beyond
description.我高兴得难以形容。
She
wore
a
shining
smile
on
her
face.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
She
shed
tears
of
joy.她高兴得流下了眼泪。
She
was
overflowing
with
happiness.她洋溢着幸福。
Her
flushed
face
was
shining
with
excitement.她激动得满脸通红。
I
was
floating
on
air.我漂浮在空中。
Amusement
gleamed
in
his
eyes.他眼睛流露出愉快的神情。
关于绝望情绪
Tony感到很绝望。
概括描述Tony
felt
hopeless/desperate.
1)
As
the
result
of
an
accident,
Tony
was
suddenly
thrown
into
a
world
of
darkness
and
sank
into
hopelessness.
(被投入黑暗之中；陷入绝望)
2)
Tony
felt
left
out
and
was
getting
desperate
with
loneliness.
(感觉被遗忘、忽视)
关于生气情绪
Sheldon感到非常生气。
概括描述Sheldon
felt
very
angry.
1)
Sheldon
felt
so
angry
that
he
stormed
out
of
the
room,
slamming(砰地关上)
the
door
furiously
behind
him.
(冲出房间；狠狠摔门)
2)
Filled
with
anger/fury(狂怒),
Sheldon
was
unable
to
utter
a
single
word.
(充满愤怒；说不出话)
3)
Boiling
with
rage(愤怒),
Sheldon
shook
his
fist
at
me.(怒火中烧；挥舞拳头)
其他表达：
①
I
was
seized
by
anger.我充满了愤怒。
②
????He
was
fuming
with
rage.他气得大发雷霆。
③
????His
anger
boiled
over.他的愤怒爆发了。
④
????He
could
hardly/scarcely
contain
his
rage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤
????He
was
breathing
fire
and
fury.他充满着怒火。
⑥
????His
voice
trembled
with
anger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦
????He
gave
me
a
look
of
burning
anger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧
????He
glared
at
me
with
burning
eyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨
????He
flared
up
at
the
word.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩
????His
face
clouded
with
anger.他气得脸色阴沉。
关于兴奋情绪
当主持人宣布她获奖时，她兴奋极了。
概括描述When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
she
felt
thrilled.
1)
When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
her
eyes
twinkled/sparkled
with
excitement.（激动得两眼放光）
2)
When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
her
heart
was
thumping/racing/beating/pounding
wildly
with
excitement.
(激动得心砰砰跳)
3)
When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
a
wide
excitement
took
hold
of
her.
(兴奋不能自已)
4）When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
she
felt
a
surge
of
excitement.
5）When
the
host
announced
that
she
won
the
prize,
she
was
overcome
with
excitement.
5.
关于悲伤情绪
一听到那个坏消息，她悲伤不已。
概括描述Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
she
felt
extremely
sad.
1）Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
her
heart
ached,
tears
streaming/rolling
down
her
cheeks.
(心痛，眼泪直流)
2）Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
she
felt
seized
by
a
burst
of
sadness
and
couldn’t
help
crying
bitterly.(被一股悲伤之感控制，忍不住哭泣)
其他表达：
A
sadness
came
over
her.
Her
heart
ached,
tears
streaming
down
her
cheeks.
Numb
with
grief,
she
became
speechless.
Feeling
a
surge
of
sadness,
she
couldn’t
help
crying
bitterly.
Sadness
surging
within
her,
she
burst
into
tears.
Her
eyes
were
red
from
crying.
她的双眼哭得通红
Her
eyes
brimmed
with
tears.
她的眼里满含泪水
Tears
coursed/trickled/streamed/ran
down
her
cheeks.
眼泪沿着她的面颊流下来.
He
cried
himself
to
sleep.他哭着直到睡着。
I
feel
like
I
am
floating
in
an
ocean
of
sadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
Her
hands
were
shaking.
She
was
on
the
verge
of
tears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
Hearing
the
news,
so
desperate
was
he
that
he
drowned
sadness
in
wine.听到这消息他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
I
tried
to
fight
back
tears.
我努力忍住眼泪。
A
frown（皱眉）now
stood
on
his
face.他皱起了眉头。
They
sat
there
with
glum
looks
on
their
faces.
??他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。
?
?The
news
cast
a
cloud
of
gloom
over
his
face.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
He
brimmed
over
with
sorrow
when...他满是悲伤……
They
were
immersed
in
sorrow.他们沉浸在悲痛之中。
These
days
he
was
in
low
spirits.这些日子他情绪低落。
【随堂练习】
中译英：
一听到那个坏消息，悲伤到失去知觉，不能开口说话
Upon
hearing
the
bad
news,
she,
numb
with
grief,
had
trouble
speaking.
6.关于羞愧情绪
她感到非常羞愧。
概括描述She
felt
ashamed.
1)
She
felt
so
ashamed
that
she
could
feel
her
face
burning.(脸上滚烫)
【随堂练习】
中译英：
她非常羞愧快哭了（用so倒装形式）；
So
ashamed
did
she
feel
that
she
was
close
to
tears.
(快哭了)
2）她非常羞愧血液涌上脸颊（用so倒装形式）；
So
ashamed
was
she
that
she
could
feel
the
blood
rush
to
her
face.
(血液涌上脸颊)
7.关于害怕情绪
当看到那只凶恶的狼时，我感到很害怕。
概括描述：At
the
sight
of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
felt
very
scared.
At
the
sight
of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
felt
so
scared
that
my
throat
tightened
and
my
knees
felt
weak.
(嗓子发紧，膝盖发软)；
At
the
sight
of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
froze
with
terror,
too
scared
to
move
an
inch.(吓呆了，不敢动弹)；
其他表达：
1）无灵主语
Fear
slowly
creeps
upon
her.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
A
flood
of
fear
welled
up
in
him.
/
Fear
flooded
over
him.
他心中涌起一阵恐惧。?/?恐惧淹没了他。
人物表现
He
turned
to
me,
with
his
eyes
full
of
horror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
She
was
choked
by
fear.她因恐惧而窒息。
Her
face
turned
pale
and
stood
there
tongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
Her
heart
beat
so
violently
that
she
felt
nearly
suffocated（窒息）.
她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
She
shook
all
over,
feeling
like
sitting
on
pins
and
needles.
?她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
【随堂练习】
中译英：
1）当看到那只凶恶的狼时，被深深地恐惧感所控制，手心出汗。
At
the
sight
of
the
fierce
wolf,
I
was
seized
by
a
strong
sense
of
horror
and
my
palms
were
sweating.
8.关于感动情绪
She
was
touched
deeply/immensely
by
their
warm-hearted
help.
Tears
filling
her
eyes,
she
offered
them
her
heartfelt
gratitude.
Tears
of
gratitude
filled
her
eyes
for
their
warm-hearted
help.
【3种常用句式】
关于读后续写的情绪描写，并不是每一个都要外显表达出来。有时候，故事情节的转变，也会带来人物情绪的变化，才能推动故事继续发展。这3个句式有一个共同的使用场景，即故事情节发展和人物情绪结合。
1）What+情绪动词+sb?+was
+that从句
What
主语从句描述情绪，that表语从句描述情绪产生的原因，在续写里说的是故事发展情节。
注意：此句式使用时最大的易错点就是情绪动词用错，通常会用成形容词或者名词。
例：What?surprised?me
was?that
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest.
情绪动词归类：
【高兴类】delight,
please,
excite,
cheer,
amuse,
satisfy；
【生气类】annoy,
upset
【惊讶类】surprise,
astonish,
shock,
amaze；
【害怕类】frighten,
scare,
terrify；
【失望类】depress,
disappoint,
discourage,
bore；
【忧虑类】worry,
concern；
【其他类】puzzle,
confuse,
interest,
relax,
touch,
move,
embarrass,
impress
【随堂练习】
中译英：让我最印象深刻是我和TOM一起克服生活中的困难。
To
one's
+情绪名词，+句子
归纳整理
【正态度】amazement,
amusement,
delight,
joy,
satisfaction，excitement,
admiration；
【负态度】annoyance,
despair,
disappointment,
horror,
shame,
sorrow,
distress；
【中性态度】astonishment,
puzzlement,
regret,
relief,
surprise,
amazement；
To
one’s
+情绪名词
变形
To
one’s
+情绪名词，这个句式有4个变形。
变形1：加强语气
在to前面加上much,
greatly，变成Much
/
Greatly
to
one’s+情绪名词。
如：Much
/
Greatly
to
my
surprise,
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest.
或To
my
great
surprise,
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest.
变形2：to
the
+情绪名词+
of
?sb（名词或者代词），如
To
the
relief
of
her
parents,
she
was
more
confident
than
before.
变形3：情绪名词叠加商用，变成to
one’s
情绪名词1
and
情绪名词2
To
her
surprise
and
joy,
she
was
awarded
first
prize.
To
her
disappointment
and
regret,
he
missed
the
concert.
变形4：to
one’s
+情绪名词位置变换
这个短语的位置可以句首，句中，句末。请记住下方2个例句。
I，to
my
surprise,
found
that
Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest
I,
to
my
wide-eyed
delight,
found
myself
in
the
midst
of
various
Christmas
goods.
【句式提炼】sb,
to
one’s
+情绪名词，found
+其他
3）主句,
which
+情绪动词+sb
例句：Tom
won
the
first
prize
in
the
English
Speech
Contest,which
surprised
me.
【随堂练习】
中译英：
让我非常欣慰的是他平安回家了。
Much/greatly
to
my
relief
he
came
back
home
safely.
我感到很惭愧的是从来没有向我的妈妈表达谢意
To
my
great
shame
I
never
expressed
my
gratitude
for
my
mother.
【经典文章片段赏析】
通过与学生共同赏析，找到文章中心理描写的亮点并进行分析：
练习
1.她试图掩饰自己的愤怒。
She
tried
to
____hide
her
anger________________________.
2.她来到的时候,
我感到一阵激动。
I
felt
____a
____flush
of
excitement____________
when
she
arrived.?
3.福里斯特盯着他的汽车,
气得浑身发抖。
_Foster
stared
at
his
car,
trembling
with
anger____。
4.查尔斯悲痛欲绝。?
Charles
was
___seized
by
great
sorrow__.
5.泪珠顺着她的脸颊滚落。
Tears
__are
rolling
down
from
her
cheeks.
6.她抬头凝望着他,
脸上洋溢着幸福。
she
gazed
up
at
him,
glowing
with
happiness.
7.想到要见一位真正的电影明星,
他们就满心激动。
They
were
full
of
/filled
with
excitement
at
the
thought
of
meeting
a
real
movie
star.
8.亚当在上班路上愉快地吹着口哨。
Adam
____whistled
happily___
on
his
way
to
work.?
【课后巩固】
关于心理描写续写的作业
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。
Mary
waited
anxiously
for
her
turn
in
the
empty
dressing
room.
Never
had
she
been
so
nervous
before.
This
competition
was
of
vital
importance
to
her
comeback
.“If
I
can
win
today,”
she
said
to
herself,
“I
can
dance
on
the
national
stage
next
month.”
Three
months
ago,
her
left
arm
was
seriously
injured
in
a
car
accident.After
the
medical
treatment
,
she
began
to
recover
slowly.
She
practiced
over
and
over
again
in
order
to
regain
her
dancing
skills.
“Hi,
Mary,”
in
rushed
her
friend
Jessica.“How
is
your
arm?
Is
it
going
to
influence
your
performance?”
“I
guess
it
can
be
tolerated
for
I
am
to
win
the
match
.
”
said
Mary
with
a
determined
look.
“Admirable!
But
I
hear
that
a
girl
called
Linda
is
really
gifted
and
strong.She
can
be
your
real
well-matched
competitor.Come
on!”
After
Jessica
left,Mary
decided
to
practice
her
most
difficult
spin
.
“If
I
don’t
try
harder,
I
won’t
grasp
this
chance.”
She
thought.
But
her
arm
began
to
hurt,
making
her
worried.
“Mary,
what
makes
you
think
you
have
a
chance
tonight?”
she
said
to
herself.
After
the
pain
was
gone,
she
continued
to
warm
up.
A
slim
girl
hurried
in
and
put
down
an
equipment
bag
on
the
chair.Then,
she
took
out
her
dance
dress
quickly
and
put
it
on
skillfully.
Seeing
Mary,
she
smiled
politely
and
said
“Hi,
I’m
Linda.
I
am
the
next
one!”
Mary
nodded
in
reply
but
felt
uncomfortable.
“This
is
just
my
competitor.
Because
of
her,
I
may
lose
tonight.”
Her
mind
was
wandering
when
Linda
let
out
a
scream,
“Oh,
God,
I
can’t
find
my
music
tape!”
Linda
searched
her
bag
but
in
vain
.
“It
may
be
missing
on
the
way.”With
these
words,
she
then
rushed
out.
注意：
1.所续写短文的字数应为120字左右；
2.应使用5个以上的短文中标有下划线的关键词语；
3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；
4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
Paragraph
1:
Suddenly,
Mary
caught
sight
of
a
black
box
under
the
chair
where
Linda
put
her
bag.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph
2:
Hearing
her
name
called,
Mary
walked
on
the
stage
with
her
heart
beating
faster
and
faster.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】读后续写范文1
Suddenly,
Mary
caught
sight
of
a
black
box
under
the
chair
where
Linda
put
her
bag.
She
went
over
and
then
opened
the
box
to
find
Linda’s
tape
was
just
inside.
At
that
time,
she
was
in
a
dilemma,
“This
is
my
chance
to
defeat
her.”
But
on
a
second
thought,
she
changed
her
mind,
“If
I
hide
it,
I
will
will
the
competition
but
I
may
lose
something.”
She
placed
it
on
the
chair
carefully,
leaving
a
note
saying
“Take
it
easy,
we
are
the
best.”
Soon,
it’s
her
turn
to
come
on
the
stage.
Hearing
her
name
called,
Mary
walked
on
the
stage
with
her
heart
beating
faster
and
faster.
She
kept
reminding
herself,
“I
have
been
practicing
for
so
long,
and
I
will
certainly
make
it.”
But
the
serious
pain
in
her
arm
came
again
when
she
was
performing
the
most
difficult
spin.
She
fell
down
on
the
stage.
At
that
moment,
Linda
came
back
in
low
spirits.
To
her
surprise
and
relief
she
saw
the
tape
and
Mary’s
note.
With
Mary’s
kindness
and
encouragement,
Linda
finished
her
performance
calmly
and
skillfully.
Finally,
Mary
lost
the
game
but
she
believed
she
had
won
everything.
读后续写范文2
Suddenly,
Mary
caught
sight
of
a
black
box
under
the
chair
where
Linda
put
her
bag.She
bent
over
to
pick
it
up.
“Linda’s
music
tape!”
She
cried
out
in
surprise.
“It
must
have
rolled
out
of
her
bag,while
she
got
changed
here.”
At
this
moment,
an
idea
flashed
through
her
mind,
which
made
her
rooted
to
the
spot.
“Without
her
music
tape,
Linda
will
surely
lose;
without
this
real
competitor,
I
will
definitely
win.”
At
the
thought
of
this,
Mary
shivered
slightly.
She
was
in
a
dilemma,
wondering
what
to
do
next.
“Do
I
really
want
to
win
so
much?”She
hesitated
for
a
second
and
then
hurried
out
to
give
the
music
tape
to
Linda
,who
was
extremely
anxious
in
the
corridor.
Linda
was
so
grateful
to
Mary,
and
finished
her
dancing
successfully.
Hearing
her
name
called,
Mary
walked
on
the
stage
with
her
heart
beating
faster
and
faster.
Nervous
as
she
was,
she
stepped
onto
the
stage
with
a
big
smile.
She
danced
skillfully
to
the
music
and
completed
her
most
difficult
spin
smoothly.
“Good,”
she
thougt
to
herself,
“my
injured
arm
is
awesome
today.”
As
the
music
ended,
thunderous
applause
filled
the
stadium.With
the
final
marks
announced,
Mary
knew
she
achieved
her
goal
and
tears
began
to
well
up
in
her
eyes
.
(Possible
ending
1)As
she
headed
back
to
the
dressing
room,
Linda
came
up
to
her
cheerfully
and
held
her
hand
tightly,
“Congratulations!You’ve
done
an
amazing
performance!
You
win!”
Mary
smiled
happily,
“I
win.”
(Possible
ending
2)As
she
headed
back
to
the
dressing
room,
she
thought
about
the
music
tape.
“No
one
will
know
how
close
I
really
came
to
losing,”
Mary
said
softly
to
herself.
【解析】
这是一篇记叙文，文章主要讲述了负伤参加舞蹈比赛的Mary遇到了自己的竞争对手Linda，而Linda却出现了准备上的失误：录音带不见了。要求考生根据提示续写后文。
前文主要讲的是左手在车祸中受伤复原后的Mary要参加舞蹈比赛以赢得更大的舞台，比赛准备期间遇到了“劲敌”Linda。
Linda
却由于失误导致自己的录音带失。在给的第一段开头中，“Suddenly,
Mary
caught
sight
of
a
black
box
under
the
chair
where
Linda
put
her
bag.”“caught
sight
of”意思是“看到”，“a
black
box
under
the
chair
where
Linda
put
her
bag”此句中的a
black
box为关键词，应该指Linda的录音带。后文需要围绕这个词描述Mary的心理变化和应对：是及时还给她还是偷偷藏起来？在给的第二段开头中“Hearing
her
name
called,
Mary
walked
on
the
stage
with
her
heart
beating
faster
and
faster.（听到叫她的名字，玛丽在舞台上走着，她的心跳越来越快。）”Mary
为关键词，后文要对她在舞台上的表现进行描述：伤痛影响发挥而失败还是克服伤痛获得胜利？
范文一第一段中描述了Mary的矛盾心路历程，最终决定将磁带归还并以鼓励：She
placed
it
on
the
chair
carefully,
leaving
a
note
saying
“Take
it
easy,
we
are
the
best.”第二段描述了伤痛影响发挥导致比赛失败，但却有结论：Finally,
Mary
lost
the
game
but
she
believed
she
had
won
everything.
范文二第一段中描述了Mary
的矛盾心理历程，但最终做出决定：She
hesitated
for
a
second
and
then
hurried
out
to
give
the
music
tape
to
Linda.
第二段描述了克服伤痛获得比赛胜利：Mary
smiled
happily,
“I
win.”
【预习内容】
动作细节描写如何表达
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