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广东中考技巧---议论文写作
最近你在班里就是否应该克隆动物进行了一次调查,结果如下表。你应邀给你校英语刊物写一篇短文说明你的调查结果,并表明你的看法。
【写作任务】
一、思路点拨
1.
审题,确定写作体裁、时态和人称:
从题目要求可以看出,此处要求写一篇英语短文,表明对克隆动物的观点并说明理由,属于议论文;时态以一般现在时为主;人称以第三人称为主。
【议论文写作分析与指导】
2.
确定文章结构:
根据调查报告的一般结构,本文应该分为三段:
第一段:引出讨论话题(已给出,即克隆动物)
第二段:写作主体,针对克隆动物给出两种不同的观点和理由
第三段:发表自己的观点并说明理由
【写作分析与指导】
3.
根据题目要求,归纳写作要点:
(1)
70%的学生持赞成态度;
(2)
赞成的理由:帮助科学家找到治疗人类疾病的方法,拯救濒危动物;
(3)
30%的学生持反对态度;
(4)
反对的理由:物种减少,抵抗疾病能力降低,对动物是不公平的、残酷的;
(5)
表明自己的观点并说明理由。
【写作分析与指导】
【写前储备】
1.
By
cloning
animals,
some
endangered
species
can
be
preserved.
2.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned
/
Personally
/
In
my
opinion,
I
agree
to
the
third
plan.
3.
I
would
like
to
agree
with
you,
but
I
can’t
agree
with
you
completely.
4.
There
might
be
some
advantages,
but
also
some
disadvantages.
5.
Some
people
like
to
live
in
cities
while
some
like
to
live
in
the
countryside.
6.
In
my
opinion,
students
should
search
for
all
kinds
of
useful
information
on
the
Internet.
【写前储备】
7.
Every
coin
has
two
sides.
8.
Some
people
are
in
favour
of
the
idea.
9.
From
the
discussion,
we
can
predict
what
will
happen
in
the
near
future.
10.
We
must
make
a
detailed
plan
for
the
project.
11.
On
the
one
hand,
we
lack
money;
on
the
other
hand,
we
haven’t
found
a
proper
place.
12.
This
story
is
unsuitable.
For
one
thing,
it’s
too
long,
and
for
another,
it’s
too
dull.
二、一句多译
1.
通过克隆动物,人们可以拯救濒危动物。
By
cloning
animals,
people
can
save
the
animals
which
are
endangered.
By
cloning
animals,
people
can
save
the
endangered
animals.
2.
其他人持相反的观点。
The
others
take
an
opposite
side.
The
others
hold
an
opposite
idea.
The
others
hold
an
opposite
point
of
view.
4.
它将有助于保持生态平衡。
3.
至于我,我同意前一种看法。
As
for
me,
I
agree
to
the
former
idea.
In
my
opinion,
I
agree
to
the
former
idea.
Personally,
I
agree
to
the
former
idea.
As
far
as
I’m
concerned,
I
agree
to
the
former
idea.
It
will
contribute
to
keeping
the
balance
of
nature.
It
will
help
keep
the
balance
of
nature.
It
will
be
beneficial
to
keep
the
balance
of
nature.
三、下笔成文
Recently
a
survey
about
whether
animals
should
be
cloned
was
conducted
in
our
class.
Different
students
have
different
opinions.
Seventy
percent
of
the
students
agree
that
cloning
animals
is
beneficial.
On
the
one
hand,
cloning
animals
may
help
medical
science
to
produce
cures
for
serious
illnesses.
On
the
other
hand,
by
cloning
animals,
people
can
save
the
animals
which
are
endangered.
However,
the
others
take
an
opposite
side.
They
think
cloning
means
there
will
be
less
species
and
it
can
reduce
their
ability
to
resist
some
particular
illnesses.
In
addition,
cloning
is
unfair
and
cruel
for
animals.
As
for
me,
I
agree
to
the
former
idea.
For
one
thing,
by
cloning
scientists
can
get
a
large
number
of
animals
used
in
various
experiments;
for
another,
it
will
contribute
to
keeping
the
balance
of
nature.
议论文常用句型
首段首句:
1.
Recently
there
is
a
heated
debate
in
our
class
(××)
on
whether
we
(××)should
××.
最近,在我们班(××)就我们(××)是否应该××展开激烈的争论。
中间段落:
2.
When
it
comes
to
this
problem
(××)
,
different
people
have
different
opinions
.
当谈到这个问题(××)的时候,
不同的人有不同的看法。
或
As
the
proverb
says
/
As
the
saying
goes,
‘
Every
coin
has
two
sides’.
俗话说/
常言道,
‘每一枚硬币都有两面性。’
3.
Those
who
are
in
favor
of
the
idea
think
that
××.
For
one
thing
,
××;
For
another
,
××.
What’s
more
,
××.
那些支持这一想法的人认为××。一方面,××;
另一方面,××。更为重要的是××。
4.
However
,
others
believe
that
××,
because
××.
Moreover
/
Besides
/
Furthermore
,
××
.
然而,其他人认为××,
因为××.而且/
此外,××。
末段:
5.
From
my
point
of
view
/
As
far
as
I’m
concerned
,
××.
Only
in
this
way
can
we
××.
在我看来,××。只有这样,我们才能××。
Homework
人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。字数100词左右。