writing with the help of mind map

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Writing
---with the help of mind map
Xianyan No.2 Mid-school
Betty
Mind map（思维导图）
Tip：get ideas by asking questions
假如你是李华，给你的英国笔友Michael写一封信，介绍你们的校园活动，并说说你对校园活动的看法。注意：
（1）内容应至少包含两项校园活动，要求意思、语句连贯；（2）词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）注意书信格式，信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colorful school life. _________________________________
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What to write
提纲
art club
sports meeting
art festival / talent show
volleyball club
basketball match
dancing club
What activities do we have
School trip
school
activities
I think/ believe….
In my opinion/ view/…
It’s …to…
It helps…
We can…by…
opinions
Sports meeting
We have….
It is held…
…
Where do we have the sports meeting
where
When do we have the sports meeting
We have….
It is held…
It comes…
…
Who join the sports meeting
who
What do we do in the sports meeting
The athletes…
Other students…
The teachers…
The most interesting is…
We like…best.
what
How…do we… the sports meeting
It lasts…
It is held…
We feel…
…makes us…
I think…
From …, we…
how
Because…
In order to…
so as to…
So that…
Why do we have the sports meeting
why
Sports meeting
When: We hold the sports meeting every November.
How long: It usually lasts for 2 days.
3.Who and what: Many students join the matches. The athletes try their best to win the matches. Others cheer and help look
after the athletes.
4. How: We feel excited and energetic.
5. Why: We have the sports meeting so as to encourage students do sports and keep healthy.
提纲
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What to write
activity 1
opinions
activity 2
5
4
3
2
1
5
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Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colorful school life. We have
all kinds of interesting activities at school. The most popular one is the
school sports meeting which is held to encourage students do sports
and keep healthy.It is held in November every year and it usually lasts
for 2 days. Many students join the matches. Athletes try their best to win
the matches. At the same time, others cheer and help look after the
athletes. We all feel excited and energetic. Another activity we like is
the…
In my opinion, the school activities help us relax after busy study.
We can not only enjoy ourselves, but also learn a lot from them. They
really make my school life interesting and colorful.
加：中心句
加：衔接句
加：关联词
假如你是李华，给你的英国笔友Michael写一封信，介绍你们的校园活动，并说说你对校园活动的看法。注意：
（1）内容应至少包含两项校园活动，要求意思、语句连贯；（2）词数80—100，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）注意书信格式，信中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colorful school life. _________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
___________________________________________
Dear Michael,
I’m glad to tell you something about our colorful school life._____________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1）表示并列关系的：and, as well as, or，as for, in some ways… in some ways…，not only…but also, on the one hand… on the other hand…,
2）表示转折关系的：but, yet, however，although, though, suddenly, luckily/fortunately， unluckily /fortunately…
3）表示时间关系的：when, while, after, before, then, after that, whenever, at that time, to begin with, later on, soon, at first, at last, finally…
4）表示因果关系的：so, therefore , because, so…that…, as a result…
5）表示目的的：in order to, in order that , so as to, so that…
6）表示列举的：for example/ for instance , such as, like…and so on…
7）表示总结性的：in general, in all, in a word, generally speaking…
8) 表示递进的：what’s more…
9) 表示条件的：if, as soon as…
关联词
Homework
1.Finish the composition
2.Write the composition with the tip learnt today.
Tip: get ideas by asking questions
请你选择最喜欢的一门学科，以“My Favorite Subject”为题，写一篇短文，说说喜欢这门学科的理由，以及平时是怎样学习的。
要求：1.词数80左右
2.叙述清楚，语句通顺，语意连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实的人名与校名
注意：开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。